考點14 高中英語寫作技巧-新高考英語一輪總復習（上海專用）（解析版）

PAGE1考點14高中英語寫作技巧課前熱身練（2023春·上?！とA師大二附中?？迹〥irections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.現在城市里有很多家庭請家政服務(housekeepingservice)，請你對此現象發(fā)表你的看法。內容必須包括：◆概述城市里有很多家庭請家政服務現象◆此現象對家庭和社會產生的影響◆你對此現象的看法__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.Thisphenomenonhasvariouseffectsonthefamilyandsociety.First,housekeepingcansavetimetodootherthings.Officeworkersincreasinglyneedthehelpofhousekeepingservicestohelpthemsavefromtedioushouseholdchoresanddevotethemselvestomeaningfulthings.Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.Finally,housekeepingcanalsobringconveniencetoparents.Duetotheparticularityofwork,suchasdoctors,trafficpolicemaynotbeabletogohomeduringtheNewYear.Inthiscase,itisagoodchoicetofindadomestichelperoroccasionallycallanhourlyworker.Therefore,Ithinkthehousekeepingserviceisnecessary.【導語】本文是一篇說明文。要求考生針對城市很多家庭請家政服務現象進行概述，分析這一現象對家庭和社會產生的印象，以及考生對此的看法。【詳解】1.詞匯積累表明：show→indicate產生影響：haveeffectson→haveinfluenceon由于：dueto→becauseof選擇：choice→option2.句式拓展原句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsafterforminganewfamily.拓展句：Housekeepingcanhelpyoungcouplesmaintainfamilyrelationsandreducefamilyconflictsaftertheyhaveformedanewfamily.【點睛】【高分句型1】Wecanoftenseereportsthatthehousekeepingindustryisinastateofshortage,whichshowsmoreandmorepeoplehirehousekeeping.（運用了that引導同位語從句，運用了which引導非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Secondly,ithelpstoreducefamilyconflictsandpromotefamilyharmony.（運用了動詞不定式作賓語）核心考點梳理想寫好作文第一件事是準備一個作文素材積累本?。?！把老師平時講的、閱讀翻譯中遇到的地道表達都記下來并經常復習。（一）高考作文?？碱愋蜁蓬悾航ㄗh信、申請信、投訴信等；議論或夾敘夾議；話題類：說明、議論或夾敘夾議；圖表類：說明+議論；漫畫類：描寫+議論。（二）作文評分標準一）評分標準1、本題總分為25分，其中內容10分，語言10分，組織結構5分。4、詞數少于70，總分最多不超過10分。檔次內容語言組織結構得分A9—109—104—520-25分B7—87—8316-19分C5—65—6212-15分D3—43—417-11分E0—20—200-6分各檔次給分要求：內容部分A．內容充實，主題突出，詳略得當。B．內容較充實，能表達出作文要求。C．內容基本充實，尚能表達出作文要求。D．漏掉或未能寫清楚主要內容，有些內容與主題無關。E．明顯遺漏主要內容，嚴重離題。語言部分具有很好的語言表達能力，語法結構正確或有些小錯誤，主要因為使用了較復雜結構或詞匯所致。具有較強的語言表達能力，語法結構和詞匯的應用基本正確，錯誤主要因為嘗試較復雜結構或詞匯所致。有一些語法結構和詞匯方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。語法結構與詞匯錯誤較多，影響了對內容的理解。語法結構與詞匯的錯誤很多，影響了對內容的理解。組織結構部分自然地使用了語句間的連接成分，全文流暢結構緊湊。句子結構多樣，詞匯豐富。能使用語句間連接成分，全文流暢結構緊湊。句子結構多樣，詞匯較豐富。能使用簡單的語句間連接成分，全文內容連貫。句子結構有一定的變化，詞匯使用得當。尚能使用語句間連接成分，語言連貫性較差，句子結構單調，詞匯貧乏。缺乏語句間的連接成分，語言不連貫。詞不達意。二）閱卷評分實例Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.請簡要描述圖片，并結合圖片內容談談自己的想法。7+8+5=20Thepictureshowsaboywithaspreadpairofwings,andacoupleofparentswithahugepairofscissors,goingtooperateontheirchild’sbeautifulwings.Whatwecanseeintheparents’eyesisexpectation,insharpcontrastwiththesadnessintheboy’s.Thepicturejustremindsthesimilaroperationofmyown,whenIwasakidwhohadjuststartedprimaryschool.Ialwaysenjoyedmyselfinthenature,whichwaswideenoughtospreadmywingsandflytothefun.However,asmyagesgrew,myparentsstartedtopullthefeatherofffrommywings.Sincethen,Ihadnoalternativebuttoberestrictedintheroom,workinghardontheacademicsubjectsbythewindowinsteadofsettingmyselffreeintheair.Imusthaveargued,criedandshouted,butitwasofnouse.Atthatpoint,IcouldjusttellthatIfeelsobounded.IthoughtIwasnotdoingbadinschoolsoIshouldearnmytimeofplaying.Itdidn’tnecessarilymeanplayinggamesorotherthings,butthefreedomtofollowmyinterestanddevelopthembeforeitwastoolate.SoIcantotallyunderstandtheboyinthepicture,andwishhimabrightfuture.7+6+3=16Thiscriticalpicturedescribesaphenomenonthatparentsarecuttingtheirchild’swings,whichimplysthatnowadaysmoreandmoreparentsarekillingtheirchild’screativityandfreedom,ignoringthattheirchild’sdisappointmentandsadness,inordertomaketheirchildaso-called“great”student.Ihavealsoexperiencedthisbefore,onceIwasinthejuniorhighschool.Oneday,ourteachertoldusthatourschoolisgoingtoorganizesomeclubactivitiesonFridayafternoon,includingsomeacademicclubsandsomeclubswhichaftergreatopportunitiestotakepartinsocialactivities.AsIwasastudentwhowasinteretedinsocialactivities,Iwasdyingfortakingpartinaclublikethelaterone.But,myparentsdon’tagreewithme,theythoughtthatthechieftaskofastudentislearningsotheyforcedmetojoinanacademicclub.Iwassodisappointedatthetime,becauseIfoundthatIdon’thavetherighttomakemyownchoice,nottosaycreatesomethingIlike.ButIdon’thavetheforcetorejectmyparentsdecision,andIfoundmyselfbecomeafollowerofmyparents.Thesethigsarecommoninourreallife,eventoday;manyparentsstillimposetheirownopinionsontheirchild.Thiscanhaveabadinfluenceonoursocietyandourgenerationmaylackofcreativity,sowhydon’twestopit?6+6+2=14Asisvividlyshowedinthepicture,acouplestandsbehindtheirchildandthemencutsoffchild’swingswithhissessioncruelly.However,thiskindofpicturelotsmerecallmypersonalmemory.WhenIwas10yearsold,Iwasaddictedtodancingandwantedtobeadancerinthefuture.Sincemydanceteacherpraisedmeandgavemecouragetoachievemydream.ItoldmyparentsthatIhadapassionondancingandwouldliketotakepartinadancecompetition.Neverthless,myparentrefusedmyrequestanddidn’tallowedmetodanceanymore.Needlesstosay,theythoughtthemostcrucialthingformeistoenteraexcellentcollege.Sotheydisaggreedmyopinion.ButasfarasIamconcerned,parentshouldencourangetheirchildrentocultivatetheirinterestratherthanmerelylearnsomeknowledgefrombooks.5+6+2=13Asisclearlyshowninthepicture,acoupleareshapingtheirson’swingsintotheshapetheywant.Butthelittleboylooksreluctant.Itcanbesimplyinferedfromthepicturethattheartistwantsparentstoallowtheirchildrentogrownaturally.Andthat’swhatIamfor,too.BecauseImyselfgotbenefitsfromthefreegrowthduringmychildhood.WhenIwasabouteight,myparentswantedmetobeapianoist,whichwasthecommonideaofmanyparentsatthattime.However,Ididn’tlikeplayingthepianoatall.WhyshouldIstepintoafieldwhichIwasnotinterestedin?“Interestisthebestdrivingforce.”SoItoldthemaboutmyopinions.Fortunately,myparentsagreedandletmechoosetheskillIwantedtolearn.IsignedupfortheNewConceptEnglish.NeverhasanyonewonmecompletelyinEnglishevenonce!ItmustbethemagicofinterestthatmakeEnglishastrongarmofmine.Whynotletchildrencultivatetheirinterestandstriveforitthemselves?Everyoneisunique.Ifallflowersarethesame,thenaturewon’tbebeautifulanymore.5+5+2=12Asthepictureshows,theboyhasabeautifulwingbuthisfatherisgoingtocutitwithouthesitation.Hismotherfeeldesperatebutcan’tdoanythingwithoutlookherchild.Alltheboycandoisstandthereandwaitingforthefirstbutlastcut.Thepicturetouchedmealot.Itrecalledmydeepmemoizeinmyheart.IstillrememberwhenIwasthenyearsold,Iwaskeenonpainting.Teachersandfriendswereflavouredofmywork.Butwiththestressfulcamefromstudy,Ihadtoputdownmyinterestingthingsbutgotostudy.Likemanyofpeers,wearetheonlychildinourfamily.Parentsholdgiantexpectationsonus.Toliveuptotheirexpectation,wehadtoburyourselvesintothebookandextralessons.WhatIfeltthoseyearswassadnessbutIcouldn'tcompliantevenaword,orIwouldmakethemsad.Ithinkparentsshouldn’tcutthetalentiftherekidsaregoodatsomething.Theyshouldcultivateitnotfocusthemonwhattheypaylessinteresting.That’sallIfeltwiththepicture.2+4+1=7Asisvividlyshowninthepicture,theboy’sfatherwanttocuttheboy’sdreamtomakeboyfollowtheparents’way.AsfarasI’mconcerned,thechildshouldhavetheirowndreamstoliveintheworldandgrewup.Tobeginwith,itisgoodforchildrentohavetheirowndreams.Itistheirlifegoalandtheycansparenoefforttochallengeallthetroublewithoutcomplaintment.What’smore,children’sowndreamscanhelpthemmoveindepenceandtheycanlivehappierwithoutparents.Finally,changechildren’sdreamswillincreasethegenerationalgapbetweenchildrenandparents.Allinall,Ithinkthatasforchildren,theyoughttofollowtheirowndreamsandforparents,theyareessentialtoencouragetheirchildren.Itishightimeforchildrentofollowtheirowndreams.（三）寫作步驟一）審題審清題目，注意不要偏題，不要遺漏內容。如下面這道題，很多同學在寫的時候寫完開頭直接開始提建議了，漏掉描述自己的高中學習生活，這樣導致分很低，因為內容定檔。所以大家一定要注意審題。Direction：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.你的表弟Frank即將踏入高中學習，請你寫一封信給他，在信中簡要描述你自己的高中學習生活，并以此給他的高中學習生活提些建議。（建議可以包括：規(guī)劃好日常生活、找到適合自己的學習方法、多參加課外活動等）二）分段、列提綱作文一般都分成3段，開頭—主體—結尾。分好段后用中文列一個簡單的中文提綱，讓自己的思路更清晰，也能節(jié)省后面的寫作時間。如上面這篇作文可作如下提綱：開頭（寫信背景和目的）：恭喜進入高中，分享經驗。1.描述自己高中學習主體1)規(guī)劃好日常生活2.提建議：2)學習方法3)多參加課外活動結尾（總結）：希望度過充實的3年三）過渡詞兩個方面：Foronething,Foranother/Ononehand,ontheotherhand三個方面：首先其次最后總結firstandforemostinthefirstplacefirstofalltobeginwithadditionally/inadditioninthesecondplacewhat’smoremoreover/furthermorebesideslastbutnotleasttoputitinanutshelltosumupashasbeenmentionedinconclusiontakingeverythingintoconsideration四）遣詞造句1、運用萬能單詞和萬能句型萬能單詞萬能單詞不用并不影響句子，但用上確能給句子增添一點色彩。詞義萬能單詞例句毫無疑問undoubtedly；unquestionablyUndoubtedly/Apparently/Undeniably/surely,extracurricularactivities

(apparently)playasignificantroleinmyphysicalandmentaldevelopment.顯然地obviously；apparently不可否認undeniably一定surely/definitely萬能句型使用萬能句型能讓簡單句變成復合句，每篇文章可以用1到2句。詞義萬能句型例句毫無疑問Thereisnodoubtthat...Thereisnodoubtthatmoreandmorepeoplewillusecomputersatjobinthefuture.不可否認Thereisnodenyingthat...Noonecandenythat...ThereisnodenyingthatourschoolnewspaperinEnglishservesasanexcellentfoodforthoughttargetingusstudents.不言而喻Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthatonlywithalargeamountofknowledgefromeveryaspectcanwecreatepracticalideasinsteadofavaindream.普遍認為Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatcertainamountofplayingtimeplaysanimportantroleinchildren’sgrowth.不用說needlesstosayNeedlesstosay,lessclosecontactwithothersdoeshavebadeffectsonourrelationship.運用以上所學知識寫一個段落關于“寫信給朋友提建議：如何克服考試焦慮”。句首句已給出。Howtoovercometestanxiety?Howtoovercometestanxiety?Firstandforemost,thereisnodoubtthatitis,toalargeextent,vitalandsignificantforyoutomakeacarefulpreparation,consequently,someeffectivepracticeisbadlyneeded.Additionally,noonecandenyhavingapositiveattitudeisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,whichcanmakeyoudiligentandintelligent.Lastbutnotleast,needlesstosay,ifIwereyou,Iwouldtakeadeepbreathbeforewritingthetestpaper,consideringthatitwillhelpusconcentrateonourtestandbemoreconfident.Ifyoucarryoutthesemethods,Iamsureyouwillachieveanamazingsuccessinyourtest.總結書信提建議的句型：①itisbeneficial/advisable/significantforsbtodosth②youaresupposedtodo③doingsthisapparentlyofgreathelptoyou,which...④IfIwereyou,Iwould...2、運用高級詞匯和詞組（詳見教案15）高級詞匯高級詞匯指的是一些實詞要用高中詞匯書上的詞匯，而盡量少用初中詞匯。比如我們寫某事重要時不用初中學的important，而用高中詞匯vital/significant/critical/crucial等。高級詞組高級詞組指寫作能用詞組的地方一定要用詞組，詞組的靈活使用是高分作文的必備條件，所以要多積累和仿寫。比如我們寫考慮某事時不用單詞consider，而用詞組takesthintoaccount/consideration。3、運用高級句型（詳見教案16）高級句型使用高級句型能讓句子多樣化，為作文加分的必備項！作文中要多使用從句、非謂語、強調倒裝、虛擬語氣、被動語態(tài)等。比如用定語從句寫旅游的益處：Thereisnodenyingthattravelingisasignificantwaytobroadenourhorizons,whichenrichespeople’smindandexperience.寫作中常用諺語背誦：1.Missedchanceswillneverreturn.機不可失，失不再來。2.Easiersaidthandone.說起來容易做起來難.3.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成.4.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍,聰明孩子也變傻.5.It’snevertoooldtolearn.活到老,學到老.6.Romewasnotbuiltinaday.偉業(yè)非一日之功.7.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情.8.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母.9.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行動勝過語言.10.Everymanhashisfaults.金無足赤,人無完人.11.Nopains,nogains.不勞無獲。12.Nothingistoodifficulttoawillingheart.俗話說，世上無難事，只怕有心人。五）檢查寫完之后一定要留時間檢查一遍，注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)、人稱等。平時寫作時一定要養(yǎng)成檢查的習慣。先自己檢查，然后可以同學之間相互檢查，培養(yǎng)自己的糾錯能力，最后拿給老師檢查。當堂知識檢測1．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.最近明啟中學對教師是否會被人工智能取代這一話題開展了調查，調查結果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學生李華，請就此話題談談你的看法，寫一篇150-180的作文，文章內容需涵蓋：1.簡要描述圖表；2.你認為教師是否會被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificialintelligence,while56%saidno.Personallyspeaking,teacherswon’tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducatingpeople,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers’labor,andcannotreplacetheroleofteachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyarefarfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobsthatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于圖表作文，最近明啟中學對教師是否會被人工智能取代這一話題開展了調查，調查結果如下圖。假如你是該校高三學生李華，請就此話題談談你的看法，寫一篇150-180的作文，文章內容需涵蓋：1.簡要描述圖表；2.你認為教師是否會被人工智能取代；3.你的理由?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累取代：replace→supersede擁有：possess→takepossessionof重要的：important→significant也就是說：thatistosay=inotherwords2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.【點睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.(運用了because引導的原因狀語從句和which引導的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.(運用了現在分詞作狀語)2．假設你是光明中學高三學生李明。近期，年級組正在策劃18歲成人禮儀式，其中一個環(huán)節(jié)為“說說你的故事”，籌備組現面向本校全體高三學生征集真實故事案例。請給籌備組寫一封郵件，內容須包括：1)你印象最深的一件事情；2)此事對你的啟發(fā)和影響。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DuringthepastthreeyearsintheGuangmingseniorhighschool,Ihavehadmanyunforgettableexperiences.Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.Inordertowinthecompetition,weallwentforit.Duringtheweekbeforethecompetition,wepractisedsinginginourfreetime.Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.Thankstooureffort,wewonthefirstprize.Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.Themovementremindedmeofanoldsaying-Nopains,nogains.Itwashardwork,butduringthecourseofpreparation,wedevelopeddeepfriendship,confidenceaswellasunderstanding!【導語】本文是一篇開放作文。年級組正在策劃18歲成人禮儀式，要求考生給籌備組寫一封郵件說說自己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事對自己的啟發(fā)和影響。【詳解】1.詞匯積累難忘的：unforgettable→memorable為了：inorderto→inaneffortto困難的：hard→tough由于：thanksto→owingto2.句式拓展同義句原句：Hearingtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.拓展句：Whenweheardtheexcitingnews,wewereallwildwithjoy.【高分句型1】Oneofthemostunforgettablethingswaswhenourclasspreparedforagroupsingingcompetition.（運用了when引導的表語從句）【高分句型2】Althoughitwasahardjob,everyparticipanttookitseriouslyanddidtheirbest.（運用了although引導的讓步狀語從句）3．假設你是明啟中學高三學生李華，目前擔任學校社團負責人。近期，你校被評為社團明星學校，為了在報紙上分享你校社團情況，請你以“ClubsinMySchool”為題，寫一篇文章，內容須包含：1.對你校社團進行分類；2.具體描述每一類社團的特色。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:ClubsinMySchoolToenrichstudents’life,ourschoolorganizesavarietyofclubsinmyschool.Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.Generallyspeaking,theclubsinmyschoolcanbeclassifiedintotwotypes:sportsclubandartclub.Sportsclubarepopularamongstudents.Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.Sostudentstherecanmakefriends.Besides,theycannotonlyplaysportsinfreetime,butalsotheycanlearnsomesportsskills.Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.Also,itprovidesstudentssomeknowledgeaboutart.Meanwhile,studentstherecanhavetheaccesstotheinstrument,suchaspiano,Erhuandsoon.Allthestudentsinmyschoolliketheclubs.SoIthinktheclubsareverysignificant.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生以“ClubsinMySchool”為題，寫一篇文章，內容須包含學生對校社團進行分類，并具體描述每一類社團的特色。【詳解】1.詞匯積累等等：andsoon→andthelike此外：Besides→Inaddition機會：chance→opportunity同時：Meanwhile→Atthesametime2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Artclubincludingmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.拓展句：Artclubwhichincludesmusicclub,paintingclubandsoon,givesstudentsachancetoadmiretheart.【高分句型1】Almosteverystudentinourschoolparticipatesinaclub,whichmakestheirschoollifecolorful.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Therearebasketballclub,footballclub,swimmingclubandsoon,whichareorganizedbystudentswiththesameinterest.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)4．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.學校學生會準備為文學社、英語社、體育社、藝術社等各社團招募新成員。假如你是其中一個社團的負責人，請你寫一篇宣傳稿介紹你們社團的情況。文章必須包括：●簡單介紹你們社團的特色或優(yōu)勢●簡要描述你們社團的發(fā)展規(guī)劃___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】I’mLiHua,theorganizeroftheEnglishclub.Ifoundedthisclubtoincreasestudents’interestinEnglishandimprovestudents’oralEnglishskills.WehaveEnglishclubgameseveryweekend.Studentscanplayfreely,thusimprovingtheirconfidenceinlearningEnglish.Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.Inaddition,wealsoinvitesometeacherstoguideusonhowtoperformEnglishdramaseverytwoweeks.Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.Lookingforwardtoyourjoiningus.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生作為學校其中一個社團的負責人，寫一篇宣傳稿介紹社團的情況，簡單介紹社團的特色或優(yōu)勢，并描述社團的發(fā)展規(guī)劃?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：found→setup有興趣：showinterestin→beinterestedin此外：inaddition→besides繼續(xù)：continue→goon2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities.Theywillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.拓展句：Thissemester,wewillcontinuetocarryoutspecialtrainingactivities,whichwillexpandstudents’Englishknowledge.【點睛】【高分句型1】Forexample,wewillorganizeEnglishdramaperformances,whichmanystudentswillcometowatchandshowtheirinterestin.（運用了which引導非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Ifyouwanttobecomeamemberoftheclub,youwillbefreetopracticeEnglisheveryweekend.（運用了if引導條件狀語從句）5．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明啟中學的學生李明，學校準備開展“發(fā)現春天”的社會實踐活動，并在校園網上征集大家的意見，請你發(fā)貼簡要闡述你的設計方案。內容需要包括：1）活動線路與內容。2）推薦理由。

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madame,

Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled“DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedtopresentmydesign.

Itismysuggestionthatallteachersandstudentstakepartinoutdoorhiking.TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.AllstudentsarerequiredtotakeaplasticbagtopickuprubbishthrownbytouristsonthewayandinBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagestudentscanvisitthevillagetobuyhand-madearticlesmadebycraftsmenandenrichthemwithcolorfullocalculture.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,tostartwith,it'sabetterchoicetohelpstudentsdevelopakindofbearinghardshipsspiritwhichishelpfulfortheirfuturelife.Besides,Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.Inaddition,allstudentsneedanoccasiontoescapeforawhilefromtheirhardstudyandhaveagoodrest.

Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yours,LiMing【導語】本篇書面表達是一篇意見征集，要求考生以李明的身份為學校即將開展的“發(fā)現春天”社會實踐活動建言獻策，并闡述你的設計方案。【詳解】1.詞匯積累非常：very→morethan參加：takepartin→participatein購買：buy→purchase有益的：behelpful→bebeneficial2.句式拓展并列句變簡單句原句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillageanditisthirtykilometerslong.拓展句：TherouteisfromourschooltoBeiHaiFolkCultureVillagewithalengthofthirtykilometers.【點睛】【高分句型1】Knowingthatourschoolwillholdasocialpracticeactivitytitled“DiscoveringSpring”,Iamverydelightedtopresentmydesign.（現在分詞短語作狀語和that引導的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Studentsareencouragedtopickuprubbishonthegroundtoraisetheirawarenessofenvironmentprotection.（被動語態(tài)、非謂語動詞短語）課后鞏固提高6．Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假設你是明啟中學高三學生李明，最近學生會對本校全體學生進行了一項關于“博物館免費開放政策”的問卷調查，結果如下表所示，寫一篇調查報告，內容須包括：1)對調查結果的簡單描述;2)對數據的原因分析;3)你的看法。1博物館免費情況下會考慮67.86%2免費才去3.57%3持無所謂態(tài)度28.57%___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe"freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums"amongseniorhighschoolstudents.Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.3.57%ofstudentswentforfree.28.57%holdtheindifferentattitude.Butwhataccountsforthehugegapbetweenstudents?Inmyopinion,67.86%ofthestudentsmayliketostudybutthefamilyconditionsarenotgood,thereisnosuchexpenditure,sotheywillconsiderfreeofcharge.3.57%ofstudentsarenotinterestedinmuseumsbecausetheydonotlovestudying,soitisfreeforthemtogo.However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferentbecausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseumstoincreasetheirknowledge.Theywillgothereanyway.Personally,undertheconditionoffree,studentsshouldvisitthereregularlytolearnsomeextracurricularknowledge,whichwillbeofgreathelptoenrichtheirexperience,broadenourknowledgeandmakeusaknowledgeableperson.【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。假設你是明啟中學高三學生李明，最近學生會對本校全體學生進行了一項關于“博物館免費開放政策”的問卷調查，結果如下表所示，寫一篇調查報告，內容須包括：對調查結果的簡單描述；對數據的原因分析；你的看法?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累免費：freeofcharge→forfree→fornothing有益的：beofgreathelp→behelpful就個人而言：personally→inone’sopinion拓寬：broaden→widen2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveyonthe“freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums”amongseniorhighschoolstudents.拓展句：Recently,Iconductedaquestionnairesurveywhichisonthe“freeadmissionpolicyofmuseums”amongseniorhighschoolstudents.【點睛】【高分句型1】Asisshowninthepicture,67.86%ofstudentswouldconsidermuseumsfreeofcharge,whichreallysurprisesme.（運用了as和which引導的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】However,28.57%ofthestudentsareindifferentbecausetheirfamilyconditionsaregoodandtheyliketogotomuseum