高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+從陌生隔閡到溫情轉(zhuǎn)變的鄰里故事課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習從陌生隔閡到溫情轉(zhuǎn)變的鄰里故事1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文WhenSamandIwerefirstmarried,welivedinaquietneighborhood.Acrossthestreet,therewasabighousewithasix-foothighhedge(樹籬)thatblockedallbutasmallpathtoitsyard.Itwasclearthatourneighborswantedprivacyandweren’tinterestedinany“neighborly”behavior.Samhaddiscoveredthatabrotherandsisterlivedinthehouse.Thehousebelongedtothesister,andthebrotherhelpedaroundthehousewiththingslikegettingthemailandsettingtherubbishcansoutonthedaywhentherubbish-collectingtruckwouldcome.Thesisterandbrotherwerebothveryold.AndweconsideredthemunfriendlybecausetheyhadcalledthepolicewhenSamplayedmusicwithhisbandinouryardoneafternoon.4續(xù)寫原文Notrealizingitwaswewhowereinthewrong,wethoughtourneighborscausedtroubletoouralreadydifficultlife.Atthetime,SamandIwerequiteshortofmoney.WefeltsadwhenChristmaswasaroundthecorner.ItwasourfirstChristmasasamarriedcouple,andwedidn’thavemuchmoneytocelebrateit.Therewerenogiftsorparties.Wedidn’tevenhaveanyspecialholidaytreatstoshareathome.“IwishwecouldhaveenoughgoodstuffonChristmasDay.WhenIwasakid,myfamilywouldalwayshavecheese,meat,cookies,candies,etc.Italwaysfeltlikeafeast(盛宴)tomeasakid,”ItoldSam.IunderstoodthatChristmaswasn’tallaboutnicethings,butitjustdidn’tfeellikeChristmaswithonlyafewfoods.Samseemedtofeelthesameway.“Thingswillgetalotbetternextyear,”hesaid,tryingtobecheerful.5續(xù)寫原文ThreeweeksbeforeChristmas,wegottoknowour“unfriendly”neighbor,thebrother,hadabaddiseaseandpassedaway.Onemorningafterthat,wenoticedourneighbor—thetinysisterMary—tryingwithallherstrengthtopullherrubbishcanstotheroadsidealone.Shelookedsoweakandlonely.6段首句Paragraph1：Samcouldn’tstanditandrushedtoher,saying,“MayIhelpyou?”Paragraph2：Whenweansweredthedoor,therewasnobodybutabigbagofgoods.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文中講述了婚后的“我”和山姆住在一個寧靜街區(qū)，對面鄰居家有高大樹籬，看似拒人于千里之外，還因山姆樂隊演奏報過警，這讓“我”倆覺得他們不友好，加上經(jīng)濟拮據(jù)，首個圣誕節(jié)也過得寒酸。“我”向山姆回憶兒時豐盛的圣誕美食，滿是遺憾。然而，圣誕節(jié)前三周，鄰居哥哥病逝，姐姐瑪麗獨自艱難地拖垃圾桶，顯得虛弱又孤獨。此前的隔閡與誤解在這一瞬間開始消融，“我”和山姆對這位曾經(jīng)“不友好”的鄰居有了新的認識，也預示著鄰里關系將發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變，故事在這種微妙的氛圍中留下了溫情的伏筆。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Samcouldn’tstanditandrushedtoher,saying,“MayIhelpyou?”山姆看到瑪麗如此艱難，心中一緊，再也忍不住了。他毫不猶豫地快步?jīng)_過去，臉上帶著關切的神情，大聲說道：“瑪麗，我來幫你吧！”瑪麗有些驚訝地抬起頭，眼中閃過一絲猶豫，但在看到山姆真誠的目光后，微微點了點頭。山姆接過垃圾桶，輕松地將它拖到了路邊，瑪麗在一旁靜靜地看著，眼神里透露出一絲感激。隨后，山姆陪著瑪麗回到她家門口，簡單聊了幾句，瑪麗的臉上漸漸有了些許笑容，仿佛堅冰開始融化。山姆離開時，瑪麗輕輕地說了聲“謝謝”，這聲謝謝讓山姆心里暖暖的，也讓他決心以后要多多關照這位孤獨的鄰居。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Whenweansweredthedoor,therewasnobodybutabigbagofgoods.圣誕節(jié)的清晨，陽光透過窗戶灑在我們臉上，我和山姆被一陣敲門聲吵醒。我們迅速起身，整理好衣服去開門，滿心期待著會是怎樣的一個驚喜。當門緩緩打開，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)門口空無一人，只有一個大大的袋子放在地上。我們好奇地將袋子拿進屋，打開一看，里面裝滿了各種各樣的美食，有鮮嫩的奶酪、噴香的肉類、精致的餅干，還有五彩斑斕的糖果。我們驚訝地對視一眼，心中滿是疑惑和感動。是誰在這個特別的日子給我們送來了這樣一份珍貴的禮物？突然，山姆像是想到了什么，他望向?qū)γ娆旣惖募?，眼神里透露出一絲了然和溫情，我也瞬間明白了，這份禮物一定是瑪麗送來的。這一袋禮物不僅僅是食物，更是一份珍貴的心意，它化解了過去的所有不愉快，讓我們真切地感受到了鄰里之間那份溫暖的情誼在這個寒冷的冬日里悄然綻放。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)WitnessingMary'sfrailfigurestrugglingwiththeheavyrubbishcans,Sam'sheartwasfilledwithcompassion.Unabletobearthesightanylonger,hedashedacrossthestreetwithoutamoment'shesitation.AsheapproachedMary,hisfaceshowedgenuineconcernandhesaidinawarmvoice,"MayIhelpyou?"Marylookedup,abitstartledbySam'ssuddenappearance.Foramoment,therewashesitationinhereyes,butuponseeingthekindnessandsincerityinSam'sgaze,shenoddedslightly.Samthentookholdoftherubbishcanswitheaseandhauledthemtotheroadside.Marywatchedquietly,aglimmerofgratitudeshininginhereyes.Afterward,SamaccompaniedMarybacktoherdoorstep,andtheyexchangedafewwords.Slowly,afaintsmileemergedonMary'sface,asiftheicebetweenthemhadbeguntothaw.WhenSamleft,Marywhisperedasoft"thankyou",whichwarmedSam'sheartandstrengthenedhisresolvetolookoutforthislonelyneighborinthefuture.14范文呈現(xiàn)OnChristmasmorning,thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindowandgentlywokeSamandme.Wewererousedfromoursleepbyaknockatthedoor.Hastilygettingoutofbedandstraighteningourclothes,werushedtothedoor,filledwithanticipationofwhatsurprisemightawaitus.Asthedoorcreakedopen,toourastonishment,therewasnooneinsight.Instead,alargebagsatontheground.Curious,webroughtthebaginsideandopenedit.Toouramazement,itwasfilledwithallsortsofdelicioustreats-freshcheese,savorymeats,delicatecookies,andcolorfulcandies.Weexchangedalookofsurpriseandwonder,ourheartsfilledwithquestionsandgratitude.Whocouldhavesentussuchapreciousgiftonthisspecialday?Suddenly,Samseemedtohaveanidea.HelookedtowardsMary'shouseacrossthestreet,andtherewasaglimmerofrealizationandwarmthinhiseyes.I,too,immediatelyunderstoodthatthisgiftmusthavecomefromMary.Thisbagofpresentswasnotjustfood;itwasaprecioustokenofkindnessthatdissolvedallthepastunpleasantnessandmadeustrulyfeelthewarmbondofneighborlyfriendshipblossomingonthiscoldwinterday.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ItwasachillymorningwhenSamcaughtsightofMary,whowaswrestlingwiththerubbishcans,herfeebleframeseeminglyonthevergeofbeingoverpoweredbytheweight.Unabletoenduresuchaheart-wrenchingsceneanylonger,Sam,withasurgeofkindnessfloodinghisheart,boltedtowardsher."MayIhelpyou?"heinquired,hisvoicelacedwithgenuineconcern.Mary,takenabackbyhissuddenapproach,hesitatedforasplitsecond.However,itwasthesinceritygleaminginSam'seyesthatconvincedhertonodeversoslightly.WithSamtakingchargeofthebinseffortlessly,Maryfollowed,hereyesnowshimmeringwithatingeofgratitude.Astheyreachedherdoorstep,afewwordswereexchanged,andloandbehold,afaintsmilecreptontoMary'sface,asifthefrostyrelationshipbetweenthemhadstartedtothawunderthewarmthofSam'sact.LittledidtheyknowthatthiswasjustthepreludetoaheartwarmingChristmassurprise.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Christmasmorningarrived,bathingourhumbleabodeinasoft,goldenglow.Suddenly,aknockatthedoorshatteredthestillnessoftheroom.Rousedfromourslumber,wehastenedtothedoor,ourheartspoundingwithanticipation.Andthe