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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)手帕投擲比賽中的創(chuàng)意火花1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文I’vespentmyadultlifeasacollegeprofessorteachingpeoplehowtothinkmorecreativelyandusemoreoftheirbrainpower.Interestingly,thislifetimepassionwasawakenedbyacasualcontestwhenIwasachild.Atafamilypicnicforemployeesofthecompanywheremyfatherworked,theyheldahandkerchief-throwingcontestforthechildren.Iwas13,fullofenthusiasmandthespiritofcompetition,soIthrewmyselfintothecontest,whichIrealizenowwasnotmeanttodemonstrateanyrealskill,butsimplyforlaughs.Butitsparkedmyloveofthinkingoutsidethebox.4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Theemcee(主持人)gaveeachchildaclothhandkerchiefandtoldusthewinnerwouldbetheonewhothrewitthefarthest.Thefirstthrowers,thelittleones,tookmightywind-ups,butwhentheclothlefttheirhands,itopenedandflutteredtothegroundafewinchesinfrontofthem.Thenextkidsthrewharderandharder,butwithnobetterresults.Thecrowdroaredwithlaughter,andbeing13,Ididn’tlikeadultslaughingatus.Theolderthechildren,themorethecrowdlaughedattheresults.5續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Itwasobviousthatusingthesametechniquewouldnotwork.SupposeItiedarockinsidethehandkerchief?No,itwas“throwahandkerchief,”notarockandahandkerchief.Whentheyinspectedit,I’dbedisqualified.IfIknewanythingaboutadults,itwasthattheylivedbyrules.Andtheylovedtoseizeachildwhobrokethem.Soitirritatedmetoseethekidsthrowingharder,butstillwithoutbetterresults.Thesecretwasnottothrowharderbuttokeeptheclothfromopening.SupposeIhidarockintheclothwithouttyingit.Therockwoulddrivetheclothatleastfartherthantheothers,andwhentheyseparated,peoplemightnotnoticeasmallrocklandinginthegrass.Ihadagoodchanceofgettingawaywithit,butIdidn’twanttowinbycheating.WhatIreallywantedtodowasshowthemthatakidcouldbeatthemattheirowngame.Ihadtomakethehandkerchiefflylikearock.Likearock!Thatwasit!6段首句Paragraph1:Ibegantyingthehandkerchiefarounditselftomakeitsmallandfirmlypacked,likearock.Paragraph2:Beforetheemceefoundmyhandkerchief,amansaid,“Hemusthavecheated.”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析9文章講述了身為大學(xué)教授的“我”,對(duì)激發(fā)創(chuàng)造力的熱情源于童年一場(chǎng)手帕投擲比賽。在父親公司的家庭野餐中,孩子們參與該比賽,目標(biāo)是把手帕扔得最遠(yuǎn)。小選手們用力投擲,手帕卻都飄落近處,引得大人哄笑。“我”深知常規(guī)方法無(wú)用,又不愿作弊,在思考如何讓手帕像石頭般飛行的過(guò)程中,開(kāi)啟了創(chuàng)新思維。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首,續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para1:Ibegantyingthehandkerchiefarounditselftomakeitsmallandfirmlypacked,likearock.我全神貫注地把手中的手帕一圈又一圈地纏繞起來(lái),一心想讓它變得像石頭那般堅(jiān)硬、緊實(shí)。我的眼神始終聚焦在手帕上,手指靈活地穿梭其中,每一個(gè)步驟都做得極為細(xì)致。在眾人疑惑的目光下,我手中原本柔軟的手帕逐漸變成了一個(gè)堅(jiān)硬的小團(tuán)。準(zhǔn)備就緒后,我大步走到投擲線(xiàn)前,雙腳穩(wěn)穩(wěn)站立,深吸一口氣,感受著周?chē)哪抗?。接著,我將手臂高高揚(yáng)起,借助身體扭轉(zhuǎn)的力量,像投出一顆炮彈似的,用盡全身力氣把手帕扔了出去。只見(jiàn)手帕如同一道黑色的閃電,在空中快速劃過(guò),徑直朝著遠(yuǎn)處飛去,瞬間超越了之前所有人的投擲距離。人群中先是一片寂靜,緊接著爆發(fā)出一陣驚嘆聲。11續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Para2:Beforetheemceefoundmyhandkerchief,amansaid,“Hemusthavecheated.”就在主持人還沒(méi)走到手帕落地的位置時(shí),突然有個(gè)男人大聲叫嚷道:“這孩子肯定作弊了!”這話(huà)一出口,我的心瞬間揪緊,委屈和憤怒涌上心頭。我立刻大聲反駁:“我沒(méi)有作弊!我靠的是自己的智慧!”此時(shí),現(xiàn)場(chǎng)氣氛變得緊張起來(lái)。好在主持人很快撿起手帕,仔細(xì)檢查了一番,發(fā)現(xiàn)并無(wú)異常。隨后,主持人向大家展示了手帕,并鄭重宣布我是比賽的獲勝者。人群中爆發(fā)出熱烈的掌聲,那些之前懷疑我的人也紛紛露出了贊許的目光。我站在原地,臉上洋溢著自豪的笑容。這場(chǎng)比賽讓我深刻認(rèn)識(shí)到,創(chuàng)新思維能帶來(lái)意想不到的成果,也堅(jiān)定了我未來(lái)探索創(chuàng)新的決心。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Iconcentratedontyingthehandkerchiefarounditselftomakeitasfirmandcompactasarock.Myeyeswerefixedonthehandkerchief,andmyfingersmovednimbly.Underthepuzzledeyesofthecrowd,thesofthandkerchiefinmyhandgraduallyturnedintoahardball.Aftergettingready,Iwalkedfirmlytothethrowingline,standingsteadilywithmyfeet.Takingadeepbreath,Iraisedmyarmhigh,andwiththepowerofmybodytwisting,Ithrewthehandkerchiefoutwithallmystrengthasifitwereacannonball.Thehandkerchiefflewthroughtheairlikeaboltofblacklightning,headingstraightforthedistanceandinstantlysurpassingthethrowingdistancesofallthepreviouscompetitors.Therewasamomentofsilenceinthecrowd,followedbyaburstofexclamations.14范文呈現(xiàn)Beforetheemceereachedtheplacewherethehandkerchieflanded,amansuddenlyshouted,"Hemusthavecheated!"Assoonasthesewordswerespoken,myhearttightened,andasenseofgrievanceandangerwelledupinsideme.Iimmediatelyretortedloudly,"Ididn'tcheat!Ireliedonmyownwisdom!"Atthismoment,theatmosphereatthescenebecametense.Fortunately,theemceequicklypickedupthehandkerchiefandinspecteditcarefully,findingnothingwrong.Then,theemceeshowedthehandkerchieftoeveryoneandsolemnlyannouncedthatIwasthewinnerofthecompetition.Thecrowdburstintowarmapplause,andthosewhohaddoubtedmebeforealsocastapprovingglances.Standingthere,Iworeaproudsmileonmyface.Thiscompetitionmademedeeplyrealizethatinnovativethinkingcanbringunexpectedresultsandstrengthenedmydeterminationtoexploreinnovationinthefuture.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Imeticulouslysetabouttyingthehandkerchiefarounditself,aimingtotransformitintoaformasrigidandcompactasarock.Withmygazeintentlyfixedonthefabric,myfingersdanceddeftly,knottingandtwistingwithprecision.Amidtheperplexedstaresoftheonlookers,theonce-softhandkerchiefinmygraspmetamorphosedintoadenseprojectile.Prepared,Istroderesolutelytothethrowingline,feetplantedfirmly,apictureofdetermination.Takingadeep,steadyingbreath,Iarchedmyarmskyward,andwithapowerfultwistofmytorso,unleashedthehandkerchiefwiththeforceofacatapult.Ithurtledthroughtheairlikeastreakofblacklightning,slicingthroughtheatmosphereandsoaringfarbeyondthereachesofanypreviousthrow.Ahushfelloverthecrowd,followedbyaneruptionofgaspsandmurmursofastonishment.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Beforetheemceecouldreachthelandingspotofthehandkerchief,aman'svoice,lacedwithsuspicion,piercedtheair:"Hemusthavecheated!"Instantly,myheartlurched,andawaveofindignationsurgedwithinme.Ishotbackdefiantly,voiceringingclear,"Icheatednot!Itwasmywitsthatwontheday!"The
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