讀后續(xù)寫-德州母女情：肝臟捐贈背后的愛與堅守+講義-廣東省衡水金卷（廣東省部分學(xué)校）2025屆高三上學(xué)期12月聯(lián)考英語試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。IntheheartofTexas,inthelivelycityofSanAntonio,astoryofloveunfoldedinJune,2024.ItisthetaleofEmily,ayoungwomanadoptedasachild,whogrewup,showingselflessness.Emilywasaspirited25-year-old,withaheartasbroadastheLoneStarState.ShewasadoptedbytheSmithfamily.FromthemomentEmilyenteredtheirlives,theSmithshavedevotedthemselvestoprovidingherwithalovingandstablehome.Theymadesureshehadawarmbedtosleepineverynight,cookeddeliciousandnutritiousmealsforhereveryday.Theyencouragedhertopursueherhobbiesandinterests,whetheritwaspainting,whichtheywoulddisplayproudlyonthewallsoftheirhome,orplayingthepiano,forwhichtheyarrangedlessons.TheirloveandcareenvelopedEmilyasshegrewup.Herbondwithheradoptivemother,Susan,wasparticularlyprofound.“You'remyworld,Emily,”Susanwouldoftensay,hereyesfullofcareandaffection.Inthespringof2024,Susanwasstruckbyasuddenandsevereliver(肝)condition.ThedoctorsinSanAntoniodeliveredthecruelnewsthatalivertransplant(移植)wasSusan'sonlyhopeforsurvival.Thefamily,desperate,beganthesearchforadonor.“Wehavetofindamatch,”thedoctorurged.However,amongSusan'simmediatefamily,nonewereamatchforherliver.“It'slikewe'rehittingadeadend,”Susan'shusband,MarkSmith,saidsadly.Emily,unabletobearthethoughtoflosinghermother,decidedtogettestedasapotentiallivingdonor.“Letmetry,”shetoldherfatherwithdetermination.Theresultswereastonishing---shewasaperfectmatch.Buttherewasacatch.Emilyhadachronic(慢性的)conditionsincechildhood,andthedoctorswarnedherthatdonatingapartofherlivercouldputherindanger.“It'stoorisky,Emily,”thedoctorsaid.ButEmilyreplied,“Nomatterwhat,I'mgoingtosavemymom.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。第一段：Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.第二段：However,Emilyinsistedthathermomacceptherliverdonation.文章大意：2024年6月，在得克薩斯州圣安東尼奧市，自幼被史密斯一家收養(yǎng)的25歲女孩艾米麗，在這個充滿愛的家庭中幸福成長。養(yǎng)母蘇珊在春天突患嚴(yán)重肝病，肝移植是唯一的生存希望，可家人中無人匹配。艾米麗決定檢測，結(jié)果竟與蘇珊完美匹配，但她自幼患有慢性病，醫(yī)生警告捐贈肝臟風(fēng)險極大。即便如此，艾米麗仍堅定要救母親，展現(xiàn)出無私且深厚的母女情，也引出后續(xù)她與母親及家人的艱難抉擇。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：伏筆：艾米麗自幼被收養(yǎng)，史密斯一家對她關(guān)懷備至，為她提供溫暖的家、可口的飯菜，支持她的興趣愛好?；貞?yīng)：正因為這份深厚的養(yǎng)育之恩，艾米麗才會毫不猶豫地決定為蘇珊捐贈肝臟，即便面臨風(fēng)險也不退縮，凸顯出她對家人的感恩與回報。伏筆：艾米麗與養(yǎng)母蘇珊感情深厚，蘇珊常說“你是我的全世界，艾米麗”?；貞?yīng)：這使得艾米麗在面對蘇珊的病情時，情感上無法接受失去母親，從而堅定了她救母親的決心，在續(xù)寫中這種情感成為推動情節(jié)發(fā)展的關(guān)鍵因素。伏筆：醫(yī)生告知蘇珊的病情嚴(yán)重，肝移植是唯一希望，而家人中無人匹配?；貞?yīng)：為艾米麗挺身而出成為潛在捐贈者做了鋪墊，突出她在家庭困境中的擔(dān)當(dāng)，也使得后續(xù)關(guān)于她是否捐贈的情節(jié)更具張力。伏筆：艾米麗患有慢性疾病，醫(yī)生警告捐贈肝臟會有危險?；貞?yīng)：在續(xù)寫中，這成為家人和醫(yī)生勸阻她的重要理由，也讓艾米麗的堅持顯得更加難能可貴，同時增加了故事的曲折性。伏筆：艾米麗告訴父親自己要去檢測時的堅定態(tài)度“讓我試試”?；貞?yīng)：延續(xù)這種堅定，在后續(xù)與母親的交流以及堅持捐贈的過程中，展現(xiàn)出她一旦決定就不輕易放棄的性格特點，使人物形象更加豐滿。續(xù)寫要點：第一段：情感線：艾米麗與蘇珊之間深厚的母女情進一步展現(xiàn)，蘇珊因擔(dān)心女兒的健康而拒絕，內(nèi)心充滿矛盾與不舍；艾米麗則因母親的拒絕而著急、難過，但又堅定地想要說服母親。故事線：艾米麗詳細(xì)地向蘇珊講述自己愿意承擔(dān)風(fēng)險的決心，提及過去母親對自己的關(guān)愛和付出，強調(diào)家庭的重要性，試圖讓蘇珊明白自己的心意，兩人展開情感上的拉扯與交流。第二段：情感線：艾米麗持續(xù)的堅持讓蘇珊逐漸動搖，家人也被艾米麗的執(zhí)著所打動，情感從反對逐漸轉(zhuǎn)向支持；艾米麗則感受到家人態(tài)度的變化，更加堅定自己的選擇，同時也對未來充滿希望和勇氣。故事線：艾米麗不顧醫(yī)生和家人的再次勸阻，繼續(xù)為捐贈肝臟做準(zhǔn)備，最終成功進行手術(shù)，蘇珊逐漸康復(fù)，一家人的感情因這次磨難變得更加深厚，艾米麗也收獲了成長和幸福。主旨升華句：Loveisnotjustaboutreceiving,butalsoaboutgivingselflessly,eveninthefaceofdanger.Familytiesarethestrongestbondsthatcanwithstandanytrialsandtribulations,asshownbyEmily'sunwaveringdetermination.Trueloveknowsnobounds,andEmilyprovedthatwhenshewaswillingtoriskitallforhermother,showingthepowerofsacrifice.Inthejourneyoflife,itistheloveandcouragewithinusthatenableustoovercomethegreatestobstaclesandemergestronger.ThestoryofEmilyandSusanteachesusthatalovingheartcanconquerfearandthattheessenceoffamilyliesinstandingbyeachotherthroughthickandthin.寫作示范：第一篇：Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.TearsstreameddownSusan'sfaceasshelistenedtoEmily'swords."Mychild,youarethemostpreciousgiftinmylife.Ican'tletyoudothisattheriskofyourownhealth.Yourwell-beingmeanseverythingtome."Emilyheldhermother'shandsfirmlyandsaid,"Mom,you'vebeenthereformethroughallmyjoysandsorrows.It'smyturntobestrongforyou.Weareafamily,andwe'llgetthroughthistogether."ButSusanshookherhead,herheartfilledwithworryandlove.However,Emilyinsistedthathermomacceptherliverdonation.Shetalkedtothedoctorsagain,askingthemtoexplaintheprocedureandthepossiblerisksindetail.Shethensharedtheinformationwithherfamily,showingthemthatshewaswell-prepared.Slowly,herfatherandotherfamilymembersbegantounderstandherresolve.Withtheirreluctantsupport,thesurgerywasscheduled.Emilywentintotheoperatingroomwithasmileonherface,knowingthatshewasgivinghermotherasecondchanceatlife.AndwhenSusanrecovered,theirbondwasevenstronger,atestamenttothepowerofloveandsacrifice.第二篇：Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.Susanwasvisiblyshaken,hereyesfilledwithhorroratthethoughtofEmilyendangeringherself."Emily,youaremylife,butIcan'tletyoudothis.Whatifsomethinghappenstoyou?I'dratherbearthepainmyself."Emily'stearsfellsilentlyasshereplied,"Mom,withoutyou,therewouldbenolifeformetocherish.Yourlovehasalwaysprotectedme,andnowit'smytimetoprotectyou."Theirconversationwasfilledwithrawemotion,withbothmotheranddaughtertornbetweenloveandfear.However,Emilyinsistedthathermomacceptherliverdonation.Shesoughtadvicefromothermedicalexperts,tryingtofindwaystominimizetherisks.Shealsoreachedouttofriendswhohadgonethroughsimilarsituationsforsupportandencouragement.Asdayspassed,herdeterminationworedownSusan'sresistance.Finally,thefamilycametogether,surroundingEmilywithloveandsupport.Thesurgerywasasuccess,andastheyallwatchedSusanregainherhealth,theyrealizedthatlovehadtriumphedoverall.Itwasajourneythattaughtthemthetruemeaningoffamilyandthestrengththatlieswithinunwaveringlove.Onepossibleversion:Emilytoldallthistohermom,Susan.However,whenSusanlearntthatitwouldcausegreatharmtoEmily'sbody,shestronglyrefusedtoallowEmilytodonateherliv-er.“Ican'tloseyoueither,”Susansaid,tearsstreamingdownherface.SheknewhowmuchEmilyhadalreadyovercome