2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：尋找丟失訂婚戒指的波折+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)尋找丟失訂婚戒指的波折1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文IwaslookingforwardtoourmorningtripwithmysonScotttotheCollingswoodFleaMarket(跳蚤市場).ItwasatypicalNovemberday,freezingintheshadeandwarminthesun.Aperfectdayforoutdoorshopping.ScottandIwalkedupanddownlookingatthemanytablescoveredwithChristmasdecorationsalongwiththeusualclothesandjewelry,butwesimplyboughtafewsmallitems.Afteranhourofwalkingwiththecoldwindblowing,wedecidedtogohomeforlunch.Onourway,wemadeaquickstopatWawaforthosedelicioussoft,saltedpretzels(椒鹽卷).ScottranintothestorewhileIwaitedinthecar.Sittingalone,IwasrubbingmycoldhandstogetherwhenInoticedthatmyengagementring(訂婚戒指)wasmissing.IknewI’dbeenwearingitwhenwe’dvisitedajewelrystandearlier,andIhadn’ttakenitoff.Myheartwasracingnow.4續(xù)寫原文WhenIinformedScottofthemissingringhecouldn’tbelieveiteither.“Mom,ifyouhadworngloves,itwouldn’thavefallenoffyourfinger.Lookinyourpocketsandhandbag!”Wesearchedthecarandsearchedmyclothes,too.Noring!Itmusthavefallenoffmyfingerinthecold.Weheadedbacktothefleamarketandparkedinthesamespotasbefore.Wecheckedthatarea,andthenbeganwalkingupanddownthemaze(迷宮)oftableswhilelookingattheground.Leavesblewinthewindandpeoplewereeverywhere.HundredsoffeetpassedbyandIbegangettinglightheadedasIattentivelylookedattheground.Itwasanexpensiveengagementringmyhusbandhadgivenmeyearsearlier.Ihadneverlostormisplaceditinallthattime...untilnow.Iwasannoyedwithmyselfforhavinglostthering.WedrovehomeasItriedtoholdbackmytears.5段首句Paragraph1：Afterlunchwedecidedtoreturntothefleamarket.Paragraph2：ItooktheleftsideofthemainroadandScotttheright.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了在一個典型的11月，“我”和兒子斯科特去跳蚤市場購物。返程途中，“我”驚覺訂婚戒指丟失，那是丈夫多年前送的珍貴禮物?！拔摇焙蛢鹤恿⒖谭祷靥槭袌?，在停車處和攤位間仔細(xì)尋找，卻毫無收獲，“我”滿心懊惱地回家。然而，午飯后，我們決定再次踏上尋找戒指的征程。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Afterlunchwedecidedtoreturntothefleamarket.午飯后，我們決定再次返回跳蚤市場。盡管心中滿是忐忑，但我不愿放棄這枚承載著無數(shù)回憶的戒指。一路上，我不斷回想可能丟失戒指的地方，希望能從中找到一絲線索。到達(dá)跳蚤市場后，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)這里的人流量比上午更多了，這讓尋找工作變得更加困難。但我們沒有退縮，我和斯科特默契地分工，準(zhǔn)備從不同方向開始仔細(xì)搜尋。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：ItooktheleftsideofthemainroadandScotttheright.我負(fù)責(zé)主路的左側(cè)，斯科特負(fù)責(zé)右側(cè)。我們沿著攤位，一步一步地慢慢挪動，眼睛不放過任何一個角落。人群熙熙攘攘，不斷有人從我們身邊走過，嘈雜的聲音充斥在耳邊，但我絲毫沒有分心。就在我?guī)缀跻^望的時候，陽光反射出的一道亮光吸引了我的注意。我走近一看，竟然是我丟失的訂婚戒指！我激動地?fù)炱鸾渲福瑴I水奪眶而出。我立刻呼喊斯科特，他跑過來，看到戒指也開心不已。這枚戒指失而復(fù)得，讓我更加珍惜它，也讓我感受到堅持的力量。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Afterlunchwedecidedtoreturntothefleamarket.Althoughfilledwithanxiety,Iwasreluctanttogiveuponthisringthatcarriedcountlessmemories.Ontheway,IkeptrecallingtheplaceswhereImighthavelostthering,hopingtofindaclue.Whenwearrivedatthefleamarket,wefoundthattherewereevenmorepeoplethaninthemorning,whichmadethesearchmoredifficult.However,wedidn'tbackdown.ScottandItacitlydividedthework,readytostartacarefulsearchfromdifferentdirections.13范文呈現(xiàn)ItooktheleftsideofthemainroadandScotttheright.Wemovedslowlyalongthestalls,notmissinganycornerwithoureyes.Thecrowdwasbustling,andpeoplekeptpassingbyus.Thenoisyvoicesfilledmyears,butIdidn'tgetdistractedatall.JustwhenIwasalmostindespair,aglimmeroflightreflectedbythesuncaughtmyattention.Iwalkedcloserand,tomygreatsurprise,itwasmylostengagementring!Ipickeduptheringexcitedly,withtearswellingupinmyeyes.IimmediatelycalledScott,andheranover.Seeingthering,hewasalsoveryhappy.Thering'sreturnmademecherishitevenmoreandalsomademefeelthepowerofperseverance.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterlunch,adecisionwasmadetoreturntothefleamarket.Despitebeingconsumedbyanxiety,Iremainedresoluteinmydeterminationnottoabandonthisring,whichheldinnumerablepreciousmemories.Duringthejourney,Iincessantlyretracedmysteps,mentallyrevisitingeverypossiblelocationwheretheringcouldhaveslippedfrommyfinger,inthefainthopeofuncoveringavitalclue.Uponourarrival,weweremetwithaseaofpeople,farmorethaninthemorning,whichsignificantlycomplicatedoursearch.Undeterred,ScottandIwordlesslycoordinatedourefforts,dividingthetaskathand,andpreparedtocommenceapainstakingsearchfromseparatedirections.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Itooktheleft-handsideofthemainthoroughfare,whileScotttooktheright.Weinchedforwardalongtherowsofstalls,oureyesscanningeverynookandcrannywithunwaveringfocus.Thebustlingcrowdsurgedaroundus,aconstantstreamofpassers-by,andthecacophonyofvoicesfilledtheair.Yet,Iremainedimpervioustothedistractions.Justasdespairthreatenedtoengulfme,aglintofsunlightreflectingoffsomethingonthegroundcaughtmyeye.AsIapproached,tomyutterastonishment,therelaymylong-lostengagementring!Withtremblinghands,Isnatcheditup,myeyeswellingwithtearsofjoy.IimmediatelycalledouttoScott,andherushedover.Hisfacelitupwithdelightatthesight