2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習：十二歲生日夢想自行車終成真+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習十二歲生日，夢想自行車終成真1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續(xù)寫原文Thesunwasalreadybeginningtosink.Theairwassomewhatbitter.ItwasRobert’s12thbirthday.ButRobertwaswalkinghomealonewithhiseyesfocusingonhisworn-outshoes.Kidsafterschoolwereridingbyintwosandthrees,ringingtheirbicyclebellsmerrily.Robertdidn’traiseuphishead,butheknewclearlythatthoseguyswerewearingbigsmilesontheirfaces,andthatthestringsoftheirbikewheelswereshininginthegoldensunlight.“Howluckytheyare!”Robertthoughttohimself.Headmiredeveryonewhohadhisownbike.Hehaddreamedmanytimesthathewasoneofthosewhowereontheirbikestoandfromschool.Hereallywantedabike,especiallyasagiftforhis12thbirthday.However,Robertwasclearthathisfamilycouldn’taffordit.Hisparentsworkedhardonlytomeettheirdailylifeneed.Fortunately,thefamilylivedhappilytogetherregardlessofthepoorcondition.Robertshouldbesatisfiedwithit.Buthejustcouldn’thelpfeelingsadaboutnotbeingabletoownabike.4續(xù)寫原文Soonthesundisappearedfromnowhereandthestreetlampswereon,castingRobert’sfigureontheground.Lookingdownathismovingshadow,Robertstoppedhisstepssuddenly.Hestretchedout(伸出)bothofhisarmswithhishandsholdingsomethingtightly,andthenraisedhisrightlegandleftleginturntopushhimselfforward.Definitely,thefigureonthegrounddidasRobertdid.Itseemedthathewasridingabike.Abrandnewblackhandsomebike!AbikethatRoberthadbeendreamingof.TheimaginationexcitedanddelightedRobertalot.Hespeduphisimaginarybiketowardshishomehappily.Theairbecamesweetandgentle.5段首句Paragraph1：WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.Paragraph2：Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8在羅伯特12歲生日這天，他獨自走在回家路上，看到其他孩子騎著自行車，心生羨慕。他渴望有一輛自行車作為生日禮物，可家庭貧困，父母無力購買。太陽下山，路燈亮起，他想象自己騎著嶄新的黑色自行車，沉浸在喜悅中?；氐郊視r，房子里漆黑一片，似乎沒人在家。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.當羅伯特到家時，屋里黑漆漆的，好像沒人在。他心里一陣失落，原本還期待著回家能看到溫馨的生日布置，哪怕只是簡單的燭光和父母的笑臉。他緩緩走進屋子，輕聲呼喚著爸爸媽媽，回應他的只有自己的回聲。就在這時，他注意到桌上有一張紙條，心猛地一緊，趕忙拿起紙條，上面寫著：“兒子，去后院看看?！笨吹竭@幾個字，他的心瞬間被好奇填滿，顧不上換鞋，轉身就朝著后院飛奔而去，腦海里不斷浮現出各種可能的驚喜。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.羅伯特興奮地沖進后院，卻只看到一輛舊灰色的自行車。他的腳步猛地頓住，臉上的笑容瞬間消失，取而代之的是深深的失望。他呆呆地站在那里，心里五味雜陳。然而，當他走近自行車時，卻發(fā)現了不一樣的地方。車把上掛著一個嶄新發(fā)亮的鈴鐺，車筐里裝滿了他最愛吃的零食，車座上還放著一張精心制作的卡片，上面寫著：“親愛的羅伯特，生日快樂！我們愛你?！本驮谶@時，他的父母從樹后走了出來，臉上帶著溫柔的笑容。羅伯特的眼眶瞬間濕潤，淚水奪眶而出。他明白了，這輛承載著父母愛意的自行車，比任何嶄新昂貴的車子都要珍貴。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasdarkanditseemednobodywasthere.Disappointmentfilledhisheart.Hehadsecretlyhopedforawarmbirthdaysurprisefromhisparents.Hewalkedintothehouseslowly,callingoutforhismomanddad,butonlyhisownvoiceechoedback.Then,henoticedanoteonthetable.Witharacingheart,hepickeditupandread,"Gotothebackyard,son."Curiosityoverwhelmedhim.Withoutbotheringtochangehisshoes,herushedtowardsthebackyard,hismindfilledwithallkindsofexcitingpossibilities.13范文呈現Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyardonlytofindanoldgraybike.Hisstepshaltedsuddenly,andthesmileonhisfacedisappeared,replacedbydeepdisappointment.Hestoodthere,feelingamixofemotions.However,ashegotclosertothebike,henoticedsomethingdifferent.Therewasashinynewbellonthehandlebars,abasketfilledwithhisfavoritesnacks,andahand-madecardontheseat,whichread,"Happy12thBirthday,Robert!Weloveyou."Justthen,hisparentssteppedoutfrombehindatree,wearingwarmsmiles.Robert'seyeswelledupwithtears.Herealizedthatthisbike,fullofhisparents'love,wasmorepreciousthananybrand-newexpensiveone.14升級版范文呈現WhenRobertgothome,thehousewasplungedintodarkness,givingtheimpressionthatnobodywaspresent.Asenseofdisappointmentcreptintohisheart.Secretly,hehadbeenharbouringhopesofaheart-warmingbirthdaysurprisearrangedbyhisparents.Slowly,hemadehiswayintothehouse,callingoutforhismomanddad,yetonlytheechoofhisownvoicereverberatedthroughtheemptyrooms.Itwasthenthatanoteonthetablecaughthiseye.Hisheartpounding,hepickeditupandread,"Gotothebackyard,son."Overwhelmedbycuriosity,hedashedtowardsthebackyardwithoutevenpausingtochangehisshoes,hismindabuzzwithallsortsofthrillingpossibilities.15升級版范文呈現Robertrushedexcitedlytotheyard,onlytobegreetedbyanoldgraybike.Hisstepscametoanabrupthalt,andthesmilethathadadornedhisfacevanishedinaninstant,replacedbyprofounddisappointment.Standingthere,hewasengulfedbyacomplexmixofemotions.However,asheapproachedthebike,henoticedseveraldistinctivefeatures.Ashinynewbelladornedthehandlebars,abasketbrimmingwithhisfavoritesnackssatonthefront,andahand-craftedcardontheseatread,"Happy12thBirthday,Robert!Weloveyou."Justatthatmoment,hisparentsemergedfrombehindatree,theirfaceswreathedinwarmsmiles.Robert'sey