讀后續(xù)寫+藏不住的愛(ài)：小狗+Shadow+的到來(lái)+講義 高二上學(xué)期1月期末英語(yǔ)試題

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。JosieandIwantedadogmorethananythingelseontheearth.Wewishedforoneeverytimewethrewcoinsinafountainorwatchedtheeveningstardropbehindthetrees.However,ourmotherbelievedthatwewerestilltoothoughtlesstotakeonthetaskofraisingapet.Shehadwitnessedourforgetfulnessonhouseholdchoresandgettingintosmallconflicts.Inhereyes,theseweresignsthatwelackedthenecessaryresponsibility.Onesummernight,aswesattogetherontheroof,Josiesawsomething.Shepointeddowntowardadarkshadow,“What’sthat?”Foroneastonishingsecond,JosieandIstaredateachother.Thenwerusheddownontothedoorway.Thereinouryardstoodablackdog.Josiemadealittlekissingnoiseandheldoutherhand.Thedogcametousslowly,takingafewstepsforward,thenastepback,notsurewhethertotrustus.ShewassoskinnythatIcouldjustfeeleverybone,andhercoatwasmessy.“We’regoingtohaveadog!”Myinsidewasfullofexcitement,justlikebeforeChristmasorourbirthday.“What’sagoodname?”saidJosie.Theperfectnamewroteitselfinmymind,“Shadow!”Thenextday,wepiledtogetherallthepocketmoneywehadtobuyallkindsofdogfoodsandhiditinvariousplacesbecausewewereafraidMomwouldn’tapprovethatifsheknewwewerefeedingahomelessdog.Thatnight,afterourparentswereasleep,wesilentlyslippeddownstairstofeedShadow.Wecarefullypouredthedogfoodintothebowl,tryingtomakeaslittlenoiseaspossible.Shadow,whohadbeenwaitingeagerlybyourside,wagged(搖晃)hertail.Asweplacedthebowlonthefloor,acreaking(吱吱的)soundfilledthehouse.Suddenly,thekitchenlightwasswitchedon,illuminatingtheroomandrevealingourshockedfaces.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按所給格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Momdecidedtogiveusachancetoprovewecouldberesponsibleowners.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Josie和“我”極度渴望擁有一只狗，但母親認(rèn)為我們做事粗心、缺乏責(zé)任感，不允許養(yǎng)狗。一個(gè)夏夜，姐妹倆在院子里發(fā)現(xiàn)一只瘦骨嶙峋、毛發(fā)雜亂的流浪黑狗，她們興奮不已，給它取名Shadow。第二天，兩人湊齊零花錢買狗糧，趁父母睡著后偷偷下樓喂食。然而，喂食時(shí)發(fā)出的聲響驚動(dòng)了母親，母親突然開(kāi)燈，發(fā)現(xiàn)了她們的秘密行動(dòng)。故事山分析開(kāi)端：Josie和“我”渴望養(yǎng)狗，母親因我們的表現(xiàn)拒絕。發(fā)展：姐妹倆發(fā)現(xiàn)流浪狗Shadow，給它取名字，并用零花錢買狗糧。高潮：夜晚偷偷喂食時(shí)被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）：母親的態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變，姐妹倆證明自己能照顧好狗。伏筆及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)母親認(rèn)為我們?nèi)狈ω?zé)任感：續(xù)寫中母親決定給姐妹倆機(jī)會(huì)證明，她們通過(guò)照顧狗的行動(dòng)來(lái)回應(yīng)這一點(diǎn)，如按時(shí)喂食、帶狗散步等。我們?nèi)佑矌旁S愿和看星星許愿養(yǎng)狗：暗示對(duì)狗的極度渴望，在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)為努力爭(zhēng)取養(yǎng)狗的機(jī)會(huì)，不輕易放棄。狗很瘦且毛發(fā)雜亂：續(xù)寫中姐妹倆會(huì)精心照顧它，讓它變得健康、漂亮，體現(xiàn)照顧的成果。我們藏狗糧：表明害怕母親反對(duì)，續(xù)寫中母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后態(tài)度的轉(zhuǎn)變形成對(duì)比。偷偷下樓喂食發(fā)出聲響：導(dǎo)致被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)，推動(dòng)故事發(fā)展，續(xù)寫中圍繞母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后的反應(yīng)展開(kāi)。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)（兩段）第一段：重點(diǎn)描寫母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后的反應(yīng)，如驚訝、生氣，姐妹倆的緊張、害怕，以及母親的質(zhì)問(wèn)和姐妹倆的解釋。第二段：描述母親決定給機(jī)會(huì)后，姐妹倆如何照顧狗，展示責(zé)任感，包括制定照顧計(jì)劃、學(xué)習(xí)養(yǎng)狗知識(shí)等，最后得到母親認(rèn)可。情感線起初，姐妹倆對(duì)狗極度渴望，發(fā)現(xiàn)Shadow時(shí)興奮不已。藏狗糧、偷偷喂食時(shí)緊張又期待。被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)后驚慌失措。母親給機(jī)會(huì)后，充滿希望，努力照顧狗的過(guò)程中逐漸培養(yǎng)起責(zé)任感，最終得到母親認(rèn)可，收獲成就感和喜悅。故事線姐妹渴望養(yǎng)狗，母親拒絕。發(fā)現(xiàn)流浪狗Shadow，取名并買糧。夜晚偷偷喂食被母親發(fā)現(xiàn)。母親質(zhì)問(wèn)，姐妹解釋。母親給機(jī)會(huì)，姐妹制定照顧計(jì)劃。姐妹努力照顧狗，得到母親認(rèn)可。主旨升華句（英文）Responsibilityisnotjustaword;it'sthekeytowinningtrustandachievingourdreams.ThroughtakingcareofShadow,welearnedthatwithresponsibilitycomesthejoyofnurturingandtherewardoflove.OurjourneywithShadowtaughtusthateverysmallefforttowardsresponsibilitycanleadtogreatchangesinourlives.TheloveforShadownotonlymadeusstriveforresponsibilitybutalsodeepenedthebondbetweenusandourfamily.Intheprocessofprovingourselvesresponsibledogowners,wegrewupandunderstoodthetruemeaningofcommitment.寫作示范一Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.Hereyebrowsknittedtogether,andhervoicewasfirmassheasked,"Whatareyoutwodoing?"JosieandIexchangednervousglances,ourhandsshakingslightly.Istammeredoutanexplanation,tellingherhowmuchwelovedShadowandhowwejustwantedtotakecareofher.Momlistenedquietly,herexpressionsofteningabit.Momdecidedtogiveusachancetoprovewecouldberesponsibleowners.Weimmediatelymadeadetailedschedule.Everymorning,wetookturnstowalkShadow,andafterschool,wewouldgroomhercarefully.Wealsoreadbooksaboutdogcaretolearnhowtokeepherhealthy.Slowlybutsurely,Shadowgrewstrongerandmoreenergetic.Momwatchedoureffortswithasmile,andweknewthatourhardworkhadpaidoff.寫作示范二Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.Hereyeswidenedinshock,andforamoment,thekitchenwasfilledwithanawkwardsilence.Josie'sfaceturnedred,andIloweredmyhead,waitingforherscolding.Butinsteadofgettingangry,Momaskedgentlywhywehadhiddenthisfromher.Wepouredoutourhearts,expressingourdeeploveforShadow.Momdecidedtogiveusachancetoprovewecouldberesponsibleowners.Wewereoverjoyedanddeterminedtodowell.WesetupasmallcornerforShadow,completewithasoftbedandtoys.Westartedsavingmoremoneytobuybetterdogfoodandeventookhertothevetforregularcheck-ups.Astimepassed,Shadowbecameanimportantpartofourfamily,andMom'sapprovalmadeoureffortsallthemoreworthwhile.【答案】Itwasourmother,standingtheresurprisingly.Hereyeswidenedasshesawthescenebeforeher.Foramoment,therewassilence,onlywiththecreakingsoundstilllingeringintheair.Stammering,wetriedtoexplaintoher.WetoldherabouthowwefoundShadowandourlonging