高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：鄰里相助：共渡突發(fā)疾病難關(guān)

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)鄰里相助：共渡突發(fā)疾病難關(guān)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Garcia,amotheroftwosonslivinginLosBanos,washomealonewiththem.Shehadvertigo(眩暈癥).Herhusband,whohadalreadyleftforhisconstructionjob,couldn’tattendtothemathome.Garciaoftenfoundithardtotakecareofhertwosons,Thomason,aged7,andAndrew,5.Fortunately,Garcialivedinafriendlycommunity.Neighborsoftencametocheckonthem.Mrs.Mathew,Garcia’snext-doorneighbourdroppedmost.Onemorning,whenKarenGarciaawokesuddenlyat4a.m.,theroomwasspinning.Shefelteverythingwasturning.Shehadneverexperienceditbefore.Bothofthekidswereasleep.Shetookhervertigomedication,anditdidn'twork.Shecouldn’tkeepitdown,vomiting(嘔吐)forhours.4續(xù)寫原文Atexactly7:00a,m,thechildrenwokeup.Usually,bythistime,theirmotherwouldalreadybeup,preparingbreakfastinthekitchen.Buttoday,thehousefeltfrighteningstill.Theboysbegantheirsearch,callingoutsoftlyatfirst,thenlouderwhentherewasnoresponse.Theycheckedthekitchen,thelivingroom,theirparents'bedroom,andeventhegarden.Eachemptyroomincreasedtheirfearandanxiety.Theyfinallyapproachedthebathroom.Pushingthedooropen,bothboysfrozeinhorror.Theirmotherlayonthefloor,paleandunconscious.Thekidswereratherdistraught(憂心如焚的),franticallytryingtohelpher.Thomasoncalled911,andgavethedispatcher(調(diào)度員)thedetailsinatremblingvoice.5續(xù)寫原文Beforelong,acrewofemergencyrespondersarrivedatthescene.TheyquicklymadeoutthatGarciawasinmedicaldistressandshouldbesenttohospitalimmediately.Theatmosphereofthehospitalwastoomuchforthekidssotheyhadbetterstay.Thencametheproblem:whowouldaccompanythem?Atthattime,Mrs.Mathewappeared,curiousatallthemess.Sheofferedtohelpatonce.Watchingtheambulanceroaringaway,theyretracedindoors.6段首句Paragraph1：Seeingthekids’unsettledfaces,Mrs.Mathewdecidedtodosomething.Paragraph2：Laterthatday,wordcamefromthehospitalthatGarciawasoutofdanger.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9獨(dú)自在家照顧兩個兒子的加西亞患有眩暈癥，一天清晨4點(diǎn)她突然發(fā)病，服藥無效且持續(xù)嘔吐。7點(diǎn)，兩個兒子醒來發(fā)現(xiàn)母親不見蹤影，四處尋找后在浴室發(fā)現(xiàn)昏迷的她。大兒子托馬森撥打911求助，急救人員趕來將加西亞送往醫(yī)院。由于醫(yī)院環(huán)境不適合孩子，鄰居馬修夫人主動幫忙照顧孩子，之后傳來加西亞脫離危險(xiǎn)的消息。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Seeingthekids’unsettledfaces,Mrs.Mathewdecidedtodosomething.看到孩子們不安的神情，馬修夫人決定做點(diǎn)什么來安撫他們。她溫柔地牽起孩子們的手，輕聲說道：“寶貝們別擔(dān)心，媽媽一定會沒事的。我們來給她準(zhǔn)備一份驚喜吧，做些她最愛吃的餅干，等她出院就能吃到啦?！焙⒆觽兟犃?，眼中閃過一絲希望，乖乖跟著馬修夫人來到廚房。馬修夫人耐心地指導(dǎo)孩子們稱量食材、攪拌面粉，孩子們雖然動作有些生疏，但都格外認(rèn)真。在等待餅干烘烤的過程中，馬修夫人給孩子們講著有趣的故事，努力營造輕松的氛圍，漸漸地，孩子們的臉上露出了些許笑容。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Laterthatday,wordcamefromthehospitalthatGarciawasoutofdanger.當(dāng)天晚些時(shí)候，從醫(yī)院傳來消息，加西亞脫離了危險(xiǎn)。孩子們興奮得歡呼起來，眼中閃爍著喜悅的淚花。馬修夫人也欣慰地笑了，她立刻帶著孩子們趕往醫(yī)院。一進(jìn)病房，孩子們就迫不及待地跑到加西亞床邊，把裝著餅干的盒子遞給她，興奮地說：“媽媽，這是我們?yōu)槟阕龅娘灨桑　奔游鱽喐袆拥脽釡I盈眶，她緊緊地抱住孩子們，又抬頭看著馬修夫人，感激地說：“太感謝您了，要不是您幫忙照顧孩子，我真不知道該怎么辦。”馬修夫人笑著說：“別客氣，咱們是鄰居，就該互相幫忙?！边@一刻，病房里充滿了溫暖。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Seeingthekids’unsettledfaces,Mrs.Mathewdecidedtodosomething.Shegentlytooktheboys'handsandsaidsoftly,"Don'tworry,boys.Yourmomwillbefine.Let'smakeasurpriseforher.Wecanbakesomecookiessheloves.She'llbesohappywhenshegetsoutofthehospital."Theboys,withaglimmerofhopeintheireyes,followedMrs.Mathewtothekitchenobediently.Mrs.Mathewpatientlyguidedthemtomeasuretheingredientsandmixtheflour.Althoughtheboys'movementswereabitclumsy,theywereextremelyearnest.Whilewaitingforthecookiestobake,Mrs.Mathewtoldtheminterestingstories,tryingtocreatearelaxingatmosphere.Gradually,theboys'facesshowedsomesmiles.14范文呈現(xiàn)Laterthatday,wordcamefromthehospitalthatGarciawasoutofdanger.Theboysjumpedupinexcitement,theireyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.Mrs.Mathewalsosmiledwithrelief.Sheimmediatelydrovetheboystothehospital.Assoonastheyenteredtheward,theboysrushedtoGarcia'sbedsideandhandedhertheboxofcookies,sayingexcitedly,"Mom,thesearethecookieswemadeforyou!"Garciawassotouchedthattearswelledupinhereyes.ShehuggedtheboystightlyandthenlookedupatMrs.Mathew,sayinggratefully,"Thankyousomuch.Idon'tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyoutakingcareoftheboys."Mrs.Mathewsmiledandreplied,"You'rewelcome.We'reneighbors.Weshouldhelpeachother."Atthismoment,thewardwasfilledwithwarmth.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Seeingthekids’unsettledfaces,Mrs.Mathewdecidedtodosomething.Gentlytakingtheboys'hands,shemurmuredtenderly,"Don'tfret,boys.Yourmomwillsurelypullthrough.Let'scraftadelightfulsurpriseforher—bakesomeofherfavoritecookies.She'llbeoverjoyeduponherhospitaldischarge."Withaglimmerofhopetwinklingintheireyes,theboysobedientlytrailedMrs.Mathewtothekitchen.There,Mrs.Mathewpatientlyinstructedtheminmeasuringingredientsandblendingtheflour.Clumsyastheirmovementswere,theboyswereutterlyearnest.Astheyawaitedthecookies'baking,Mrs.Mathewregaledthemwithfascinatingtales,strivingtocreatearelaxingambiance.Gradually,smilesbegantogracetheboys'faces.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Laterthatday,wordreachedfromthehospitalthatGarciawasoutofdanger.Theboyssprangupinexcitement,theireyesbrimmingwithtearsofjoy.Mrs.Mathew,too,smiledinrelief.Shepromptlydrovetheboystothehospital.Theinstanttheyenteredtheward,theboysdashedtoGarcia'sbedsid