讀后續(xù)寫+艾倫的+“洗衣風波”：一次特別的家務嘗試+講義 高三上學期第一次聯(lián)考（一模）英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。OneSaturdaymorning,Allenwokeuptofindthehouseunusuallyquiet.Typically,hismomwouldbeupmakingbreakfastandtidyingup,butnotthistime.Hearinghercough,Allenknockedonherdoorandaskedanxiously,“Mom,areyoualright?”“Sweetheart,”sherepliedweakly.“I’vegotabadcold.YoucanhavecerealforbreakfastandwatchcartoonswhileIrestinbed.”Allenpouredsomecerealintoabowlandatethepiecesdry.Mommustfeelverybadifshewasstayinginbedallday.HowcouldAllenhelp?First,hewipedupthecrumbsofcerealheleftonthekitchencounter.Healsoputawaythecerealboxneatly,sothekitchenlookedjustasitdidwhenhewokeup.Butwhatelsecouldhedo?Allenthought.Saturdaywasthedaywhenmomdidlaundry.Allenlovedtowatchtheclothesspinninginthemachine.Thatshouldbefun!Herantohisroomtogetthelaundrybasket,insidewhichtherewashismother’sfavoritewhitedress,amongotherclothesandapairofredsocks.Allenopenedthedoortothewasherandputtheclothinginside.HehadwatchedMomdolaundrylotsoftimes,soheknewwheretofindthewashingpowderandhowtopouritintothemachine.Finally,heclosedthedoorandpressedthebigbuttonthatsaid“START.”Allenlookedthroughtheroundglasswindow.Waterwaspouringin,andthemachinewasstartingtospin,makinghisclothingtumble(滾動)around.Thatwaseasy!Allenwaswatchingcartoonswhenheheardthewashingmachinebeep,indicatingthatthelaundrywasfinished.Heopenedthedoor,tookoutthedampclothes,movedthemintothedryer.Everythinglookedclean,andhefeltasenseofpride.Thenhepulledoutapinkdressamongtheclothes.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。Paragraph1Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Paragraph2Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.文章大意周六早上，Allen醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)媽媽因感冒臥床，他吃了點干麥片后，想為媽媽做點事。他收拾了廚房，然后決定洗衣服。他把洗衣籃里的衣服（包括媽媽最喜歡的白色連衣裙和一雙紅襪子等）放進洗衣機，加了洗衣粉啟動洗衣機。洗完后他把衣服放進烘干機，之后卻發(fā)現(xiàn)多了一件粉色連衣裙。五要素分析人物：Allen和生病的媽媽。時間：周六上午。地點：家里，包括廚房、洗衣房和媽媽臥室。起因：媽媽生病，Allen想幫忙做家務。經(jīng)過：Allen收拾廚房、洗衣服。結果：洗衣完成后出現(xiàn)了意料之外的粉色連衣裙。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫回應伏筆：洗衣籃里沒有粉色裙子。回應：可能是混進了其他衣服，需要找出原因和解決辦法。伏筆：媽媽在生病休息?；貞篈llen處理粉色裙子問題可能會打擾媽媽休息，但也可能會給媽媽帶來溫暖。續(xù)寫要點第一段情感線：驚訝、疑惑和緊張，對多出來的粉色裙子感到不知所措。故事線：描述Allen努力回憶粉色裙子的來源，猜測可能是和鄰居家的衣服混在一起了，或者是之前不小心放進去的。第二段情感線：緊張又期待，希望媽媽不要太生氣，同時也希望自己的行為能讓媽媽感到欣慰。故事線：Allen向媽媽解釋事情經(jīng)過，把粉色裙子遞給媽媽，詢問該如何處理，表現(xiàn)出他的誠實和希望為媽媽分憂的心情。主旨升華句Everylittleactofkindness,evenwithabitofmistake,canbeawarmrayofsunshineinafamily.Helpingoutathome,despitetheoccasionalmishap,showsthetrueloveandcarewithinachild'sheart.Intheprocessofdoingsomethinggood,mistakesarejustlikespicesthataddmoreflavortoourlifestories.Achild'sattempttoassist,regardlessoftheoutcome,isabeautifulexpressionoffamilyloveandresponsibility.Mistakesmadewhiletryingtohelparesteppingstonestogrowingupandunderstandingthevalueoffamilychores.寫作示范第一篇Paragraph1

Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Hewasconfusedandabitworried.Wherediditcomefrom?Hecheckedthewasheragaintoseeiftherewassomethinghemissed.Thenherealizedthatitmighthavebeenmixedinwithhisclothesaccidentally.Hefeltbad,thinkingthathemighthavecausedtrouble.

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Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.Whenmomopenedthedoor,Allentoldherwhathadhappened.Heapologizedforthemix-up.Momsmiledweaklyandsaiditwasokay.ShepraisedAllenforbeingsohelpfulandtoldhimtheywouldfigureoutwhosedressitwaslater.Allenfeltrelievedandproudofhimselffortryingtohelp.第二篇Paragraph1

Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.Hisheartsank.Hadhemadeabigmistake?Herackedhisbrain,tryingtorecallifhehadpickedupsomethingelsebymistake.Hecarefullyexaminedthedress,hopingtofindaclue.Maybeitwasfromtheneighbor'slaundrythatgotmixedupsomehow.

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Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.Momaskedwhatwasgoingon.Allenexplainedthesituationwithatremblingvoice.Momhuggedhimandsaid,"It'sokay,dear.Youmeanttohelp,andthat'swhatmatters."Allensmiled,feelingthewarmthofhismom'sloveandunderstanding,andhelearnedthathelpingsometimeshaslittlebumps.【答案】Paragraph1Butherememberedtherewasnopinkdressinthelaundrybasket.“Wherediditcomefrom?”Allenwondered,reachingintothewashertotakeoutmoreclothes.Thenmuchtohisastonishment,hepulledouttwoT-shirts,bothinlightpink.Realizingtherewassomethingwrong,Allenstoodfrozen,hisheartsinking.Suddenly,hecaughtsightoftheredsocks.Heknewthereasonfortheaccident.Withnomeansofhandlingthesituation,Allenwasinsuchapanicthatheeventhoughtofhidingthedressfromhismom.“Thatisnotapositiveapproachtotheproblem,”heremindedhimself.Finally,hedecidedtodryandfoldthelaundrybeforetellinghismomeverything.Paragraph2Holdingtheneatlyfoldedpinkdress,Allennervouslyknockedathismom’sbedroomdooragain.Hecametothebedsidewithhisheaddrooping.Sensingherson’sunease,themotherinquiredwithconcernwhatwaswrong.Realizingwhat’sgoingon,momsmiledunder