【課件】回復(fù)詢問信+課件

Aletterofreplytoinquiry高考寫作之回復(fù)詢問信

回復(fù)詢問信特點(diǎn)及寫作步驟題型特點(diǎn)：回復(fù)詢問信是回復(fù)他人問題的信件。寫作思路與步驟：第一步：收到來信+寫信目的第二步：回復(fù)對(duì)方問題第三步：表達(dá)期待假定你假定你是李華，你收到外國朋友Peter的郵件，他想了解你校在新冠疫情(COVID-19epidemic)期間線上教學(xué)的情況。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)郵件：1.課程與時(shí)間；2.你的學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)；3.你的期待。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫01020304ThinkingThinking(審題）Step1體裁：回復(fù)詢問信話題：線上教學(xué)情況時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：第一人稱，第三人稱開頭正文:結(jié)尾：Para.1Para.2Para.3①表明收到來信②說明寫信目的

表達(dá)期待Outlining（列出提綱）Step2要點(diǎn)3課程與時(shí)間學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)要點(diǎn)2要點(diǎn)1線上教學(xué)情況正文：Outlining（列出提綱，寫出要點(diǎn)）Step21、課程與時(shí)間

haveonlinecourseslearn9subjectsbescheduledtobeginfrom8amto5pmeachclasslasts45minutes2、學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)becomeanindependentlearneradapttothiswayoflearningrequireself-disciplineandconcentrationcontrolmyselfDearPeter,I’msogladtohearfromyou.LearningthatyouareconcernedaboutouronlineschoolingduringtheCOVID-19epidemic,I’dliketosharewithyousomerelatedinformation.Thoughthespringsemesterispostponed,schoolingcontinuesonlineunderourteachers’guidance.ThesubjectswelearnincludeChinese,English,Mathsandsoon.Eachofthedaily8classesisscheduledtolast45minutes,witha15-minutebreakbetweenclassesforself-relaxation.Learningathomeischallenging,whichrequiresself-disciplineandconcentration.Gradually,I’veadaptedtosuchauniquewayoflearningandbecomeanindependentlearner.However,Istillhopetoreturntocampus,whereIcanenjoyface-to-faceclasseswithmyclassmatesandteachers.Ifirmlybelievewecanfighttheepidemicandeverythingwillbebetter.Bestwishes!

Yours,LiHuaPolishing(潤色定稿）Step3高考作文高分卷的特點(diǎn)

形式美：字體清晰工整、卷面整潔美觀、段落層次分明。內(nèi)容美：避免低級(jí)錯(cuò)誤，語言詞匯、句型結(jié)構(gòu)的準(zhǔn)確性、合理性、豐富性和多樣性。邏輯美：使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，能使文章上下銜接自然、條理清晰。小結(jié)亮點(diǎn)句1Iamwritingtosharewithyousome

relevantdetails.AsforChinesetablemanners,Iamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetails.Letmetellyousomedetails.亮點(diǎn)句1AsforyourlastletteraskingaboutChinesetablemanners,

Iamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetails.AsforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutChinesetablemanners,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Letmetellyousomedetails.亮點(diǎn)句1DelightedtolearnfromyourlastletterthatyouareinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome,

IamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetailsaboutChinesetablemanners.Letmetellyousomedetails.亮點(diǎn)句1你在信中詢問我們學(xué)校學(xué)生的體育運(yùn)動(dòng)情況，我現(xiàn)在寫信告訴你一些細(xì)節(jié)。Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutthephysicalexerciseinourschool,

Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.中英Letmetellyousomedetails.亮點(diǎn)句1知道你對(duì)中國的剪紙很感興趣，我寫信跟你分享一些相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)。DelightedtolearnfromyourlastletterthatyouarekeenonChinesepaper-cutting,Iamwritingto

sharewithyousomerelevantdetails.Letmetellyousomedetails.中英亮點(diǎn)句1Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingabout…,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Delighted

tolearnfromyourlastletterthat…,Iamwritingtoshare

withyousomerelevantdetails(about…).亮點(diǎn)句2Youhadbetterarrivethereearly.Youhad

betterarrivethereearly,becausebeinglateisimpolite.Youhad

betterarrivethereearly,becausebeingpunctualisconsideredpoliteinChina.Youshouldarrivethereearly.亮點(diǎn)句2Youareencouragedto

arrivethereearly,becauseyouwillhaveachancetoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Youareencouragedto

arrivethereearly,makingitpossibletoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Youshouldarrivethereearly.亮點(diǎn)句2你可以早點(diǎn)到，可以提前熟悉環(huán)境。Youareencouragedtoarrivethereearly,makingitpossibletofamiliarizeyourselfwiththeenvironment.Icando…中英亮點(diǎn)句2反對(duì)浪費(fèi)的標(biāo)語在校園餐廳到處可見，可以提醒我們不要浪費(fèi)食物。Slogansopposingwastecanbeseeneverywhereattheschoolcanteen,makingitpossibletoremindusnottowastefood.Icando…中英亮點(diǎn)句2Youhad

better

do…,becausebeing

punctual

is

considered…Youareencouragedto…,becauseyouwillhaveachanceto……,makingitpossibleto…亮點(diǎn)句3Itisnecessaryforyoutobringaproperpresent/gift.Ifyou’dliketobringagift,abunchofflowersorsomefreshfruitwillbeagoodchoice.Youshouldbringagift.亮點(diǎn)句3Itisnecessaryforyouto…Ifyou’dliketo…,…willbeagoodchoice.亮點(diǎn)句4Itisimportantforyoutolearnmoreaboutpropertablemanners.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemanners

isofgreatimportance.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemannersplaysavitalroleinbeingaguest.亮點(diǎn)句4勤勞、負(fù)責(zé)和熱心腸對(duì)于一個(gè)志愿者來說很重要。Beingdiligent,responsibleandwarm-hearted

isofgreatimportanceto

avolunteer.Beingdiligent,responsibleandwarm-heartedplaysavitalroleinbeing

avolunteer.中英英…beofgreatimportance…playsavitalrolein亮點(diǎn)句4…isofgreatimportance.…playsavitalroleinbeing…亮點(diǎn)句5Itistheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeat.ItistheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeatsincetheyarewellrespectedinChina.Theelderlyarethefirsttoeat.亮點(diǎn)句5體育館配有大操場(chǎng)，這使我們有了體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的機(jī)會(huì)。Itisthenewstadiumequippedwithabigplaygroundthatoffersusanopportunitytodoawiderangeofsportsactivities.中英Itis…that/who…亮點(diǎn)句5Itis…who/thatofferssb.anopportunitytodo…Itis…who/that…,since(因?yàn)?…亮點(diǎn)句6Traditionally,youshouldusechopsticks.DoastheRomansdowheninRome,andyoushouldusethechopsticks.Youshouldusechopsticks.亮點(diǎn)句6TypicalofChinesetablemanners,chopsticksconveythecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.TypicalofChinesetablemanners,chopsticksnotonlyhavespecialsignificancebutalsoconveythecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.Youshouldusechopsticks.亮點(diǎn)句6剪紙具有中國文化的典型特征，不僅有特殊的意義，而且表現(xiàn)了中國傳統(tǒng)文化的內(nèi)涵和本質(zhì)。TypicalofChineseculture,papercuttingnotonlyhasspecialsignificancebutalsoconveysthecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.中英Itis…that/who…亮點(diǎn)句6Typicalof…,…notonlydo…,butalsodo…亮點(diǎn)句7EatingwithoutmuchnoiseisconsideredpoliteinChina.EatingwithoutmuchnoisemeanspolitenessinChina,whichisattachedgreatimportancetoineveryfamily.Youcan’tmakenoisewhileeating.亮點(diǎn)句7令我高興的是，一個(gè)新的體育館已經(jīng)建成，它變成了我們學(xué)校的標(biāo)志。Tomygreatjoy,anewstadiumhasbeensetup,whichhasbecomethelandmarkinourschool.中英非限制性定語從句…,which…亮點(diǎn)句7此外，隨著新體育館的建成，可以開展各種體育活動(dòng)，其中乒乓球、足球和跑步比賽非常受歡迎。Besides,withthenewstadiumsetup,awiderangeofsportsactivitiescanbecarriedout,amongwhichtabletennis,footballaswellasrunningcompetitionsenjoygreatpopularity.中英非限制性定語從句…,which…亮點(diǎn)句7就我個(gè)人而言，沒有什么比打籃球更好,打籃球有助于跟別人合作。AsfarasIamconcerned,thereisnothingbetterthanplayingbasketball,whichcontributestomecooperatingwithothers.中英非限制性定語從句…,which…亮點(diǎn)句7非限制性定語從句…,which…非限制性定語從句…,介詞+which…亮點(diǎn)句8ThisexperiencecanattributetoyourbetterunderstandingofChineseculture.ThisexperiencecannotonlyattributetoyourbetterunderstandingofChineseculture,butalsobroadenyourhorizon.Itismeaningful.notonlyattributeto…butalsobroaden…亮點(diǎn)句8這次活動(dòng)不僅能有助于我們與別人的合作，而且拓展了我們的視野。Thisactivity

notonlyattributestouscooperatingwithothers,butalsobroadensourhorizon.中英亮點(diǎn)句8…notonlyattribute(s)to…,butalsobroaden(s)ourhorizon.亮點(diǎn)句9Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,youcanexperiencethepowerofChinesecultureanddohaveagoodtime.Ihopeyouhaveagoodtime.亮點(diǎn)句8希望我提供的信息對(duì)你有幫助。Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.中英Hopefully,…亮點(diǎn)句8希望你有機(jī)會(huì)親自來體驗(yàn)。Hopefully,youcancomeandhavearealexperienceofit.中英Hopefully,…亮點(diǎn)句8Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.表達(dá)「邀請(qǐng)?bào)w驗(yàn)或表達(dá)祝愿」Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.表達(dá)「活動(dòng)意義與體會(huì)」Thisexperiencecannotonlyattributetoyourbetterunderstandingof…,butalsobroadenyourhorizon.表達(dá)「回復(fù)具體信息」Youareencouragedto…,makingitpossibleto…Ifyou’dliketo…,…willbeagoodchoice.表達(dá)「寫信目的」Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingabout…,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.Whatdoyoufind?Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Letmetellyousomedetails.AsforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutChinesetablemanners,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.DelightedtolearnfromyourlastletterthatyouareinvitedtoaChinesefriend’shome,IamwritingtosharewithyousomerelevantdetailsaboutChinesetablemanners.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Youshouldarrivethereearly.Youhad

betterarrivethereearly,becausebeingpunctualisconsideredpoliteinChina.Youareencouragedtoarrivethereearly,becauseyouwillhaveachancetoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Youareencouragedto

arrivethereearly,makingitpossibletoparticipateinthepreparationforthemeal.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Youshouldbringagift.Itisnecessaryforyoutobringaproperpresent/gift.Ifyou’dliketobringagift,abunchofflowersorsomefreshfruitwillbeagoodchoice.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Itisimportantforyoutolearnmoreaboutpropertablemanners.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemannersisofgreatimportance.Learningmoreaboutpropertablemannersplaysavitalroleinbeingaguest.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Theelderlyarethefirsttoeat.Youshouldusechopsticks.ItistheelderlywhoareusuallythefirsttoeatsincetheyarewellrespectedinChina.TypicalofChinesetablemanners,chopsticksnotonlyhavespecialsignificancebutalsoconveythecontentandnatureoftraditionalChineseculture.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Youcan’tmakenoisewhileeating.Itismeaningful.EatingwithoutmuchnoisemeanspolitenessinChina,whichisattachedgreatimportancetoineveryfamily.ThisexperiencecannotonlyattributetoyourbetterunderstandingofChineseculture,butalsobroadenyourhorizon.Whatdoyoufind?Level1Level2Ihopeyouhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,youwillhaveagoodtime.Hopefully,thedetailedinformationIhaveofferedcanhelpyou.錘煉詞匯askingaboutrequiringsomethingaboutsomedetailsrelevantdetailsimportantvital010203significant錘煉詞匯make/helpattributetotakepartinparticipateinshowconvey040506錘煉句式Iamwritingthislettertotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyhometown._________________________________________greatchangesinmyhometown,______________________________________.01Asforyourlastletterrequiringsomethingaboutthe

greatchangesinmyhometown,Iamwritingtoinformyouofsomerelevantdetails.錘煉句式Thetrafficinmyhometownhaschangedalot.Thehigh-speedrailwayshavebeenbuiltsothatthepeopleobtaineasierwaystotravelaround.______________________________________andmoresubwaylinesunderconstruction,__________________________________,offeringuseasierwaystotravelaround.02Withhigh-speedrailwaysrunninginalldirectionsandmoresubwaylinesunderconstruction,

thepublictransportationisswiftlydeveloping,

offeringuseasierway