新高考英語二輪復習題型歸納與變式演練專題31 讀后續(xù)寫02 情緒描寫突破（解析版）

專題31讀后續(xù)寫02情緒描寫突破（解析版）目錄TOC\o"1-3"\h\u專題31讀后續(xù)寫02情緒描寫突破（解析版） 1Part1思維導圖 2Part2秘訣（一）：情感似人“手” 2Part3秘訣（二)：情感似對手 3Part4秘訣（三）：情感似壓迫者 3Part5秘訣（四）：情感似動物 4Part6秘訣（五）：情感似光線 5Part7秘訣（六）：情感似重擔 5Part8秘訣（七）：情感似液體 6Part9情緒描寫微技能訓練 7一：微技能一（表示感到害怕frightened） 7二：微技能二（表示感到興奮thrilled） 9三：微技能三（表示感到悲傷sad） 10四：微技能四（表示感到開心happy） 11五：微技能五（表示感到羞愧ashamed） 15六：微技能六（表示感到生氣angry） 16Part10模擬訓練 191．（2022·山東濰坊·一模） 192．（2022·山東淄博·一模） 223．（2022·福建福州·模擬預測） 254．（2022·福建龍巖·一模） 285．（2022·福建廈門·二模） 316．（2022·廣東汕頭·一模） 347．讀后續(xù)寫模擬專練1 378．讀后續(xù)寫模擬專練2 41Part1思維導圖Part2秘訣（一）：情感似人“手”人們常被情感掌控，受其制約。而中文中的“掌控”就是來源于“手掌”。于是，情感就可以比喻成一雙無形的手，也就非常貼切了。我們發(fā)現(xiàn)：用于手的一些動作可以直接應用于某種情感。這類動作有：表示“抓住”類的動詞：seize,grasp,grip,takeholdof表示“覆蓋”：cover表示“撕成碎片”：tearintopieces我們來看下面幾個例句：（1）Feargrippedherheart．她心中充滿恐懼。（grip抓?。?）Jealousyseizedher.她妒火中燒。（seize抓?。?）Awildjoytookholdofher.她十分快樂。（4）Afeelingofpanicseizedher．她突然驚慌失措。（5）Anxietytoreherintopieces．她焦慮不安身心憔悴。（tore是tear的過去式，表“撕扯”）（6）Angerandbitternesscovereduponmeforweeks．我好幾周都沉浸在憤怒和痛苦中。（bitterness是bitter“痛苦的”名詞形式）Part3秘訣（二)：情感似對手漢語里也有類似的說法：“我被什么情緒打敗了”。將情感比喻為人的對手，那么人與情感之間的關系仿佛在比賽或斗爭。但是漢語中，這種表達中情緒更多是負面情緒，而英文中，則沒有這個限制。我們來看常見的動詞有哪些？被情感對手“擊敗”。于是，動詞通常是getthebetterof或者getthebestof（都表示“勝過”）。例如浙江2020年1月高考續(xù)寫文本中就寫到：Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.(他站起來，抱住爸爸媽媽，并露出笑容，努力不讓情感控制他。)在這句里，就用到了getthebetterof的結構，表示“勝過”。我們再看幾個例子：（1）Enthusiasmgetsthebetterofme．我太激動了。（enthusiasm熱情）（2）Boredomoftengetsthebestofthem．他們常感到非常無聊．（boredom無聊）（3）Hiscuriositygotthebetterofhim．他異常好奇，（curiosity好奇心）Part4秘訣（三）：情感似壓迫者我們可以控制情感，反過來，情感也可以變得強大，反客為主，成了統(tǒng)治者，壓迫者，我們被情感控制。這是動詞可以是：oppress壓迫，甚至是deprive(表示剝奪，deprive通常與of搭配)，還可以是prey（捕獵，折磨）我們來看下面幾個例句：（1）Worryingdeprivedhimofsleep．他焦慮萬分，難以入睡。（2）Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech．我激動得什么話都說不出來。（3）Astonishmentandhorroroppressedher．她驚恐不安。（oppress壓迫）（4）Angerandbitternesshadpreyeduponmecontinually．我感到憤怒和痛苦。（prey本意是“捕獵”，在這里引申為“折磨”。非常形象的表達，“憤怒”和“痛苦”像獵人一樣，而“我”成了獵物，不就是我被這兩種情緒折磨著嗎？）Part5秘訣（四）：情感似動物情感也會有動物的一些特點，會悄無聲息地“爬”到你身邊，即用動詞crawl／creep（爬），有時還會咬(gnaw)、吞噬(swallow/swallow)你。例如：（1）Happinesscrawlsuptothetipsofhisbrows．他喜上眉梢。（字面意思是“幸福爬到他的眉毛尖”）（2）Aslightfeelingoffearslowlycreptonhim．他慢慢感到一絲恐懼。（crept是creep過去式，意思是“爬”）（3）Self-doubtbegantognawawayatherconfidence.自我懷疑正在蠶食她的自信心。（4）Fearswallowedher.她非常驚恐。（字面意思是“恐懼吞掉了我”，是不是很形象？）Part6秘訣（五）：情感似光線有人說：“積極的心態(tài)像太陽，照到哪里哪里亮；消極的心態(tài)像月亮，初一十五不一樣?！彼哉f，情感和光線變化密切相關。我們也有這種生活體驗在sunny(晴朗)的天氣，人們會感到開朗高興，情感像光一樣散發(fā)（radiate）與傳播（spreadacross），而在cloudy(陰云密布)或者dark(光線晦暗)則讓人心情阻塞、郁悶不快。例如：（1）Joyshonefromhisbrow．他喜上眉梢。（2）Happinessradiatesfromherface.榮光換發(fā)。（radiate發(fā)散，發(fā)光）（3）Smilespreadacrosshisface.他滿臉笑容。當然還有用“人或物”作主語的（4）Shehasbeeninadarkmoodthisweek．她這周心情一直不好。（adarkmood用黑暗來形容心情mood，當然是“心情不好”。）（5）Hisfacecloudedoverwhenheheardthenews．聽了這個消息，他滿臉愁云。（這個句子把云cloud這個名詞當做動詞用，over覆蓋，cloudover這個詞組把“烏云密布”這種形象就表現(xiàn)出來了）Part7秘訣（六）：情感似重擔在中文中，我們有時候說某種負面情緒的時候，可以這么表達“很壓抑，壓得我喘不過氣來”，這里的“壓”顯示出，在描寫情感時候，賦予它重量感。英文也是如此：憂慮、悲傷、憤怒等消極情感猶如重擔bearon(壓在?上面)，需要人們carry(承受),而這些情感負擔的unburden(卸去)、lose(失去)則會讓人感到輕松、獲得解脫。例如：（1）Griefbearsheavilyonher．她承受著悲傷的巨大壓力。還有以“人”作主語的：Hewasburdenedwithworries他心事重重。（burden裝在，負重。非常有意思是，在漢語中，“心事重重”中的“重”是一個多音字，也讀zhong,“負重”的“重”。）（3）Themanagercarriedhisanger．經(jīng)理怒火沖沖。（4）AfterIlostmytemper，Ifeltlighter．發(fā)脾氣之后，我感到輕松多了。（lostmytemper字面意思好像是“失去了脾氣”，其實就是情緒失控，發(fā)脾氣）（5）Unburdeningherselfofherangergaveherasenseofrelief．釋放了怒火后，她感到一種解脫。（第二個例子中提到了burden裝在，負重，加上了否定前綴un，意思為“卸去負擔”）Part8秘訣（七）：情感似液體在漢語中，如果用一個成語來形容兩個人感情很好，我們可以用“水乳交融”，水和乳都是液體。同樣的道理，在英語中，情感也常常被比作液體。常見的名詞有：波紋（ripple）或wave(波浪)或flood(洪流)，常見的動詞有：涌出（wellup），surge(涌動)甚至sweep(沖；卷)，有時fill／brim/takepossessionof(注滿／盛滿/占滿)容器，有時overflow／well(漫出／溢出)容器，在高溫下甚至會boil(沸騰).我們來看下面的例句：（1）Panicsurgedupwithinhim．他惶恐不安。（surge涌起，字面的意思是“恐懼在他身體里涌起”）（2）Theterriblescenefilledherwithfear．恐怖的場景使她十分害怕。（3）Awaveofpanicsweptoverher．一陣驚恐襲上她的心頭。（4）Thelonelinessandgriefcomesinwaves.陣陣孤獨與痛苦襲上心頭。當然還有用“人”做主語的：（1）Hisheartisoverflowingwithjoy．他滿懷喜悅。（2）Icouldfeelangerboilingupinsideme．我感到怒火中燒。（字面意思是：“憤怒”已經(jīng)“boil沸騰了”）（3）Hewasbrimmingwithsorrowwhenshelefthim．她離開他時，他滿懷悲傷。（brim是“邊緣”的意思，作動詞表示“溢出”。悲傷這種情緒從內心溢出來了。）現(xiàn)在我們把學到的表達用到作文中，我們用的是2020年新高考全國卷，即山東卷。講述的是：賣爆米花方法救助窮人的故事。【情境一】Mrs.Meredith聽了孩子們“賣爆米花”的主意之后，感到很滿意，為孩子們的善良機智而驕傲。我們可以這樣寫：AwaveofsatisfactionandpridesurgedupinsideMrs.MeredithasJohnexplainedhisidea.當約翰解釋他的想法時，梅雷迪思太太心中涌起了一股滿足感和自豪感。(這句話就把驕傲與滿足之感比喻成液體)【情境二】當John找到貧困小男孩Bernard，并向他說了幫助他賺錢的主意之后，Bernard十分感動。AfterBernardlearnedaboutJohn’sidea,gratitudeobviouslygotthebetterofthispoorboy,andmoistenedhiseyes.在伯納得知約翰的想法后，非常感動，他的眼睛濕潤了。（這句話里，把感激比喻成對手，Bernard忍不住感動而流淚。）Part9情緒描寫微技能訓練一：微技能一（表示感到害怕frightened）表示害怕的詞/詞組：frightened;panicked;scared;speechless;in(a)panic;inacoldsweat;befulloffear;befilledwithterror;berootedtothespot;freeze;runaway;flee;one’skneesfeelweak;(hands)sweat;例句：當看到那只兇惡的狼時，我感到很害怕。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達清楚。2、請你在此概括描述的基礎上增加細節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltveryscared.2.1）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifeltsoscaredthatmythroattightenedandmykneesfeltweak.(嗓子發(fā)緊，膝蓋發(fā)軟)2）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Ifrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.(嚇呆了，不敢動彈)3）Atthesightoftheferociouswolf,Iwasseizedbyastrongsenseofhorrorandmypalmsweresweating.(被深深地恐懼感所控制，手心出汗)【高分情緒描寫句子】①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.

②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.

③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...

④Shewaschokedbyfear.

⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.

⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.

⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated(窒息).

⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.

【補充：情緒描寫之哭】cry;sob;weep;burstintotears;burstoutcrying;(one’seyes)brimwith/befullof/befilledwithtear例句：他哽咽欲哭。Alumpcametohisthroat.她的雙眼哭得通。Hereyeswereredfromcrying.她的眼里滿含淚水。Hereyesbrimmedwithtears.眼淚沿著她的面頰流下來。Tearscoursed/trickled/streamed/randownhercheeks.Oliver獨自一人在房間里流下了孤獨傷心的淚水。Aloneintheroom,Olivercriedbitter,lonelytears．Wilbur哭著直到睡著。Wilburcriedhimselftosleep.二：微技能二（表示感到興奮thrilled）例句：當主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達清楚。2、請你在此概括描述的基礎上增加細節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.2.1)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激動得兩眼放光）2)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.(激動得心砰砰跳)3)Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,awideexcitementtookholdofher.(興奮不能自已)三：微技能三（表示感到悲傷sad）例句：一聽到那個壞消息，她悲傷不已1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達清楚。2、請你在此概括描述的基礎上增加細節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltextremelysad.2.1）Uponhearingthebadnews,herheartached,tearsstreamingdownhercheeks.(心痛，眼淚直流)2）Uponhearingthebadnews,she,numbwithgrief,hadtroublespeaking.(悲傷到失去知覺，不能開口說話)3）Uponhearingthebadnews,shefeltseizedbyaburstofsadnessandcouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.(被一股悲傷之感控制，忍不住哭泣)【高分情緒描寫句子】①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.

②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.

③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.

④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.

⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.

⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.

⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.

⑧Afrown(皺眉)nowstoodonhisface.

⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.

⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.四：微技能四（表示感到開心happy）例句：當媽媽親吻他時，小baby開心極了。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達清楚。2、請你在此概括描述的基礎上增加細節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1.Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.2.1)Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebabywereontopoftheworld.(非常開心)2)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamedandhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間)3)Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hiseyesdancedwithjoyandsweetness.(歡欣雀躍)【高分情緒描寫句子】①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.⑥Awildgaiety(快樂)tookholdofher.⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.【描述喜樂心情的常用詞】1.難以形容的開心：indescribablywildjoy

2.極為感動：beoverwhelminglymoved3.幾乎無法掩飾他的興奮的心情：canhardlyconcealhisexcitement4.既興奮又開心：amixtureofexcitementandhappiness5.激發(fā)某人的激情：kindlesb.with/topassion6.顯示出極大的意愿：showagreaterreadiness7.被強烈地吸引：bepowerfullyattractedto8.心情愉快：incheerfulspirits9.振作精神：keepupone·sspirits10.滿意的表情：asatisfiedlook11.對...感到滿意：becontentwith12.對...很高興：bedelightedat13.為成功而欣喜：beexcited/thrilledwithjoyatthesuccess14.被...場面所吸引：befascinatedbythespectacleof15.被她的美貌所吸引：befascinatedwithherbeauty16.因...而高興：bejoyfulover/about17.喜愛，對...著迷:bekeenon

18.快樂至極：beoverwhelmedwith19.高興地跳起來：dance/jumpforjoy20.欣喜若狂：bewildwithdelight21.—個令人鼓舞的表情：anencouragingexpression22.過一個愉快的假日：haveapleasantholiday23.心滿意足，非常幸福：onthetopoftheworld24.對...感到非常高興：overjoyedat/todo【描述喜樂心情的常用句】Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.

她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.

他臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.(ripplen.波紋；漣漪vt.擴散全身)一陣激動聲穿過他們。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.（linger繼續(xù)逗留）笑聲在房間里縈繞。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.

他的眼睛閃爍著快樂。⑥Awildgaiety（快樂）tookholdofher.

一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteady

smile.

令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著穩(wěn)定的微笑。

⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.

我欣喜若狂。

⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.

我高興得難以形容。

⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.

她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。

?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.

她的笑容照亮了整個房間。

?Sheshedtearsofjoy.

她高興得流下了眼淚。

?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.

她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光芒。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.

她洋溢著幸福。

?Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.(flushv.發(fā)紅）

她激動得滿臉通紅。細節(jié)描述的萬能小技巧：可以把這些詞和so/such.+adj./nthat...句型連用或者用with+n.當主持人宣布她獲獎時，她興奮極了。Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,shefeltthrilled.2.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

hereyestwinkledwithexcitement.（激動得兩眼放光）3.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

herheartwasthumpingwithexcitement.

(激動得心砰砰跳)4.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

awideexcitementtookholdofher.

(興奮不能自已)當媽媽親吻他時，小baby開心極了。Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,thebabywashappy/delighted/fullofjoy.

Whenhismotherkissedhimonthecheek,itseemedasifthebaby

wereontopoftheworld.

(非常開心)

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,hisfacebeamed(堆滿笑容)andhisbrightsmilelituptheroom.(眉開眼笑；笑容照亮房間)

Whenthemotherkissedthebabyonthecheek,

hedancedwithjoyandsweetness.(歡欣雀躍)【感動】①Toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感動,我們……②Tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她熱淚盈眶,表示衷心的感謝。③Withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...

淚水順著她的臉頰流了下來,……五：微技能五（表示感到羞愧ashamed）例句：她感到非常羞愧。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達清楚。2、請你在此概括描述的基礎上增加細節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1:Shefeltashamed.2:1)Shefeltsoashamedthatshecouldfeelherfaceburning.(臉上滾燙)2)Soashamedwasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.(血液涌上臉頰)3)Soashameddidshefeelthatshewasclosetotears.(快哭了)六：微技能六（表示感到生氣angry）表示生氣的詞/詞組：feel/getangry/furious;feelasurgeofanger(rage/fury);eyesblaze;stormoutof/into/off;storm(sayangrily);

sth.makessb’sbloodboil(sthmakessbextremelyangry);claspone’shands;clenchone’sfists/teeth;speechless例句：Sheldon感到非常生氣。1、大家可以先嘗試用概括描述，先將意思表達清楚。2、請你在此概括描述的基礎上增加細節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關系以及語意的合理。1）2）3）【答案】1:Sheldonfeltveryangry.2:1)Sheldonfeltsoangrythathestormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorfuriouslybehindhim.(沖出房間；狠狠摔門)2)Boilingwithrage,Sheldonshookhisfistatme.(怒火中燒；揮舞拳頭)3)Filledwithfury,Sheldonwasunabletoutterasingleword.(充滿憤怒；說不出話)【情感描寫積累】Hereyes

twinkledwithmerriment.

她高興得雙眸閃閃發(fā)亮。Mack

wentintoraptures

and

burstintolaughter.麥克欣喜若狂，大笑起來。Arippleoflaughter

wentthroughthecrowd.

人群中傳來一陣笑聲Lily's

laughterlingered

intheroomforalongtime.

麗麗的笑聲縈繞在房間里久久不能散去。Herhandswere

tremblingwithexcitement

assheopenedtheletter.當她打開信時，她的手激動得發(fā)抖。Afterheardthis

satisfactory

outcome,

Steve

felt

asenseofjoy

and

happinesssurgingthrough

him.在聽到這個令人滿意的結果后，史蒂夫感到一種喜悅和幸福的感覺涌上心頭。Overwhelmedwith

gaiety,

he

jumpedupandranexcitedlyaroundthe

tree.他欣喜若狂，跳起來并繞著那棵大樹跑了幾圈。Inhisexcitement

hecouldn'trememberhername.他興奮得甚至把他自己的名字都給忘了。Rose

felt

blissful

asif

she

wasinpossessionofeverything.羅絲感到很幸福，好像她擁有了全世界一樣。Shewas

carriedaway

bypleasure.她被快樂沖昏了頭腦。Inodded,witha

bigsmilespreadingacross

mycheek.

我點點頭，臉上露出燦爛的笑容。She

couldn't

concealtheexcitement

andrushedhome

totellher

motherthegood

news.她掩飾不住興奮，急忙回家告訴母親這個好消息。Sheisalways

readytohelp

othersinneedandalways

wears

shiningsmileonherface,

somanyclassmatesarewillingtomakefriendswith

her.她總是樂于助人并且臉上總是掛著燦爛的笑容，因此很多同學都愿意和她交朋友。I'm

over

themoon.

我太開心了Itiseasyto

inferthat

heis

inrapture

through

his

bigsmile.

從他那燦爛的笑容很容易推斷出他是興高采烈的。Hewokeupthatmorningwith

afeelingofexcitement.他一起床就感到很興奮。Her

excitementgrew

asthedayoftheweddingcamenearer.隨著結婚的日子越來越近，她越來越興奮。Iam

overflowingwith

happiness.我洋溢著幸福。Everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewould

spreadover

Mom'sface.每次我們提到旅途中的趣事，媽媽的臉上就會浮現(xiàn)出愉快的笑容Asuddenwaveofjoy

sweptoverher.一陣喜悅突然涌上她的心頭。Shegazedupathim,

glowingwithhappiness.她抬頭看著他，臉上洋溢著幸福的光芒。Thechildrenwere

filledwithexcitement

atthethoughtofvisitingDisneyland.孩子們一想到要去迪斯尼樂園就興奮不已。Myheartis

assweetashoney.我的心甜的像蜜一樣。Pleasurewelledup

insideherheart.她心中涌起喜悅。Amusement

gleamedinhiseyes.他眼中流露出愉快的深情.Mother's

eyes

flash

across

the

surprise,

open

smile

ripples.

母親的眼里閃過驚喜，笑容蕩漾開。Shecomeuptome,withasmile

shininglikeadiamond.她帶著燦爛的笑容走到我面前?！靖叻智榫w描寫句子】Iwasseizedbyanger.

②Hewasfumingwithrage.

③Hisangerboiledover.

④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.

⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.

⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.

⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.

⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.

⑨Heflaredupattheword.

⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.Part10模擬訓練（2022·山東濰坊·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文AGIFTFORGRANDPASummervacationwascoming.JackandhisbrotherBerlinwerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofvisitingtheirgrandparentsagain.Thebigdaycameatlast.Afterthehappyfamilygotready,theysetoutforthegrandparents’eagerly.Ontheway,thebrotherswereexcitedlytalkingaboutthefuntheyhadwithgrandparents.Alittlebluehousewithatallwhitechimneyfinallyappeared.BehindthepropertywastheforestcarryingtheirgoodmemorieswithGrandpa.Theyarrivedatthedriveway,attheendofwhichGrandmawaswaitingforthemjoyfully.JackandBerlineachgaveGrandmaabighugandthenswepttothelivingroom,shoutingexcitedly“Grandpa,weareback!”Seeinghisgrandsons,Grandpawaswildwithjoyandtriedtogetupwithallhisstrengthfromthechairbutinvain.Ahelplessexpressionflashedonhisface.Grandmaexplainedthathishealthwasdecliningrapidlyandmaybecouldn’tstanduponhisownforever.ButGrandpadeclaredstubbornly(倔強地),“Ican!”Certainly,hewasstuckinhisboyishway.Mumandgrandparentswerehappytomeetagainafteralongtime.Theysattogetherandchattedaboutwhathappenedrecently.Thebrothersweresoonboredwithadultconversation,wentoutandwanderedintotheforest.Talltreesstretcheduptotheheavenswithlargebranchescrossingeachother,whileyoungonesrosestraightlikesoldiers.Grandpawasonceagreatexplorerfullofwisdom.Hecouldtellwherethebirdscamefromonlybytheircallsandsongs.Thetrees,birds,lizards,lotsofbugs...HowmanymerrymomentstheyspentwithGrandpainthekingdom!ButnowGrandpacouldn'tgetup.Thismadethemworried.“We’dthinkoutawaytocheerhimup.”Jacksaid.“Grandpaisabirdlover,andwecancatchhimabird.”Berlinsuggested.“Buthehatesbirdsbeingcaged!”Jackshookhishead.ThenabrightideacametoJack’smind.“Whynotmakeacane(拐杖)outofayoungtree!”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Berlinthoughtitwasagoodidea.Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.Jacksaid,“Whatkindoftreeshouldwepickforthewalkingstick?”Berlinthoughtforamomentandsaid,“Ithinkweshouldchooseastraighttree,sonoknotswillscratchgrandpa’shands.”Jacknoddedhisheadinagreement.Theyfoundastraighttreeandsettowork.Theycutthetreedown,andwithaknifetheytookthebarkoff.Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.Theythoughtgrandpawouldloveit.

JackandBerlinhandedthecanetoGrandpa.Whengrandpatookthecane,hishandsshookwithjoy,thinking,“Thisismadebymygrandsonsthemselves.Howpreciousitis!”Jacksaid,“Grandpa,wehopethiscanewillhelpyoustandupandcomewithustoexplorethewoods.”Grandpasmiledanddecidedtogiveitatrysoasnottomakehisgrandchildrendisappointed.Heheldthecaneinhisrighthandandthearmofhischairinhislefthand.Hestoodupwithstrengthonhislegs.Everyonewassurprisedandexcitedtoseegrandpastandup.Atthatmoment,Jacknoticedatearcomingfromthecornerofhisgrandfather’seye.【解析】【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了暑假即將來臨，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他們卻發(fā)現(xiàn)爺爺站不起來了，兄弟倆走進了森林，杰克突然想到了一個好主意，就是給爺爺做一根手杖?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內容“柏林認為這是個好主意?！笨芍?，第一段可描寫兄弟倆怎么做手杖。②由第二段首句內容“杰克和伯林把手杖遞給爺爺。”可知，第二段可描寫爺爺拿到手杖后的反應。2.續(xù)寫線索：拿工具——做手杖——爺爺嘗試站起來——眾人反應3.詞匯激活行為類①拿：get/fetch②砍下：cutdown/chopdown③站起來：standup/risetoone’sfeet情緒類①高興：joy/delight②興奮的：excited/thrilled【點睛】[高分句型1]Whenthetwobrothersreachedanagreement,theyquicklyranbacktotheirgrandfather’shouse,gotthetoolstheyneededtomakethecane,andranbacktothewoods.(由when引導的時間狀語從句)[高分句型2]Itwasawonderfultree,whichwassmoothandwasjustoftherightsize.(由關系代詞which引導的非限制性定語從句)（2022·山東淄博·一模）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應為150左右。TheChristmasSpiritStrikesAgainIalwaysdreamedofmakingabigsurpriseofalifetime.Thankstoalittledetermination,someluck,andageneroushelpingofChristmasSpirit,mydreambecameareality.MyfamilyisCanadian,althoughmysistermoveddowntoAustraliaafewyearsagotostudy.ShewasgraduatingjustbeforeChristmas,butduetomyownscholarlyschedulebackhome,Iwouldbeunabletomakeitdownintimeforhergraduation.Shewasunderstandablydisappointed,andIfeltguiltythatIwasn’tabletobethereforheronthisspecialoccasions.WhileIwastalkingtomyprofessortheweekbeforemysister’sgraduation,shecommented,“Well,ifyouwanttogo,justgoahead!"Icouldn’tbelievemyluck!Inearlyjumpedforjoy.“Justmakesureyougetpermissionfromadministrator(行政主管)，”sheadded.Myheartsank.Theadministrationatmyschoolwasinfamousfordenyinganysortoftime-offrequests.Ialmostdidn’tbotherasking,becauseIknewitwouldbeawasteoftime.Butsomethinginmedecidedtotry,justincase.MaybeitwasthehopethattheChristmasSpiritwouldsomehowaffectstheadministratoratthistimeofyear.WhenIreturnedhometocheckthereplyinmyinbox,Isteeledmyselffordisappointment.Iheldmybreath,openedthee-mail,andstartedtoread.Andre-read,justtomakesureI’dunderstood.Approval?Icouldn’tbelievemyluck!Immediately,Icalledtheairline.Unexpectedly,evenduringthebusyChristmasseason,Iwasabletochangemytickettoarrivethedaybeforemysister’sgraduation.Withnewsthisfantastic,Iwasburstingtotellmysister.But,fingersonthedial((撥號盤),Ipaused.Wouldn’titbemuchmorefantasticifIcouldsurpriseher?Whatastateofshockshewouldbein!Slowlyagreatideacametomymind.Idecidedamuchmoredramaticarrivalthanjustaringofthedoorbell.WhatifIcouldn’tarriveinabox?Istartedtoplot.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I,hiddeninthebigbox,heardthemailmenringingmysister’sdoorbell.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：Paragraph1:Istartedtoplot.Then,agreatideaoccurredtome:gettingdeliveredinaboxtomysister’shouse!IknewifIpulledthisoff,mygrandarrivalwouldbethebestChristmaspresentIcouldevergivemysister.IfranticallystartedGooglingmailcompanies.Fortunately,IcameacrossamailcompanynamedCouriersPleaseandtomygreatamazementtheirmanageragreedtohelpmetofulfillmydream!Thenextday,theyfoundaboxbigenoughformetohidein.TheChristmasSpiritstrikesagain!(86詞)Paragraph2:I,hiddeninthebigbox,heardthemailmenringingmysister’sdoorbell.Theyannouncedtheyhadadeliveryforher.Whentheboxwasopenedandshesawmesittinginsidesmilingupather,mysisterwasatacompletelossforwordsandburstintotears.Iwouldneverforgetthelookonherface.Itwassuchagifttobeabletoattendmysister’sgraduationtoshowhermylove,anditwasamemorythatbothofuswouldcherishforever.SoneverunderestimatethepoweroftheChristmasSpirit(85詞）【解析】【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者的姐姐在加拿大，即將畢業(yè)，作者想請假去參加她的畢業(yè)典禮，作者忐忑地向自己的學校請假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批準了，作者訂好了機票，想要給姐姐一個驚喜?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內容“我開始策劃。”可知，第一段可描寫作者的計劃。②由第二段首句內容“我躲在大箱子里，聽見郵遞員按我姐姐的門鈴?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫作者的姐姐看到作者時的反應。2.續(xù)寫線索：想到好主意——聯(lián)系郵件公司——打開箱子——感想3.詞匯激活行為類①想到：occurtosb./strikesb.②偶然遇見：comeacross/runinto③打開：open/unfold④突然哭起來：burstintotears/burstoutcrying情緒類①瘋狂地：frantically/insanely【點睛】[高分句型1]IknewifIpulledthisoff,mygrandarrivalwouldbethebestChristmaspresentIcouldevergivemysister.(由關系代詞that引導的定語從句，省略了that)[高分句型2]Itwassuchagifttobeabletoattendmysister’sgraduationtoshowhermylove,anditwasamemorythatbothofuswouldcherishforever.(由關系代詞that引導的定語從句)（2022·福建福州·模擬預測）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,andwhatIreallywantedmostwasanewbicycle.ButIknewthatmyfamilycouldn’taffordone,soIsettledforabedsidetablewithlockabledrawers,asafeplacetokeepmyprivatestuff.Wewenttothecharityshopwherewefoundanolddarkone.Itdidn’tlooktoocool,butIthoughtthatIwouldpaintittomakeitlookbetter.Afterwetookithome,Iwasgettingreadytopaintit.WhenIpulledthedrawersout.Ifeltsomethingstucktotheback.Ireachedinalltheway,andguesswhat?Asealedbagwithsomepapersinit.WhenIopenedthebag,Irealizedthatthepaperswereofficialdocuments.And,wrappedinthemwereabunchoftenandtwentydollarbills!Talkaboutfindingatreasure!Andonmybirthday!“Isthissomekindofjoke?”Isaidaloud.I