作文16 遼寧錦州卷（滿分作文+同類作文+素材積累）-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語滿分作文+萬能模板+熱點(diǎn)素材

2021年中考滿分作文特快?？骖}在線作文16遼寧錦州卷真題在線小作文（遼寧省錦州市2021年中考英語試題）閱讀下面短文,根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的語篇。注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為40-50詞；2.必須至少使用2個(gè)短文中劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分至少一段,第一段開頭語已經(jīng)為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后,請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所選用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Manystudentshaveanumberofinterestingideasabouttheirdreamschools.Maybepeoplewillbuildtheseschoolssomeday.Let’shavealookatsomeofthem.Inmydreamschool,therewillbenorealclassrooms.Wewillstudyinourownrooms.WithVRtechnology（虛擬現(xiàn)實(shí)技術(shù)）,wecanstudymore.Paragraph1:Inmydreamschool,wewillhaveflexible（靈活的）learningchoices.________________考題解析_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析1.題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)文章以給出的部分進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，主要是寫出自己夢(mèng)想中的學(xué)校會(huì)是什么樣子，要加以發(fā)揮，要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的部分很好的銜接起來，用第一人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，輔滿分范文以一般將來時(shí)，注意無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文真題在線Wecanchoosewhenandwheretohaveclassesfreely.Sowewillneverbelate.AndbesidesChinese,mathandEnglish,wecanstudydifferentkindsofsubjectsthatweareinterestedin.Thereisnoexamofanysubject.Weloveourdreamschool.真題在線大作文（遼寧省錦州市2021年中考英語試題）假如你是張華，你的英國(guó)筆友Lucy正在學(xué)習(xí)漢語。她在給你的來信中介紹了她的漢語老師的情況。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下信息用英語寫一封回信，向她介紹你的英語老師Ms.Liu。Appearance（外表）Tall,thin,smartPersonalities（性格）Helpful,friendlyFavoritecolorPinkHobbiesReading,traveling,watchingmoviesAchievementsThefirstprizeintheteachingcompetition要求：1.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息；2.請(qǐng)包含所有英文提示內(nèi)容，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊；4.詞數(shù)：80-100詞。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearLucy,ThankyoufortellingmeaboutyourChineseteacher.Ithinkheissuchagreatteacher.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishteacher,Ms.Liu._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Pleasewritesoon.Yours,考題解析ZhangHua考題解析滿分范文1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和內(nèi)容，描寫自己的英語老師的情況，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭和結(jié)尾融合起來，用第三人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文DearLucy,ThankyoufortellingmeaboutyourChineseteacher.Ithinkheissuchagreatteacher.NowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyEnglishteacher,Ms.Liu.Sheisnotonlytallbutalsothin.Shelooksverysmart,too.Becauseherfavoritecolorispink,sheisinterestedinallkindsofthingsthatarepink.Shehasalotofhobbies,suchasreadingandtraveling.Sosheoftengoestothelibraryafterschoolonweekdaysandgoestotheplacesofinterestonweekends.Shealsolikeswatchingmovies,butsheseldomgoestothecinema.Sheissoexcellentateacherthatshewonthefirstprizeintheteachingcompetitioninourcity.Sheishelpfulandfriendlytoeveryone.Wealllikeher.Pleasewritesoon.Yours,名師點(diǎn)評(píng)ZhangHua名師點(diǎn)評(píng)2021年錦州卷在考題形式上跟前幾年相比沒有變化，皆是續(xù)寫+大作文的形式，既考查了學(xué)生在日常生活中的英語應(yīng)用能力，也考查了學(xué)生對(duì)于生活中相關(guān)話題的英語表達(dá)，既給了學(xué)生想象空間，也在題干要點(diǎn)中給了一定的限制。近幾年的書面表達(dá)難度都不高，前幾年多考察命題作文或半命題作文，且文章中給出了較為詳盡的信息，只需學(xué)生根據(jù)所學(xué)知識(shí)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)中，學(xué)習(xí)也可以多練習(xí)此類作文的書寫，并學(xué)習(xí)相關(guān)佳句表達(dá)。佳句積累1.Sheisnotonlytallbutalsothin.【亮點(diǎn)】notonly…butalso…不僅…而且…2.Becauseherfavoritecolorispink,sheisinterestedinallkindsofthingsthatarepink.【亮點(diǎn)】allkindsof為“各種各樣的”，thatarepink為定語從句，修飾先行詞things。3.Sheissoexcellentateacherthatshewonthefirstprizeintheteachingcompetitioninourcity.【亮點(diǎn)】so…that…如此…以至于…舉一反三相似題①在過去的三年初中生活中，你肯定遇到了很多好老師。言愛學(xué)校英語廣播電臺(tái)開展了“Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher”英語征文活動(dòng)，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求用英語寫一篇短文。1.要點(diǎn)：1)你最喜歡的英語老師是誰；2）你喜歡他/她的原因；3）你對(duì)老師的感受。2.要求：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和名稱；2）詞數(shù)100左右。Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Iloveyou,myEnglishteacherIhavemetmanygoodteachersinthelastthreeyears.MyEnglishteacher,Mr.Huang,isoneofthem.Nowletmetellyousomethingabouthim.Mr.Huangisofmediumheightandalittlethin.Hewearsapairofglasses.Heisgoodatcommunicatingwithothersbecauseheisoutgoing.Helikessports.Youcanoftenseehimplaybasketballwithstudents.Mr.Huangenjoyshiswork.Heisverystrictbutcaresabouteverystudent.Whenthepoorstudentsareintrouble,heisalwaysreadytohelpthem.Hehasmanygoodwaystomakeourclasslivelyandactive.Inhisclass,wehavedifferentkindsofinterestingactivities.Afterclass,heusuallyhelpsthestudentswhohavedifficultyinlearning.Thankstohishardwork,wehaveimprovedalot.Iloveyou,myEnglishteacher！Iwillneverforgetyouforever!【考題解析】【審題指導(dǎo)】細(xì)讀所給的文字提示，提取以下信息：1.要求介紹自己的英語老師，因此文體為記敘文；2.寫人敘事類書面表達(dá)，人稱以第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；3.文章可對(duì)老師的外貌、性格、愛好、特長(zhǎng)、工作等方面進(jìn)行描述?！緦懽髦笇?dǎo)】我愛您，我的英語老師要點(diǎn)提示素材串聯(lián)開頭：引出話題遇到很多好老師，黃老師是其中之一(oneofthem)正文：詳細(xì)介紹英語老師1.外貌、性格和特長(zhǎng)(beofmediumheight,begoodat)2.工作態(tài)度(strict,careabout,beintrouble,bereadyto)3.課堂特色(havedifficultyindoing,thanksto)結(jié)尾：表達(dá)感受永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記(forever)相似題②親愛的同學(xué)們，三年的初中生活馬上就要結(jié)束了，你們即將離開熟悉的母校和三年來朝夕相處并給予你們無盡關(guān)愛和幫助的老師們。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)和要求談?wù)勀闶煜さ挠⒄Z老師。1.要點(diǎn)：1）這位英語老師是哪位；2）描述老師的基本情況；3）你對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)。2.要求：1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2）詞數(shù)100詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】MyEnglishTeacherIhavemetmanyexcellentteachersinjuniorschool.OneofthemismyEnglishteacher,Ms.Li.Sheisaboutthirtyfiveyearsold.Sheisnotonlytallbutalsobeautiful.Shehaslongcurlyhair.Ms.Lialsohasalotofhobbies,suchasreading,singing,dancingandplayingsports.Sheisverypatientwithus.Weallthinksheisafriendlyandwarmheartedteacher.Ms.Liisagoodteacher.Sheislikeafriendofours.Andsometimessheisalsolikeourmother.Weallloveher.相似題③根據(jù)中文提示，寫一篇英語短文介紹一下你的學(xué)校和英語老師Lucy。要求：語言流暢，條理清晰，詞數(shù)不少于70詞。要點(diǎn)包括如下：1.我學(xué)校生活豐富多彩,每天只有半小時(shí)的作業(yè)，有許多課外活動(dòng)。2.我們有大約180個(gè)老師，Lucy是我最喜歡的老師之一。3.她比我媽媽瘦一點(diǎn)，臉上總是掛著微笑。4.她能令每堂課都很有趣，并經(jīng)常在課后幫我們輔導(dǎo)作業(yè)和解決英語問題。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Ourschoollifeiscolourful.Weonlyhavehalfanhourofhomeworkeveryday.Wehavealotofafter-schoolactivities.Thenumberoftheteachersinourschoolisabout180.Lucyisoneofmyfavouriteteachers.Sheisthinnerthanmymother.Shealwayswearsasmileonherface.Shecanmakeeveryclassinteresting.AndsheoftenhelpsuswithourhomeworkandsolvetheEnglishproblems.Ilikemyschoolandmyteachers.【考題解析】試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文，考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)真審題。注意寫作要點(diǎn)：1.我學(xué)校生活豐富多彩,每天只有半小時(shí)的作業(yè)，有許多課外活動(dòng)。2.我們有大約180個(gè)老師，Lucy是我最喜歡的老師之一。3.她比我媽媽瘦一點(diǎn)，臉上總是掛著微笑。4.她能令每堂課都很有趣，并經(jīng)常在課后幫我們輔導(dǎo)作業(yè)和解決英語問題?？梢愿鶕?jù)文章中心，適當(dāng)添加內(nèi)容。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。要求介紹。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用，詞數(shù)不少于70詞等。寫作亮點(diǎn)：這篇文章語言規(guī)范，敘事清楚，詞匯及時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用正確，能夠把提示的內(nèi)容敘述清楚，語句通順，意思連貫是一篇不錯(cuò)的文章。相似題④假如你是李華，在新年來臨之際，你想給英語老師李老師寫一份郵件表達(dá)謝意。請(qǐng)你用英語介紹一下你為什么感謝她，以及你今后打算怎樣做。提示詞語：thank，help，confident，workhard提示問題：●Whydoyouthankher?●Whatwillyoudotothankher?DearMs.Li,Howareyougettingon?I'mwritingthisemailtosaythankyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearMs.Li,Howareyougettingon?I’mwritingthisemailtosaythankyou.I'mhappytobeyourstudent.Inthepasttwoandahalfyears,youhavehelpedmewithmyEnglishandmypersonaldevelopment.Withyourhelp,IbecamemoreconfidentinEnglishandimprovedalot.I'mnottheshyandupsetgirlanymore.Besides,whenIwasintroublewithmyfriendsorparents,youalwaysspentyourfreetimetalkingwithmeandgavemesomeadvicesothatIcouldsolvetheproblemquickly.IjustwanttosaythankyoutoyouandIwilltrymybesttorealizemydreamtomakeyouhappy.HappyNewYear.Wishyougoodluck.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。假如你是李華，要求你根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示，在新年來臨之際，給你的英語老師李老師寫一份郵件，以感謝她對(duì)你的幫助，并介紹你今后打算怎樣做注意要點(diǎn)要齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用第一人稱來展開寫作，敘述過去的事情時(shí)，用一般過去時(shí)，介紹今后的打算時(shí)，用一般將來時(shí)。寫作時(shí)要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示的內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作；可以圍繞主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。相似題⑤老師是火種，點(diǎn)燃了學(xué)生的心靈之火；老師是石階，幫助學(xué)生一步步踏實(shí)地向上攀登。