福建省南平市邵武市四中2025屆高三第一次模擬考試英語(yǔ)試卷含解析

福建省南平市邵武市四中2025屆高三第一次模擬考試英語(yǔ)試卷請(qǐng)考生注意：1．請(qǐng)用2B鉛筆將選擇題答案涂填在答題紙相應(yīng)位置上，請(qǐng)用0．5毫米及以上黑色字跡的鋼筆或簽字筆將主觀題的答案寫在答題紙相應(yīng)的答題區(qū)內(nèi)。寫在試題卷、草稿紙上均無(wú)效。2．答題前，認(rèn)真閱讀答題紙上的《注意事項(xiàng)》，按規(guī)定答題。第一部分（共20小題，每小題1.5分，滿分30分）1．Icertainlyexpecttobeelectedbeststudentoftheyear.It’sreally________!A．a(chǎn)goodSamaritanB．a(chǎn)wetblanketC．a(chǎn)featherinmycapD．a(chǎn)pieceofcake2．Thefamousplayertriedagainandagainaftereachfailure.That’s_____hesucceededatlast.A．whatB．whenC．whetherD．why3．Don'tdefendhimanymore.It'sobviousthathe________destroyedthefenceofthegardenevenwithoutanapology.A．a(chǎn)ccidentallyB．carelesslyC．deliberatelyD．clumsily4．“Couldweputoffthemeeting？”sheasked.“________.”Heansweredpolitely.“Thisistheonlydayeveryoneisavailable.”A．Notlikely B．NotexactlyC．Notnearly D．Notreally5．____whichuniversitytoattend,thegirlaskedherteacherforadvice.A．Notknowing B．Knowingnot C．Notknown D．Knownnot6．---Thereareprobablyalienslivinghereonearth.---_____!Ican’tbelieveyousaidthat.A．Comeon B．ForgetitC．Goahead D．Allowme7．-Couldyoupassmethesugar,please?-OK,____A．nevermindB．soundsgreatC．hereyougoD．thereitis8．Thegeneralsecretarystressedthatwhathehadjustsaidwasonlyhis_________view,notofficialintentions.A．private B．separate C．personal D．single9．Oh！Icanfeelsomething_____upmyleg！Itmustbeaninsect．A．toclimb B．climbingC．climb D．climbed10．Thewidespreadofsuperhybridricearoundtheworld______thelivesofmillionsandmillionsofpeoplesufferingfromhungertoagreatlevel.A．hasimproved B．isimproving C．improved D．hasbeenimproving11．—Thenewmachineshavearrivedandarebeingtestedintheworkshop.—I’mgladwe_____themintheyearsahead.A．willbeoperatingB．havebeenoperatingC．wouldbeoperatingD．hadbeenoperating12．AccordingtoTheSun,Britishscientistshavesolvedtheancientriddleof________camefirst—chickenoregg?A．whoB．whatC．whichD．that13．Takingdrugshasbecomepartofeverysport_________athletesseektoachievebeyondtheirnaturallimits.A．which B．that C．who D．where14．Withsomesnowontopofit,theYellowMountainlookedfantasticthiswinter.Actually,IdoubtwhetherwecouldvisitmountaininChina.A．a(chǎn)mostbeautiful B．themostbeautifulC．a(chǎn)morebeautiful D．a(chǎn)beautiful15．Theboythefirstprize,buthewassocarelessastomakeafoolishmistake.A．musthavegained B．needhavegainedC．couldhavegained D．shallhavegained16．Studentsarealwaysinterestedinfindingout_______theycangowithanewteacher.A．howfar B．howsoon C．howoften D．howlong17．Thelittleboystaredatthestrangemanquestioningly,not________whethertobelievewhathehadsaid.A．toknow B．knowingC．known D．havingknown18．Hissuggestion_______toseethefilmAvatarinterestedeveryoneofus.A．thatwego B．whichweshouldgo C．thatwewouldgo D．weshouldgo19．—HowareyougettingalongwithyourGerman,Kate？—Oh,Mr．Black,I’msotiredofit．MaybeIshoulddropout_____itkillsme．A．when B．a(chǎn)fter C．while D．before20．Alongwiththeemailwasmybrother’spromise______Icamefirstinthecompetition,hewouldbuymeanMP4.A．what B．that C．thatif D．whether第二部分閱讀理解（滿分40分）閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C、D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。21．（6分）Turkey-YakamozHotelEstablished1992YakamozisasmallandfriendlyhotelsituatednearFethiyeinSouth-WestTurkey.OfferingtraditionalTurkishhospitality,fabulousMediterraneancuisine,andcharminggardens,Yakamozdelightsallwhoenteritsgates.·Allroomshavebathroomsandbalconies;·OpenApriltolateOctober;·2019rates-twinrooms￡20perperson-incl.breakfast;·Showthisadtogetanexclusive10%LonelyPlanetmagazineEmail:info@CastawaysSpecialisttailor-madeholidaystoMallorca,Spain,Madeira,Portugal,TheCanaryIslands,CyprusandFrance.*****QuoteLonelyPlanetMAGAZINETOSAVE￡50perPERSONONYOUR2019HOLIDAY.*****01737812255www.castaways.co.ukONCEINALIFETIMEPERUADVENTURETheDesert,theAndesandtheAmazononaspectacular2-weekSelfDriveguidedholiday.ReachlocationsinSouthAmericaotherscanonlydreamofwithPeruSafari.～～～～～PERUSAFARITheheartofadventure～～～～～T:01744889819orM:07522776160E:info@W:RailHolidaysoftheWorld·DiscoverPeruandBrazil’sculturalhighlightsbytrain;·ExploreCaliforniabysteamandrailroad;·TravelbyrailintoEasternCanada’sremotewilderness;·TakeafabulousrailtourofAustralia&NewZealandinearly2019.Over40YearsofUnforgettableRailJourneys☆☆☆☆☆FFestingiogT0017512400103、Whatisthecostfor2nightsofaccommodationfor2peopleattheYakamozHotelwiththeLonelyPlanetdiscount?A．￡88. B．￡80.C．￡72. D．￡64.1、Railholidaysareavailablefor________.A．NorthAmerica,EuropeandAustraliaB．NorthAmerica,SouthAmericaandAsiaC．Australia,AsiaandEuropeD．NorthAmerica,SouthAmericaandAustralia2、HowmanyadvertisementsofferholidaystoPeru?A．One. B．Two.C．Three. D．Four.22．（8分）CocoaBeach/JupiterSurfCamp—SummerSummerSurfCampiscentrallylocatedontheBestWesternseashoreinCocoaBeach&JupiteratCarlinBeachParkwithaccommodations(住宿)attheHolidayInnExpressinJunoBeach.SummerSurfCampDates:●SurfCamp-Session1May27th-30thFamilySurfWeek(AllAges)●SurfCamp-Session2June2nd-6thFamilySurfWeek(AllAges)●SurfCamp-Session3June9th-13thTeenWeek(Ages12-17)●SurfCamp-Session4June16th-20thFamilySurfWeek(AllAges)●SurfCamp-Session5June23rd-27thAdultsOnly(18andover)●SurfCamp-Session6June30th-July3rdFamilySurfWeek(AllAges)●SurfCamp-Session7July7th-11thFamilySurfWeek(AllAges)●SurfCamp-Session8July14th-18thWomen’sCamp(18andover)●SurfCamp-Session9July21st-25thFamilySurfWeek(AllAges)●SurfCamp-Session10July28th-August1stAdultsOnly(18andover)*A20%discountwillbeappliedtothe4-DaySurfCampWeeks.*Parentsarealwayswelcometosignupandjointheirchildrenduringtheteenweeksurfcampsessions.SummerCampDetails:●Usecoupon(優(yōu)惠券)code:“CAMP5”atcheckouttogetthe5%discount*DailyRate:$125.00/person*SurfCampRuns:9:30am-2:30pm●Pleasenote:Wedon’tsupervise(指導(dǎo))thecampersafter2:45pm.*DirectionstoCamp:clickhereContactUs:888-672-4887info@395、Wheredoesthispassageprobablycomefrom?A．Anewspaper. B．Amagazine.C．Awebsite. D．Aguidebook.1、IftheSmithswiththeir11-year-oldsonwanttojoinintheSummerSurfCamp,they’dbettergothereon________.A．June10th B．June23rdC．July29th D．July22nd2、WhoareallowedtotakepartinSession5andSession8?A．MrJohnsonandhiswife.B．Acouplewithoutchildren.C．MrBlackandhis19-year-oldson.D．MrsBlackandher21-year-olddaughter.3、IfMrandMrsBrownhavea“CAMP5”couponandwanttojoinintheSummerSurfCampfromJune30thtoJuly3rd,howmuchshouldtheypay?A．$760. B．$600.C．$800. D．$950.4、Whatcanweknowfromtheform?A．Thecampersaresupervisedallday.B．AcouplecansignupandjoinintheCampbyfax.C．ParentscantakepartinSession3togetherwiththeirchildren.D．AnadultcanjoinintheSummerSurfCamponanydayinJune.23．（8分）Saturday，22April,2017Wearecurrentlyonacamp-sitenearCalais,onourwaytotheUK,anditispouringwithrain.AsifgodswanttoprepareusfortheUKatallcosts.Asifwedon'tknowwhatrainis...Ourferrytothegreenisleswillleavetomorrowat10.30anddespitetherain,Iamreallylookingforwardtoit.Ithastakenusawhiletogethere,aswealreadyleftElChorroon4April.AfterrushingthroughSpainintwodays,however,wecametoaninevitableslow-downwhenweenteredFrance.Inevitable,asFrancehassimplytoomuchtoofferforus.SoassoonaswecrossedthePyrenees,ourdrivingsequencebecamesomethinglikedrivingafewkilometres,visitingacastle,drivingafewkilometres,takingpicturesofanicechurch,drivingafewkilometres,havingaquickpeekatafleasmarket,drivingafewkilometres,visitingamuseumetc.WhenweenteredBrittanytherealsightseeingstarted,inVannes,inLorient,inBrestandthenontoNormandy:LeMontStMichel,Bayeuxandfinally,finallytheD-Daybeaches.Ialwayswantedtovisitthese,forobviousreasonsIwouldsay,butmyfather,realisticashewas,calculatedthechancesthatitwouldrainaconsiderableamountofdaysofathree-weekholidayandalwaysdecidedagainstit.ButafewdaysagoIfinallysteppedontoGoldBeach(wheretheBritslanded)andIwasgreetedbytheNormansun.Abeautifulday.1、Itwas_____whenthewriterwasonhiswaytotheUK.A．pouringB．foggyC．snowyD．sunny2、Accordingtothepassage,thePyreneesmustbeaplacein_____.A．SpainB．FranceC．NetherlandD．Normandy3、WhichofthefollowingstatementisNOTtrue?A．Theyspent2daysinSpaintraveling.B．ThewriterthoughtFrancehasalotofplacestovisit.C．ThewriterthoughttherealsightseeingwasinE1Chorro,andinBrest.D．Thewriter’sfatherwasarealisticperson.4、Thepassageprobablycomesfrom_______.A．a(chǎn)traveljournalB．a(chǎn)sciencefictionC．a(chǎn)newsreportD．a(chǎn)filmreview24．（8分）Onacoolmorning,WilsonKasainewalksalongadirtpathinsouthernKenya.Actually,Kasaineistrackinglions.Particularly,heistrackingonelioncalledMarti.Trackinglionsonfootmaysounddangerous,butKasainehasbeendoingitformostofhislife.BorninatraditionalMaasaifamily,heunderstoodthebeautyandriskofthewildlife.Livingwithbiggameforceshimtodevelopagoodsenseofwhereanimalshavebeenandwheretheymightbegoing.Duringhis12-kilometerwalkstoandfromschool,helearnedhowtotellthepawprintsofalionfromthoseofotheranimals.Growingup,Kasaineknewthatimprovinghistrackingabilitieswouldhelphimavoidotherdangerousanimals.ButmaybeKasainedidn’tknowthat,yearslater,hewouldbetrackinglionsspecificallytoencounterthemandtoprotectthem.Todayheleadsasmallgroupofwide-eyedtouristsoveraredsandypathinthereserve,searchingforthelionthathasleftuponithisunmistakableprints.Eachyear,tensofthousandsoftouristscometoKenya’snationalparkstotrytovisitthe“bigfive”:elephants,rhinoceros,leopards,buffaloes,andlions.Theattractionoftheseanimalstopeopleallovertheworldmeansthatthenation’seconomyistiedtotheprotectionofitswildlife.IfKenya’swildlifedisappears,sodoesitssecond-largestsourceofincome.ConsideringtherapidurbandevelopmentinKenya,thisisn’tunimaginable.In2016,astudyshowsthatmanyofthenation’smosttreasuredspecieshavefallentolessthanone-thirdoftheirpopulationcountingfromjust40yearsago.Thenumberoflionsfelltoo.In1998,thenationwashometoover15,000;onlyabout2,000remaintoday.Severalexpertshavepredictedtheycoulddisappearentirelyfromthecountryinthenexttwodecades.WildlifeprotectioneffortsinKenyamustbeatthesacrificeofotherthings.Peoplewereforcedtoleavetheirlandandintosmallersurroundingregions.CommunitieslikeKasaine’sarenowfindingitincreasinglydifficulttomaintainatraditionalMaasailifestyle.Buttheyaregladthattheirsacrificereallymakesadifference.1、WhatdidKasainelearnonhiswaytoschoolandbackhome?A．Thebeautyandriskofthewildlife.B．Themethodoftellingdifferentplants.C．Theskillsoftellingdifferentpawprints.D．ThelifestyleofatraditionalMaasaifamily.2、Whatdoestheunderlinedword“it”inParagraph3referto?A．Thelion. B．Thepath.C．Thereserve. D．Thegroup.3、WhyisKenyamakingeffortstoprotectwildlife?A．Toimprovethenation’seconomy.B．Tooffermorejobstothelocalpeople.C．Toshowtheimportanceofthe“bigfive”.D．Tosetagoodexampletoothercountries.4、Whatdoweknowfromthefifthparagraph?A．ThelionsinKenyaareindangerofdyingout.B．Thenumberofspeciesdeclinedseriouslyin2016.C．Thenation’seconomyisexperiencingaveryhardperiod.D．SpeciesinKenyadecreasedeveryyearintherecenttenyears.5、HowdoesKasainefeelabouthissacrifice?A．Unpleasant. B．Hopeful.C．Doubtful. D．Worthwhile.25．（10分）UniversityofPennsylvaniaresearcherssaythatforthefirsttimetheyhavelinkedsocialmediausetoincreasesindepressionandloneliness．Theideathatsocialmediaisanythingbutsocialwhenitcomestomentalhealthhasbeentalkedaboutforyears，butnotmanystudieshavemanagedtoactuallylinkthetwo．Todothat，Pennresearchers，ledbypsychologistMelissaHunt，designedastudythatfocusedonWeChat，SnapchatandInstagram．Thestudywasconductedwith143participants，whobeforetheybegan，completedamoodsurveyandsentalongphotosoftheirbatteryscreens，showinghowoftentheywereusingtheirphonestoaccesssocialmedia．"Wesetouttodoamuchmorecompletestudywhichattemptstoimitatereallife．"Huntsaid．Thestudydividedtheparticipantsintotwogroups：Thefirstgroupwasallowedtomaintaintheirnormalsocialmediahabits．Theother，thecontrolgroup，wasrestrictedto10minutesperdayonsocialmedia．Therestrictionswereputinplaceforthreeweeksandthentheparticipantsreturnedandweretestedforoutcomessuchasfearofmissingout，anxiety，depressionandloneliness．Theresultsshowedaveryclearlinkbetweensocialmediauseandincreasedlevelsofdepressionandloneliness．"Usinglesssocialmediathanyounormallydowouldleadtosignificantdecreasesinbothdepressionandloneliness，"Huntsaid．SocialmediainviteswhatHuntcalls"downwardsocialcomparison．""Whenyou'reonline，itcansometimesseemthateveryoneelseiscoolerandhavingmorefunandincludedinmorethingsandyou'releftout，"Huntsaid．Andthat'sjustgenerallydiscouraging．"Everyminuteyouspendonlineisaminuteyouarenotdoingyourworkornotmeetingafriendfordinnerorhavingadeepconversationwithyourroommate．"Andthesereallifeactivitiesaretheonesthatcanencourageself﹣esteemandself﹣worth，Huntadded．"Peopleareontheirdevices，andthat'snotgoingtochange，"shesaid．Butasinlife，abitofcontrolgoesalongway．1、Beforethestudywasconducted，theparticipantscompletedasurveyto．A．imitatepeople'sreallifeB．linklonelinesstodepressionC．showtheiruseofsocialmediaD．provesocialmediaisimportant2、Theresultsofthestudyshowedusinglesssocialmediawouldresultin．A．people'sfearofmissingoutB．higherlevelsofdepressionC．obviousreliefinlonelinessD．lowerlevelsofhappiness3、InHunt'sopinion，whichactivitybenefitsmoretomentalhealth？A．Hikingoutwithfriends．B．Makingcomparisonwithothers．C．Playingcomputergamesinsparetime．D．Loggingontosocialmediaandhavingfun．4、Whichcanbethebesttitleofthepassage？A．AStudyonSocialMedia．B．HowtoImproveMentalHealth．C．PeopleAddictedtoSocialMedia．D．SocialMediaInfluencesMentalHealth．第三部分語(yǔ)言知識(shí)運(yùn)用（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿分30分）閱讀下面短文，從短文后各題所給的A、B、C和D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出可以填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)．26．（30分）OneMondaymorning,newsgot1intheschoolyardaboutafireovertheweekend.SoonMr.Smith,myteacher,cametoexplainthattheArtclasswouldbe2duetothefire.HealsowarnedusnottoapproachtheArtRoombecauseitcouldbedangerious.Duringthemorningbreak,KirnandIdecidedtotakea3Afirsthandobservationwouldmakeusheroesatlunch.Attheappointedtime,KirnandI4theArtRoom,ignoringtheconsequenceIwouldface5Igotcaught.Westoodontiptoeslookinghard6thedoorwindow,tryinginvaintosee7wasforbidden.Suddenlyafirm8onourshouldersstoppedus.Turingaround,Ifoundateacherstaringangrilyatus.Inthosesecondsmillionsof9flashedthroughmymind.Myfatherwouldbeatmehard.10thanthat,mymommightbesomadthatshemightnotstophim.Myspirits11evenlowerwhilerealizinghow12Mr.Smithwouldbe.WhenKirnandIwereledbacktoourclassroom,Icouldfound13tohideandwantedtomeltintothe14However,MrSmithhadadifferent15toteach.Slowly,hebentdowntolookmeintheeyes,andIwasmetwithalookofconcern16anger.Hespokesoftlyasheexplainedwhyhewas17inmydecisiontogowhereImayhavegothurt.Hecaredmoreaboutmy18thanthefactthatI’dbrokenarule.Myheartwas19withregret,andIdiscoveredthathestilllovedmeevenafterIdisappointedhim.Therestoftheday,hedidn’tevenmentionitinclasspublicly,nordidhetellmyparents.ForthefirsttimeIfeltthe20ofbeinggivenanunexpectedsecondchance.1、A．over B．out C．a(chǎn)round D．a(chǎn)cross2、A．cancelled B．examined C．confirmed D．suggested3、A．test B．risk C．check D．chance4、A．searched B．a(chǎn)ppeared C．entered D．reached5、A．if B．unless C．a(chǎn)s D．until6、A．over B．within C．through D．a(chǎn)cross7、A．what B．how C．why D．which8、A．word B．hold C．cry D．order9、A．excuses B．feelings C．solutions D．thoughts10、A．Easier B．Less C．More D．Worse11、A．changed B．lifted C．sank D．lost12、A．strange B．a(chǎn)ngry C．kind D．sad13、A．somewhere B．a(chǎn)nywhere C．nowhere D．everywhere14、A．fire B．laugh C．table D．floor15、A．course B．lesson C．knowledge D．a(chǎn)bility16、A．ratherthan B．morethan C．otherthan D．lessthan17、A．embarrassed B．excited C．disappointed D．moved18、A．grade B．honesty C．interest D．safety19、A．full B．heavy C．relaxed D．empty20、A．power B．strength C．purpose D．secret第二節(jié)（每小題1.5分，滿分15分）閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入1個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。27．（15分）In1914,ThomasEdison,attheageof67,losthisfactory,1．wasworthafewmilliondollars,tofire.Ithadverylittleinsurance.Nolongerayoungman,Edisonwatchedhislifetimeeffort2．(go)upinsmokeandsaid,"Thereisgreatvalueindisasters.Allourmistakesareburntup.ThankGodwecanstartanew."Inspiteofdisasters,threeweekslater,3．inventedthephonograph.What4．a(chǎn)ttitude!Belowaremoreexamplesofthe5．(fail)ofsuccessfulpeople:ThomasEdisonfailed6．(approximate)10,000timeswhilehe7．(work)onthelightbulb.HenryFordfiredLeeIacoccaattheageof54.YoungBeethoven8．(tell)thathehadnotalentformusic,9．hegavesomeofthebestmusictotheworld.Setbacksareinevitableinlife.Asetbackcanactasadrivingforceandalsoteachushumility.Ingriefyouwillfindcourageandfaith10．(overcome)thesetback.第四部分寫作（共兩節(jié)）第一節(jié)短文改錯(cuò)（滿分10分）28．（10分）假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1、每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．LastmonthourclassorganizedahikingalongtheChaobaiRiver，whichrunthroughHebei，BeijingandTianjin．Muchtomydisappoint，Ifoundtheriverwasseriouspolluted．Atthatmoment，IwasdeterminedtodowhatIcouldprotectit．First，undermyteacher'shelp，Iusedtheequipmentsfromtheschoollabtotestthequalityoftheriverwater．Butthen，IusedthedataIhadcollectedittoanalyzethepollutionofthewater．Finally，Iwriteareportonthepollutionoftherivertothelocalgovernment．IalsogaveapresentationinclasswhereIsuggestedthatwemustmakesmallchangestoprotectourwaterresources．16第二節(jié)書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）29．（25分）假定你是李華，計(jì)劃在暑假期間騎行游覽絲綢之路西安至蘭州路段(約660公里)。請(qǐng)給你的加拿大朋友Henry寫封郵件，邀請(qǐng)他參加。內(nèi)容包括:1.出發(fā)時(shí)間;2.騎行路線:3.注意事項(xiàng)。注意:1、詞數(shù)100左右:2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearHenry,Howiseverythinggoing?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua

參考答案第一部分（共20小題，每小題1.5分，滿分30分）1、C2、D3、C4、D5、A6、A7、C8、C9、B10、A11、A12、C13、D14、C15、C16、A17、B18、A19、D20、C第二部分閱讀理解（滿分40分）閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的A、B、C、D四個(gè)選項(xiàng)中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)。21、103、C1、D2、B22、395、C1、D2、D3、A4、C23、Manyscholarshipsrequirethatyouwriteanessayinordertobeconsideredfortheprizemoney.However,ifyouarethesortofpersonthathasaheadachewheneveryouhavetocompleteawritingassignment,thismaynotbethebestnews.Luckilyforyou,thereisnoreasontofearthescholarshipessay.Thefollowingtipscouldhelpyouconquerthisnot-so-easyaspectofthescholarshipapplicationprocess.Youshouldalwaysoutlineyouressays.Thisdoesnotjustapplytothescholarshipessays,either.Anoutlinehelpslendfocustoyourthoughtsandhelpsyoucreateapictureofthe“whole”thattheessaywillbecome.Judgescannottostandwhenyourwritingisloose,lackscoherence(連貫性)orwhenyoufailtoconnectyourmainpointstogether.Theywanttoseethatyoucansupportyourargumentwellwithclearandbriefexamplesandthattheseexamplesdo,infact,relatetothetopicathand.Ifyouhaveachoiceinthetopicyougettowriteabout,alwaystrytoselectsomethingyouarepersonallyinterestedin.Don'twritewhatyouthinkthejudgeswanttohear.Thiswillonlyamountinanessaythatreadslikesomeoneelse’s,whichisnotagreatwaytomakeyourselfstandout.Ifyoufeelboredwiththetopic,thenyouressaywillbeboringaswell.Makesureyourideafollowaclearandalogicalpath.Thismeanstheyareconnectedwellandthetransitions(過(guò)渡)easilyflowfromoneideatothenext.Likewise,trytostayawayfrom