（高考英語作文煉句）第25篇譯文老師筆記

PAGEPAGE11.盡管即時聊天工具能使學生之間保持聯(lián)系,但它卻耗費了他們面對面交流的時間.Whiletheuseof

instantmessagingtools

(1.即時聊天工具)canallowstudentsto

stayconnected(2.保持聯(lián)系),itcanalso

eatinto

(3.消耗,耗費)thetimetheyspendin

face-to-faceinteractions(4.面對面交流).

1-instantmessagingtools詞典釋義：instantmessagingnoun

uncountable

■a

typeofserviceavailableontheInternetthatallowsyoutoexchangewritten

messageswithsomeoneelsewhoisusingtheserviceatthesametime

(網(wǎng)際網(wǎng)路服務)即時通訊

外刊例句：Chinahasvowedtointensifycontrolsonsocialmediaand

instantmessagingtools,inthe

highest-levelofficialresponsetotheextraordinarysurgeinmicroblogging

inthecountry.

()中國對于異乎尋常的微博浪潮予以最高程度的官方回應,誓要加緊對于社交媒體和即時通訊工具的監(jiān)控.

替換表達：instantmessagingservices

學生錯誤表達：(1)

instant

messagingapplication點評：表示具體的某類應用時,application是可數(shù)名詞,這里應該改為instantmessagingapplications

2-stayconnectedstay此時是系動詞.

詞典釋義：stay[ste?]

verb

CONTINUE

繼續(xù)

ESSENTIAL

intransitive

usually+adverborpreposition

[L]

■tocontinuedoing

something,ortocontinuetobeinaparticularstate

繼續(xù)做;保持?Stay

awayfromtheedgeofthecliff.不要到懸崖邊上去.?He'sdecidednotto

stay

in

teaching/medicine/thearmy.他已經(jīng)決定不再教書／從醫(yī)／當兵.?Thefinalfiguresshowedthatmostdepartmentshad

stayed

withinbudget.最終數(shù)據(jù)顯示大部分部門都沒有超出預算.?Itwassowarmwe

stayed

(out)

inthe

gardenuntiltenthatnight.那天晚上天氣很暖和,我們一直在花園里待到十點鐘.?Putalidonthepansothefoodwill

stay

hot.蓋上鍋蓋,這樣食物就不會冷掉了.?Theshops

stay

openuntil9o'clock.商店一直營業(yè)到九點.?They

stayed

friendsaftertheirdivorce.他們離婚后仍然是朋友.

connected

●●○○○1.ADJ

形容詞

Seealso：

connect;well-connected;

有關的;有聯(lián)系的

Ifonethingis

connectedwith

another,thereisalinkorrelationshipbetweenthem.

【搭配模式】：usuv-linkADJ?Haveyoueverhadanyskinproblems

connected

withexposuretothesun?...你曾因日曬出現(xiàn)過皮膚問題嗎??Thedisputeisnotdirectly

connected

tothenegotiations...這一爭端與談判沒有直接聯(lián)系.?ShewasbornatAmbala,India,herfamilybeingclosely

connected

withtheIndianarmy.她出生在印度的安巴拉,她們家族與印度軍隊關系甚密.

外刊例句：Inhelpingpeopleto

stay

connected

totheirpeers,socialmediasitessuchasFacebookalsolet

themcomparethemselvestopeoplewhoaredoingbetterthantheyfeelthey

are(oratleastappeartobe,intheircarefullycraftedprofiles).

()諸如Facebook等社交媒體為了讓人們與其小伙伴能一直保持聯(lián)系,就讓人們能與那些感覺過得比他們好(至少在他們精修的圖片上是這樣)的人比較.

替換表達：beincontact

學生錯誤表達：(1)

keep

contact

點評：應該改為固定表達stay/keep

incontact(2)

keepconnection點評：沒有keepconnection的說法,這里應該改為stayconnected

3-eatinto

詞典釋義：eatinto1.PHRASAL

VERB

短語動詞

消耗,耗費(時間或資源)

Ifsomething

eatsinto

yourtime

oryourresources,itusesthem,whentheyshouldbeusedforotherthings.

【語法信息】：VPn?Responsibilitiesathomeandwork

eatinto

histime...家庭和工作的雙重負擔耗費了他的時間.

?Wageswererisingfasterthanproductivityandthiswas

eatingintoprofits.工資的漲幅高過了生產(chǎn)率增長的速度,從而消耗了利潤所得.

外刊例句：Whilstonlinebrowsingforbooks,beaniebabiesandmutual

fundsdoes

eatinto

thetime

availabletospendinfrontofatelevisionscreen,theInternethasacresof

chatroomsdevotedtofavouritesoaps.

()(人們)上網(wǎng)看書、瀏覽玩具熊和查閱共同基金雖然會消耗掉用來看電視的時間,但網(wǎng)絡也有著大量用于討論喜愛的電視劇的地方.

替換表達：useup/eatup/swallowup/takeup/consume

4-face-to-faceinteractions詞典釋義：face-to-face

[?fe?s.t?'fe?s]

adverb

[beforenoun]

adjective

■directly,meetingsomeoneinthesameplace

面對面(的)?We'vespokenonthephonebutnever

face-to-face.我們通過電話,但素未謀面.?She

came

face-to-face

withthegunmanashe

strodeintotheplayground.持槍歹徒大步走到操場時,她碰個正著.

interaction

UK

[??n.t?'r?k.??n]

US

[-t??-]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

■whentwoormorepeopleorthingscommunicatewithor

reacttoeachother

交流,交往;相互作用,相互影響?There'snotenough

interaction

between

the

managementandtheworkers.管理部門與工人之間的溝通不足.?Languagegamesareusuallyintendedtoencouragestudent

interaction.語言游戲通常用來鼓勵學生間的交流.?Theplayfollowsthe

interactions

ofthreevery

differentcharacters.該劇以三個性格迥異的人物之間的交往為主線展開情節(jié).

外刊例句：Theyshouldprovideguidelinestoemployeesonhowto

minimiseoverloadonothers;avoidingsendingemailstocolleaguesinthe

samebuilding–therebyencouraging

face-to-face

interactions;andensuringthatanybodysendinganemailshouldletthe

receiverknowhowimportanttheirresponseis,andbywhentheirresponseis

required.

()他們該指導雇員如何減少工作負擔——(呼吁他們)不要給同一棟樓的同事發(fā)電子郵件,從而鼓勵他們更多地面對面接觸,并且確保發(fā)送電子郵件者該讓接收人知道其回復的重要性和期限.

替換表達：face-to-facecommunication

Q：例句的主語是use,而我的翻譯的主語是instant

messagingtools,這樣翻譯有問題嗎?我的翻譯是：Althoughinstant

chattingapplicationcanmakestudentskeepintouchwitheachother,it

wastestheirface-to-facecommunicatingtime.

A：使用theuseofinstantmessagingtools或者instantmessagingtools做主語都可以,但如果用instant

messagingtools做主語,句子要改為Althoughinstantmessaging

toolscanallowstudentstokeepintouchwitheachother,theywaste

students’timespentinface-to-facecommunicatingtime.

Q：老師,請問,messagetool和messaging

tool,什么時候需要用message做定語,什么時候需要用messaging,或者說兩者是否可以替換?A：instantmessagingtools/services是一個固定表達,含義是"即使通信工具/服務”,不能寫成instantmessagetools,平時可以多記一些這樣的固定表達.

2.高中生和大學生正處于發(fā)展社交技能的階段.那些在網(wǎng)上花費太多時間的人可能會損害自己在線下的現(xiàn)實世界場景中與人交流的能力.Highschoolersandcollegestudentsarestill

intheprocessof(1.處于……的階段)developingtheirsocialskills.Thosewhospendanexcessiveamountoftimeonlinemayjeopardize

(2.損害)theirabilitytointeractwithothersin

offline,realworldscenarios(3.線下的現(xiàn)實世界場景).

1-intheprocessof

詞典釋義：processnoun

countable

UK

[?pr??.ses]

US

[?prɑ?-]

beintheprocessofdoingsth

ADVANCED

■tohavestarteddoingsomething

在…的進程中?We'restillinthe

process

ofdecoratingthehouse.我們還在裝修房子.

外卡例句：LastyearMonsantotriedunsuccessfullytobuySyngenta;

theSwissfirmisnow

intheprocess

of

beingboughtbyChemChina,astate-ownedentity.()孟山都公司去年收購先正達公司失敗,而這家瑞士公司如今正遭國有企業(yè)中國化工所收購.

替換表達：inaphaseof

學生錯誤表達：(1)

Ataphrase

of點評：介詞使用有誤,應該改為ina

phraseof

2-jeopardize

詞典釋義：jeopardize

(UK

usually

jeopardise)

UK

['d?ep.?.da?z]

US

[-?-]

verb

transitive

■toputsomethingsuchasaplanorsystemindangerof

beingharmedordamaged

使處于危險境地;危及,損害?Sheknewthatbyfailingherexamsshecould

jeopardize

herwholefuture.她知道考試不及格會影響自己整個未來的前途.

外刊例句：Beforetakingoffice,DonaldTrumpalsoraisedanxietiesby

threateningtoterminateNafta,whichwould

jeopardize

tradewithtwoofAmerica’sbiggestbeefimporters,

MexicoandCanada.

()特朗普在上臺前,就威脅要廢除北美自由貿(mào)易協(xié)定,引起公眾不安,因為這將損害美國與其最大的兩個牛肉進口國墨西哥和加拿大的貿(mào)易.

替換表達：harm/adverselyaffect/undermine/impair

3-offline,realworldscenarios

詞典釋義：realworld

1.N-SING

單數(shù)名詞

真實的世界;現(xiàn)實世界;現(xiàn)實生活

Ifyoutalkabout

therealworld,you

arereferringtotheworldandlifeingeneral,incontrasttoaparticular

person'sownlife,experience,andideas,whichmayseemuntypicaland

unrealistic.

【搭配模式】：theN?Whentheyeventuallyleavetheschooltheywillbetotally

ill-equippedtodealwiththe

real

world...當他們最終離開學校的時候,他們沒掌握什么實際技能,難以應對現(xiàn)實世界.?IwasOlympicchampionbutIhadtogooutintothe

realworld

andworkforaliving.我是奧運冠軍,但是我不得不走進現(xiàn)實生活工作謀生.

scenario

●●○○○1.N-COUNT

可數(shù)名詞

設想;可能發(fā)生的情況

Ifyoutalkabout

alikelyorpossible

scenario,youaretalkingaboutthewayinwhichasituationmaydevelop.?...thenightmare

scenario

ofadividedandirrelevantRoyalFamily...對于王室四分五裂、無足輕重的可怕設想

?Intheworst-case

scenario,

youcouldbecomeahomelessperson...最壞的情況是你可能會無家可歸.

?Trytoimagineallthepossible

scenariosandwhatactionyouwouldtake.努力想象所有可能出現(xiàn)的情況并考慮一下你會采取什么行動.

外刊例句：Withcomputerscienceallaroundus,it'seasytomake

linksto

realworldscenarios

that

studentscanrelateto.

()隨著計算機技術變得無處不在,學生能輕松聯(lián)系到線下與其相關的現(xiàn)實場景.

替換表達：offline,real-worldsituations

學生錯誤表達：(1)

Reality點評：沒有突出"線下”這一層含義.

Q：不理解第三個翻譯點中offline,real中間的逗號是起什么作用的?A：這里逗號的作用類似于and,用于將兩個形容詞連接起來,類似的例子還有BBC例句：Theempiregaveitscoloniesreal,

tangiblebenefits.

3.網(wǎng)上購物最吸引人的地方在于它能讓學生用鼠標輕輕一點就能找到最便宜的價格.學生缺錢是出了名的,他們利用網(wǎng)絡購買便宜商品可減輕他們的經(jīng)濟負擔.Thebiggest

draw

(1.吸引人的地方)ofonlineshoppingisthatitallowsstudentstofindthecheapestpossibleprice

attheclickofamouse(2.鼠標輕輕一點).Students,whoarenotoriously

strappedforcash(3.缺錢的),caneasetheirfinancialstrainby

takingadvantageof(4.利用)bargainsonline.

1-thebiggestdraw

詞典釋義：drawUK

[dr?：]

US

[drɑ：]

noun

ATTRACTION

吸引力

countableusuallysingular

■someoneor

somethingthatalotofpeopleareinterestedin

有吸引力的人(或事物)?Weneedsomeoneattheeventwho'llbea

big

draw

andattractthepayingpublic.我們需要一個深受大家喜歡的人到場,以吸引人們花錢買票.

外刊例句：India,byfar

the

biggestdraw

inthegame,threatenedtowithdrawfromshowpieceevents

liketheWorldCupandtheWorldTwenty20.

()印度作為現(xiàn)今比賽中最引人注目的國家,威脅要從諸如板球世界杯和板球20杯賽等大型比賽中退賽.

學生錯誤表達：(1)

addict點評：addict是指"吸毒上癮的人;對……著迷的人”,用在此處不恰當.

2-with/attheclickofamouse

詞典釋義：click[kl?k]

verb

OPERATE

COMPUTER

電腦操作

ESSENTIAL

intransitive

or

transitive

specialized

■to(causeacomputerinstructionto)operatebypressing

abuttononthemouse(=smallcontroldevice)ofacomputer

點擊(滑鼠)?Ifyouwanttoopenafile,

click

twice

on

theiconforit.如果你想開啟一個檔案,按兩下該檔案圖示.?Whenyouhaveselectedthefileyouwant,

click

the

'Open'box.選中了你想要的檔案,用滑鼠點擊"開啟”方框.

外刊例句：Onceyoulogon,itasksaserverwhetheryourfriendsare

connected,andletsyouknowwhichofthem,ifany,areonline.With

theclickofamouse,youcanthen

starttypingaway.

()你登錄后,它就會訪問搜索業(yè)務查詢你的好友是否在線,讓你知道誰在線.你只需點擊一下鼠標,就可以開始打字聊天了.

學生錯誤表達：(1)

through

clicking/onlyusedmouse點評：這里應該改為常見說法

with/attheclickofamouse

3-(be)strappedforcash

詞典釋義：strapped[str?pt]

informal

adjective

■nothavingenoughmoney

手頭緊的,缺錢的

?I'dlovetocometoMalaysiawithyou,butI'mafraidI'm

abit

strapped

(forcash)

atthemoment.我想和你一起去馬來西亞,但恐怕我現(xiàn)在手頭有點緊.

外刊例句：ThePalestinianAuthorityhasbeen

strappedforcash

sinceHamasswepttoasurprisevictoryin

parliamentaryelectionsinJanuary.

()因為哈馬斯于一月份的議會選舉中出乎意料地獲勝,巴勒斯坦政權已經(jīng)手頭緊缺.

替換表達：(be)shortofmoney/cash

4-takeadvantageof

詞典釋義：take

advantageof

phrasal

1.

：

tomakeuseofforone'sownbenefit

：

useto

advantage

：

profitby

<extends

hisexamination

…

to

take

advantageof

modernmethodsofdiagnosis

—

MorrisFishbein>

<feelswe

arenot

taking

proper

advantageof

ouropportunity

—

R.A.Smith>

2.

：

imposeupon

：

abuse,

exploit

<was

alwaysgoodtopeople

…

andtherewasthosethat

tookadvantageof

him

—

NigelBalchin>

<not

above

takingadvantageof

another'sweakness>

外刊例句：Bigdataallowfishtobeprotectedasneverbefore.

Governmentsshould

takeadvantageof

this.

()大數(shù)據(jù)讓魚類可以得到前所未有的保護.政府該捉緊此機遇.

替換表達：makethebestuseofsomething

Q：請問attheclickofamouse里面的at是類似于by/with這樣的介詞嗎,表示通過,利用;還是說和click專門搭配的詞?A：at/withtheclickofamouse是一個常見搭配,可以當成固定表達記住.

Q：不是一般用low形容價格低嗎?請問這里為什么用cheapest?A：cheapestprice是一個常見說法,例如《經(jīng)濟學人》例句：Butfortradedgoods,pricesarelikelytoconvergedownwards,

towards

thecheapestprice.這個表達可以當成特例記住.

Q：thecheapestpossibleprice是什么用法?possible的位置比其他形容詞更靠近中心詞?A：這是possible的一個常見用法,置于比較級最高級之后,可以參考朗文詞典解釋：

thebest/biggest/fastestetc.possible

thebestetc.thatcanexistorbeachieved最好的/最大的/最快的等：?Trytogetthebestpossibleprice.盡量要拿到最好的價格.?Whatistheworstpossiblethingthatcouldhappen?最壞的情況會是什么呢?

Famousfor不能寫成famousof,學生造句Students

arefamousofbeingshortofmoney.應該改為Studentsare

famousforbeingshortofmoney.

4.網(wǎng)上購物的快速與方便可能會誘導學生購買超出他們需求的東西,導致輕率或者不必要的消費.花幾個小時在網(wǎng)上搜索以找到最合算的商品或者最新的時尚潮流,這種誘惑也會使熱衷購物的年輕人的學習半途而廢.Thespeedandconvenienceofonlineshoppingmayencouragefrivolousorunnecessaryspendingby

inducing

(1.誘導)studentstobuymorethantheyneed.Thetemptationtospendhourssurfingtheinternettofindoutabout

thebestbuys

(2.最合算的商品)orthelatestfashiontrendscouldalsocausethestudiesofyoung

shopaholics(3.熱衷購物的人)to

fallbythewayside(4.半途而廢).

1-inducesbtodosth

詞典釋義：induceUK

[?n'dju：s]

US

[-'du：s]

formal

verb

PERSUADE

誘使

[T+obj+toinfinitive]

■topersuadesomeonetodosomething

誘使;勸說?They

induced

her

to

takethejobby

promisingeditorialfreedom.他們向她保證有編輯自由,以勸服她接受這項工作.?Nothingcould

induce

me(=Idefinitelycannotbepersuaded)toclimba

mountain/rideabike.沒有甚么能誘使我去爬山／騎腳踏車的.

外刊例句：Itispossiblethatessay-writingservicesmaybe

committingacriminaloffence,throughaidingandabettingfraud,oratthe

veryleastmaybe

inducing

students

tobreaktheircontracts

withtheirinstitution.

()論文寫作服務可能會是一種犯罪行為,因為它幫助和參與到了犯罪,或者說它起碼引誘了學生違背其與學校的約定.

替換表達：lure/seducesomebodyintodoingsomething

2-thebestbuyBuy在這里是名詞,thebest

buy的含義是"最合算的商品”.

BuynounC,usuallysingular1.somethingthatisworthbuying,becauseitischeap,goodquality,or

likelytogaininvalue合算的東西,便宜貨：agood/excellentetcbuy?Thewineisagoodbuyat$6.50.這葡萄酒6.50美元,買得很合算.?It'sworthshoppingaroundfor

thebestbuy

(=whatyouwantatthelowestprice).為買到最合算的東西,值得四處逛逛.

外刊例句：Thismeantthatcustomershadlittleneedtoconsult

independentintermediarieson

thebest

buys.

()這意味著,顧客無需中間人的幫助就能拿到最實惠的價格.

3-shopaholics

詞典釋義：-aholic

-aholic/

?h?l?k

;

?h?l?k

/suffixinnounsand

adjectives

1.someonewhocannotstopdoingsomethingorusing

something對…癡迷的人,沉湎于…的人：

aworkaholic(=someonewhoneverstopsworking)工作狂

achocaholic(=someonewholoveschocolate)嗜巧克力成癖的人

外刊例句：Previousstudieshavesuggested90%of

shopaholics

arewomen,butinthelateststudypsychologists

foundthedifferencewasalmostnegligible,withthedisorderaffecting6%of

womenand5.5%ofmen.

()之前的研究指出,90%的購物狂都是女性,但心理學家在最新的研究中發(fā)現(xiàn),這些差距是幾乎可以忽略不計的,因為這種行為錯亂會影響6%的女性和5.5%的男性.

替換表達：shoppingaddicts

4-fallbythewayside

詞典釋義：fallbythewayside

■Ifsomeonefalls

bythewayside,theyfailtofinishanactivity,andifsomethingfallsby

thewayside,peoplestopdoingit,makingit,orusingit

中途退出;半途而廢?Sowhydoesonecompanysurvivearecessionwhileits

competitors

fall

bythewayside?

那么為甚么一家公司熬過了經(jīng)濟衰退期,而其競爭對手都中途倒閉了呢?

外刊例句：Smartfridgesmaywellbetheapplianceofthefuture,or

could

fallbythewayside

astoo

muchtechfortoolittlegain,buttheideaofconnectedsensorsandsmart

devicesmakingdecisionswithoutourinputwillcontinue.

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