2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+從恐懼到無畏：我的攀巖之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從恐懼到無畏：我的攀巖之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Adozenchildrenranaroundlaughingandplayinginmyfriend’syard,whileweparentssatchattingandsippingcool-summerdrinks.Thebarbecuehadbeenclearedawaywhenourhostannouncedasurprise.Ahugetruckbackedupthelong,narrowdriveway,capturingeveryone’sattention.Adultsandchildrenwatchedwithcuriosityasthedrivergotout,andslowlyraisedahuge,portablerockwall.Itwasabouttwelvefeetwide,madeofgrayplasticwithindented(凹陷的)footholdsthatstretchedstraightupforwhatlookedlikeatleastahundredfeet.Theenthusiastickidsswiftlylineduptogiveitatry,andscrambledtothetopandrangthebellthathungatthehighestpoint.Therewasn’treallyanythingtobeafraidofsincetheywerebeltedintoplace.Threepeoplecouldclimbsidebysideandtalktoeachother,sograduallytheadultstriedit,too.4續(xù)寫原文“Comeon;let’sgogetinline,”myhusbandNeilurged.“No,yougoaheadwithoutme.”Ihaveauniquetalentforseeingunthinkabledangerinalmosteverysituation.Iwatchedeveryoneelsehavingfun,though,andfinallyconvincedmyselftotryit.WithallthenerveIcouldmuster,IstartedtheclimbConcentratingoneachfoothold,Islowlymademywayup.Iavoidedlookingdowntopreventanysuddenpanic,andwithinafewminutesImadeittothetopandproudlyrangthebell.5續(xù)寫原文IenjoyedmysuccessandthefabulousviewoffieldsandfarmlanduntilIrealizedtherewasalinebelowmewaitingforaturn.Itwastimetogodown.Itwasonethingtolookoutattheworldinthedistance,butitwasawholeotherthingtolookstraightdown.Iwasparalyzedwithfear.Takinganotherdeepbreath,Ispottedafootholdaboutthreefeetawayandslidmyfootintoit.Unfortunately,nowIwasspreadoutlikeastarfishacrossthewall.Thechildrenbelowrecognizedmyfearandcalledupallsortsofrecommendations.6段首句Paragraph1：Allwell-intentionedadvice,butthefactremainedthatIcouldn’tmove.Paragraph2：Bythetimewegottothebottom,Ifeltgreat.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了在朋友家聚會(huì)時(shí)，主人帶來驚喜——一個(gè)巨大的便攜式攀巖墻。孩子們和大人們紛紛嘗試，起初因害怕危險(xiǎn)“我”拒絕，后在丈夫鼓勵(lì)下鼓起勇氣攀爬?！拔摇背晒Φ琼敽?，卻在準(zhǔn)備下來時(shí)因恐高而動(dòng)彈不得。盡管孩子們給出各種建議，“我”依舊恐懼。但想到孩子，“我”決定克服恐懼，一步步向下挪動(dòng)。最終成功落地，收獲掌聲與擁抱，“我”也克服了內(nèi)心恐懼，變得更加勇敢。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Allwell-intentionedadvice,butthefactremainedthatIcouldn’tmove.所有的建議都充滿善意，可現(xiàn)實(shí)是我依舊無法挪動(dòng)分毫。心臟劇烈跳動(dòng)，那聲音仿佛在耳邊轟鳴。我緊閉雙眼，試圖讓自己鎮(zhèn)定下來。腦海中浮現(xiàn)出孩子們仰頭看我的模樣，我絕不能讓他們看到恐懼將我擊垮。于是，我鼓起全身的勇氣，小心翼翼地向下邁出一小步，雙手死死地抓住巖壁。邁出這一步后，我稍作停頓，穩(wěn)定了下情緒，緊接著又邁出一步。每一次移動(dòng)，內(nèi)心的自信便多了一分。下方孩子們此起彼伏的加油聲，如同給我注入了源源不斷的動(dòng)力，讓我有了繼續(xù)下去的勇氣。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Bythetimewegottothebottom,Ifeltgreat.當(dāng)我終于成功落地，那一刻，我感覺棒極了。孩子們圍上來，掌聲如雷，丈夫也快步走來，給了我一個(gè)溫暖而有力的擁抱。我成功戰(zhàn)勝了內(nèi)心的恐懼，那種成就感簡(jiǎn)直無與倫比。此刻我深刻意識(shí)到，很多時(shí)候，我們最害怕的事物其實(shí)都源于內(nèi)心的想象。從那天起，我徹底改變了自己的態(tài)度，變得更加愿意主動(dòng)走出舒適區(qū)。無論是嘗試一項(xiàng)全新的運(yùn)動(dòng)，還是接受具有挑戰(zhàn)性的任務(wù)，每當(dāng)我想起從攀巖墻上成功下來的那一刻，就堅(jiān)信自己有能力跨越任何艱難險(xiǎn)阻。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Allwell-intentionedadvice,butthefactremainedthatIcouldn’tmove.MyheartwasthumpingsoviolentlythatIcouldhearthebeatsclearly.Closingmyeyes,Itriedtosoothemynerves.Then,Ithoughtofmychildrenlookingupatmewithanticipation.Ididn'twanttoletthemseethatfearhadrenderedmeimmobile.Summoningallmycourage,Itookatentativestepdown,myhandsclutchingthewallfirmly.Anotherstepfollowed,andwitheachmovement,Ifeltabitmoreconfident.Thecheersfromthechildrenbelowservedasagreatmotivation,pushingmetokeepgoing.14范文呈現(xiàn)Bythetimewegottothebottom,Ifeltfantastic.Iwaswelcomedwithapplausefromthekidsandawarmhugfrommyhusband.Ihadconfrontedmyfearandemergedvictorious.Thesenseofachievementwasoverwhelming.Irealizedthatoften,thethingswefearthemostexistonlyinourminds.Fromthatdayforward,Iwasmoreeagertostepoutofmycomfortzone.Whetheritwasattemptinganewsportortakingonachallengingtask,IrememberedthefeelingofclimbingdownthatwallandknewthatIwascapableofsurmountinganyobstacle.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Allwell-intentionedadvice,butthefactremainedthatIcouldn’tmove.Sointensewasmyfearthatmyheartwaspoundinglikeadrum,andIcouldhearthethudsresonatinginmyears.Closingmyeyesinanattempttocalmmyself,Ithoughtofmychildrenlookingupatme.Determinednottoletthemwitnessfearparalyzingme,Isummonedallmycourage.Takingacautiousstepdown,myhandsclungtightlytothewallasifmylifedependedonit.Anotherstepfollowed,andwitheachmove,aglimmerofconfidencegrewwithinme.Theenthusiasticcheersfromthechildrenbelow,whowereeagerlywatchingmydescent,becamethedrivingforcethatpropelledmeforward.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Bythetimewegottothebottom,Ifeltamazing.Surroundedbyapplausefromthekidsandembracedtightlybymyhusband,Ihadtriumphedovermyfear.Thesenseofaccomplishmentwasbeyondmeasure.Itsuddenlydawnedonmethatfrequently,thethingsthatscareusthemostaremerelyproductsofourimagination.Fromthatdayon,Ibecamemorewillingtoventureoutofmycomfortzone.Whetheritwastakingonanewsport