（高考英語作文煉句）第13篇譯文老師筆記

PAGEPAGE11.盡管學(xué)生能在涉足商界的經(jīng)歷中獲益匪淺,但將學(xué)習(xí)放在首位仍非常關(guān)鍵.大多數(shù)兼職工作每周會占據(jù)10到20小時不等.課業(yè)繁重的學(xué)生應(yīng)該控制工作時間,如有可能,在考試周期間請假.Despitethebenefitstostudentsof

gettingtheirfeetwet

(1.涉足)inthebusinessworld,itiscriticalthatthey

maintainacademicstudiesasatoppriority(2.將學(xué)習(xí)放在首位).Mostpart-timejobsvaryfrom10to20hoursperweek.Studentswhoalready

haveaheavycourseload

(3.學(xué)業(yè)繁重)shouldlimittheirnumberofworkhoursand,ifpossible,

askforaleaveofabsence

(4.請假)duringexaminationperiods.

1-gettheirfeetwet

詞典釋義：?

get

your'feetwet

(especiallyNAmE,

informal)

to

startdoingsththatisnewforyou

初次涉足;開始做(新鮮的事情)：

Atthattimehewasayoungactor,justgettinghisfeet

wet.

那時他還是個年輕演員,才初出茅廬.

外刊例句：Thepricehasnowdroppedto$36andamonthly$5option

wasaddedtoletusers

gettheirfeet

wet.Ratherthancountongrowthalone,itistryingtocarveoutaniche

inwhichrecurringrevenueproducesareasonablereturn.

()該服務(wù)全年訂購價格現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)低至36美元,而且顧客可以先花5美元訂購一個月來嘗試一下.該網(wǎng)站正嘗試打造讓循環(huán)流動利潤帶來合理收益的服務(wù)定位,而非單純依靠增長.

替換表達(dá)：stepinto/startdoing

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

setfootin點(diǎn)評：setfootin

something含義是"進(jìn)入某處,踏入某處”,例如Shesworeshewouldnever

setfootinhishouseagain.她發(fā)誓再也不會踏進(jìn)他的住處一步.它不可以用來表示"嘗試做某事”.

2-maintainacademicstudiesasatoppriority

詞典釋義：priorityUK

[pra?'?r.?.ti]

US

[-'?：r.?.t?i]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

IMPROVER

■somethingthatisveryimportantandmustbedealtwith

beforeotherthings

優(yōu)先考慮的事?Themanagementdidnotseemtoconsiderofficesafetyto

bea

priority.管理部門似乎并不認(rèn)為應(yīng)該優(yōu)先考慮辦公室安全問題.?My

first/top

priority

istofindsomewhere

tolive.我首先要考慮的是找個地方住.?Youhavetolearnto

get

your

priorities

right/straight

(=decidewhicharethemostimportantjobsorproblemsanddealwiththem

first).你必須學(xué)會先處理最重要的事.?Mendingthelightsisa

priority

task(=more

importantthanotherjobs).修燈這個任務(wù)更重要.?Banksnormally

give

priority

to

large

businesseswhendecidingonloans(=Theydealwiththemfirstbecausethey

considerthemmostimportant).銀行在發(fā)放貸款時通常優(yōu)先考慮大企業(yè).

外刊例句：Also,thestorydoesn'tendthere,accordingtoasenior

engineerfromPepsiCowhoworksinbio-basedplastics-SunChipswill

maintaintheirbiodegradabilityvision

as

atoppriority

–"afterovercomingtheproblemswiththe

noise."

()而且,故事也未在此結(jié)束.據(jù)在百事可樂公司負(fù)責(zé)生物材料塑料產(chǎn)品的高級工程師所說,"太陽薯片公司在克服了那些聲音問題之后,會繼續(xù)以生物降解發(fā)展前景為首要任務(wù).

替換表達(dá)：place/putsomethinginthefirstplace/giveprimacytosomething

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

placestudy

atthefirstorder點(diǎn)評：中式表達(dá).firstorder一般指"(質(zhì)量)優(yōu)秀的,一流的”,不可以用來指重要性排序.(2)

beontheprimacy

ofstudy點(diǎn)評：沒有beonthe

primacyofstudy的說法,primacy的常見搭配是giveprimacytosth.這里應(yīng)該改為giveprimacyto

academicstudies

3-haveaheavycourseload

詞典釋義：loadUK

[l??d]

US

[lo?d]

noun

AMOUNTTODO

工作量

countable

■theamountofworktobedonebyaperson

工作量,工作任務(wù)?Ifwesharetheorganizationoftheparty,thatwillhelp

spreadthe

load

abit.如果我們都分擔(dān)一些派對的組織工作,那么就不至于忙不過來了.?I'vegota

heavy/light

teaching

load

this

term.這學(xué)期我的教學(xué)任務(wù)很重／輕.

外刊例句：Theelectionbore

a

heavyload

ofnewprecedentsasitmarkedtheendofthecountry'slong

transitionfromapurelypresidentialsystemtoaparliamentaryrepublic.()這次選舉帶來了大量前所未有的工作,因?yàn)樗鼧?biāo)志著該國放棄一直以來的總統(tǒng)制,轉(zhuǎn)而采用國會共和制.

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

haveheavy

lesson點(diǎn)評：搭配不當(dāng),lesson不可以用heavy來修飾,且lesson是可數(shù)名詞,需要用復(fù)數(shù)形式,或者前面加修飾詞.(2)

heavy

schoolwork/workload點(diǎn)評：表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)確.schoolwork表示"學(xué)校作業(yè)”,而workload指"工作量”,不是指"學(xué)業(yè)”.(3)

burden

oneroustasks點(diǎn)評：表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)確.onerous

tasks僅僅指"任務(wù)繁重”,而沒有特指"學(xué)業(yè)繁重”.

4-askforaleaveofabsence

詞典釋義：leaveofabsence

noun

[countable/uncountable]

[singular

leave

ofabsence

plural

leavesofabsence]

formal

aperiodoftimethatyouofficiallyspendawayfromajoborthe

armedforces

Thesaurus：

timeofffrom

workhyponym

外刊例句：SteveJobssaidhewouldtake

aleaveofabsence

fromAppleuntiltheendofJunebecausehis

medicalcondition,ahormoneimbalance,is"morecomplex”thanhehad

thought.

()史蒂夫·喬布斯說,他因?yàn)榛疾?荷爾蒙失衡),且病情要比想象中"復(fù)雜”,所以將暫時離開蘋果公司直到6月底.

替換表達(dá)：gettimeoffwork

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

haveabreak點(diǎn)評：haveabreak是指"小憩”,不可以用來指"請假”.

Q：請問老師,burden比load更為正式,在這里暗示的"課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)/學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)”等能否用academicburden或者courseburden?A：可以用academicburden,但不能用course

burden,因?yàn)闆]有這個說法.

Q：這里"askforaleaveofabsence”的表達(dá)會不會有一點(diǎn)多余?只用寫到"askforaleave”就足夠表達(dá)請假的含義了?A：leaveofabsence是一個固定搭配,不多余.

Q：askforaleaveofabsence,leave是不可數(shù)名詞,為什么前面可以加a呢A：leaveofabsence要當(dāng)成一個總體來理解,這是一個可數(shù)名詞,前面可以加a

leaveofabsence

noun

[countable/uncountable]

[singular

leave

ofabsence

plural

leavesofabsence]

formal

aperiodoftimethatyouofficiallyspendawayfromajoborthe

armedforces

Thesaurus：

timeofffrom

workhyponym

Q：thebenefitstostudents這里的to可以改成for嗎?A：thebenefitsto/forstudents都可以,參考麥克米倫詞典例句：Considerthepotentialbenefitsofthedealforthecompany.

Q：控制工作時間可以用control嗎?A：不可以,"控制工作時間”一般說limitthenumberofworkinghours,而不可以說controlworkinghours

2.只有保持謹(jǐn)慎和合理安排時間,大學(xué)生才能保證他們做的兼職或商業(yè)活動的重要性不會超過學(xué)習(xí).Onlyby

exercisingcaution

(1.保持謹(jǐn)慎)andmaintainingabalancedschedulecancollegestudentsensurethatanypart-timejobsor

businessventures

(2.商業(yè)活動)thattheyundertakedonot

endup

(3.最終導(dǎo)致)overtaking

(4.超過)theiracademicstudies.

1-exercisecautionexercise這里取的是及物動詞"讓……運(yùn)動起來”.

詞典釋義：exerciseUK

['ek.s?.sa?z]

US

[-s?-]

note_panel

verb

USE

使用

ADVANCED

transitive

formal

■tousesomething

行使;運(yùn)用;使用

?I

exercised

mydemocratic

rightbynotvotingintheelection.在選舉中,我透過不投票的方式來行使我的民主權(quán)利.?Always

exercise

caution

whenhandlingradioactivesubstances.處理放射性物質(zhì)時要隨時小心謹(jǐn)慎.?We'vedecidedto

exercisetheoption(=usethepartofalegalagreement)tobuythehousewenowlease.我們已經(jīng)決定行使合約所賦予的買賣選擇權(quán),買下我們現(xiàn)在租住的房屋.

外刊例句：Thegovernmentiscurbingspeechonanotherfront.New

rulescameintoeffectinSeptemberrequiringuniversitiesthathostspeakers

"withextremistviewslinkedtoterroristgroups”toensurethattheyare

challengedbyothers.If"inanydoubtthattheriskcannotbefully

mitigateduniversitiesshould

exercise

caution

andnotallowtheeventtoproceed,”officialguidelinessay.

()政府正在其他方面打壓言論自由.新的相關(guān)政策將在九月份生效,它要求各大學(xué)若要邀請"持與恐怖分子相關(guān)極端見解”的人進(jìn)行演講,得確保有其他人在他們演講時提出質(zhì)疑.官方的指導(dǎo)方針指出"大學(xué)如果無法確定能緩和這些活動的危險,則應(yīng)該謹(jǐn)慎行事,取消這些活動”.

替換表達(dá)：becautious

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

keep/remain/maintaincaution點(diǎn)評：搭配不當(dāng).沒有keep/remain/maintaincaution的說法,這里可以改為exercisecaution

2-businessventures

詞典釋義：ventureUK

['ven.t??r]

US

[-t??]

noun

countable

IMPROVER

■anewactivity,usuallyinbusiness,whichinvolvesriskoruncertainty

(有風(fēng)險的)企業(yè);投機(jī)活動;商業(yè)冒險?Sheadvisedustolookabroadformorelucrative

business

ventures.她建議我們?nèi)鈱ふ腋欣蓤D的商業(yè)機(jī)會.?Therearemany

joint

venturesbetweenAmericanandJapanesecompanies.有許多美日合資企業(yè).

外刊例句：Businessplansarerequirednotonlybynew

businessventures

butalsobyold

businessestryingsomethingnew.Proposedmergersandacquisitionsrequirea

detailedplanofthefutureofthemergedentity;aventureintoanewmarket

requiresabusinessplan;andsotoodoesthewindingdownortheturning

roundofanoldandtiredbusiness.

()無論是新型的風(fēng)險投資企業(yè),還是力求創(chuàng)新的老牌企業(yè),它們都需要商業(yè)計劃.想要進(jìn)行合并或收購其他公司對合并后的企業(yè)的未來發(fā)展有著詳細(xì)的計劃,而風(fēng)險投資企業(yè)要進(jìn)軍新市場也得有商業(yè)計劃,當(dāng)然那些老牌企業(yè)和夕陽企業(yè)在轉(zhuǎn)型或縮減業(yè)務(wù)時也得有商業(yè)計劃.

替換表達(dá)：businessactivities

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

commercialventure點(diǎn)評：venture是可數(shù)名詞,可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)在這里不可以單獨(dú)使用,應(yīng)該改為commercialventures

3-endupdoingendupdoing通常指意外的、或者不想要的結(jié)果.如果后跟介詞,通常是with/in/as

詞典釋義：endup

tobeinaparticularsituation,state,orplaceafteraseriesofevents,

especiallywhenyoudidnotplanit〔尤指經(jīng)歷一系列意料之外的事情后〕最終處于……?Hecameroundforacoffeeandweendedupinbedtogether.他是來喝咖啡的,到后來我們卻上了床.?Iwonderedwherethepictureswouldendupaftertheauction.我想知道那些畫拍賣后的最終去處.endupdoingsth.?Mostslimmersendupputtingweightbackon.大多數(shù)減肥的人最后又發(fā)胖了.

外刊例句：Commissionofficialsinsisttheyareencouragingbanksto

keepcross-borderoperationsgoingiftheyareprofitable.But,fretsPierre

Louis,acompetitionexpertatDechert,alawfirm,Europe'ssinglemarketin

bankingis"theinnocentbystander”thatmay

endupgetting

hurt.

()委員會的官員堅稱,他們正鼓勵銀行如果尚能在跨界合作中獲利的話就該繼續(xù)進(jìn)行跨界合作.然而,法律公司Dechert的競爭法專家皮埃爾·路易斯擔(dān)心歐盟的單一市場在銀行業(yè)中會是"無辜的旁觀者”,它可能最終會意外受損.

替換表達(dá)：windupsomething/doingsomething

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

affectinthe

end/atlast點(diǎn)評：中式表達(dá).Affect是及物動詞,不能當(dāng)成不及物動詞來用.(2)

consequently

makeacompacton點(diǎn)評：用詞錯誤,compact作為名詞時是指"契約”,這里應(yīng)該改為impact

4-overtake這里的overtake可以指在重要程度上的"超過”.

詞典釋義：overtakeUK

[???.v?'te?k]

US

[?o?.v?-]

(overtook,

overtaken)

verb

GOPAST

超過

ADVANCED

transitive

■togopastsomethingbybeingagreateramountordegree

(數(shù)量或程度上)大于,超過?OurUSsaleshavenowovertakenoursalesinEurope.我們在美國的銷售額現(xiàn)已超過了我們在歐洲的銷售額.?We'dplannedtoholdameetingtomorrow,but

eventshaveovertakenus(=thingshavechanged).我們本打算明天召開一個會議,但情況發(fā)生了變化.

外刊例句：ThatistheyearthatChina'seconomywill

overtake

America'sifyoustickwith

thedefaultassumptionsinourmostrecentinteractivechart,whichallows

youtopluginyourownguesstimatesoffuturegrowthandinflationinthetwocountries,aswellastheexchangeratebetweenthem.

()我們最新的交互圖能讓你大膽估測中美兩國未來的經(jīng)濟(jì)增長,通貨膨脹以及兩國的貨幣匯率,而你如果對該圖做出的默認(rèn)假設(shè)深信不疑,那么(你可以認(rèn)為)到了那一年,中國經(jīng)濟(jì)將超過美國.

替換表達(dá)：surpass

Q：老師您好,overtake這里的用法是指在商業(yè)活動和兼職上的時間不會超過學(xué)習(xí)么,查詢了overtake的用法感覺用法怪怪的不能理解A：studentsensurethatanypart-timejobsorbusinessventuresthattheyundertakedonotendupovertakingtheiracademicstudies是指學(xué)生要保證商業(yè)活動和兼職活動的重要性不會超過學(xué)習(xí).

Q：businessventures為什么要用venture呢?字典里查到的比較貼近的一層意思就是投機(jī)活動.A：businessventure是指有風(fēng)險的商業(yè)活動,商業(yè)機(jī)會等,比如牛津詞典例句：Adisastrousbusinessventurelosthimthousandsofdollars.一個徹底失敗的經(jīng)營項目使他損失嚴(yán)重.

3.學(xué)生在平衡學(xué)習(xí)和社交時碰到的問題不是缺少時間,而是沒有有效地利用時間.學(xué)生應(yīng)該制定包括社交活動和學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)任務(wù)在內(nèi)的時間表并嚴(yán)格執(zhí)行,其中學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)任務(wù)要根據(jù)截止日期和其他相關(guān)因素安排優(yōu)先級.Theproblemthatstudentsoftenencounterwhenattemptingto

balance(1.平衡)studyingandsocializingis

notthattimeislackingbut,rather(2.不是……而是……),thatitisusedinefficiently.Studentsshouldmakeandadheretoaschedulethatincludesbothsocialactivitiesandstudy-relatedtasks,withthelatterbeing

prioritized

(3.優(yōu)先安排)accordingto

duedate(4.截止日期)andotherrelevantfactors.

1-balanceAandB

詞典釋義：balance

ADVANCED

transitive

■togiveseveral

thingsequalamountsofimportance,timeormoneysothatasituationis

successful

權(quán)衡,斟酌?Istruggleto

balance

workandfamily

commitments.我努力地在工作和家庭責(zé)任之間尋求平衡.

外刊例句：Ledauniversitycluborsociety?Onitsownthatmightnot

benoteworthy,butifunderyourleadershipyourclubachievedsomething,

thatcouldbeworthincluding.Workedpart-timeinaburgerbar?Thatshows

youcan

balance

studyandwork.If

youbroughtinanewproductlinetogenerateextrasales,thatwouldbean

interestingachievementtohighlight.

()在大學(xué)俱樂部或?qū)W生會擔(dān)任過領(lǐng)導(dǎo)?這些組織本身可能不值一提,但它們在你的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下取得了一定成就,那就值得一提了.在漢堡店做過兼職?這能說明你可以兼顧學(xué)習(xí)和工作.你如果給該店開發(fā)了新產(chǎn)品,并且增加了營業(yè)額,那就真得把這有趣成就大書特書了.

替換表達(dá)：strike/keepabalancebetween…and…

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

encounterin

balancing點(diǎn)評：沒有encounterin

balancing的表達(dá),可以改為balance…and…

2-

not…butrather…not…butrather…是一個固定句式,含義是"不是……而是……”

詞典釋義：not…butrather…

usedtosaythatonethingisnottruebutadifferentthingistrue不是……而是……：?Theproblemisnottheirlackoffunding,butrathertheirlackofplanning.問題不在于他們?nèi)鄙儋Y金,而在于缺乏計劃.

befundplan

外刊例句：YetMrPe?aisnotthemostunpopularleaderinLatin

America.Thatdubioushonourdoes

not

evenbelongtoVenezuela’sNicolásMaduro(21%)

but

rathertoLuisGuillermoSolísofCostaRica(10%),according

toConsultaMitofsky,aMexicanpollster.

()然而,佩納還不是拉丁美洲最不受歡迎的總統(tǒng).據(jù)墨西哥民意調(diào)查員米托夫斯凱所說,可能這個恥辱連委內(nèi)瑞拉的NicolásMaduro還沒"拿到”(21%),它屬于哥斯達(dá)黎加的

LuisGuillermoSolís(10%).

替換表達(dá)：Binsteadof/ratherthanA

3-beprioritized

詞典釋義：prioritize

(UK

usually

prioritise)

UK

[pra?'?r.?.ta?z]

US

[-'?：r.?-]

verb

intransitive

or

transitive

■todecidewhichofagroupofthingsarethemostimportantsothatyoucandealwiththemfirst

確定(事項的)優(yōu)先次序?Youmustlearnto

prioritize

yourwork.你必須學(xué)會確定事情的輕重緩急.

外刊例句：Thatrequiresenforcedregulation,whichalsomust

beprioritized.Weneedanddeserve

morefromtheEPAthanajanitorsweepingupafterpollutershaveleftthe

scene.

()這需要法規(guī)來約束,這也是當(dāng)務(wù)之急.我們需要也應(yīng)該得到美國國家環(huán)保局(EPA)的幫助,而不是打掃現(xiàn)場遺留垃圾的環(huán)衛(wèi)工.

替換表達(dá)：begivenpreference/priorityoversomething

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

arrangethe

priororder點(diǎn)評：中式表達(dá),這里可以改為be

prioritized/begivenpriority

4-duedatedue作為形容詞的含義大部分中國學(xué)生還是比較陌生的,可以多觀察詞典例句.

詞典釋義：dueUK

[dju：]

US

[du：]

adjective

EXPECTED

預(yù)計的

ESSENTIAL

■expectedtohappen,arrive,etc.ataparticulartime

預(yù)計的,預(yù)期的?Whattimeisthenextbus

due?

下一班公車甚么時候來??Thenextmeetingis

due

to

beheldinthree

months'time.下次會議預(yù)計將在三個月后召開.?Theirfirstbabyis

due

inJanuary.他們的第一個孩子預(yù)產(chǎn)期在一月份.

duedate

noun

[singular]

thedateonwhichsomethingisplannedorexpectedtohappen,for

examplewhenmoneymustbepaidorwhenapregnantwomanexpectstohaveher

baby

Thesaurus：deadlinesandtimelimitssynonym

外刊例句：Thereisanotherheadache.Bycoincidence,CHIEFisdueto

bereplacedbyanewsysteminMarch2019,the

duedate

forBrexit.Designedtocopewith60mcustoms

declarationsayearthiswillnowhavetocopewithabout300m.Theproject

alreadyseemstobeintrouble.

()還有另外一個令人頭痛的問題.新系統(tǒng)預(yù)計在2019年3月取代CHIEF系統(tǒng),剛巧是英國真正脫歐的預(yù)計時間.CHIEF系統(tǒng)原本設(shè)計用來應(yīng)付每年6000萬份海關(guān)申報,現(xiàn)在可能得應(yīng)付3億份.這計劃應(yīng)該陷入困境.

替換表達(dá)：theclosingdate/thedeadline

Q：制定優(yōu)先級,prioritize.如何能夠查到某個詞的動詞形式,或者名詞或者形容詞形式.我知道優(yōu)先priority,但不知道這個詞的動詞形式.A：可以積累常見名詞的詞性轉(zhuǎn)化規(guī)律,也可以上谷歌搜索"名詞+verbform”,比如搜索priorityverbform就可以看到答案了.

Q：第二條的逗號是不是應(yīng)該點(diǎn)在but前面?A：寫成isnotthattimeislackingbut,rather,thatitis

usedinefficiently或者isnotthattimeislacking,but

ratherthatitisusedinefficiently都可以.這里只是語言表達(dá)習(xí)慣的問題.

Theproblemthatstudentsoftenencounterwhenattempting

tobalancestudyingandsocializingisnotthattimeislackingbut,rather,

thatitisusedinefficiently.

[分析]本句是一個主系表結(jié)構(gòu),其主干為Theproblem…isnotthat…butrather…that….其主語部分為Theproblemthatstudents

oftenencounterwhenattemptingtobalancestudyingandsocializing,其中包含了一個that引導(dǎo)的定語從句,修飾先行詞Theproblem,在定語從句又包含了一個when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句,注意這個時間狀語從句是一個省略句,還原完整為when

(theyare)attemptingtobalancestudyingandsocializing.表語部分中,not…butrather…連接了兩個名詞性從句thattimeislacking和thatitisused

inefficiently,對前者進(jìn)行否定,而肯定了后者.

4.毫無疑問,把大量時間花在學(xué)習(xí)上的孩子會打下堅實(shí)的學(xué)術(shù)基礎(chǔ).類似自然科學(xué)等復(fù)雜的科目需要廣闊的知識儲備,花在看書和做練習(xí)上的時間越多,孩子就越有可能更好地掌握該科目.很多成年人回首往事,后悔不已,希望自己在學(xué)校時更努力,學(xué)到更多.孩子通常意識不到學(xué)習(xí)的重要性,很多人都需要被敦促.Thereislittledoubtthatchildrenwhospendasignificantamountoftimestudyingwill

developastrongfoundationinacademia(1.打下堅實(shí)的學(xué)術(shù)基礎(chǔ)).Complexsubjectslikesciencerequire

awidebreadthofknowledge

(2.廣闊的知識儲備)andthemoretimespentreadingbooksanddoingexercisesthebetterachild's

grasp

(3.掌握)ofthesubjectislikelytobe.Manyadults

lookbackupon

(4.回首)theirchildhoodwithregret,wishingtheyhadtriedharderatschoolandachievedmore.Childrenoftendonotrealizetheimportanceofstudyandmanyneedtobepushed.

1-developastrongfoundationinacademia

詞典釋義：academia[??k.?'di：.mi.?]

noun

uncountable

■thepartofsociety,especiallyuniversities,thatis

connectedwithstudyingandthinking,ortheactivityorjobofstudying

(尤指大學(xué))學(xué)術(shù)界;學(xué)術(shù)活動;學(xué)術(shù)工作?AgraduateoflawandeconomicsfromMoscowState

University,hehadspenthislife

in

academia.他畢業(yè)于莫斯科國立大學(xué),修讀法律和經(jīng)濟(jì),畢生都傾注在學(xué)術(shù)研究上.

外刊例句：ButsternnessandreservecouldnothavebeenWashington's

chiefqualities,orhewouldneverhaverisensofar.MrEllisshowsaman

guidedbyconvictionandambition.Oddly,hisrevolutionaryleaningshad

astrongfoundationin

homeeconomics.

()然而,如果華盛頓最重要的個人品格是頑強(qiáng)和慎言,他也就不會聲名鵲起得這么快.埃利斯先生給我們展示了一個生性堅定且雄心勃勃的人該是怎樣的.但奇怪的是,華盛頓的革命意識卻根植于家政學(xué).

替換表達(dá)：layastrongfoundationof/for、givesba

solidfoundationof/for

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

makeasolid

academicbase點(diǎn)評：搭配不當(dāng),沒有makea

base這樣的表達(dá),可以說layasolidbaseforacademicstudies(2)

set

foundation點(diǎn)評：意思不完整,可以改為develop

astrongfoundationinacademia

2-awidebreadthofknowledge

詞典釋義：breadth[bredθ]

/bretθ]

nounonlysingular

■whensomethingincludesmanydifferentthings,features,

subjectsorqualities

廣泛性,廣度?The

breadth

ofherknowledgeisamazing.她知識淵博,令人驚訝.?Heshowedanastonishing

breadthoflearningfor

onesoyoung.他年紀(jì)輕輕就顯示出知識的淵博,很令人吃驚.

外刊例句：MrParks’spersonalstakeinthecivil-rightsmovement

allowedhimtogainanintimacywithhissubjectsthatwasn’tpossiblefor

otherphotographers;butitwashisabilitytotranscendthatandmaster

awidebreadthof

subjectmatterthat

shouldmakehisnameasmemorableasthoseofIrvingPenn,SteveMcCurry,

RichardAvedonandhisotherwhitecounterparts.

()帕克先生得益于其在人權(quán)運(yùn)動中的個人聲望,能夠親密接觸到那些其他攝影師難以觸及的拍攝對象,但也正是他非凡的攝影能力和對該群體廣闊的知識才讓他的名字能與諸如歐文·佩恩、史蒂夫·麥考利和理查德·埃維頓等其他白人攝影師一樣流芳百世.

替換表達(dá)：extensiveknowledgeofsomething/awideknowledgeofsomething/

awiderangeofknowledge

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

abroad

knowledgestorage/stores點(diǎn)評：中式表達(dá),knowledge與storage不可以搭配,這里可以改為awiderangeof

knowledge(2)

wide/vast/

profoundknowledgereserve點(diǎn)評：中式表達(dá),knowledge與reserve不可以搭配.

3-grasp注意grasp這里是名詞.

詞典釋義：graspUK

[grɑ：sp]

US

[gr?sp]

noununcountable

■theabilityto

get,achieveorkeepsomething

力所能及;掌握,把握

?Thepresidencyatlastlooked

within

her

grasp

(=Itlookedpossiblethatshemightbecomepresident).終于,總裁的職位對她來說似乎伸手可及.?Whyissuccessalways

beyond

my

grasp

(=impossibletoget)?

為甚么我總是功敗垂成??Thegoldmedal

slippedfrom

his

grasp

(=Hewasunabletogetit)inthelastmomentsoftherace.在比賽最后一刻他與金牌失之交臂.?Isometimesthinkthathe's

losing

his

grasp

on

reality(=hisabilitytojudgewhatisrealandwhatisnot).有時我覺得他認(rèn)不清現(xiàn)實(shí).

外刊例句：Byalargemargintheyratehisoveralleconomicplanmore

highlythanMrRomney’s,credithimwith

a

bettergraspof

economics,andthinkhimmorelikelytoappointagood

economicteam.

()他們對該整體經(jīng)濟(jì)計劃評價甚高,遠(yuǎn)高于魯尼先生的,贊他更懂得管理經(jīng)濟(jì),認(rèn)為他很可能會任命一支優(yōu)秀的經(jīng)濟(jì)團(tuán)隊.

替換表達(dá)：understanding

學(xué)生錯誤表達(dá)：(1)

handle點(diǎn)評：handle是指"應(yīng)付(局面),處理(難題)”,沒有"掌握知識”這一層含義.

4-lookbackupon

詞典釋義：

tothinkaboutsomethingthathappenedinthepast

回憶,追憶,回想

?WhenI

look

backIcanseewherewewent

wrong.

回過頭來看,我可以看出我們錯在哪里.?Itwasn'tsuchabadexperiencewhenI

look

back

on

it.

現(xiàn)在回想起來,我覺得那并不是一段特別糟糕的經(jīng)歷.

外刊例句：Ourpolitical,culturalandeconomicconversationstoday

overflowwiththelanguageofdecayandcorrosion,asifourbodypoliticis

itselfanageingboomer

lookingback

upon

hisglorydays.

()我們現(xiàn)在談到