高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+圣誕前夕的善意傳遞 課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習圣誕前夕的善意傳遞1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Thelineofcustomerssnakedaroundthecounter(柜臺).TherewerejusttwomoreshoppingdaysbeforeChristmas,andmostoftheshoppersinlinewereinpanicmode.Oneofthosecustomerswasmyhusband,Dale.Daleisoneofthosepeoplewhoaretheno-nonsenseshopperswhodependonfastservicebecauseeveryminutecountsasthecountdownbeforeChristmascontinues.Buttheserviceherewasanythingbutfast.Theproblemwastheelderlyladyatthefrontoftheline,whokepttalkinghappilytothesalesgirlworkingatthecashregister.4續(xù)寫原文“Thissweaterisformygranddaughter,”theladyexplained.“She’sgoingtobeateacher,youknow.Andshe’sdoingverywell.Shehasaveryniceboyfriendwhoisanarchitecturaltechnician.He’sjuststartedajobwithagoodcompany,butyouknow,wehaven’tseenanysignofaringyet.Youngpeopleseemtowaitsolongthesedays.Why,IwasmarriedwithonechildandanotheroneonthewaywhenIwasherage.”O(jiān)nandonshetalkedasshepainstakinglycountedoutherchange,unawareofthewindingsnakeofcustomersbehindher.Whenshefinallyzippedherpurseshutandpickedupherparcel,theclerkgesturedtothemannextinline.5續(xù)寫原文“Thankyou,dearie.”Shestartedtomoveslowly,checkingthecontentsofhershoppingbag.Shewasalmosttotheendofthecounterwhensuddenlysheturnedback.“Oops!Excuseme,what’sthisfor?”sheasked,holdingupapieceofpaper.“It’sadiscountcoupon(優(yōu)惠券)thatwillgiveyou15percentoffyournextpurchasehereatthestore,”repliedthesalesgirl.“Well,thankyou,mydear,butIwon'tbeneedingthis,”shebeamed.“Here,youcanuseitrightnow!”shesaid,handingittothemannextinline.Theman'seyeswidened,andhemumbled(嘟囔)awordofthanksasshewalkedtothedoor.6段首句Paragraph1：Thenanamazingthinghappened.Paragraph2：Thethirdday,unlikethefirsttwotimes,shegavemealittlehalf-smile.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了在圣誕前夕，排隊購物的顧客們本因時間緊迫而心情焦急，卻因一位老人的舉動而發(fā)生了改變。老人與收銀員開心地聊天，結(jié)賬后將優(yōu)惠券送給了后面的顧客。這一行為引發(fā)了連鎖反應，顧客們依次傳遞優(yōu)惠券，原本緊張的氛圍變得溫馨和諧，大家都感受到了人與人之間的善意。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thenanamazingthinghappened.在圣誕前夕，購物的人們排著長隊，隊伍彎彎曲曲像蛇一樣繞著柜臺。大家都很著急，因為離圣誕節(jié)只剩下兩天了。我的丈夫戴爾也在隊伍里，他一向追求高效快速的購物。然而，前面一位老人卻一直在和收銀員聊天，絲毫沒有意識到后面的顧客正心急如焚。她詳細地講述著孫女的事情，還在慢慢數(shù)著零錢。終于她結(jié)完賬，卻又發(fā)現(xiàn)了優(yōu)惠券，把它遞給了下一位顧客。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：BythetimethecouponreachedDale,hefeltlikehewaspartofsomethingspecial.接下來神奇的事情發(fā)生了，接過優(yōu)惠券的人并沒有自己使用，而是轉(zhuǎn)身遞給了后面的人。這個舉動在隊伍里不斷傳遞，大家都在傳遞著這份善意。當優(yōu)惠券傳到戴爾手中時，他也被這溫馨的氛圍感染了。他感受到了人與人之間的溫暖，原本焦急的心情也緩和了許多。大家都因為這小小的優(yōu)惠券，有了不一樣的購物體驗。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thelineofcustomerssnakedaroundthecounter.TherewerejusttwomoreshoppingdaysbeforeChristmas,andmostoftheshoppersinlinewereinahurry.Dale,myhusband,wasamongthem,eagertogetthroughtheshoppingquickly.Theelderlyladyatthefrontofthelinewaschattinghappilywiththesalesgirl.Shewasexplainingaboutthesweaterforhergranddaughter,talkingabouthergranddaughter'slifeandboyfriend.Aftershefinallyfinishedcountingherchangeandpickedupherparcel,shenoticedthediscountcouponandpassedittothemannextinline.14范文呈現(xiàn)Thenanamazingthinghappened.Themanwhoreceivedthecouponpasseditontothepersonbehindhim,andthispatterncontinueddowntheline.Eachpersonwhoreceivedthecoupon,insteadofusingitforthemselves,passeditontothenextpersoninline.BythetimethecouponreachedDale,hefeltlikehewaspartofsomethingspecial.Hesmiledandpassedthecoupontothepersonbehindhim,realizingthatthissimpleactofkindnesshadturnedthewholeshoppingexperiencearound.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thelineofcustomerssnakedaroundthecounter.WithonlytwoshoppingdaysleftbeforeChristmas,mostshopperswereinarush.Dale,myhusband,wasnoexception,eagertogetthroughtheshoppingquickly.Theelderlyladyatthefrontoftheline,whowaschattinghappilywiththesalesgirl,seemedcompletelyunawareoftheimpatientcustomersbehindher.Shepainstakinglycountedoutherchangewhilesharingdetailsabouthergranddaughter'slifeandherboyfriend.Aftershefinallyfinishedcountingherchangeandpickedupherparcel,shenoticedthediscountcouponandpassedittothemannextinline.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thenanamazingthinghappened.Themanwhoreceivedthecouponpasseditontothepersonbehindhim,andthispatterncontinueddowntheline.Eachpersonwhoreceivedthecoupon,insteadofusingitforthemselves,passeditontothenextpersoninline.BythetimethecouponreachedDale,hefeltlikehewaspartofsomethingspecial.Hesmiled