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考向39讀后續(xù)寫之如何巧妙設(shè)置結(jié)尾在讀后續(xù)寫中,與開頭一樣,文章的結(jié)尾也是相當(dāng)重要的。成功的結(jié)尾,能使讀者更深入、更透徹地理解文章內(nèi)容,進(jìn)一步領(lǐng)會文章的主旨。精彩的結(jié)尾,能喚起讀者的思考與共鳴,增強(qiáng)文章的感染力。以2020浙江高考7月卷讀后續(xù)寫的尾句構(gòu)思舉例如下:▲第一段首句:銜接第一段段首語Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.思考:被噴霧刺痛眼睛的北極熊是什么樣的?思路:此時的北極熊肯定被激怒了,所以會更猛烈地襲擊圍欄。所以,銜接第一段的段首語可以從描寫北極熊開始,用非謂語動詞開頭,如Angeredbythespray,thebeargreeteduswithahowlofrage.▲第一段尾句:銜接第二段段首語Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.思考:thatverymoment是什么時刻?思路:在第一段的結(jié)尾,可設(shè)計(jì)一個最危險(xiǎn)的時刻,此時北極熊馬上要破欄而入,呼應(yīng)thatverymoment,這樣銜接最流暢??山柚鷶M人化的手法,如Suddenly,thebearhadtornanarrowopeninginthefencewhichwouldcollapsesoonandwitnessthebeartearusintopieces.▲第二段首句:銜接第二段段首語Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.思考:聽到直升機(jī)的聲音,夫婦二人會做何反應(yīng)?思路:他們應(yīng)該會馬上跑回營地,聯(lián)系飛行員。可利用動作細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行描寫,如Hearingthehelicopter,weranbacktothecampswiftly,andradioedoursaviorinatremblingvoice.▲第二段尾句:這個尾句應(yīng)呼應(yīng)原文主旨以使續(xù)寫部分結(jié)構(gòu)完整合理。思考:在本篇故事中,夫婦二人的旅行目的是拍攝北極熊,那么遭遇北極熊襲擊圍欄的他們,能達(dá)到目的嗎?這樣的經(jīng)歷會給他們留下什么?思路:故事的結(jié)局是二人獲救了,但關(guān)于是否成功拿到北極熊的照片,可以有不同的設(shè)計(jì):也許在直升機(jī)用噪音嚇走北極熊的時候,夫婦拍下了終生難忘的珍貴照片;也許在與北極熊周旋的過程中冒險(xiǎn)拍下。如利用非謂語動詞作狀語,進(jìn)行描寫并回扣原文主題。Grabbingthecamera,Idashedoutandsnappedvaluablepicturesoftheescapingbear,makingthetripunforgettableforthewholelife.一、結(jié)尾完形方法1:利用意外反轉(zhuǎn)諷刺現(xiàn)實(shí)【典例賞析】《項(xiàng)鏈》(莫泊桑)小說以“項(xiàng)鏈”作為線索貫穿全文。主人公瑪?shù)贍柕聻榱藚⒓右粋€舞會,向朋友借了一條鉆石項(xiàng)鏈。舞會上,她大出風(fēng)頭,卻樂極生悲,無意中丟掉了項(xiàng)鏈。為了賠償,她整整十年拼命勞作,省吃儉用,不顧一切地還債。當(dāng)債務(wù)終于還清,她卻得知這條項(xiàng)鏈原來是假的。十九世紀(jì)八十年代的法國,政府貪污風(fēng)行,唯利是圖的道德觀念影響到整個社會,很多人貪慕上流社會的生活。小說通過這樣一個巧妙設(shè)置的故事,尖銳諷刺了那種虛榮心和追求享樂的思想,同時,對受盡生活愚弄的主人公又寄寓了深切的同情。結(jié)尾部分:MadameForestierhadhalted.“Yousayyouboughtadiamondnecklacetoreplacemine?”“Yes.Youhadn'tnoticedit?Theywereverymuchalike.”Andshesmiledinproudandinnocenthappiness.MadameForestier,deeplymoved,tookhertwohands.“Oh,mypoorMathilde!Butminewasimitation.Itwasworthattheverymostfivehundredfrancs!...”二、結(jié)尾完形方法2:利用意外反轉(zhuǎn)傳遞深情厚誼【典例賞析】《最后一片葉子》(歐·亨利)《最后一片葉子》(TheLastLeaf)是歐·亨利短篇小說作品中具有代表性的一篇,亦采用小人物作為主角,歌頌偉大的人性關(guān)懷。小說中,青年畫家瓊珊得了肺炎,她消極地認(rèn)為當(dāng)窗外墻上最后一片常春藤葉被吹落時,她的生命就會消逝。當(dāng)樓下窮困而不得志的老“畫家”貝爾曼聽到這件事后,冒著暴雨在墻上畫出了一片永遠(yuǎn)不會凋落的常春藤葉,讓瓊珊重新燃起了生命的希望,自己卻因此染病去世。作者通過描寫萍水相逢的普通人之間的關(guān)懷,刻畫了一個舍己為人的畫家形象。在作者心中,美好心靈造就的作品才是不朽的杰作。結(jié)尾部分:“Ihavesomethingtotellyou,whitemouse,”shesaid.“Mr.Behrmandiedofpneumoniatodayinthehospital.Hewasillonlytwodays.Thejanitorfoundhimthemorningofthefirstdayinhisroomdownstairshelplesswithpain.Hisshoesandclothingwerewetthroughandicycold.Theycouldn'timaginewherehehadbeenonsuchadreadfulnight.Andthentheyfoundalantern,stilllighted,andaladderthathadbeendraggedfromitsplace,andsomescatteredbrushes,andapalettewithgreenandyellowcolorsmixedonit,and—lookoutthewindow,dear,atthelastivyleafonthewall.Didn'tyouwonderwhyitneverflutteredormovedwhenthewindblew?Ah,darling,it'sBehrman'smasterpiece—hepaintedittherethenightthatthelastleaffell.”“我有些話要告訴你,小丫頭,”她說,“貝爾曼在醫(yī)院里去世了。他害肺炎,只病了兩天。頭天早上,看門人在樓下的房間里發(fā)現(xiàn)他痛得要命。他的鞋子和衣服都濕透了,冰涼冰涼的。誰也想不出,在那樣可怕的夜里,他去了什么地方。后來,他們找到了一盞還燃著的燈籠,一把從別處拖來的梯子,還有幾支散落的畫筆,一塊調(diào)色板,上面和了綠色和黃色的顏料,還有——看看窗外,親愛的,看看墻上最后的一片葉子。你不是覺得納悶,刮風(fēng)的時候它為什么不飄不動嗎?啊,親愛的,那是貝爾曼的杰作——那晚最后一片葉子掉落時,他畫在了墻上。”三、結(jié)尾完形方法3:利用蘊(yùn)藏哲理再現(xiàn)悲劇情節(jié)【典例賞析1】《品質(zhì)》(約翰·高爾斯華綏)小說《品質(zhì)》(Quality)以現(xiàn)代機(jī)器工業(yè)對傳統(tǒng)手工業(yè)的沖擊為背景。作者以第一人稱的視角,講述了鞋匠蓋斯勒兄弟在商業(yè)化大潮中仍然堅(jiān)持自己的經(jīng)營理念,用最好的皮料、最細(xì)致的手工打造完美皮靴的故事。蓋斯勒兄弟一生都在制鞋,從不打廣告,也不考慮能賺多少利潤,卻因?yàn)榇蠊緦κ袌龅那治g減少了生意,入不敷出,最終難以維持生計(jì)直至被餓死。小說的結(jié)尾震撼人心,流露出了作者對傳統(tǒng)手工業(yè)者的懷念與惋惜之情。作者用他細(xì)致入微的描寫為我們展現(xiàn)了殘酷的社會現(xiàn)實(shí),揭示了在這個適者生存的現(xiàn)代社會中理想與現(xiàn)實(shí)的矛盾。故事結(jié)尾:“Thatmaybeabitflowery,asthesayin'is—butIknowmyselfhewassittin'overhisbootsdayandnight,totheverylast.YouseeIusedtowatchhim.Nevergave'imselftimetoeat;neverhadapennyinthehouse.Allwentinrentandleather.HowhelivedsolongIdon'tknow.Heregularlethisfiregoout.Hewasacharacter.Buthemadegoodboots.”“Yes,”Isaid,“hemadegoodboots.”AndIturnedandwentoutquickly,forIdidnotwantthatyouthtoknowthatIcouldhardlysee.“這樣說也許有點(diǎn)兒夸張——但是我自己知道,他從早到晚坐在那里做靴子,一直做到最后的時刻。你知道,我往往在旁邊看著他。他從不給自己吃飯的時間,店里連一塊錢都沒有,所有的錢都用在房租和皮革上了。他怎么能活到這么久,連我也莫名其妙。他經(jīng)常斷糧。他是個怪人,但是他做的靴子都頂好。”“是的,”我說,“他做的靴子都頂好。”我隨即立刻轉(zhuǎn)身離開了,我不想讓那個年輕人看到我已經(jīng)模糊了的雙眼?!镜淅p析2】《快樂王子》(奧斯卡·王爾德)《快樂王子》(TheHappyPrince)這一則文學(xué)作品繼承了王爾德童話題材故事中的“犧牲”主題。王爾德擅長以最唯美的方式表達(dá)毀滅與死亡。他首先在故事中創(chuàng)造了兩個人間芳物:美麗的小燕子與滿身黃金、身嵌寶石的快樂王子。這兩個角色本來生活在無憂無慮的溫柔鄉(xiāng)中,覺得人間處處是陽光,卻無意中發(fā)現(xiàn)真實(shí)的世界實(shí)際上充滿了痛苦與不堪。在這樣的落差之下,這兩個生命決定犧牲自己的美好,以解除蕓蕓眾生的痛楚。最終,曾經(jīng)最美麗華貴的生命殘損破敗,在垃圾堆中結(jié)束了自己的一生。作者通過描寫快樂王子身上顏色從金黃到灰色,地位從市中心廣場高大的塑像到垃圾堆里的廢物這一反差,描繪了一幅凄涼的場景。而在童話末尾,作者筆鋒一轉(zhuǎn),從人間上升到了上帝層面,以上帝的口吻贊頌了這兩個外表丑陋,而內(nèi)在偉大的生命個體,反映了作者認(rèn)為精神美高于形式美的價(jià)值觀。《快樂王子》的情節(jié)頗具佛教精神特色,與喬達(dá)摩·悉達(dá)多王子到世間去體驗(yàn)苦難,最終成佛的故事異曲同工,均深刻探討了毀滅與重生的相互關(guān)系。該作品在童話題材的包裝下觸及了人性與哲學(xué)問題,體現(xiàn)了作者深刻的文學(xué)思想。故事結(jié)尾:“Whatastrangething!”saidtheoverseeroftheworkmenatthefoundry.“Thisbrokenleadheartwillnotmeltinthefurnace.Wemustthrowitaway.”Sotheythrewitonadust-heapwherethedeadSwallowwasalsolying.“Bringmethetwomostpreciousthingsinthecity,”saidGodtooneofHisAngels;andtheAngelbroughtHimtheleadenheartandthedeadbird.“Youhaverightlychosen,”saidGod,“forinmygardenofParadisethislittlebirdshallsingforevermore,andinmycityofgoldtheHappyPrinceshallpraiseme.”“多么稀奇的事!”鑄像廠的工頭說,“這顆裂開的鉛心在爐子里竟不能熔化。我們只能把它扔掉。”他們便把它扔到了垃圾堆里,死去的燕子也躺在那兒?!鞍殉鞘欣镒钫滟F的兩件東西拿給我,”上帝對他的一位天使說。于是天使就把鉛做的心和死去的鳥兒給上帝帶了回來?!澳愕倪x擇對極了,”上帝說,“因?yàn)樵谖疫@天堂的花園里,這只小鳥可以永遠(yuǎn)地放聲歌唱,而在我那黃金城堡中,快樂王子可以盡情地贊美我?!彼?、結(jié)尾完形方法4:利用自然發(fā)展烘托溫馨浪漫【典例賞析1】《小女孩》(凱瑟琳·曼斯菲爾德)《小女孩》(TheLittleGirl)是一則講述父女情的故事。在小女孩凱齊婭的心中,爸爸是個威嚴(yán)、高大的人,她因此很怕他,與他說話的時候支支吾吾。一次,她在奶奶的鼓勵下為爸爸縫制生日禮物,無意中剪碎了他重要的演講稿,讓爸爸勃然大怒。凱齊婭很傷心,想到隔壁麥克唐納家慈祥的父親,心中就隱隱作痛。直到有一天媽媽生病,家中只留下了凱齊婭和爸爸,她因?yàn)楹ε潞诎?,做了噩夢,沒想到平時不茍言笑的爸爸將她抱進(jìn)了懷中,安慰她入睡。《小女孩》是一篇典型的曼斯菲爾德作品,它截取日常的生活片段,刻畫出其中細(xì)膩豐富的感情,讀來令人心醉。故事結(jié)尾:Thenthedarkdidnotmatter;shelaystill.“Here,rubyourfeetagainstmylegsandgetthemwarm,”saidfather.Tiredout,hesleptbeforethelittlegirl.Afunnyfeelingcameoverher.Poorfather!Notsobig,afterall—andwithnoonetolookafterhimHewasharderthanthegrandmother,butitwasanicehardnessAndeverydayhehadtoworkandwastootiredtobeaMr.MacdonaldShehadtornupallhisbeautifulwritingShestirredsuddenly,andsighed.“What'sthematter?”askedfather.“Anotherdream?”“Oh,”saidthelittlegirl,“myhead'sonyourheart;Icanhearitgoing.Whatabigheartyou'vegot,fatherdear.”“來,把你的腳放在我腿上蹭蹭,這樣能暖和些?!卑职终f。他困極了,比小女孩先入睡。一種奇怪的感覺占據(jù)了她的頭腦??蓱z的爸爸呀!他其實(shí)不是那么高大,也沒有人來照看他。他是要比奶奶嚴(yán)厲些,但也不是不好。每天他都要去工作,太累了,不能像麥克唐納先生那樣。一想到自己將他那些漂亮的文章都給扯碎了,她便一下子轉(zhuǎn)過身子去,嘆了口氣?!斑@是怎么了?”爸爸問道,“又做夢了?”“噢,”小女孩說,“我的頭在你的胸口,我能聽見你心跳的聲音。我親愛的爸爸,你的心可真大啊?!薄窘Y(jié)尾評析】《小女孩》將嚴(yán)父與女兒之間的愛寫到了極致。凱瑟琳·曼斯菲爾德從她的兒時生活中提取了大量素材:她出身于有名望的家庭,父親曾任職新西蘭銀行主席,被授予勛爵,在她兒時,父親長期在外為公事忙碌,做公共演講是常有的事??赡苈狗茽柕鹿P下小女孩與父親的微妙關(guān)系,便是她對自己兒時情況的真實(shí)記錄。曼斯菲爾德善于描寫女性細(xì)膩的情感,而幾歲小女孩的動作心思也被她拿捏得準(zhǔn)確到位。父親在小女孩的心中常以一個巨人的形象出現(xiàn),這樣的設(shè)定,不僅符合現(xiàn)實(shí)中小孩子心里父親們普遍的高大形象,也表現(xiàn)出了父親在主人公心中的威嚴(yán)。在受到父親責(zé)罵后,小女孩在沒有開燈的房間里獨(dú)自哭泣,連從百葉窗縫隙里透過來的光線看起來都像是一幅悲傷的圖畫,許多少女在受到委屈后都有類似的體驗(yàn)吧!一句“這個世界上為什么要有爸爸呢”是小女孩在受到父親責(zé)罵以后最童真、最令人心痛的問話。作家蕭乾說,讀《小女孩》就像是“聽一闋德彪西的音樂詩,感到淡淡的哀愁,又好像一只毛茸茸的爪子,在輕輕地?fù)现业男?。”相信眾多讀者的心也同樣被小女孩的天真愁緒深深打動?!镜淅p析2】《畫冊的一頁》(凱瑟琳·曼斯菲爾德)在小說《畫冊的一頁》(Feuilled'Album)中,作者大量地使用了象征手法,勾勒出了一幅恬淡雋永的初戀水彩畫卷,使小說充滿了現(xiàn)代主義的氣息。作者熟練地運(yùn)用意識流的手法描寫少年的情竇初開:“他的心也從畫室的側(cè)窗跌了出去,落到了對面房子的陽臺上——埋在了那盆花苞半開、綠葉似矛的水仙花花盆里了”,也讓主人公想象兩人在一起的時光:“她脾氣暴躁,他們有時吵得很厲害”,當(dāng)他第一次要去見她時,感覺到“一切都籠罩在那可愛的粉紅色的光暈中”。在作者的筆下,少年青澀的模樣生動活潑、躍然紙上。該作品的文字基調(diào)基本是明快的,而其核心卻是孤獨(dú)、敏感的。主人公獨(dú)自居住在樓頂,沒有人能進(jìn)入他的房間,與他對話的就是自己的日記本。女孩也是孤獨(dú)的,她和害病的母親住在一起,每天都重復(fù)做著同樣的活來維持生計(jì)。這兩個人都與巴黎的繁華與浮夸格格不入,少年之所以認(rèn)為自己找到了伙伴,是因?yàn)樗麑τ诠陋?dú)的執(zhí)著與偏愛。少年向女孩表現(xiàn)自己愛慕的方式也十分含蓄,他只是跟隨著她,到了最后才鼓起勇氣遞給了她一個雞蛋。這是一種在現(xiàn)代社會中可貴也可愛的含蓄。作者筆下處處透露著對孤獨(dú)的偏愛,也表現(xiàn)了她不受大眾審美的影響,孤獨(dú)追求藝術(shù)理想的態(tài)度。弗蘭奇正是作者自我形象的寫照。故事結(jié)尾:ButnowshewasonherwayhomeandhewasasfaroffaseverShesuddenlyturnedintothedairyandhesawherthroughthewindowbuyinganegg.Shepickeditoutofthebasketwithsuchcare—abrownone,abeautifullyshapedone,theonehewouldhavechosen.Andwhenshecameoutofthedairyhewentinafterher.Inamomenthewasoutagain,andfollowingherpasthishouseacrosstheflowermarket,dodgingamongthehugeumbrellasandtreadingonthefallenflowersandtheroundmarkswherethepotshadstoodThroughherdoorhecrept,andupthestairsafter,takingcaretotreadintimewithhersothatsheshouldnotnotice.Finally,shestoppedonthelanding,andtookthekeyoutofherpurse.Assheputitintothedoorheranupandfacedher.Blushingmorecrimsonthanever,butlookingatherseverelyhesaid,almostangrily:“Excuseme,Mademoiselle,youdroppedthis.”Andhehandedheranegg.但是現(xiàn)在她已經(jīng)在回家的路上,他還像先前那樣離她那么遠(yuǎn)。她突然轉(zhuǎn)身進(jìn)入了乳品店,他隔著窗戶看見她正在買雞蛋。她格外小心地從筐里挑選了一個出來——一個棕色的、有著漂亮形狀的雞蛋,若是他,也會挑這個。當(dāng)她走出乳品店之后,他走了進(jìn)去。隨即他又走了出來,跟著她走過他的屋子,穿過了花市,避開一個個大傘,踏著掉落的花和花盆留下的圓印。他悄悄地走進(jìn)了她家大門,跟著她上樓,小心謹(jǐn)慎地選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)臅r機(jī)跟隨,讓她不至于發(fā)覺。終于,她在樓梯平臺停了下來,從錢包里取出鑰匙。就在她把鑰匙插進(jìn)房門的時候,他跑了上來,站在她面前。他的臉從來沒有這樣紅過,但他嚴(yán)肅地看著她,近乎生氣地說道:“抱歉,小姐,你落下了這個?!彼f給了她一個雞蛋。五、結(jié)尾完形方法5:用平凡和偉大再現(xiàn)英雄和悲壯【典例賞析1】《最后一課》(阿爾封斯·都德)小說《最后一課》(TheLastLesson)在表現(xiàn)普法戰(zhàn)爭這一主題時,并未正面描寫戰(zhàn)爭的殘酷場面,也沒有突出普魯士侵略者的驕橫暴戾和法國人民的英勇無畏,而是將視線聚焦到了阿爾薩斯省一個小鎮(zhèn)的一堂普普通通的法語課上,以一個學(xué)齡孩子的感觸,反映了法國最普通的民眾對自己國家深厚的情感。故事的主角并不是個出色的學(xué)生,他愛去田野里玩耍不愛去學(xué)校,上課也經(jīng)常開小差,覺得外面的世界比課堂有趣。但在普魯士人的政令公布之后,這個調(diào)皮學(xué)生的心態(tài)在一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)地發(fā)生變化——他發(fā)現(xiàn)老師教的內(nèi)容竟然很容易聽懂,并且還希望自己能有更多的時間學(xué)習(xí)得更加深入,他甚至還開始體貼地察言觀色,理解老師的良苦用心。文章在詳細(xì)描述主人公的轉(zhuǎn)變時,也帶出了其他學(xué)生、甚至小鎮(zhèn)居民們的轉(zhuǎn)變——滿教室只聽見筆在紙上沙沙作響,不識字的老居民也攤開課本認(rèn)真地學(xué)習(xí)拼寫。作者通過截取主人公、學(xué)生和那些居民面對國家危難的這一小片段,以小見大,展示了愛國精神在一個普通人心中引起的強(qiáng)烈化學(xué)反應(yīng),深刻地反映了法國上上下下的民眾在國難之際的面貌。故事結(jié)尾:Suddenlythechurchclockstrucktwelve.ThentheAngelus.AtthesamemomentthetrumpetsofthePrussians,returningfromdrill,soundedunderourwindows.M.Hamelstoodup,verypale,inhischair.Ineversawhimlooksotall.“Myfriends,”saidhe,“myfriends,...I...I...”Butsomethingchokedhim;hecouldnotfinishthesentence.Hereturnedtotheblackboard,tookapieceofchalk,andwroteinlargeletters,“VIVELAFRANCE.”Thenhestoodleaningagainstthewall,unabletospeak.Hesignedtouswithhishand.“Thelessonisover.Youaredismissed.”忽然,教堂的鐘敲了十二下,祈禱的鐘聲也響了。普魯士士兵的號聲也從窗外傳了進(jìn)來——他們也操練完了。韓麥爾先生從椅子上站了起來,臉色蒼白。我從沒有覺得他這樣高大。“我的朋友們,”他說,“我……我……”但是他哽咽了,他沒法說完那句話。他走到了黑板前,拿起了一支粉筆,寫了幾個大字:“法蘭西萬歲?!比缓笏繅φ局?,一句話也不說。他向我們做了一個手勢:“放學(xué)了。你們走吧。”【典例賞析2】《空中騎士》(阿爾封斯·都德)《空中騎士》(AHorsemanintheSky)講述了美國南北戰(zhàn)爭時期發(fā)生的一個震撼人心的故事。主人公卡特·德魯斯出生于弗吉尼亞,父親是富裕的農(nóng)場主,他卻因?yàn)榕c父親政治觀點(diǎn)不同而加入了北方聯(lián)盟軍。在一次值勤中,卡特發(fā)現(xiàn)一名南方軍隊(duì)的騎兵前來刺探軍情,此人竟然就是他的父親,卡特在強(qiáng)烈的心理斗爭之后,決定履行自己的職責(zé),扣動了扳機(jī),將父親的坐騎打落山崖。作者詳細(xì)地描繪了復(fù)雜、險(xiǎn)要的戰(zhàn)爭地形,運(yùn)用內(nèi)心獨(dú)白和懸念設(shè)置等手法,剖析了主人公在職責(zé)與親情之間的痛苦抉擇,使該故事具有獨(dú)特的藝術(shù)和思想魅力??ㄌ厥ジ赣H后的冷靜在讀者的心中造成了強(qiáng)烈的震撼。作者沒有正面描寫主人公的悲痛,只是寥寥幾筆就勾勒出了在軍人職責(zé)抑制之下那呼之欲出的喪親之痛,使故事具有強(qiáng)烈的藝術(shù)性和巨大的感染力。故事結(jié)尾:“Ahorse.Itwasstandingonyonderrock—prettyfarout.Youseeitisnolongerthere.Itwentoverthecliff.”Theman'sfacewaswhite,butheshowednoothersignofemotion.Havinganswered,heturnedawayhiseyesandsaidnomore.Thesergeantdidnotunderstand.“Seehere,Druse,”hesaid,afteramoment'ssilence,“it'snousemakingamystery.Iorderyoutoreport.Wasthereanybodyonthehorse?”“Yes.”“Well?”“Myfather.”Thesergeantrosetohisfeetandwalkedaway.“GoodGod!”hesaid.“一匹馬。它站在山崖上,距離很遠(yuǎn)。你看,現(xiàn)在那匹馬不在了,它跌下了山崖?!彼哪樕n白,但除此以外,并沒有表現(xiàn)出任何的情緒。答完話之后,他便轉(zhuǎn)過臉去,不愿再說一句了。那中士有些不明白。“聽著,德魯斯,”他沉默了片刻,說道:“沒必要搞得神秘兮兮的。我命令你如實(shí)匯報(bào)。那馬上面有人嗎?”“有?!薄罢l?”“我的父親?!敝惺空酒鹕韥?,走開了?!拔业奶彀?!”他說?!緳z測訓(xùn)練】1.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mydad'slifeseemedtypicalofhisgeneration.HegraduatedfromhighschoolduringtheDepressionandworkedforalargecompany.Heenlisted(入伍)in1941,servedinthePacificandEurope.Onreturning,hemetmymother,marriedandhadthreechildren.Becauseofthejob,heneededtocontinuehiseducation.Withhisfull-timejobandattendingtohisfamily,heattendedcollegeintheeveningandobtainedhisdegree.Askids,weknewwhatDadtoldus.DuringcoldwintershesympathizedwithunfortunatekidsinjustT-shirtandshorts.HewassaddenedbychildrenwithnothingundertheChristmastree.Helovedkidsandschoolsandhewantedtospreadkindnesstoeveryoneinneedofhelp,sohewasalwaysreadytogiveahandtopeoplehemet.Withusthreekidsonourown.DadandMomretiredandcametoFlorida.TwoyearslaterMomdied,in1980.Fromthattime.Dadgotintothehabitofwalkingaroundhishouse.Healsotriedgolfbutfailedtobecomeaddictedtoit.AlthoughitwashardtimeforDad,hedidn'tgiveupthehopeoflife.Hedecidedtodosomethingmeaningfultosociety.Thenhesawanadrequestingliteracy(讀寫能力)volunteers.Dadhelpedsomechildren,whowerehomelesslearntoreadandwrite.Healsohelpedanoldmanlearntoreadbecausehisliteratewifewasgoingblind.Hetoldusheevenwantedtobeateachertohelpmorepeople.Astimepassed,Dadhadsomehealthproblems.Hislegsbecameweakandhestartedtohavetroubleinsleeping.Mybrother,myyoungersisterandIcametolookafterhim,tellinghimtostopdoingthevolunteerworkandhavearestathome.However,hewassostubbornthathedisagreedwithusandinsistedonhisdecision.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Beforelong,Dadmadehisdreamcometrue._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Oneyearlater,somethingsurprisinghappened._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段.使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。TheWilsonswerehavingdinner.ThefoodwasleftfromtheirThanksgivingdinnertwodaysbefore:turkeysoupandturkeymeatmixedwithpotatoes.Eleven-year-oldAngelinaasked,“Arewehavingturkeyicecream,too?”Herfatherreplied,“Angelina,haveyouforgottenthatIhadnojobforawholeyear?NowIhaveworkagain.Youshouldbeverythankful.”“I’msorryIsaidthatabouttheturkey!ButunlessIgetanewdress,IwillnotlookgoodfortheChristmasFestival.”Angelinamurmured.TheFestivalwasthewinterholidaycelebrationofagroupshebelongedto:theAvalonGirls’ServiceClub.Theywrotecheerfulcardsforhospitalpatients.Theycookedmealsforthehomeless.ButtheChristmasFestivalwasdifferent.Thegirlsworepartyclothesandmanypeoplecametoseethemperform.Angelinahadonlyaplaingraydressthatshehadworntotheeventlastyear.Andnowitwasalittletooshort.Angelinaappealedtoherparentstobuyoneforher,abeautifulreddressinForbes’Store.Hermothersighed,“Well,wecannotbuyit.Wehavetobecareful.YouneverknowwhenImightlosemyjob.”Allhopewasnotgone.TherewasasignintheForbesstorewindowthatsaid“l(fā)ayaway(分期付款)”.Angelinapulledtenworndollarbillsfromhercoatpocket.Sherantothestoreandbeggedthesalesperson,Mrs.Harding,tohold‘her’dressforher.“Ok.Butyoumustcomebackintwoweekstopaytherest.”Angelinafeltlikejumpingintotheair.ShewassohappythatshetoldMrs.HardingabouttheAvalonServiceClub’sworkanditsChristmasparty.Then,Angelinashookandsufferedinthecoldwindlookingforwork.Finally,Angelinagotajobmakingnewclothingfordolls.Angelinawasexcellentatsewing.Sureenough,thedolls’dressesturnedoutbeautiful.Shegottwentydollars.Still,shewasfarfromhavingenoughmoneyforherdress.Shefelthelplessasthefinalpaymentdatearrived.ShereturnedsadlytoForbes’Store,“Idon’thaveenoughmoneyforthedress.”ThenshesawMrs.Harding’seyeswerered.Shelookedlikeshehadbeencrying.Shesaidthestorewasclosingandshewaslosingherjob.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1:Suddenly,Mrs.HardingsaidshewouldpaytherestofthemoneysoAngelinacouldhaveit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Outside,AngelinasawamanwholookedlikeSantaClauswasaskingpeopleformoneytohelppoorpeople.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。18-year-oldSadiyawasborninDeora,asmallvillageineasternIndia,butmovedtothecityofMumbaiwhenshewas3.In2020,whenthepandemic(疫情)brokeout,herfather’ssmallbusinesswasforcedtoclosetemporarilyandthefamilyreturnedtoherancestralvillagetowaitoutthepandemic.However,itgreatlyshockedherwhenshefoundthatattendingschoolwasuncommoninDeora,wherealmosthalfofthevillagerscouldn’tread.Unabletoaffordtextbooks,manyfamiliesoftenwithdrewtheirchildrenfromschools.Theydidn’twishtoeducatetheirchildren,manyofwhomhadtoworkinthefieldswithparentsthoughsomehadthedesiretoread.Sadiya,thecollegegirlwithastrongsenseofsocialresponsibility,hasbeentryingtoseizeopportunitiestoopendoorsforothers.FluentinHindi,Urdu,andEnglish,sheoftenspeaksatinter-collegeeventsontherighttoeducationandenjoysahighreputationamongcollegestudents.Usedtotakingonchallenges,Sadiyawasdeterminedtodosomethingforthechildren.OnedaylastJuly,Sadiyasatdownwithherfamilyeldersandproposedtheideaofsettingupalibrary”.Manyshooktheirheadsindisagreement—thiswasn’thowayounggirlshouldspendhertime.Aftermanydiscussions,Sadiyafinallyconvincedthemandgainedaccesstoherrelative’sguesthouse,mendingitwith$67thatshe’dwoninpublic-speakingawards.Shetookthehelpofheruncle,Akbar,andcousin,Nawaz,andgottowork.Wallswererepainted,thebambooroofwasrepairedandlightsandbookshelveswerefixed,andtheroomwasfilledwithchairsandalongtable.Vividchartsstuckonthewalls—fromanatomy(解剖)totransportation,lightenedthespace.Lookingatthenewly-decorated“l(fā)ibrary”,Sadiyacouldn’tholdbackherexcitementwhileimaginingthechildrenreadingbooksherebylight.Allwasreadyexceptbooks.SowhatSadiyawasdesperatetodonextwasfilltheshelveswithbooks.Shedrewonallhersavingsandpurchasedmanybookssuitableforchildrenonline.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Butthesebookswerefarfromenough.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Witheverythingready,thelibraryfinallyopened.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。ItwasAugust.Wewereonvacation,justmysix-year-oldsonKevinandI,formyhusbandwasalwaysbusy.Havingdrivenfromourhomeinthecitytoaremoteandpeacefulplace,wewouldn’tseefriendsorfamily—itwouldbeanice,safe,sociallydistancedweekaway.WehadhikedabouthalfmiletoanattractivespotcalledDiana’sBaths,whichaffordedvisitorsanexpanseoftransparentwater.Thewaterflowsandthenfallsoffaseriesofbigflatstones,makingitselfasmallwaterfall,about7incheshigh.Severalcouplesandtheirkidsinswimsuitswereplayingtotheirheart’scontentinthewater.Wejoinedthem.Iwatchedassomeyoungerparentsnervouslydrovetheirbabiesawayfromthestonesedges.Fast-movingwatermadestandingtherequitedangerous,forIsawacertainkidwithcurlyhairmissedastepandalmostfelldown.Theairwasfullofshoutsandlaughter.IfeltsoluckythatIdidn’talwaysneedtofixmyeyesonmyson.Kevincouldnavigatehisphysicalspacewithmoreconfidenceandcare.ButIwasstillterrifiedwhenIsawKevinjumpbetweentheslipperyrocks.Butwiththepassingoftime,Isoonrelaxed,andwewerebothhavingfun,mykidsplashingandkickinginthecoolwater,laughingheartilyasIputmyheadunderthecoldrunningwater.Thensecondslater,everyfearI’deverhadrosetothesurface.Iliftedmyhead,turnedandsawKevinsittingbetweentwostones,withtherushingwaterflowingaroundhim.Icouldseehewasshakingsometimesbecauseofthewaterrapids.Iyelledathimtogetout.HeyelledbacksomethingthatIcouldn’thear.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenlyhedisappearedinfrontofmyeyes.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhenKevinreturnedtonormal.Ilearnedthewomanwasanurse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IthasbeenthreemonthssinceMs.SuejoinedaprimaryschooltoteachEnglish.Shewasgraduallylearningtounderstandallherstudentsbutone,Bob.Hewastheonlyboywhocametoschooldresseduntidilyandsatintheclasscompletelylostinhisownworld.Hisperformancehadbeengettingsteadilyworsewitheverysingleday.ItwasyetanotherdaywhenallthestudentsintheclasslaughedatBobbecausehewasunabletoanswereventhesimplestquestionsSueaskedhim.Attheendofthelessonwhenallthestudentsleft,Ms.SuesearchedthroughtheprogressreportsonBobinhispreviousclasses.ShewasshockedtoseethatBobusedtobethetopofhisclass.ShelookedovereverypageofthereportandfoundoutthatBob’sperformancehadbeguntoslowlydeclinewhenhismotherfellill.Afewmonthsdowntheline,Bobwasdoingbadlyineachandeverysubject.Later,hismotherdiedonMother’sDay,leavinghimalonewithhisfather,whowasabusinessmanandhadtotravelfrequently.Apartfromhisperformanceworseningsteadily,Bob’snaturebegantochange,too.Thereportsclearlysaidhehadforgottentolaughandshowednointerestinanyactivity.Hebegantostayalone.Allhisfriendshadabandonedhim.TearsfilledMs.Sue’seyes.Thenextday,whileallthestudentswereleavingtheclassroom,sheaskedBobtostaybehind.Bobsatonhischairquietly.Aftertheclassroomwasempty,Ms.Suewentuptohim.Shebegantoaskhimifhehadanyproblemunderstandingthelessons.Gradually,shebegantomakehimfeelmorecomfortablesothathecouldtalkandshare.Afterthreeweeks,shefoundBobgraduallyimproving.Hewasabletoanswerthequestionshehadpreviouslyfailedtoanswer.Everydayafterallthestudentslefttheclassroom,Ms.SuespentsometimewithBobandgavepersonalattentiontohim.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。Paragraph1Bobimprovedalotoverthenextsemester._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2OnSundaymorning,curious,Ms.Sueopenedtheboxandsawhalfabottleofperfumeandaletter._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Everythingaboutmovingdaywasapuzzle.Ididn'tknowanythingaboutournewbuildingonanewstre

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