高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：石頭引發(fā)的故事：傷害與反思

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)石頭引發(fā)的故事：傷害與反思1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文WhenJackwasinhisteens,heandhisfriendssuddenlybecamecrazyaboutthrowingstones.Theyreceivedalotofscoldingfromtheirneighboursbecausetheymadethemrestless.However,theystillwenttheirownway.Oneday,theywerehittingalittlebirdwhenoneofthestonesrebounded(反彈),almosthittinganoldman.“Ohboys,boys,don'tthrowstonesatthatpoorbird.Iamafraidthestonewillrebound,andhurtyouaslongasyoulive!”“Rebound!Idon'tunderstandyou!”saidJack.“Well,comeandIwilltellyouatruestory.”Hereisthestorythattheoldmantoldthem.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Mydearboys,fiftyyearsago,Iwasaboylikeyou.IusedtothrowstonesuntilIbecameveryaccurate.OnedayIwenttoworkforanagedcouple.Theywereverykindtoeverybodyandeverything.Fewhadsomanyswallows(燕子)makingtheirnestsundertheroofsoftheirhouses.Thebirdsseemedtolovethecouple.Forsevenyearsabirdhadcome,afterthelongwinterwasover,andbuilthernestinthesameplace,andraisedheryoungonesthere.SheandhermatehadjustreturnedwhenIwenttheretowork,andthecouplewelcomedthemheartily.Thebirdjumpedabout,asifgladtobeback.Duringtheday,IthoughtIwouldtrymyskilluponher.Shesatuponapostnearthespotwhereshewastobuildhernest,andlookedatmetrustfully,asmuchastosay,“Youwon'thurtme?”Ifoundanicestone,andIthrewitwithmygreatestskill.Itstruckthebirdontheheadandshedroppeddead!IwassorrythemomentIsawherfall.Butthedeedwasdone.Isaidnothingtotheoldcoupleaboutit.ButoneoftheirgrandchildrentoldthemwhatIhaddone.Thoughthecoupleneversaidawordtome,Iknewthattheyweredeeplysaddenedbymycruelty.Icouldneverlookattheminthefaceafterwards.5段首句Paragraph1：Oh,IshouldhavetoldthemhowsorryIwas!Paragraph2：Afterlisteningtothisstory,Jackandhisfriendsfellsilent.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8杰克十幾歲時(shí)，他和朋友們熱衷于扔石頭，常因此遭鄰居責(zé)罵卻仍我行我素。一天，他們?nèi)邮^打小鳥(niǎo)時(shí)，險(xiǎn)些傷到一位老人。老人見(jiàn)狀，給他們講述了自己五十多年前的經(jīng)歷。那時(shí)他也愛(ài)扔石頭，且技藝精準(zhǔn)。在為一對(duì)老夫婦工作時(shí)，他用石頭打死了一只在老夫婦家筑巢多年的燕子。盡管老夫婦未指責(zé)他，但他一直因自己的殘忍行為深感愧疚。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1：Oh,IshouldhavetoldthemhowsorryIwas!“唉，我真該告訴他們我有多愧疚！”從那以后，老人每天都在自責(zé)中度過(guò)。他總會(huì)想起老夫婦那和藹的面容，他們?cè)駥?duì)待親人一樣對(duì)待自己?？勺约旱聂斆?，卻讓這份溫暖的情誼有了裂痕。每次看到那空蕩蕩的鳥(niǎo)巢，老人都心如刀絞。夜晚，他輾轉(zhuǎn)難眠，那只死去燕子的身影總是在腦海中揮之不去。他深知自己辜負(fù)了老夫婦的信任，他們的失望是理所當(dāng)然的。他無(wú)數(shù)次幻想，要是能回到過(guò)去，糾正自己的錯(cuò)誤該多好。他想對(duì)老夫婦真誠(chéng)地道歉，彌補(bǔ)自己的過(guò)錯(cuò)，可一切都已無(wú)法挽回，這份愧疚成了他心中永遠(yuǎn)的痛。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2：Afterlisteningtothisstory,Jackandhisfriendsfellsilent.聽(tīng)完這個(gè)故事，杰克和他的朋友們陷入了沉默。他們的臉因羞愧而變得通紅，這才意識(shí)到自己的行為可能帶來(lái)的嚴(yán)重后果。杰克看著手中的石頭，心中滿是愧疚，手一松，石頭“啪嗒”一聲掉在地上。他抬起頭，認(rèn)真地說(shuō)：“我們錯(cuò)了，真的很抱歉。我們根本不知道自己的行為會(huì)造成這么可怕的后果?！迸笥褌兗娂婞c(diǎn)頭表示贊同。他們走到老人面前，鄭重地承諾以后再也不會(huì)向鳥(niǎo)兒或其他任何東西扔石頭了，他們要保護(hù)身邊的小動(dòng)物。老人看著他們，欣慰地笑了。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Oh,IshouldhavetoldthemhowsorryIwas!Afterthatincident,everysingledaywasfilledwithself-reproach.Ioftenrecalledthekindfacesoftheoldcouple.Theyhadtreatedmewithgreatwarmth,justlikefamily.However,myrecklessbehaviorhaddamagedthispreciousrelationship.WheneverIcaughtsightoftheemptynest,awaveofpainwouldwashoverme.Atnight,Itossedandturnedinbed,hauntedbytheimageofthedeadbird.IwasfullyawarethatIhadbetrayedtheirtrust,andtheirdisappointmentwasjustifiable.Countlesstimes,IwishedIcouldturnbacktheclockandcorrectmymistake.IdesiredtoapologizesincerelytotheoldcoupleandmakeamendsforwhatIhaddone.Butitwasallinvain,andthisguiltbecameaneternalpaininmyheart.13范文呈現(xiàn)Afterlisteningtothisstory,Jackandhisfriendsfellsilent.Theirfacesflushedwithshameastheycametorealizetheseriousconsequencesoftheiractions.Jack,lookingatthestonesinhishand,feltastrongsenseofguilt.Heletgoofthestones,whichdroppedtothegroundwithathud.Thenhelookedupandsaidearnestly,“Wewerewrong.We'rereallysorry.Wehadnoideathatouractionscouldcausesuchterribleresults.”Hisfriendsnoddedinagreement.Theysteppedforwardtotheoldmanandpromisedsolemnlythattheywouldneverthrowstonesatbirdsoranythingelse.Theyweredeterminedtoprotectthesmallanimalsaroundthem.Theoldmanlookedatthemandsmiledwithrelief.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Oh,IshouldhavetoldthemhowsorryIwas!Inthewakeofthatfatefulevent,remorsebecameaconstantcompanion.Dayinanddayout,thekindvisagesoftheoldcouplewouldsurfaceinmymind,fortheyhadembracedmewithfamilialwarmth.Alas,myheedlessacthadirreparablymarredthischerishedbond.Eachglimpseofthedesertednestsentajoltofanguishthroughme.Nightsweretorturous,withsleepeludingmeasthelifelessformofthebirdhauntedmythoughts.Itwascrystal-clearthatIhadsquanderedtheirtrust,andtheirdisappointmentwasnothingshortofdeserved.Timeandagain,Iyearnedforachancetorewindtheclockandrightmywrong.AnearnestapologyandamendswerewhatIdesired,yettonoavail.Thisguilt,likeaninescapableshadow,hadseareditselfintomysoul.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterlisteningtothisstory,Jackandhisfriendsfellsilent.Shame-flushed,theyfinallygraspedthegravityoftheiractions.Gazingatthestonesinhishand,awaveofguiltwashedoverJack,causinghimtoinvoluntarilyreleasehisgrip,andthestonestumbledto