天津?qū)０娓呖加⒄Z二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題五書面表達(dá)第二節(jié)方法運(yùn)用于命題講義

第二節(jié)方法運(yùn)用于命題專題五書面表達(dá)欄目索引一、提綱類作文二、圖畫類作文三、圖表類作文四、(半)開放式作文

(2017?天津)假設(shè)你是李津，與你以前的外籍教師MrsGreen一直保持聯(lián)系。近日她來信詢問你的近況，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給她回復(fù)一封郵件。(1)簡(jiǎn)要介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活；(2)告知你已成為八月底在津舉辦的第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者，并介紹為此所做的準(zhǔn)備(如深入了解天津等)；(3)希望她有機(jī)會(huì)重訪天津。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；(3)開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：第十三屆全運(yùn)會(huì)the13thNationalGames一、提綱類作文典例法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：告知類應(yīng)用文，注意告知類郵件的格式；(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：介紹學(xué)習(xí)和生活；成為志愿者；邀請(qǐng)重訪天津；(5)層次：分為四段：第一、二段問候并介紹自己的學(xué)習(xí)和生活以及成為在津舉辦的全運(yùn)會(huì)的志愿者；第三段邀請(qǐng)外籍教師重訪天津；第四段為結(jié)束語。法寶2

“韻色”得高分該文除簡(jiǎn)單句外，還可使用并列句、省略句及復(fù)合句(定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句)，做到句式多樣。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞hearfromsb./tellsb.sth.about.../indetail/tobeginwith/bearoundthecorner/bebusydoingsth./preparefor/volunteer/beheldat.../inorderto/spend/inthelibrary/nodoubt/enhance/invite/appreciate2.造句(1)I’msogladtohearfromyou.(2)Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.(3)ThefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.(4)Ihavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames.(5)ItwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.(6)InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin，IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.(7)ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.(8)I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.3.成篇DearMrsGreen，I’msogladtohearfromyou.Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyselfindetail.Tobeginwith，thefinalexamofthistermisaroundthecornersoIambusypreparingforit.WhatIwanttostressisthatIhavealreadybeenavolunteerforthe13thNationalGameswhichwillbeheldattheendofAugustinTianjin.InordertoexpandmyknowledgeofTianjin，suchasitshistory，traditionandfood，IspendeverysparemomentIhaveinthelibrary.ThereisnodoubtthatIwillenhanceitsreputationthroughmyefforts.Isincerelyinviteyoutocomehereagain.I’llappreciateitifyoucouldreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Yours，LiJin

假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津。一批來自英國(guó)的高中生與你校學(xué)生開展了為期兩周的交流活動(dòng)?，F(xiàn)在，他們即將回國(guó)，你將在歡送會(huì)上致辭。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。1.回顧雙方的交流活動(dòng)(如學(xué)習(xí)、生活、體育、文藝等方面)；2.談?wù)勈斋@或感想；3.表達(dá)祝愿與期望。跟蹤訓(xùn)練(2016·天津)注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfriends，

Howtimeflies！

Thankyou.參考范文參考范文Dearfriends，Howtimeflies！Twoweekswentby，andourexchangeactivitiesended.Onbehalfofmyschool，Iwouldliketoexpressmyfeelings.Asscheduled，weparticipatedinseveralinstructiveactivities.WelearntmanyChinesecharactersandtookplentyofexercisetogether.WewenttotherestauranttotastetheChinesetraditionalfood.Thefoodwasverydelicious.Whilevisitingtheartexhibition，wediscussedthegreatartists’works.Inmyopinion，everyonehereisamemberofourbigfamilyandwelearnalotfromeachother.AndatlastIsincerelywishyouapleasanttripbacktoyourcountry.Ihopewe’llgettogetheragainnextyear.Thankyou.

(2017·北京)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母校”為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程。二、圖畫類作文典例注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：視頻video法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：本文屬于圖畫類作文；(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過程；(5)層次：分為兩段：第一段描寫畢業(yè)臨近，決定制作畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻；第二段寫制作畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的過程及最后達(dá)到的結(jié)果。法寶2

“韻色”得高分該文除簡(jiǎn)單句外，還可使用非謂語動(dòng)詞、并列句、復(fù)合句(賓語從句、狀語從句)，做到句式多樣豐富。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞graduationcome/aheateddiscussion/agreeon/makeavideo/materialcollecting/interviewteachers/takepictures/everyaspectofschoollife/tough/debateover/compromise/unavoidable/turnoutperfect/thegraduationceremony/bewellreceived/agreatsenseofachievement2.造句(1)Graduationfinallycame.(2)MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.(3)Weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.(4)Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek.(5)Duringthistimeweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.(6)Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.(7)Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.(8)Somecompromiseswereunavoidable.(9)Thevideoturnedoutperfect.(10)Severaldayslater，whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony，itwaswellreceived.(11)Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.(12)Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.3.成篇Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion，weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek，duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable，butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater，whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony，itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.

(2017?河西區(qū)三模)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李津，你校周六上午舉辦了高三學(xué)生成人儀式。在會(huì)上你和一位女生代表同學(xué)們發(fā)言，你父親作為家長(zhǎng)代表講話。請(qǐng)你按照以下四幅圖的順序，寫一篇英語日記。描述圖畫內(nèi)容，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢?。跟蹤?xùn)練參考范文注意：詞數(shù)不少于100。參考范文Todayourschoolheldamemorableadulthoodceremonythemed“growth，gratitudeandresponsibility”.Iwashonouredtobethehostofceremony，togetherwithagirl.Inthebeginning，onbehalfofallthestudents，weexpressedourgratitudetoourparentsandteachers.Thenmyfather，asaparents’representativemadeaspeech，expressingthebestwishesandexpectationstous，whichmadeusfeeltheloveandcarefromourteachersandparents.Afterwards，wetookanoathfacingthenationalflag，showingourdeterminationtobeaqualifiedcitizenandworkhardforourcountry.Finally，handbyhand，wewentthroughaso-called“AdulthoodGate”，whichsymbolizedthatweareallgrown-ups!Aftertheceremony，Iknowmoreaboutthemeaningoftheword“adult”，whichattachesaresponsibilitytomyself，tomyfamilyandtothesociety.

(2017·江蘇)請(qǐng)認(rèn)真閱讀下面有關(guān)我國(guó)電影票房收入(box-officeincome)的柱狀圖及相關(guān)文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。三、圖表類作文典例Saturday

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Shopping

Centre.LiJiang：Hi，SuHua.Whichmovieshallwesee?SuHua：Whatever.We’vegotsomanychoices，Kung

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to

the

West...Eachsoundsgreat!LiJiang：Yeah！Andsomemoviestarsarefantastic.SuHua：Andthehigh-tech！...LiJiang：Perfect！Let’sgetsomefoodfirst.Weonlyhave20minutesleft.SuHua：Nohurry.Thecinemaisonthesamefloor.One

Day

in2016.At

Home.

Son：Mum，shallwegoandseeafilmtonight?Mother：Whybother？Wecanstayathomeandwatchfilmsonline.It’s

convenientwithournewandfasternetwork.

Son：Butitfeelsgoodinacinema.Mother：Andtheprice...Wehavetopay50yuanaticket.

Son：Only10yuanmorethanlastyear.Mother：Butstillwecannotgetthemoney’sworth.Somefilmsarejustboring...寫作內(nèi)容1.用約30個(gè)單詞概述柱狀圖信息的主要內(nèi)容；2.我國(guó)電影票房收入變化的原因有哪些，簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕目捶?上述對(duì)話僅供參考，原因不少于兩點(diǎn))；3.談?wù)勀銓?duì)我國(guó)電影票房收入走向的看法，并簡(jiǎn)要說明理由。寫作要求1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.不必寫標(biāo)題。評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。...法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：圖表類作文；(2)人稱：以第三人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般過去時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：概述短文內(nèi)容；分析票房收入變化的原因并給出自己的看法；(5)層次：分為三段：第一段總結(jié)歸納柱狀圖所含信息；第二段分析票房收入變化的原因；第三段提出自己的看法并給出理由。法寶2

“韻色”得高分該文可多種句式并用，如并列句、復(fù)合句(定語從句、名詞性從句、狀語從句)，做到句式豐富多樣。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞box-officeincome/witness/aconstantincrease/slowdown/various/economicdevelopment/powerfulengine/application/appeal/accountfor/consequently/turnawayfrom/leadto/atamediumspeed/movieindustry/enjoyaslightincrease2.造句(1)Thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.(2)Thatincreasesloweddownin2016.(3)Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.(4)Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.(5)Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.(6)Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.(7)TheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.(8)Someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.(9)China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears.(10)Anincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.(11)Itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.3.成篇Asisindicatedinthegraph，thebox-officeincomeofChinesemovieswitnessedaconstantincreasefromabout17billionyuanin2012toover40billionin2015.However，thatincreasesloweddownin2016.Thereasonsbehindthisarevarious.Thefasteconomicdevelopmentbefore2016wasprobablythemostpowerfulenginedrivingtheconstantgrowthinthebox-officeincome.Theapplicationofnewtechnologiesandthewideappealofmoviestarscouldalsoaccountfortheincrease.However，Chinasawadeclineinitseconomicgrowthratelastyear.AndtheInternetincreasedoptionsformovielovers.Consequently，someviewersbegantoturnawayfromcinemas，leadingtoaslowergrowth.

China’seconomyisexpectedtogrowatamediumspeedinthecomingyears，soanincreaseispossibleintheinvestmentinthemovieindustryandthenumberofqualitymovies.Therefore，itsbox-officeincomewillprobablyenjoyaslightincrease.

(2017?陜西咸陽二模)仔細(xì)觀察下圖，根據(jù)要求，以“HealthChangesinDevelopingCountries”為題，用英語寫一篇不少于100詞的短文。1.以下圖為依據(jù)描述發(fā)展中國(guó)家的預(yù)期壽命(lifeexpectancy)和嬰兒死亡率(infantmortalityrate)的變化情況；2.說明引起變化的各種原因，如生活條件的改善、醫(yī)學(xué)的進(jìn)步、環(huán)境保護(hù)的認(rèn)識(shí)等。跟蹤訓(xùn)練參考范文參考范文HealthChangesinDevelopingCountriesAsisdescribedinthechart，indevelopingcountriesgreatchangeshavetakenplaceinlifeexpectancyandinfantmortalityratebetween1960and2011.Thelifeexpectancyin1960wasabout40yearsold，whileitincreasedtoabout60yearsoldin2011.Atthesametime，theinfantmortalityratedroppedfrom200per1,000birthsin1960to100per1,000birthsin2011.Therearemanyreasonsforthechanges，Ithink.First，people’slivingconditionshaveimproved，soitisnaturalthattheylivelongerthanbefore.Second，thankstothedevelopmentinscienceandmedicine，peoplearereceivingbettermedicalcarethantheyusedto.Third，developingcountriesarenowbetterawareofenvironmentalprotectionandtheytakemoremeasurestosolvetheproblem，whichalsodoesgood.Inshort，people’shealthconditionindevelopingcountriesisbecomingbetterandbetter.

(2017·全國(guó)Ⅲ)假定你是李華。你所在的校乒乓球隊(duì)正在招收新隊(duì)員。請(qǐng)給你的留學(xué)生朋友Eric寫封郵件邀請(qǐng)他加入，內(nèi)容包括：1.球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；2.報(bào)名方式及截止日期。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。四、(半)開放式作文典例法寶1

“五審”定調(diào)子(1)體裁：書信類應(yīng)用文，應(yīng)注意書信格式；(2)人稱：以第一人稱為主；(3)時(shí)態(tài)：以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主；(4)要點(diǎn)：寫信目的；球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；報(bào)名方式和截止日期；(5)層次：分為四段：第一段自我介紹并交待寫信目的——邀請(qǐng)Eric加入球隊(duì)；第二段介紹打乒乓球的好處及球隊(duì)活動(dòng)；第三段告知Eric報(bào)名方式及截止日期；第四段結(jié)束語。法寶2

“韻色”得高分除了使用簡(jiǎn)單句外，該文還可使用非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語、并列句及復(fù)合句(賓語從句、定語從句、狀語從句)，做到句式多樣。法寶3黃金“三步曲”1.遣詞invite/join/tabletennisteam/itisknownthat/benefitfrom/prevent...from.../keepsb.physicallyhealthy/asto/experiencedplayer/givetrainingto/atthesametime/o.../beinterested/signup/lookforwardto2.造句(1)Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhetabletennisteaminourschool.(2)Wecanbenefitalotfromplayingtabletennis.(3)Itcanpreventusfromgettingshortsighted.(4)Itcankeepusphysicallyhealthy.(5)WeplantoinviteexperiencedplayerstogivetrainingtouseveryFridayafternoon.(6)Wewilldividethemembersintoseveralgroupstopracticeat5：00pmafterschool.(7)Ifyouareinterested，signuponourschoolwebsitebeforeAugust10.(8)I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.3.成篇DearEric，IamLiHua.Iamwritingtoinviteyoutojointhetabletennisteaminourschool.Itisknownthatwecanbenefitalotfromplayingtabletennis.Itcanpreventusfromgettingshortsightedanditcankeepusphysicallyhealthy.Astotheactivities，weplantoinviteexperiencedplayerstogivetrainingtouseveryFridayaft