作文02 江蘇卷-五年（2017-2021）中考英語滿分作文解讀+素材積累

作文02江蘇卷2021年江蘇中考英語書面表達(dá)某英文網(wǎng)站正在舉辦征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)站征文要求，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。Thisnewglobalsiteisaplaceforstudentstosharetheirideas.Wearelookingforyourbeautifulschooldaytoinspire（鼓舞）ourreaders.Didyouhelpanyoneatschool?Didyouenjoyabeautifulsonginyourartlesson?Didyouhaveanamazingexperienceintheschoollab?Yourschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Chooseabeautifulschoolday.Writeapassagetotelluswhatyoudidthatdayandwhyyouthinkitwasbeautiful.Sendyourwritingtousrightnow!注意:1.內(nèi)容涵蓋要點(diǎn),全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MyBeautifulSchoolDayMyschoollifeisfullofbeauty.Iwillneverforgetthedaywhichmakesmefeelmeaningful.MybestfriendLucyandIalwaysridebikestogetherafterschool.Oneday,Iwaitedalongtimebutdidn’tseeher.ThenIsearchedforherinthecornerofourschool.Shewascryingatthattime.ShetoldmethatshewasnervousbecauseshewouldhaveanEnglishtest.IdecidedtohelpherwithEnglish.Thatevening,Ihelpedherreviewthekeypointsandnotes.Twodayslater,shetoldmethatshepassedit.Ifeltthathelpingotherswhoareinneedwasverymeaningful.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。圍繞“我美麗的學(xué)校生活”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般過去時(shí)。分為兩段式，第一段引出主題；第二段描述自己的經(jīng)歷，并發(fā)表自己的感悟。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。2020年江蘇中考英語書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，在學(xué)校英文校刊KIDSMAG上看到招募夏令營(yíng)營(yíng)員的信息。請(qǐng)根據(jù)招募內(nèi)容，用英語給校刊寫一封信。FUNLANDHi!Thissummerholidaywewillhavedifferentcampsforkids.Herearethreepopularones.Joinus!Makeachoiceandexplainwhyyouchooseit.ReadingCamp●Chineseliterature●Westernliterature●…CultureCamp●Westernmusic●Chineseart●…SportsCamp●Ballgames●Watersports●…Comeandhavefun!注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)（理由不得少于兩點(diǎn)），可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等.DearSirorMadam,Thanksforofferingussuchwonderfulcamps.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearSirorMadam,Thanksforofferingussuchwonderfulcamps.Idoexpecttojoinoneofthem.Ilikesportsverymuch,especiallybasketball,soSportsCampismyfirstchoice.IfI’maccepted,Ithinkit’sagoodchancetoimprovemybasketballskills.I’llhaveplentyoftimetopracticeplayingbasketballandtheremustbemanyexcellentcoachesandplayersinthiscamp.Besides,IbelieveI’llmakesomenewfriendswhohavecommoninterests.Thatreallysoundsfantastictome.Ijustcan’twait.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!YoursLiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：文章是一篇書信作文。主要是看到?？险心枷牧顮I(yíng)營(yíng)員的消息進(jìn)行回信，可以選擇其中比較感興趣的一個(gè)夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)進(jìn)行具體的描述，要寫明參加這個(gè)夏令營(yíng)的原因以及自己通過這次活動(dòng)要取得的成績(jī)，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的應(yīng)用。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章分三段描寫。第一段感謝提供這么多精彩的夏令營(yíng)活動(dòng)；第二段寫自己要參加的夏令營(yíng)以及原因；第三段寫期待盡早收到回復(fù)。整個(gè)文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整，思路清晰，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，意思明確易懂。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：plentyof；practicedoingsth.；makefriends；lookforwardto。句型：if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；Ibelieve+賓語從句；who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。2019年江蘇中考英語書面表達(dá)假如你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到英國Britech公司為正在開發(fā)的一款提高英語寫作能力的應(yīng)用軟件（app）征集網(wǎng)友建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的征集信息，用英語給該公司寫一封電子郵件。IDEASNEEDEDBritechisnowdesigninganappthathelpslearnerswiththeirEnglishwriting.Theappistohelplearnersexploreideas,organizethemandwritethemdown.Yourideasareneeded!Here’swhattodo:Writetoshareyourideas!Feelfreetobecreative!Pleaseletusknow:●What’sthenameoftheapp?●Whatproblemdoestheappsolve?●Whatdoestheappdo?Contactusatappdesign@B注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右（已給出的文章開頭，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。DearSirorMadam,ThanksfordesigninganappforEnglishwriting.Yours,LiHuaThanksfordesigninganappforEnglishwriting.I’dliketosharemyideashere.Coulditsnamebe“WritingMadeEasy”?Manyofushavedifficultyinwriting.Wedon’tknowhowtoorganizeideas,useproperwords,andsoon.Ihopeitcansolvetheseproblems.Hereismyadviceonwhattheappdoes.First,itshouldprovidesomereadingmaterials.Themoreweread,thebetterwewrite.Second,theappshouldhaveanonlinecoursesothatwecandevelopourwritingskills.Third,thereshouldbeane-teacherwhocancorrectmistakesandoffersuggestions.Ihopemyadviceisworthtaking.【解析】這是一篇根據(jù)英國Britech公司為正在開發(fā)的一款提高英語寫作能力的應(yīng)用軟件（app）征集網(wǎng)友建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)網(wǎng)上的征集信息，用英語給該公司寫一封電子郵件。動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。重點(diǎn)句型：havedifficultyindoingsth做某事有困難，Themoreweread,thebetterwewrite.讀的越多，寫的越好。sothat目的是2018年江蘇中考英語書面表達(dá)請(qǐng)根據(jù)你校?？疜IDSMAG中HAVEYOURSAY欄目的征稿內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇短文，表達(dá)你的想法。Hi,AtKIDSMAGweliketoshareyourideasaboutourschool.Inmycolumn,HAVEYOURSAY,youcanletotherkidsknowwhatyouthink.ThismonthwewantyoutohaveyoursayaboutCultureWeekinourschool:●whattheme(主題)ofCultureWeekyoulike●whyyoulikethetheme●whatactivity/activitiesyoucanorganizeforthethemeLookingforwardtohearingfromyou.SamSouthland注意：1．對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2．詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3．文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。IamgladtosharemyideasaboutCultureWeekinourschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________IamgladtosharemyideasaboutCultureWeekinourschool.IlikethethemeaboutinternationalcookingforourCultureWeek,becausethiscanhelpusbetterunderstanddifferentcultureswhileenjoyednicefood.First,wewillinviteteachersandparentstogivetalksaboutinternationalcooking.Then,wewillholdaCookingFestival.Allthestudentscanbringtheirowndishesandsharethemwitheachother.Neartheendoftheweek,wewillhaveaDIYcompetition.Therewillbeasurpriseintheend.IhopeourCultureWeekwillbeagreatsuccess!【詳解】寫作要求對(duì)學(xué)校文化周的主題、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容等進(jìn)行討論、分享。從三個(gè)方面展開敘述：你喜歡什么文化周主題？你為什么喜歡這個(gè)主題？你可以為主題組織什么活動(dòng)？要求將自己喜歡的主題，喜歡的原因及為此安排的活動(dòng)敘述清楚，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。2017年江蘇中考英語書面表達(dá)KIDSHAVEANOPINIONTOO!Hi!I’mSigmundFriend,theeditor(編輯)ofanewmagazineKIDVOICE.Welikehearingfromkids.Weknowyou’vegotthingstosay.Wewanttohearfromyou.Hereisatopicyoumighthaveanopinionabout...注意：1.對(duì)所有要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.詞數(shù)80左右，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。KidsandLearningAllkidswanttobegoodatlearning.KidsandLearning

Allkidswanttobegoodatlearning．Somechildrenaregoodatlearning，butsomechildrenaregoodatplaying，andtheyarenotgoodatlearning，why？Thisisbecausesomechildrenknowhowtobalancelearningandstudying．

First，justasthesayinggoes"AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy"，agoodlearnershouldknowtoplayproperly，ifheorsheplayshappily，hewilltrytolearningwell．Besides，alllearningdecreasetheinterestofstudy．Second，studentsshouldmakeapropertimelist，andtrytofollowthelist．Last，parentsandteachersshouldgivetipstothestudentssothatstudentscanhaveagoodknowledgeofthestudy．Allinall，onlywhenwebalancetherelationbetweenplayingandlearning，canwebegoodatlearning．【解析】本文屬于圖畫作文，主要寫一篇關(guān)于孩子和學(xué)習(xí)的的作文。根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定并準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容?！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點(diǎn)詞句，如begoodat,thisisbecause,asthesayinggoes,AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy,properly,follow,tip,knowledge,besides以及allinall等。增強(qiáng)邏輯關(guān)系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準(zhǔn)確，句子通順，行文連貫。點(diǎn)睛：寫作時(shí)可以從以下幾個(gè)方面做起：認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫好書面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)的寫作材料。通常書面表達(dá)給出的話題是開放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無重復(fù)、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。書面表達(dá)經(jīng)典句子積累環(huán)境與節(jié)儉1.保護(hù)環(huán)境是我們的責(zé)任。It'sourdutytoprotectourenvironment.2.愛護(hù)我們的環(huán)境是非常重要的。Itisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironment3.我們不應(yīng)該把垃圾倒在地上。Weshouldnotthrowrubbishontotheground.4.我們不應(yīng)該在公共場(chǎng)所吐痰。Weshouldnotspitinapublicplace.5.我們應(yīng)該種植更多的花和樹。Weshouldplantmoreflowersandtrees.6.當(dāng)我們購物的時(shí)候應(yīng)該停止使用塑料袋。Weshouldstopusingplasticbagswhenwegoshopping.7.我們不應(yīng)該浪費(fèi)食物。Weshouldn’twasteourfood.8.節(jié)約用水也很重要。Savingwaterisalsoimportant.城市變化1.過去的10年城市發(fā)生了巨大變化。Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcityinthepast10years.2.過去我們市只有幾條街，但現(xiàn)在有許多寬敞的街道和現(xiàn)代化超市。Therewereonlyseveralstreetsinourcity,butnowtherearesomanywidestreetsandtherearesomanymodernshops.3.人們過去外出騎自行車或乘公交，但現(xiàn)在越來越多的人有他們自己的車。Peopleusedtogooutbybikeorbybus,butnowmoreandmorepeoplehavetheirowncars.4.在我們市里有許多美麗的公園。我們?cè)诔鞘蟹N了越來越多的花和樹。Therearesomebeautifulparksinourcity.Wehaveplantedmoreandmoreflowersandtreesinthecity.旅游1.我想我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這次旅行。IthoughtIwouldneverforgetthistrip.2.去年夏天,我和我的父母去北京度假。Lastsummer，myparentsandIwenttoBeijingforourholidays.3.這是一個(gè)放松的好地方。Itisaniceplacetorelax.4.祝愿你有一個(gè)好的旅行Wishyouhaveagoodtrip5.我?guī)銋⒂^名勝古跡。I’llshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterest.運(yùn)動(dòng)與健康1.保持健康是非常重要的Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.2.我們希望以后你會(huì)變得越來越強(qiáng)壯和健康。Wehopethatyouwillbestrongerandhealthierinthefuture。3.如果你想變得強(qiáng)壯健康，你必須吃更多的水果和蔬菜。Ifyouwanttobestrongandhealthy,youmusteatmorefruitandvegetables.4.你不應(yīng)該熬夜。Youshouldn’tstayup.5.你應(yīng)該通過鍛煉來保持健康。Youshouldexercisetostayfit.6.你應(yīng)該吃水果蔬菜并喝大量的水。Youshouldeatfruitandvegetablesanddrinklotsofwater.7.你也應(yīng)該聽音樂放松。Youshouldalsolistentomusictorelax.學(xué)科1.我最喜歡的科目是英語。MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.2.學(xué)英語對(duì)于我們每個(gè)人都是重要的，因?yàn)樵诨ヂ?lián)網(wǎng)上超過四分之三的信息是英語。ItisimportantforeveryonetostudyEnglishbecausemorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.3.我希望有一天我能出國，然后我能和外國人說英語。IhopeIcangoabroadoneday，andthenIcanspeaktoforeignersinEnglish.4.我喜歡英語，我會(huì)盡力學(xué)好英語。IlikeEnglishandtrymybesttolearnit.節(jié)日1.在中國，最重要的節(jié)日是春節(jié)。InChinathemostimportantholidayistheSpringFestival.2.在春節(jié)前夕，人們會(huì)吃一頓大餐。人們吃很多美食。OntheSpringFestivalEvepeoplehaveabigdinner.Theyhavealotofnicefoodtoeat.3.春節(jié)期間，人們有很多有意思的事情要做。DuringtheSpringFestivalpeoplehavealotofinterestingthingstodo.4.人們拜訪他們的親戚和朋友。Peoplevisittheirrelativesandfriends.5.他們互相擁抱問候,說“新年快樂”。Theygreeteachotherwithahugandsay，"HappyNewYear".6.由于中國是一個(gè)大國,人們?cè)诓煌牡胤揭圆煌姆绞綉c祝這個(gè)節(jié)日。AsChinaisabigcountry，peopleindifferentplacescelebratethisholidayindifferentways.寫人1.他1982年出生在倫敦。HewasborninLondonin1982.2.他身高一米六八，重52公斤。Heis1.68meterstallandweighs52kilos.3.他中等身材。Heisofmediumbuild.4.他是外向的。每個(gè)人都喜歡跟他說話。他與我們相處得很好。Heisoutgoing.Everyonelikestotalkwithhim.Hegetsonwellwithus.興趣/喜好1.聽音樂使我們能夠感覺輕松Listeningtomusicmakesusfeelrelaxed。2.我的業(yè)余愛好之一是看書。Oneofmyhobbiesisreading.3.當(dāng)我周末空閑的時(shí)候會(huì)讀書。IliketodosomereadingwhenIamfreeonSunday.4.我可以在晚上上網(wǎng)或者看電視。IcansurftheInternetorwatchTVatnight5.我有很多愛好，比如唱歌，閱讀，打籃球等等。Ihavealotofhobbieslikesinging,reading,playingbasketballandsoon.6.我的愛好使我很放松，還能使我的生活更加豐富多彩。Myhobbiesmakemefeelrelaxedandmakemylifemorecolorful.7.只會(huì)學(xué)習(xí)不玩耍，聰明孩子也變傻。AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.訴說煩惱1.我不被允許看電視、上網(wǎng)或聽音樂。IamnotallowedtowatchTV,surftheInternetorlistentomyfavouritemusic.2.我希望你能給我一些有用的建議。Ihopeyoucangivemesomeusefuladvice.3.我經(jīng)常熬夜寫作業(yè)，課上犯困。Ioftenstayuplatedoingmyhomeworkandfeelsleepyinclass.4.我沒有足夠的時(shí)間做我自己的事。Idon’thaveenoughtimetodomyownthings..5.一些同學(xué)把他們的問題告訴老師和家長(zhǎng)。Somestudentswilltelltheirteachersorparentsabouttheirproblems6.我認(rèn)為當(dāng)我們有困難時(shí)最好向老師、父母和朋友尋求幫助。Ithinkwe’dbetteraskourteachers,parentsandfriendsforhelpwhenweareintrouble.7.我認(rèn)為中國的父母對(duì)他們的孩子太嚴(yán)格了。Inmyopinion,Chineseparentsaretoostrictwiththeirchildren網(wǎng)絡(luò)1.我們可以在網(wǎng)上查閱資料。Wecansearchtheinformationontheinternet.2.現(xiàn)在的年輕人在網(wǎng)上購物交友越來越流行了。Itisgettingmoreandmorepopulartoshopandmakefriendsonlinefortheyoungpeoplenowadays.3.我認(rèn)為這非常方便，能幫我們節(jié)省很多時(shí)間和錢。Itisconvenientanditcansaveusmuchtimeandmoney.學(xué)校和校園生活1.我們學(xué)校有許多花，像個(gè)美麗的花園。Therearemanyflowersinmyschool,itlookslikeabeautifulgarden.2.我希望我們學(xué)校能有一個(gè)大圖書館，里面有許多好書和雜志。Ihopeourschoolcanhaveabiglibraryandithasalotofnicebookormagazinesinit.我希望我們學(xué)校能更多的組織課外活動(dòng)，我們能有更多時(shí)間上體育、美