專題07 書面表達(dá)解題要點(diǎn)及專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練（解析版）

PAGEPAGE1專題06書面表達(dá)解題要點(diǎn)及專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練應(yīng)試策略1.審題目：要切中題意?？吹娇碱}后，先不要急于動(dòng)筆，要仔細(xì)看清題目要求的內(nèi)容。在自己的頭腦中構(gòu)思出一個(gè)框架或畫面，確定短文的中心思想，不要匆匆下筆，看懂題意，根據(jù)圖畫、圖表、提綱或短文提供的資料和信息來(lái)審題。審題要審格式、體裁、人物關(guān)系、故事情節(jié)、主體時(shí)態(tài)、活動(dòng)時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)等。2.圈要點(diǎn)：防止遺漏要點(diǎn)。要點(diǎn)是給分的一個(gè)重要因素。為了防止寫作過(guò)程中遺漏要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們要充分發(fā)揮自己的觀察力，把情景中給出的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)逐條列出。3.列提綱：為寫作做好準(zhǔn)備。根據(jù)文章要點(diǎn)短文的中心思想將主要句型、關(guān)鍵詞記下，形成提綱。4.定基調(diào)：定出時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、順序、開頭、結(jié)尾。5.寫全文：寫短文時(shí)要做到以下六個(gè)方面：(1)避免使用漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ)，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以避免重復(fù)和呆板。(2)多用簡(jiǎn)單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復(fù)雜的句型?？蛇m當(dāng)多使用陳述句、一般疑問(wèn)句、祈使句和感嘆句。不用或少用非謂語(yǔ)或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞等較復(fù)雜的句型。(3)注意語(yǔ)法、句法知識(shí)的靈活運(yùn)用。1）語(yǔ)態(tài)、時(shí)態(tài)要準(zhǔn)確無(wú)誤。 2）主謂語(yǔ)要一致，主語(yǔ)的人稱和數(shù)要和謂語(yǔ)一致。3）注意人稱代詞的賓格形式。 4）注意冠詞用法，例如：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)和大小寫，例如：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,ninth,restaurant等。(4)描寫人物時(shí)，要生動(dòng)具體，例如：1）外表特征：tall,short,fat,thin,strong,weak,ordinary-looking等。2）服飾顏色：red,yellow,blue,white,green,brown,black等。3）內(nèi)心境界：glad,happy,sad,excited,anxious,interested等。4）感情描寫：love,like,hate,feel,laugh,cry,smile,shout等。5）動(dòng)作描寫：come,go,get,have,take,bring,fetch等。(5)上下文要連貫。上下文的連貫性也是評(píng)分的一條原則，因此同學(xué)們應(yīng)把寫好的句子，根據(jù)故事情節(jié)，事情發(fā)生的先后次序（時(shí)間或空間），使用一些表示并列、遞進(jìn)等過(guò)渡詞進(jìn)行加工整理，使文章連貫、自然、流暢。同學(xué)們應(yīng)注意下面過(guò)渡的用法：1）表示并列關(guān)系的：and,aswellas,or…2）表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的：but,yet,however…3）表示時(shí)間關(guān)系的：when,while,after,before,then,afterthat…4）表示因果關(guān)系的：so,therefore,asaresult…5）表示目的的：inorderto,inorderthat,soasto,sothat…6）表示列舉的：forexample,suchas…7）表示總結(jié)性的：ingeneral,inall,inaword,generallyspeaking…(6)不會(huì)表達(dá)，另辟蹊徑。中考作文給分是以要點(diǎn)和語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確度而定，不以文采打分。造句越簡(jiǎn)單準(zhǔn)確越好，造復(fù)合句容易出錯(cuò)，容易被扣分，閱卷場(chǎng)上有句話：“錯(cuò)誤面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到個(gè)別要點(diǎn)表達(dá)不出來(lái)或難以表達(dá)，可采用變通的辦法，化難為易，化繁為簡(jiǎn)。總之，所造句子要正確、得體、符合英語(yǔ)表達(dá)習(xí)慣。(6)改病句：認(rèn)真檢查，改正錯(cuò)誤。中考作文時(shí)，由于時(shí)間緊、內(nèi)容多，同學(xué)們出錯(cuò)在所難免。因此，改錯(cuò)這一環(huán)節(jié)必不可少。中考作文評(píng)卷是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)、語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確性、上下文的連貫性來(lái)給分，根據(jù)錯(cuò)誤多少來(lái)扣分。因此，中考時(shí)花幾分鐘時(shí)間用來(lái)檢查錯(cuò)誤顯得尤為重要。檢查錯(cuò)誤應(yīng)從以下幾個(gè)方面入手：1）格式是否有錯(cuò)。2）拼寫有無(wú)錯(cuò)誤。3）語(yǔ)言是否用錯(cuò)。4）時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。5）標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。6）人稱是否用錯(cuò)。注意事項(xiàng)書面表達(dá)要特別注意書寫工整，卷面整潔。閱卷老師工作量大，時(shí)間緊，可想而知。書寫是否工整，卷面是否整潔與得分高低直接有關(guān)。1.（24-25七年級(jí)上·福建福州·期中）假如你是李峰，請(qǐng)你以“MyFamily”為題寫一篇英文短文，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹一下你的家人，包括他們的職業(yè)以及你們家的休閑娛樂(lè)項(xiàng)目等。詞數(shù)不少于70。FamilymembersPersonalinformationFamilyactivitiesfatherdoctor;hospitaldosports;watchfilms;(自己補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn))motherteacher;teachEnglishmysisterandIstudents要求：（1）必須包含所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；（2）意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范。MyFamilyHello!MynameisLiFeng.I’mtwelve.Letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文：MyFamilyHello!MynameisLiFeng.I’mtwelve.Letmetellyouaboutmyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Theyarefather,mother,mysisterandI.Myfatherisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Mymotherisateacher.SheteachesEnglishinamiddleschool.MysisterandIarestudents.Westudyinthesameschool,butweareindifferentgrades.Weallliketodosportsandwatchfilms.Ontheweekend,weoftengototheparktoplaygames.Ilovemyfamilyverymuch.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。應(yīng)能夠圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等，清楚連貫地表達(dá)自己的思想，進(jìn)而完成寫作任務(wù)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出話題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。介紹家庭成員、個(gè)人信息和家庭活動(dòng)等方面的具體詳情。第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)自己的熱愛(ài)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①teachEnglish教英語(yǔ)②playgames玩游戲③dosports做運(yùn)動(dòng)④ontheweekend在周末[高分句型]①Westudyinthesameschool,butweareindifferentgrades.(but連接的并列句)②Ontheweekend,weoftengototheparktoplaygames.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))2.（24-25七年級(jí)上·福建福州·期中）家是我們心靈的港灣，家人是我們?nèi)松飞系膱?jiān)強(qiáng)后盾。假設(shè)你是Helen，學(xué)校正在舉辦主題為“MyFamily”的征稿活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖給的提示，用英文寫一篇短文進(jìn)行投稿。注意事項(xiàng)：1)必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3)請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名，校名及地名；4)詞數(shù)60左右。MyFamilyHello,everyone!I’mHelen.I’mhappytotalkaboutmyfamily.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyFamilyHello,everyone!I’mHelen.I’mhappytotalkaboutmyfamily.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremymother,myfatherandI.Myfatheristall.Heisapoliceman.Mymotherisverybeautiful.Sheisanurse.IamastudentinGrade7.Iamverycute.Ilikehikingwithmyfriends.Weoftendomanythingstogether.Weoftenwatchfilmsonweekends.Sometimes,wegototheparkforapicniconSundays.Wefeelveryhappy.IlovemyfamilyverymuchandIenjoythetimewithmyfamily.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，作者家庭的話題；第二步，介紹家庭成員的情況；第三步，介紹家庭的周末活動(dòng)及感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Thereare…有，表示存在或擁有②likedoingsth.喜歡做某事③watchfilms

看電影④feelhappy感到高興[高分句型]IlovemyfamilyverymuchandIenjoythetimewithmyfamily.(并列句)3.（24-25七年級(jí)上·福建泉州·期中）假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)筆友James很喜歡奧運(yùn)冠軍潘展樂(lè)（PanZhanle），請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下思維導(dǎo)圖，用英語(yǔ)給筆友James寫一封電子郵件介紹潘展樂(lè)。詞數(shù)40左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.必須包含所有提示信息并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名和地名。DearJames,Howiseverythinggoing?IamhappytoknowthatyoulikePanZhanle.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearJerry,Howiseverythinggoing?IamhappytoknowthatyoulikePanZhanle.HeisfromWenzhou.Heistwentyyearsold.Heistallandstrong.Hehasmanyfriends.Heisfriendlytothem.Heoftenhelpsothers.Soheishelpful.Helikesmanythings,suchasswimmingandpettingacat.Hehasabigandhappyfamily.Heloveshisfamilyverymuch.Ithinkeverybodylikeshimverymuch.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【詳解】［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，是一篇電子郵件。②時(shí)態(tài)：主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。［寫作步驟］第一步，表明寫作意圖。開頭問(wèn)候?qū)Ψ胶?，引出要介紹的人物潘展樂(lè)。第二步，具體闡述。從年齡、出生地、外貌、性格、興趣愛(ài)好、家庭等方面詳細(xì)介紹潘展樂(lè)。第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)?？偨Y(jié)表達(dá)大家都喜歡他。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①helpothers幫助他人②suchas例如③pettingacat擼貓［高分句型］Ithinkeverybodylikeshimverymuch.（賓語(yǔ)從句）4.（22-23七年級(jí)上·福建莆田·期末）假設(shè)你是Lily，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的信息用英語(yǔ)寫一篇介紹你和你的家人的作文。MyFamilyLily13,China,Grade7fathertall,doctor,hospital...motherLongblackhair,teacher,school,teach...sister9yearsold,likereading...要求：1.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，書寫規(guī)范；2.詞數(shù)60個(gè)左右；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生本人的姓名，校名及所在地。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLily.IcomefromChina.Iam13yearsold.Iamastudent.IaminGrade7.Ihaveahappyfamily.Myfatherisverytall.Heisadoctor.Heworksinahospital.Mymotherhaslongblackhair.Sheisateacher.Sheteachesatschool.Ihaveasister.Sheisnineyearsold.Shelikesreading.Ilovemyfamily!【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；

③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，介紹自己的個(gè)人信息；

第二步，介紹自己的家庭信息。

[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]

①comefrom來(lái)自②longblackhair黑黑的長(zhǎng)發(fā)

[高分句型]

①Shelikesreading.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）

5.（23-24七年級(jí)上·福建福州·期末）你校的交換生項(xiàng)目需要數(shù)名擅長(zhǎng)英語(yǔ)的小志愿者。假如你是李華，希望成為其中的一員。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，給該項(xiàng)目的負(fù)責(zé)人王老師寫一封英語(yǔ)自薦信。詞數(shù)70左右。注意事項(xiàng)：1.所寫內(nèi)容包含表格內(nèi)所提供信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，條理清晰。DearMr.Wang,I’mgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsomevolunteers(志愿者).Iwanttobeavolunteer.Letmeintroducemyself.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeI’mtheoneyouneed!【答案】例文DearMr.Wang,I’mgladtoknowthatyouareinneedofsomevolunteers(志愿者).Iwanttobeavolunteer.Letmeintroducemyself.MynameisLiHua.IamaboyfromClassThree,Gradeeight.I’m14yearsold.I’mverytall.Ihaveshorthair.Ihavetwobigeyes.IlikewearingsportsshoesbecauseIlikeplaybasketball.IamgoodatEnglishbecauseitisinteresting.IthinkEnglishisveryimportant.InordertoimprovemyspokenEnglish,Iwanttobeavolunteer.Ialsowanttodomybesttohelpthem.Ilookforwardtoyourreply.IhopeI’mtheoneyouneed!Yours,Lihua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容介紹自己的相關(guān)信息，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容詳細(xì)介紹自己的相關(guān)信息；第三步，表達(dá)希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)②inorderto為了③lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①IlikewearingsportsshoesbecauseIlikeplaybasketball.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)②InordertoimprovemyspokenEnglish,Iwanttobeavolunteer.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))6.（23-24七年級(jí)上·福建泉州·期末）假如你是李華，近期你的學(xué)校舉辦了“最美教師風(fēng)采”大賽，你最喜歡的英語(yǔ)老師MissWang獲獎(jiǎng)了。你要向你的外國(guó)筆友Tom介紹她，請(qǐng)根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖提示，寫一封電子郵件。要求：1.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)在60詞左右。（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)）3.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱。DearTom,Howareyou?I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyfavoriteteacher.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wouldyouliketotellmesomethingaboutyourfavoriteteacher?Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearTom,Howareyou?I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyfavoriteteacher.MissWangismyEnglishteacher.ShecomesfromChinaandsheis35yearsold.Shehasshortblackhairandbigeyes.Sheistall.Shelikesreadingbooksandsingingsongswithherfriends.MissWangteachesusEnglishwell.Sheiskindtous.Shehelpsusalotwithourstudy.Doyouknowherfavoritefood?Shelovesriceandchickenverymuch.Wouldyouliketotellmesomethingaboutyourfavoriteteacher?Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中最喜歡的英語(yǔ)老師MissWang的介紹。包括個(gè)人信息、外貌、愛(ài)好、最喜愛(ài)的食物和性格等。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，打招呼，并引出最喜歡的老師姓名。第二步，具體介紹最喜歡的英語(yǔ)老師MissWang，包括個(gè)人信息、外貌、愛(ài)好、最喜愛(ài)的食物和性格等。第三步，書寫結(jié)束語(yǔ)。詢問(wèn)湯姆是否愿意介紹自己最喜歡的老師。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①shortblackhair黑色短發(fā)②likesreadingbooks喜歡讀書③iskindto對(duì)某人友善④teachesusEnglish教我們英語(yǔ)[高分句型]①ShecomesfromChinaandsheis35yearsold.（and是并列連詞）②MissWangteachesusEnglishwell.（teachsb.sth.教某人某東西，雙賓語(yǔ)）7.（23-24七年級(jí)上·福建福州·期末）假設(shè)你叫LiHua，你最好的朋友名叫Bob。近日你學(xué)校的英語(yǔ)俱樂(lè)部正在開展以“MyFriend”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格信息，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文投稿參加活動(dòng)。要求：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，詞數(shù)60詞左右；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)姓名、地名或所在學(xué)校名稱。

Name：BobAge：13Looks：strong,smalleyes,shortblondhairFavoritecolor：blueMeals：breakfast—milkandcakeslunch—riceandchickendinner—vegetablesandjiaoziAday’sactivities：7：20a.m.

gotoschool9：00a.m.

readEnglish4：30p.m.

playsoccerIhaveagoodfriend.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bobisverykindandweoftenhelpeachother.Ilikehimsomuch!【答案】例文Ihaveagoodfriend.HisnameisBob.Heis13yearsold.Heisverystrong.Hehassmalleyesandshortblondhair.Hisfavoritecolorisblue.Hehascakesandmilkforbreakfast.Hehasriceandchickenforlunch.Heeatsvegetablesanddumplingsfordinner.Hegoestoschoolat7:20am.HereadsEnglishat9:00am.Heplaysfootballat4:30pmafterschool.Bobisverykindandweoftenhelpeachother.Ilikehimsomuch!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文，要求根據(jù)所給材料介紹你的朋友Bob；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第三人稱為主，要注意主謂一致；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，內(nèi)容提示的要點(diǎn)要全部表達(dá)到位，不要漏掉，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，可直接敘述“我”有一個(gè)朋友；第二步，具體敘述你的朋友姓名、年齡、外貌、喜歡的顏色、三餐和一天的活動(dòng)。第三步，敘述Bob的品質(zhì)和“我”們的友誼，結(jié)束全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①eat/hascakesandmilkforbreakfast早餐吃蛋糕和牛奶②afterschool放學(xué)后③helpeachother互相幫助④gotoschool去上學(xué)[高分句型]①Heisverystrong.（主語(yǔ)+be+形容詞）②Hehassmalleyesandshortblondhair.（主語(yǔ)+has/have+名詞）③Bobisverykindandweoftenhelpeachother.（and連接的并列句）8.（23-24七年級(jí)上·江蘇揚(yáng)州·期末）假如你是陽(yáng)光中學(xué)的學(xué)生LiuTao，在學(xué)校舉行的一次筆友書信活動(dòng)中，你想把自己的生活介紹給你的英國(guó)筆友Sandy，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，寫一封信。MylifeMystudyFavouritesubject…Myhobby…Myfavouritefestival…MydreamAfashiondesigner注意事項(xiàng)：內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言通順連貫，條理清晰，書寫規(guī)范；詞數(shù)80左右，信的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。DearSandy,I’mverygladtowritealettertoyou.I’dliketointroducemylifetoyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Allthebest,LiuTao【答案】例文DearSandy,I’mverygladtowritealettertoyou.I’dliketointroducemylifetoyou.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish,becauseIthinkitisveryuseful.Ialsolikeplayingvolleyballandreading.IfIhavetime,Ioftenplayvolleyballwithmyfriendsorreadathome.MyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestival,becauseIcangetpresentsandredpackets.Myfamilymembersgettogetherandhaveabigdinner.Wehavelotsoffun.Inmyfreetime,Iliketodesignsomething.Mydreamistobecomeadesigner.Ihopemydreamcomestrue.Allthebest,LiuTao【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為書信；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”，因?yàn)槭窃诿枋霈F(xiàn)在的生活、學(xué)習(xí)和興趣等；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已明確給出，包括“我的學(xué)習(xí)”、“我的愛(ài)好”、“我最喜歡的節(jié)日”以及“我的夢(mèng)想”?？忌鷳?yīng)注意不要遺漏這些要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出個(gè)人的特色和重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。在信的開頭已經(jīng)通過(guò)“I’mverygladtowritealettertoyou.I’dliketointroducemylifetoyou.”明確表達(dá)了寫作的意圖，即向筆友介紹自己的生活。第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。Mystudy：引出最喜歡的科目；Myhobby:介紹自己的愛(ài)好；Myfavouritefestival:提及最喜歡的節(jié)日及其原因；Mydream:闡述自己的夢(mèng)想；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。在信的結(jié)尾，通過(guò)“Allthebest,LiuTao”表達(dá)了對(duì)筆友的美好祝愿，并結(jié)束了信件。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①favorite最喜歡的②because因?yàn)棰踙aveabigdinner吃一頓大餐④cometrue實(shí)現(xiàn)[高分句型]①M(fèi)yfavoritesubjectisEnglish,becauseIthinkitisveryuseful.(原因狀語(yǔ)從句)②Inmyfreetime,Iliketodesignsomething.(動(dòng)詞不定式作賓語(yǔ))9.（23-24七年級(jí)上·江蘇泰州·期末）學(xué)校舉辦校園健康小達(dá)人活動(dòng)，要求參加者在表演節(jié)目前用英文介紹自己。假如你是七(1)班李霞，你想?yún)⒓颖敬位顒?dòng)，請(qǐng)你用以下信息寫一篇演講稿。外貌個(gè)子又高又苗條，黑色的長(zhǎng)發(fā)，戴眼鏡；喜好擅長(zhǎng)唱歌和畫畫，最喜歡逛街，在周末經(jīng)常陪母親一起去學(xué)校附近有一個(gè)六層樓的購(gòu)物中心；購(gòu)物中心里的電影院是一個(gè)約見(jiàn)朋友和盡情玩樂(lè)的好地方。健康的生活方式認(rèn)為保持健康很重要，經(jīng)常吃水果和蔬菜，很少吃甜食和漢堡，通常步行上學(xué)并且每天鍛煉半個(gè)小時(shí)；最喜歡的節(jié)日及原因……自由發(fā)揮(不少于2點(diǎn)）計(jì)劃計(jì)劃用零花錢給貧困地區(qū)的孩子買些籃球?！ㄗ杂砂l(fā)揮1點(diǎn)）要求：1.包含所有要點(diǎn)；2.注意用第一人稱表達(dá)；3.語(yǔ)法正確，書寫認(rèn)真，詞數(shù)80左右(開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Goodafternoon,teachersandfriends!Gladtobeherewithyou.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Goodafternoon,teachersandfriends!Gladtobeherewithyou.MynameisLiXia.IaminGrade7.I’mverytallandslimwithlongblackhairandIwearglasses.Iamgoodatsinginganddrawing.Ilikeshoppingbest.Ioftengoshoppingwithmymotheronweekends.Iloveshopping,especiallyonweekendsIoftengotoasix-floorshoppingmallnearourschoolwithmymother.Thecinemainthismallisagreatplacetomeetfriendsandhavefun.Ibelieveitisimportanttostayhealthy,soIeatfruitsandvegetablesregularlyandrarelyeatsweetsandhamburgers.Iusuallywalktoschoolandexerciseforhalfanhoureveryday.IliketheSpringFestivalbestbecauseourfamilycangettogethertohaveabigparty.Iplantousemypocketmoneytobuybasketballsforchildreninpoorareas.Ihopetoparticipateinthe“HealthyLittleTalentsonCampus”activity.

Thankyouforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是演講稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：主要時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示內(nèi)容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一闡述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步：表明寫作意圖。借用“很高興在這里見(jiàn)到大家”來(lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容。第二步：具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。依照提示信息的要點(diǎn)——外貌、喜好、健康的生活方式、最喜歡的節(jié)日及原因、計(jì)劃等均要一一闡述。第三步：書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)感謝您的聆聽(tīng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodat擅長(zhǎng)②goshopping去購(gòu)物③stayhealthy保持健康[高分句型]①Ibelieveitisimportanttostayhealthy,soIeatfruitsandvegetablesregularlyandrarelyeatsweetsandhamburgers.(賓語(yǔ)從句）②I’mverytallandslimwithlongblackhairandIwearglasses.

(and表并列)10.（23-24七年級(jí)上·江蘇揚(yáng)州·期末）節(jié)日是世界文化的重要組成部分，不同國(guó)家有著不一樣的節(jié)日文化。假如你是李華，你參加了學(xué)校正在開展的“向世界展示中華傳統(tǒng)文化”主題活動(dòng)，你打算向你的英國(guó)筆友Tom介紹中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——元宵節(jié)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下的提示內(nèi)容，給Tom寫一封電子郵件。參考詞匯：light點(diǎn)亮，riddle謎語(yǔ)，lunar農(nóng)歷要求：1.內(nèi)容必須包括以上所有要點(diǎn)，須按照要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)。2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，條理清楚，字跡工整。3.不少于100詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、地點(diǎn)或校名。DearTom,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutoneofourtraditionalfestival—TheLanternFestival.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IhopeyoucancometoChinaandhaveahappyLanternFestivalwithus.Love,LiHua【答案】例文：DearTom,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutoneofourtraditionalfestival—TheLanternFestival.TheLanternFestivalisoneofimportantfestivalsinChina.ItisalwaysinFebruary.Atthistimeofyear,familymembersgettogetherandcelebrateithappilyinmanyways.AttheLanternFestival,peopleeattangyuan,thiskindoffoodlookslikeariceballwithsomethingsweetinside.Childrenwiththeirparentsalwayslightdifferentlanternsatnighttomakethefestivalcolorful.Insomeplaces,peopleliketowatchliondances,theyhopethisactivitycanbringthemgoodluckforthewholeyear.Anotherinterestinggameisguessingriddlesonthelanterns.Althoughsomeriddlesaredifficult,butthegameisgreatfun.Allthefamilyhaveagoodtimeonthatday.IhopeyoucancometoChinaandhaveahappyLanternFestivalwithus.Love,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“元宵節(jié)時(shí)間，活動(dòng)，食物以及感受”，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“我很高興告訴你一些關(guān)于我們傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一——元宵節(jié)的事情?！眮?lái)引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“元宵節(jié)的時(shí)間，慶?；顒?dòng)，食物以及我的感受”重點(diǎn)介紹元宵節(jié)的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語(yǔ)。表達(dá)“我希望你能來(lái)中國(guó)，和我們一起過(guò)一個(gè)快樂(lè)的元宵節(jié)?！盵亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①gettogether聚在一起②haveagoodtime玩得愉快[高分句型]①Insomeplaces,peopleliketowatchliondances,theyhopethisactivitycanbringthemgoodluckforthewholeyear.(省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句)②Althoughsomeriddlesaredifficult,butthegameisgreatfun.(although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句)11.（23-24七年級(jí)上·江蘇揚(yáng)州·期末）假如你是李華，七年級(jí)上學(xué)期的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束，在這半年的初中生活中，你一定結(jié)識(shí)了很多新朋友吧！請(qǐng)以“MyBestFriend”為題，根據(jù)下面的圖示信息和要求寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文，向大家介紹一下你最好的朋友Sandy。要求：1）表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫，詞數(shù)100詞左右（文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2）必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，結(jié)構(gòu)合理，字跡工整，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）不要出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。MybestfriendImakealotoffriendsatschool,andSandyismybestfriend.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Imakealotoffriendsatschool,andSandyismybestfriend.Sheis13yearsold.Sheistallandslim.Ilikeherbrightsmilingeyes.Theymakeherlookreallykind.ShealwayswearsjeansandaT-shirtatschool,andshelookscoolinthem.Shehasagoodeatinghabit.Shelikeseatingvegetablesandfruit.Shethinkstheyaregoodforher.Runningisherfavouritesport,becauseitcanhelpherkeephealthy.What’smore,Sandylikestomakefriendswithothers.Shecanlistentootherscarefullyandhelpthemwiththeirproblems.Shewouldliketobeasocialworkerwhenshegrowsup.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的介紹要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹Sandy是我最好的朋友；第二步，具體介紹Sandy的外貌特征喜好等等；[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①begoodforsb對(duì)某人有好處②What’smore此外③wouldliketodo愿意做某事[高分句型]①Runningisherfavouritesport,becauseitcanhelpherkeephealthy.(because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句)②Shewouldliketobeasocialworkerwhenshegrowsup.(when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句)12.（23-24七年級(jí)上·江蘇宿遷·期末）假設(shè)你叫李華，是一名中學(xué)生，學(xué)校正在舉行“我型我秀”征文比賽，請(qǐng)以“Thisisme”為題介紹一下自己。根據(jù)以下提示完成短文。1.我叫李華，14歲，高個(gè)子，短發(fā)，愛(ài)讀書；2.我每天踢足球，夢(mèng)想成為一名足球運(yùn)動(dòng)員；3.有健康的生活方式。我早飯吃雞蛋、牛奶，午飯和晚飯吃肉和蔬菜；4.最喜歡的節(jié)日是春節(jié)；5.自擬信息進(jìn)行適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。要求：1.要點(diǎn)完整，表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)句通順。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)信息，字?jǐn)?shù)70左右。Thisisme______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：ThisismeMynameisLiHua.Iam14yearsold.Iamtallwithshorthair.Ilovereadingbooksverymuch.Everyday,Iplayfootballandmydreamistobecomeafootballplayer.Ihaveahealthylifestyle.Forbreakfast,Ihaveeggsandmilk.Forlunchanddinner,Ieatmeatandvegetables.MyfavoritefestivalistheSpringFestivalbecauseit’sfullofjoyandfamilygatherings.Ialsoenjoyhelpingothersandmakingfriends.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇自我介紹的應(yīng)用文，為征文比賽投稿；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”，用于描述個(gè)人的現(xiàn)狀、習(xí)慣和夢(mèng)想；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已明確給出，包括姓名、年齡、外貌、愛(ài)好、日?；顒?dòng)、夢(mèng)想、飲食習(xí)慣、最喜歡的節(jié)日等，考生需圍繞這些要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行介紹，并適當(dāng)添加自擬信息以豐富內(nèi)容。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接以“Thisisme”開頭，簡(jiǎn)短介紹自己的姓名和年齡，作為文章的引入；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。描述外貌特征；展示興趣愛(ài)好；介紹生活方式：強(qiáng)調(diào)健康的飲食習(xí)慣；分享個(gè)人喜好；自