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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)愛(ài)與抉擇:流浪貓的生命旅程1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Wewerearandombunch,joinedtogetherbysocialmediaandthechancediscoveryofaterriblyweakstraycat(流浪貓).Oncebefore,Iwaspartofagroupthatrallied(集合)foracatthatsurelyhadnochanceofrecovery.Intheearlierinstance,IdiscoveredtheorangecatonamiserablyhotandhumidJulyevening,lyingintherain,cakedinmudandpleadingforhelp.Infectionwasragingintwo-thirdsofitsbody,whichdidnotbodewell.Thedoctortoldusthecat’schancesforsurvivalwereveryslim,butwegaveitourbest.Thecat,whichwaslaternamedLucky,weatheredthestorm,thoughlosingallherteethtoinfection.Andluckily,Luckywaseventuallyadoptedbyalovingfamily.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文SowhenmyfriendShuranrecentlypostedawfuldetailsregardinganewly-found(alsoorange)catonherWeChatMoments,alongwithitsphotosbeingcaredforatapethospitalnearherhome,Ishuddered(顫抖).However,sinceshehadplacedthecatinprofessionalhands,Itrustedthatthedoctorknewbest,andItoldShuranthestoryofLuckyandurgedhertoholdontohope.That’swhenshepostedaboutgoingtothemarkettogetafish,whoseskinwouldbeplacedforprotectionoverthelargeareaonthecat’shaunches(腰腿)whereitsownskinwasgoneandthebonesexposed.NowIfearedtheworst.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Meanwhile,Shuransentmeaninvitationtoachatgroup,inwhichIjoinedtheothersrallyingforthecause.Wenowtotaled11—allofusbroughttogetherbyLove,thenamethatShurangavethecat.Inasuddenflurryofmessages,wewereinformedthatLove’sconditionhadworsened.Shuranaskedeveryonetovote:Dowecontinuethetreatmentordoweeuthanize(使安樂(lè)死)Love,whowasclearlysuffering?Adeadlinewassetfor2pmthenextday,butwewereinformedshortlyafterwardthatthecat’sbreathinghadgrownveryfaint.6段首句Paragraph1:Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.Paragraph2:Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldayswithusallfeelingfulloflove.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9一群因社交媒體結(jié)識(shí)的人,因發(fā)現(xiàn)一只極度虛弱的流浪貓而聚在一起。此前,“我”曾參與救助一只幾乎無(wú)法康復(fù)的橘貓,它最終幸運(yùn)存活并被收養(yǎng)。此次,朋友舒然在微信朋友圈發(fā)布新發(fā)現(xiàn)橘貓的慘狀及救治照片,“我”知曉后分享之前橘貓的故事并鼓勵(lì)她。后來(lái)得知貓病情惡化,舒然發(fā)起投票決定是否繼續(xù)治療,最終大家決定讓它安樂(lè)死。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首,續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:Paragraph1:Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.于是,這群新朋友們?cè)俅尉墼谝黄?,決定是時(shí)候給予愛(ài)貓一個(gè)仁慈的結(jié)局了。大家的心情都無(wú)比沉重,會(huì)議室里彌漫著壓抑的氣氛。每個(gè)人都回想起與愛(ài)貓相處的點(diǎn)滴,盡管時(shí)間短暫,但它的頑強(qiáng)讓大家心生敬意。舒然紅著眼眶,再次向大家確認(rèn)這個(gè)艱難的決定。大家默默點(diǎn)頭,淚水在眼眶中打轉(zhuǎn)。隨后,舒然聯(lián)系了獸醫(yī),告知了大家的決定。獸醫(yī)表示理解,并迅速準(zhǔn)備好相關(guān)事宜。大家圍在愛(ài)貓身邊,輕輕撫摸著它,輕聲訴說(shuō)著不舍與祝福,希望它能在另一個(gè)世界不再受苦。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2:Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldayswithusallfeelingfulloflove.愛(ài)貓并沒(méi)有孤獨(dú)地死去,在它生命的最后時(shí)光里,我們所有人都沉浸在滿(mǎn)滿(mǎn)的愛(ài)之中。大家輪流陪伴在愛(ài)貓身旁,輕聲為它講述溫暖的故事,回憶著那些雖然短暫卻充滿(mǎn)希望的瞬間。當(dāng)獸醫(yī)開(kāi)始實(shí)施安樂(lè)死時(shí),大家手牽著手,給予彼此力量,也希望這份愛(ài)能傳遞給愛(ài)貓。愛(ài)貓的呼吸逐漸平穩(wěn),它的眼神中似乎少了痛苦,多了一絲安寧。最終,它在大家的愛(ài)意環(huán)繞下,平靜地離開(kāi)了這個(gè)世界。雖然心中滿(mǎn)是悲痛,但大家也明白,這是對(duì)愛(ài)貓最好的告別,它帶著我們的愛(ài),去往了沒(méi)有病痛的地方。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.Everyonewasdeeplysaddened,andaheavyatmospherefilledtheroom.EachoneofusrecalledthemomentswespentwithLove.Despitetheshorttime,itstenacityhadwonourrespect.Shuran,withred-rimmedeyes,confirmedthisdifficultdecisionwitheveryoneagain.Wenoddedsilently,tearswellingupinoureyes.Subsequently,Shurancontactedthevetandinformedhimofourdecision.Thevetexpressedunderstandingandquicklymadethenecessarypreparations.WegatheredaroundLove,gentlystrokingitandwhisperingwordsoffarewellandblessings,hopingitwouldnolongersufferintheotherworld.14范文呈現(xiàn)Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldayswithusallfeelingfulloflove.WetookturnsstayingbyLove'sside,softlytellingitwarmstoriesandreminiscingaboutthosebriefbuthopefulmoments.Whenthevetstartedtheeuthanasiaprocess,weheldhands,givingeachotherstrengthandhopingthislovecouldbepassedontoLove.Love'sbreathinggraduallybecamesteady,andthereseemedtobelesspainandmorepeaceinitseyes.Eventually,itleftthisworldcalmlysurroundedbyourlove.Althoughourheartswerefilledwithgrief,wealsounderstoodthatthiswasthebestfarewelltoLove.Itwenttoaplacewithoutpain,carryingourlove.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Sothecircleofnewfriendshuddledagainanddecidedthetimewasrightforamercifulend.Aprofoundsenseofsorrowpervadedamongus,castingaheavypalloverthegathering.EverymemberofthegroupwaslostintherecollectionofthepreciousmomentssharedwithLove.Despitethebrevityoftheiracquaintance,Love'sindomitablespirithaddeeplyendearedittoall.Shuran,hereyesred-rimmedwithunshedtears,oncemoresoughtconfirmationfromeveryoneregardingthisheart-wrenchingdecision.Insolemnsilence,weallnodded,theweightofouremotionsalmosttoomuchtobear.Subsequently,Shuranreachedouttothevet,communicatingourchoice.Thevet,demonstratingunderstanding,promptlymadetherequisitepreparations.GatheringaroundLove,wetenderlystrokeditsfur,whisperingwordsoffarewellandwell-wishes,yearningforittofindsolaceintheafterlife,freefromtheclutchesofsuffering.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Lovedidnotdiealone,butspentherfinaldaysenvelopedinthewarmembraceofourcollectivelove.Takingturns,weremainedbyLove'sside,softlyrecountingheartwarmingtalesandfondlyreminiscingaboutthosefleetingyethope-filledmoments.Asth
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