高三英語一輪復習應用文寫作倡議書課件

ProposalEnvironmentalProtection學情分析：學生已經(jīng)掌握基本的環(huán)保相關話題詞匯，但句子結(jié)構(gòu)和表達較基礎。教學目標：通過倡議書必備要點訓練，幫助學生鞏固寫倡議書的寫作模式。通過詞匯和句子的層層升級，引導學生寫出環(huán)保主題相關的亮點句。LookatthepicturesbelowLead-in:Thedevelopmentofindustryhascausedseriousairpollution.Globalwarminghasledtomeltingglaciersanddrought.Risingsealevelandextremeweatherarealsosevereproblemsofourenvironment.Whatcanwedotoprotectourenvironment?Givenalltheseseriousenvironmentalproblems?TalkwithyourpartnerTopic-basedchunkCheckyourmemory1.空氣污染______________2.全球氣候變暖__________3.冰川融化______________4.干旱__________________5.海平面上升____________6.極端天氣______________7.棲息地減少_____________1.makesomerules_________________2.publicizerelevantknowledge________________________________3.callonsb.todo..._________________4.keepecologicalbalance________________________________5.improvepeople'sunderstandingof...

________________________________6.takeactions______________________7.liveinharmonywith...______________8.tryone'sbesttodo..._______________airpollutionglobalwarmingmeltingglaciersdroughtrisingsealevelextremeweatherhabitatloss制定規(guī)則宣傳相關知識呼吁某人做...維持生態(tài)平衡提高人們對...的認識采取行動與...和諧共處竭盡全力做...

假如你是某國際學校學生會主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來之際，請你向報社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點如下：1.環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。Anexampleofproposal題型解讀：倡議書由個人或集體發(fā)出，作用是倡導某項活動。StepsofWritingaComposition

Thinking(審題）01

Outlining（列提綱,寫要點）02

Expanding（擴詞成句）03

Linking（連句成篇）04

Polishing（潤色）05

假如你是某國際學校學生會主席李華，在世界環(huán)境日（6月5日）到來之際，請你給報社投稿并發(fā)出倡議，要點如下：環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀；2.具體措施；3.發(fā)出倡議。02Thinking話題:環(huán)境保護時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時體裁:倡議書（呼吁學生保護環(huán)境）Thinking(審題）Step1人稱:第一人稱話題:環(huán)境保護時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時，現(xiàn)在進行時開頭正文結(jié)尾：Para.1Para.2Para.3

總結(jié)倡議，表達希望。要點1環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀(what)

要點2具體措施和作用(howandwhy)Outlining（列出提綱）Step2交代背景、原因和目的。

寫明倡議的具體內(nèi)容和要求。要點3發(fā)出倡議(acallforaction)

Para1（Beginning）Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3...iscomingseriousproblemsgettingworseandworseleadtoaswellasurgesb.todosth.1.WorldEnvironmentDayiscoming,manypeoplehaverealizedtheseriousproblemsoftheenvironment.2.Globalwarmingisgettingworseandworse，it

alsoleadsto

extremeweather.3.Meltingglaciersaswellashabitatlossareurgingusto

protecttheenvironment.世界環(huán)境日即將到來，很多人已經(jīng)意識到了環(huán)境的嚴重問題。全球變暖正在日益惡化，這也導致了極端天氣。冰川融化和棲息地減少都在敦促我們?nèi)ケＷo環(huán)境。makesomelawsdrawpeople'sattentiontakeonresponsibilitiestodo...dolessharmto...improveone'sunderstandingof...liveagreenlifestyle1.Governmentshouldmakesomelawstodrawpeople'sattentiononenvironmentalprotection.2.Companiesneedtotakeontheirresponsibilitiessoastodolessharmtonature.3.Asindividuals，wecanimproveourunderstandingof

environmentalprotectionandliveagreenlifestyle.Expanding(擴詞成句）Step3Para2（Body）政府應該制定相關的法律來吸引人們的關注。企業(yè)應該承擔他們的職責以便減少對自然的傷害。作為個人，我們可以提高環(huán)保意識，過綠色生活。

para3（Ending）

Itishightimethat...tryone'sbestto...withourjointeffortspayoffExpanding(擴詞成句）Step31.It'shightimethatweshouldtryourbestto

protectourownplanet.2.I'mfirmlyconvincedthatwithourjointefforts,ourhardworkwillfinallypayoff.是時候竭盡全力來保護我們的地球了。我堅信在我們的努力下，我們的辛苦付出終會獲得回報。Linking(連句成篇）Step4添加合適的過渡詞：1.表順序：首先：Initially,...Tobeginwith,…Firstandforemost,…Inthefirstplace,…Whatcomesfirstisthat...其次：Inaddition,...Additionally,...What'smore,..Moreover,...

Whatcomesnextisthat...Asidefromthat,...最后：Ultimately,...Lastbutnotleast,...2.表邏輯：表原因：since...as...because...dueto...owingto...onaccountof...表目的：inorderto...soasto...inorderthat...sothat...Step5makesomelaws

laydownrelevantlawsimprovepeople'sunderstandingof...enhancepeople'sawarenessof...

0203getworseandworse

getincreasinglybad01Polishing(錘煉詞匯）Step5tryone'sbestto...sparenoeffortto.../gotoone'slengthsto...0506keepecologicalbalance

maintain/sustainecologicalbanlance04

rememberbearinmindPolishing(錘煉詞匯）Step5TheWorldEnvironmentDayiscoming...Theairpollution

isgettingworse...01WithWorldEnvironmentDay

coming...with復合結(jié)構(gòu):with+賓語+賓補With

theairpollution

gettingworse...approaching...Polishing(錘煉句式1-非謂語動詞）Step5Globalwarmingisgettingincrasinglybad.Italsoleadstoextremeweather.Peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.

Itcanhelpthemliveagreenlifestyle.02Globalwarmingisgettingincrasinglybad,whichalsoleadstoextremeweather.定語從句合并簡單句Polishing(錘煉句式2-定語從句）Peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofenvironmentalprotection,whichcanhelpthemliveagreenlifestyle.Step5Governmentshouldlaydownrelevantlawsandcompaniesneedtotakeontheirresponsibilities.Maintainingecologicalbalanceissocrucialforhumanbeingsthatweneedtoliveinharmonywithnature.03Notonlyshouldgovernmentlaydownrelevantlaws,companiesalsoneedtotakeontheirresponsibilities.1.notonly...,(but)also...2.so+adj.位于句首3.否定詞位于句首4.only+狀語位于句首Polishing(錘煉句式3-部分倒裝）SocrucialismaintaningecologicalbalanceforhumanbeingsthatweneedtoliveinharmonywithnatureStep5Manymarineanimalsaredyingoutduringthepastdecades.Ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlydamagedinthepastfewcenturies.04Thepastdecadeshaswitnessedthatmanymarineanimalsaredyingout.時間+haswitnessedthat...Polishing(錘煉句式4-巧用witness）Thepastfewcenturieshaswitnessedthat

ourenvironmenthasbeengreatlydamaged.

Polishing(潤色定稿）Step5

Inthelastfewdecades,ourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghascausedbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather.Thesearewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreurgent.Toprotectourenvironment,weshouldworktogether.Firstly,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoraisepeople'sunderstandingofenvironmentalprotection.Secondly,companiesshouldneverpourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisimportantforkeepingthetheecologicalbalance.Thirdly,ourgovernmentshouldalsomakesomerulestobananyillegalbehaviors.It'shightimethatwetriedourbesttoprotectourplanetfrombeingfurtherpolluted.Rememberthatwecanliveahappierandhealthierlifebyprotectingourenvironment!Inthelastfewdecades,ourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghascausedbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather.Thesearewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreurgent.

Polishing(潤色定稿）Step5要點一：環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀Thelastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthat...ledto/broughtabout/accountedforwhich，increasingly

Polishing(潤色定稿）Step5

Toprotectourenvironment,weshouldworktogether.Firstly,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoraisepeople'sunderstandingofenvironmentalprotection.Secondly,companiesshouldneverpourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisimportantforkeepingthetheecologicalbalance.Thirdly,ourgovernmentshouldalsomakesomerulestobananyillegalbehaviors.Weshouldmakejointeffortssoastoprotectourenvironment.要點二：具體措施nevershouldcompaniespourifofgreatsignificanceenhancepeople'sawarenessmaintaininglaydownbynomeansshouldcompaniespour

Polishing(潤色定稿）Step5

It'shightimethatwetriedourbesttoprotectourplanetfrombeingfurtherpolluted.Rememberthatwecanliveahappierandhealthierlifebyprotectingourenvironment!wenttoourlengthsBearinmindonlybyprotectingourenvironment,canweliveahappierandhealthierlife!要點三：發(fā)出倡議

Polishing(潤色定稿）Step5

Thelastfewdecadeshaswitnessedthatourearthhasbeenseverelypolluted.Globalwarminghasbroughtaboutbothrisingsealevelandextremeweather,whicharewarningusthatprotectingtheenvironmentisbecomingincreasinglyurgent.

Weshouldmakejointeffortssoastoprotectourenvironment.

Inthefirstplace,asstudents,wecandesignsomeposterstoenhancepeople'sawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Additionally,

bynomeansshouldcompaniespourpollutedwaterintotheoceanbecauseoceanisofgreatsignificanceformaintainingthetheecologicalbalance.Asidefromthat,ourgovernmentshouldalsolaydownrelevant