專題05：材料作文-2023年中考英語(yǔ)作文考前強(qiáng)化特訓(xùn)（四川成都）

專題05：材料作文-2023年中考英語(yǔ)作文考前強(qiáng)化特訓(xùn)（四川成都）學(xué)校:___________姓名：___________班級(jí)：___________考號(hào)一、材料作文1．在今年世界地球日(4月22日)的學(xué)?；顒?dòng)中，合唱團(tuán)演唱了一首節(jié)奏舒緩、飽含深情的英文歌曲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇樂(lè)評(píng)，向更多人推薦這首歌。WordBank:◆heal[v.]tomakesth.healthyagain◆monologue[n.]alongspeechinaplay,movie,song,etc.spokenbyoneactor◆generation[n.]allthepeoplewhowerebornataboutthesametime◆sorrow[n.]afeelingofgreatsadness◆entire[adj.]includingeverything,everyone,oreverypart;[SYN]whole要求：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；2.樂(lè)評(píng)須包含以上所給信息；3.寫(xiě)出推薦理由并適當(dāng)闡述，至少三條；3.注意文章邏輯，語(yǔ)句通順，有恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡和銜接；4.詞數(shù)：110詞左右。提示詞匯：世界地球日WorldEarthDay

合唱團(tuán)SchoolChorus

推薦[v.]recommend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．許多初中生害怕錯(cuò)過(guò)社交媒體上發(fā)生的事情，每天都會(huì)忍不住瀏覽社交媒體，這種現(xiàn)象叫做FOMO(FearofMissingOut錯(cuò)失恐懼癥)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)此現(xiàn)象，以“HowtoDealWithFOMO”為題寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道。HowtoDealWithFOMOinYourLife現(xiàn)象許多初中生害怕錯(cuò)過(guò)社交媒體上發(fā)生的事情，每天都會(huì)忍不住瀏覽社交媒體。原因①學(xué)習(xí)壓力大；②缺乏關(guān)愛(ài)；③對(duì)社交媒體的依賴建議①參加社團(tuán)活動(dòng)；②向老師或同學(xué)尋求幫助；③與家人多交流；④多讀紙質(zhì)書(shū)；⑤多進(jìn)行戶外運(yùn)動(dòng)提示詞：社交媒體socialmedia要求：1.文章必須包括以上所有內(nèi)容并撰寫(xiě)合理的結(jié)尾。語(yǔ)句通順，層次清晰，意思連貫；2.不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校等相關(guān)信息；3.100詞左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李欣，你校正在開(kāi)展“用英語(yǔ)講述你最喜歡的中國(guó)（電影、歌曲、發(fā)明……等）”為主題的視頻展評(píng)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示撰寫(xiě)視頻文稿。1.介紹你最喜歡的……的種類、名稱等基本信息；2.說(shuō)明你喜歡……的原因及你在欣賞（使用等）時(shí)的感受；3.對(duì)你視頻觀眾提出倡導(dǎo)及建議。注意：1.文稿須全面反映提示信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)80～100，開(kāi)頭已給出，且不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．每年的6月6日是全國(guó)愛(ài)眼日，請(qǐng)你結(jié)合學(xué)校英語(yǔ)社的愛(ài)眼宣傳海報(bào)，寫(xiě)一篇文章，結(jié)合學(xué)生近視現(xiàn)狀，分析近視的原因，介紹良好習(xí)慣并推薦專家建議，號(hào)召同學(xué)們養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，保護(hù)好視力。注意：1.你的文章應(yīng)包含以上所有信息；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右，標(biāo)題已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：myopia(n.)近視：nearsighted(adj.)近視的；regular(adj.)定期的ForaMoreBeautifulWorldinYourEyes____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．現(xiàn)在有很多學(xué)校給班級(jí)提供了一塊菜地，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生們吃苦耐勞的精神。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合下圖，寫(xiě)一篇短文，并談?wù)剟趧?dòng)帶給家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)生的變化。參考詞匯：勞動(dòng)labor

校園農(nóng)場(chǎng)schoolfarm要求：1.短文應(yīng)包含以上所有信息和圖片中的相關(guān)要點(diǎn)；2.短文應(yīng)格式正確，語(yǔ)句通順，句式多樣；3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Thesedays,manyschoolsprovideeachclasswithapieceoffieldtoplantvegetablestohelpmorestudentsgethard-workingspirit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．前幾天你見(jiàn)到了小學(xué)時(shí)候的好朋友。三年未見(jiàn)，他的變化很大。假設(shè)外教要求你寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于朋友的文章，請(qǐng)你以“MyFriendHasChanged”為題，根據(jù)以下提示完成這篇文章。過(guò)去的情況1、個(gè)頭矮小，學(xué)習(xí)不努力2、喜歡玩游戲3、淘氣，取笑別人現(xiàn)在的情況1、……2、……我的感受……要求：1、表達(dá)清楚，語(yǔ)法正確，上下文連貫；2、詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞）。MyFriendHasChangedLastweek,Imetmybestfriendinprimaryschool.Hehaschangedalot.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是林華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格中的信息以“MyChangesinLearningEnglish”寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹一下你進(jìn)初中兩年多來(lái)在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)方面的變化及經(jīng)驗(yàn)并簡(jiǎn)要地談?wù)勀銓?duì)某兩個(gè)學(xué)習(xí)方法的看法。剛進(jìn)七年級(jí)時(shí)現(xiàn)在打瞌睡，聽(tīng)課不認(rèn)真認(rèn)真記筆記不喜歡聽(tīng)磁帶，發(fā)音不準(zhǔn)盡可能多聽(tīng)害羞，害怕講英語(yǔ)主動(dòng)找同伴英語(yǔ)對(duì)話一個(gè)人學(xué)習(xí)小組合作…………提示：l.文章應(yīng)包含表格中的所有信息；不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校；2.字?jǐn)?shù)100詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．根據(jù)國(guó)家最新調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)，中國(guó)中小學(xué)生2020年總體近視率為52.7%。保護(hù)視力，刻不容緩。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖，結(jié)合你的生活經(jīng)驗(yàn)，寫(xiě)一篇短文。Theresultsofthesurveyonstudents’myoplarateinChinain2020要求：1.短文應(yīng)包括以上所有信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)學(xué)校和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。4.參考詞匯：myopiarate近視率；視力sight；近視的short-sightedAccordingtoasurveybytheChinesegovernmentin2020,themyopiarateofChinesestudentshasbeenupto52.7%.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．你校英文?？汀懊烙M(jìn)中考”這一新聞開(kāi)辟專欄，展開(kāi)討論。請(qǐng)以“Shouldhighschoolentranceexaminationincludemusicandart?”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文，并向該欄目投稿。要求：1.請(qǐng)先在答題卡上填寫(xiě)表中空格。2.寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容需要包含圖中所含信息，要轉(zhuǎn)述，不能完全照抄。3.表達(dá)你的觀點(diǎn)以及2點(diǎn)理由。（與圖中理由需要不同）注意：1.文章不得出現(xiàn)真真實(shí)校名和姓名；2.詞數(shù)120左右。參考詞匯：all-roundadj.全面的__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．在英語(yǔ)課堂上，英語(yǔ)老師要求學(xué)生分組討論“ShouldTeenagersGooutwithFriendsonWeekends?”，請(qǐng)按下面的討論記錄。View:理由：1.放松自己2.一起鍛煉3.參加志愿者活動(dòng)View:理由：1.學(xué)習(xí)、完成家庭作業(yè)2.做家務(wù)3.陪伴家人注意:1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；2.要求包括所有提示要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。ShouldTeenagersGooutwithFriendsonWeekends?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．例文OnApril22,ourSchoolChorussangasong,HealtheWorld,tocelebratetheWorldEarthDay.Thesongcameoutin1991andwassungbyMichaelJackson.Itencouragespeopletoprotectourworld.IfeelsomovedthatIwanttowriteamusicreviewtorecommendit.First,Michaelsingsthesongwithfulllove,whichtrulytouchesme.Besides,thelyricsareeasytounderstand,andeachsentencemakesusthinkalot.Last,thesongisworthspreadingbecauseithelpscallonpeopletotakeactionnow.Ihopeyou’lllovethesongandwecanhelpmakeourworldabetterplace.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)歌詞內(nèi)容和歌曲的信息寫(xiě)一篇樂(lè)評(píng)，從而推薦該歌曲。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文以第三人稱書(shū)寫(xiě)，時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)。第一段介紹作者創(chuàng)作歌曲的事，第二段介紹推薦原因，第三段總結(jié)?？梢試@主題準(zhǔn)確使用一定的語(yǔ)法、詞匯、短語(yǔ)和句型等；語(yǔ)言的表述要符合語(yǔ)法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)習(xí)慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。2．例文：HowtoDealWithFOMOManyjuniorhighschoolstudentsareafraidofmissingoutonwhat’shappeningonsocialmediaandcan’thelpbutbrowsesocialmediaeveryday.Thereasonwhysomanyteenagersaresofondofsurfingthesocialmediaisthattheyaresufferingfromthestressfromthestudy.Anotherreasonisthattheyneedtobecaredfor.Besides,theyrelytoomuchonsocialmedia.HowdothestudentsdealwithFOMO?First,wecanjointheclubs,suchasfootballclubandswimmingclub.Second,weshouldasktheteachersorclassmatesforhelp.Third,wecantalkwithfamilymemberswhenwearelonely.Fourth,domoreoutdoorexercise.Besides,readingmorepaperbooksisalsoagoodidea.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏表格中已給出的要點(diǎn)，用“HowtoDealWithFOMO”為題，介紹“錯(cuò)失恐懼癥”這一現(xiàn)象，出現(xiàn)的原因及自己的建議。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹錯(cuò)失恐懼癥這一現(xiàn)象；第二步，介紹出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因；第三步，具體介紹應(yīng)對(duì)錯(cuò)失恐懼癥的建議。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①juniorhighschool初中②beafraidof害怕③befondof喜歡④sufferfrom承受⑤dealwith應(yīng)對(duì)，處理[高分句型]①Thereasonwhysomanyteenagersaresofondofsurfingthesocialmediaisthattheyaresufferingfromthestressfromthestudy.（why引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句；that引導(dǎo)表語(yǔ)從句）②Third,wecantalkwithfamilymemberswhenwearelonely.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）3．例文：Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin.MyfavouritesongisLookupatthestarswhichissungbyZhangJie,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.Ilikethissongbestfortworeasons.First,thesongsoundsverylivelythatitcanmakemehappy.Second,thelyricsofthesongareinspiring.It’spossibleforeveryonetomeetdifficultyinlife.Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.Itcheersmeupandencouragesmetomoveon.Finally,Ihopeyouwillenjoythisvideoandgivemorevaluablecommentsonit.That’sall.Thanksforwatching.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作提示題目已經(jīng)給出，要圍繞寫(xiě)作提示進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，并可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，承接文章開(kāi)頭，并開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，指出自己最喜歡的中國(guó)電影、歌曲、發(fā)明等的基本信息；第二步，說(shuō)明喜歡它的原因及自己的感受；第三步，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)，并對(duì)視頻觀眾提出建議和倡導(dǎo)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befullof充滿②cheersb.up使某人振作起來(lái)③encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵(lì)某人做某事④moveon繼續(xù)前進(jìn)[高分句型]①I(mǎi)t’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.（that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）②Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.（whenever引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）4．參考范文ForaMoreBeautifulWorldinYourEyesJune6isNationalEyeCareDay.Asurveyshowsabadsituation:about38%offourthgradersarenearsighted,about68%foreighthgradersandabout81%forthoseinhighschool.Badhabitscausemyopia.Usingphonesinbedhurtseyes.Lyingonthesofawhilereadingisalsoharmful.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsforachange.Let’sdoeyeexercisesoftenandhaveregulareyesighttests.Weshouldfollowthe20/20/20rule:After20minutesofcomputeruse,weshouldlookatsomethinggreen20feetawayfor20seconds.It’stimetotakeactionforamorebeautifulworldinoureyes.(詞數(shù)108）【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)明文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)海報(bào)中的“信息提示”分析當(dāng)前的學(xué)生近視現(xiàn)狀，及原因，并給出建議，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹調(diào)查的結(jié)果；第二步，分析學(xué)生近視的原因；第三步，就“保護(hù)視力”提出建議；第四步，呼吁大家行動(dòng)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①onthesofa在沙發(fā)上②developgoodhabits養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣③doeyeexercises做眼保健操④takeaction采取行動(dòng)[高分句型]①Lyingonthesofawhilereadingisalsoharmful.(動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ))②It’stimetotakeactionforamorebeautifulworldinoureyes.(it固定句型；動(dòng)詞不定式作主語(yǔ))5．例文

Thesedays,manyschoolsprovideeachclasswithapieceoffieldtoplantvegetablestohelpmorestudentsgethard-workingspirit.

Inthepast,parentspaidmoreattentiontotheirchildren’sgrades,butnowtheyoftenencouragetheirchildrentodohousework.Asforthestudents,theyusedtostudyhardeveryday,andtherewasnotimeforthemtodeveloptheirhobbiesorrelax.Butnowstudentshavelesshomework,andtheycantakeuptheirhobbies,exerciseandsoonintheirsparetimeorweekends.Nowstudentshaveanextralaborclass.Throughthis,studentscanmastermanyusefullifeskills.Inaddition,theycanalsoexperiencethehardworkoffarmers.Athome,helpingparentsdohouseworkcanreducetheburdenofparents.

Inaword,laborisbeneficialandhonorable,anditisofgreatbenefittoourgrowth.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示寫(xiě)一篇作文，介紹勞動(dòng)帶給家長(zhǎng)和學(xué)生的變化。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹父母和學(xué)生以前以及現(xiàn)在的變化；第二步，具體介紹通過(guò)勞動(dòng)學(xué)生可以獲得什么；第三步，最后表達(dá)你的看法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①payattentionto注意②encouragesbtodosth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事③inaddition此外[高分句型]①Butnowstudentshavelesshomework,andtheycantakeuptheirhobbies,exerciseandsoonintheirsparetimeorweekends.（and連接兩個(gè)并列結(jié)構(gòu)）②helpingparentsdohouseworkcanreducetheburdenofparents.（動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)）6．Onepossibleversion:MyFriendHasChangedLastweek,Imetmybestfriendinprimaryschool.Hehaschangedalot.Atthattime,hewasshortandhedidn’tworkhardatstudies.Heoftenwentouttoplaygameswithotherchildren.Heusedtobeanaughtyboyandliketomakefunofothers.Laterhedeterminedtochange.Now,heistallandspendsmostofhistimereadingbooks.Asaresult,hebecomesatopstudentinhisschool.Helikesplayingbasketballverymuch.Heisn’tnaughtyanymore.Heoftenhelpshisparentswiththehousework.Thismakeshisparentsveryhappy.Seeingmyfriend’schanges,Ifeltproudandhappy.Ilearnfromhimthatonceyoumakeupyourmind,youcanachieveyourgoals.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的我的感受，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹朋友過(guò)去的情況；第二步，介紹朋友現(xiàn)在的情況；第三步，介紹自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①u(mài)sedtobe曾經(jīng)是②makefunof取笑③not...anymore不再[高分句型]Ilearnfromhimthatonceyoumakeupyourmind,youcanachieveyourgoals.（that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）7．例文：MyChangesinLearningEnglishWeallknowitisveryimportantforusstudentstodevelopgoodstudyhabits.Ihavebeeninjuniorhighschoolfortwoyears.IhavechangedalotinlearningEnglish.WhenIfirstwasintheseventhgrade,Ididn’tlistentotheteachercarefullyandalwaysdidthingsthathadnothingtodowiththeclass.MyEnglishpronunciationwasnotcorrectandmyclassmatesalwayslaughedatme.SoIwasveryafraidtospeakEnglishinpublic.Ialwaysstudiedalone,becauseIwasafraidtoaskmyclassmatesquestions.NowIhavedevelopedsomegoodhabitssuchaslisteningtoEnglishasmuchaspossible,takingnotescarefullyinclass,keepingEnglishdiariesandsoon.IalsomakedialogueswithmyclassmatesinEnglish.IoftenimprovemyEnglishthroughgroupstudy.Inaword,developinggoodhabitsisveryimportanttoEnglishlearning.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)結(jié)合“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”、“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意剛進(jìn)七年級(jí)時(shí)的情況和現(xiàn)在的情況的對(duì)比，在包含所有要點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，引出主題“在英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)上有很多變化”；第二步，通過(guò)今昔對(duì)比來(lái)突出自己的變化；第三步，收尾。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①juniorhighschool初中②laughat嘲笑③beafraidtodosth.害怕做某事④inaword總而言之[高分句型]①WhenIfirstwasintheseventhgrade,Ididn’tlistentotheteachercarefullyandalwaysdidthingsthathadnothingtodowiththeclass.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；and連接并列謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)；that引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句）②Ialwaysstudiedalone,becauseIwasafraidtoaskmyclassmatesquestions.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句）8．例文AccordingtoasurveybytheChinesegovernmentin2020,themyopiarateofChinesestudentshasbeenupto52.7%Manyfactorsleadtothemyopiaproblem.Withthepopularityofdigitalproducts,anincreasingnumberofstudentsfixtheireyesonthescreenatleast4hourseveryday.Moreoveracademicburdenforcesstudentstooverusetheireyeswhichworsensthesituation.Weshouldtakeactiontodealwiththeproblem.First,thegovernmentshouldupdatetherelevantrulestoreduceschooltimeensuringthestudentstouseeyesless.Second,westudentsshouldsaynototoomuchuseofelectronicdevices.Sinceeyesarethewindowofoursoul,weshouldtakemeasurestoprotectthem.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題是一篇材料作文，結(jié)合題干提示，介紹2020年中學(xué)生近視率的結(jié)果，分析導(dǎo)致近視的原因，以及給出相應(yīng)保護(hù)視力的建議。2.寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，首先開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題說(shuō)中國(guó)中小學(xué)生2020年總體近視率為52.7%；其次分析導(dǎo)致近視的因素，并提出相應(yīng)的建議保護(hù)視力；最后呼吁大家行動(dòng)起來(lái)保護(hù)好自己的視力。注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰、無(wú)拼寫(xiě)和語(yǔ)法使用錯(cuò)誤。9．1.for；2.against范文：Shouldhighschoolentranceexaminationincludemusicandart?Recentlywehavediscussedwhether