01選擇性Unit2Onwardsandupwards寫一次經(jīng)歷(原卷版)

Unit2Onwardsandupwards單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)寫一次經(jīng)歷單元話題考題展示寫一次經(jīng)歷（2024新高考1、2）假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.本單元的寫作目標(biāo)是“寫一次經(jīng)歷”,以寫人、敘事為主,屬于記敘文寫作。寫作時(shí)要交代清楚時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件,可使用典型的“總一分一總”三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)1.開頭:介紹這次經(jīng)歷發(fā)生的背景;2.主體:具體介紹這次經(jīng)歷;3.結(jié)尾:介紹自己對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的感受。二.注意事項(xiàng)1.正常使用時(shí)態(tài)，通常使用過去范疇的時(shí)態(tài)。2.常用第一人稱。3.重視上下文的銜接，用好過渡詞?？枷蚍治雠c應(yīng)對(duì)策略whenwherewho）、事件（what）、原因（）、結(jié)果（how）。此外，敘述事件時(shí)還應(yīng)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.文章更加客觀。本寫作應(yīng)使用第一人稱，可穿插個(gè)人的感受以突出“難忘”這一特點(diǎn)。2.感受往往用過去時(shí)；強(qiáng)調(diào)對(duì)現(xiàn)在或以后的影響可以用現(xiàn)在時(shí)或?qū)頃r(shí)。??“寫一次經(jīng)歷”,以寫人、敘事為主,屬于記敘文寫作。寫作時(shí)要交代清楚時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事件,可使用典型的“總一分一總”三段式結(jié)構(gòu)。1.開頭:介紹這次經(jīng)歷發(fā)生的背景;2.主體:具體介紹這次經(jīng)歷;3.結(jié)尾:介紹自己對(duì)這次經(jīng)歷的感受。I.話題詞匯1.獨(dú)自玩耍playalone2.開心的delighted3.降臨descendupon4.帶某人回家takesbhome5.匆忙inahurry6.從那以后fromthenon7.處于困難中introuble/need8.感激appreciativeof9.遭到某人拒絕receiveone’srejection10.難堪的,尷尬的embarrassed11.令人愉快的,討人喜歡的delightful12.友誼;友好交往panionship13.心煩意亂的,煩惱的upset14.然而,不過nevertheless15.堅(jiān)持不懈persevereII.話題句式開頭:簡(jiǎn)要敘述發(fā)生的事情1.Asscheduled,the...tookplaceat...in...,lasting2hours.按計(jì)劃,……于……(時(shí)間)在.…(地點(diǎn))舉行,歷時(shí)兩個(gè)小時(shí)。2.OnceIwasinvitedto...butwhathappenedlatermademefeel...有一次我被邀請(qǐng)去……但后來發(fā)生的事讓我覺得…主體:事件過程1.AtfirstIthought...butitturnedouttobe...whichmademefeel...起初我以為……但結(jié)果是……這讓我覺得……2.OnlywhenIwastoldthat...didIbegintorealizewhatasillymistakeIhadmade.只有當(dāng)我被告知……時(shí)我才開始意識(shí)到我犯了一個(gè)多么愚蠢的錯(cuò)誤。結(jié)尾:事件結(jié)果1.Throughthismeaningful...activity,welearnedsomethingthatcan'tbelearnedinclass.通過這次有意義的……活動(dòng),我們學(xué)到了在課堂上學(xué)不到的東西。2.Theactivitymadeushaveabetterunderstandingofthemeaningof...這次活動(dòng)讓我們更好地了解……的意義。III.模版框架1.Generalintroduction2.Difficulties3.Solution4.Lessonsandfeelings假定你是李華,曾經(jīng)在一所聾啞學(xué)校做過助教,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英文寫一篇關(guān)于你的助教經(jīng)歷的文章。1.一位對(duì)生活失去信心的失聰女孩Jean在你的幫助下重拾生活信心;2.當(dāng)時(shí)你遇到的最大困難是溝通障礙;3.你是如何克服困難的?你從中學(xué)到了什么?注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。【寫作分析】[總體布局]寫一次經(jīng)歷主題敘述一次助教經(jīng)歷體裁記敘文布局第一段概述助教經(jīng)歷第二段遇到的困難及解決辦法第三段你的收獲人稱以第一人稱為主時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)態(tài)何一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主[句子整理]用本單元所學(xué)單詞或短語填空1.________________adj.難堪的,尷尬的2.________________adj.令人愉快的,討人喜歡的3.________________n.友誼;友好交往4.________________adj.心煩意亂的,煩惱的5.________________adv.然而,不過6.________________v.堅(jiān)持不懈Ⅱ.本單元語塊、語法運(yùn)用1.完成句子第一部分:概述助教經(jīng)歷(1)Onthewhole,helpingJeanrestoreherconfidenceinlifeis_____________________(一次愉快的經(jīng)歷).第二部分:遇到的困難及解決辦法(2)Thebiggestdifficulty_________________________(我面對(duì)的)wasthemunicationbarriers.(3)First,Iadvisedherto____________________________________(鼓起勇氣)toconfrontthedifficultiesinsteadof_________________________________(逃避它們).(4)Furthermore,Imadeeveryeffortto____________________________(建立友誼及互相的信任)withher.(5)Eventually,whatmatteredmostwasto______________________(堅(jiān)持我正在做的事情).第三部分:你的收獲(6)WhatIgetfromthisexperienceisthatconfidenceanddeterminationcanreally_________________________(有助于我們的成功).答案(1)adelightfulexperience(2)thatIfaced(3)gathercourage;escapingfromthem(4)establishpanionshipandmutualtrust(5)persevereinwhatIwasdoing(6)contributetooursuccess2.句式升級(jí)(7)用it作形式主語改寫句(1)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(8)將句(2)改為強(qiáng)調(diào)句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[銜接成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2024贛州市適應(yīng)性考試（二模）應(yīng)用文分享你的一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷與感受。假定你是李華，你校有一個(gè)勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐基地，你和同學(xué)們非常喜歡去基地參加勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐。請(qǐng)你寫一封email給你的英國(guó)筆友Bob，分享你的一次勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷與感受。內(nèi)容包括：

1.勞動(dòng)經(jīng)歷；2.勞動(dòng)感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練2一、單句翻譯1.我忘不了發(fā)生在我六歲左右的一件事情。____________________________________________________________________________________________我在大雨中迷路了，這讓我非常緊張。____________________________________________________________________________________________我站在那里，不知道做什么。____________________________________________________________________________________________看到我站在雨里哭，她把我送回了家。____________________________________________________________________________________________這是我遇到的最可怕的事情。____________________________________________________________________________________________二、語篇翻譯MyWeekendLastweekend，wetookpartinapickingactivityandit’sverymeaningful.Wedrovefromtheschool,andthefarmwasabout2kilometersawayfromourschool.Whenwearrivedatthefarm,thereareallkindsofanimals,greenfreshvegetablesandfruittreesinthefarm.Weweredividedintotwogroups.Onegroupwasresponsibleforpickingfruits,theotherpackedupthefruits.Allofustriedourbesttoworkhardandhelpedeachother.Timeflyingquickly,theactivitywasover.Butitwasameaningfulday,becausewehavelearnedalotfromit.Throughthisactivity,weknowhowhardthefarmersareandhowpreciousthefoodis.Weshouldtreasurethefoodplantedbythefarmers.書面表達(dá)假設(shè)你是李華，得知你的新西蘭筆友Mike

一直從事志愿活動(dòng)，你很欽佩。請(qǐng)你給

Mike寫一封信，分享自己近期做志愿者的一次經(jīng)歷。內(nèi)容包括：1.志愿者經(jīng)歷；2.你的感受。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua(2024新高考1、2）假定你是李華，上周五你們班在公園上了一堂美術(shù)課。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你完成的作品；（2）你的感想。注意：（1）寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；（2）請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouanartclassIhadinaparklastFriday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua(2023屆成都高三零診）假設(shè)你是Tom,請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示講述你和父親一起爬山的經(jīng)歷。1.去年暑假我和父親早晨出發(fā)去爬山;2.在半路上,下起雨來,我們?nèi)肀涣軡窳?，又冷又?3.我開始抱怨,想要放棄;4.父親給予我鼓勵(lì)和溫暖;5.最終我們成功到達(dá)山頂,欣賞了美景。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________