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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)Ella用藝術(shù)傳遞愛(ài),點(diǎn)亮兒童世界1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Fromayoungage,Ellaunderstoodthetreatingpowerofart.Now,sheistheorganizerofacharity,anonprofitorganizationthatsuppliesartkitstochildreninneed.ThestorygoesbacktowhenEllawatchedherparentsgivebacktothecommunity.Inspiredbyherparents’kindness,shewishedtodoherparttoo.Ather10thbirthdayparty,manyguestsbroughtherpresents,fromwhichshechoseartsuppliesforchildrenatahomelessshelter.“Theoutpouringofpositivitywasgrand,”Ellarecalledduringavideointerview.“Thechildrenweresohappy.”WhydidEllagiveartsuppliestothosechildren?Sheexplainedherthinkingtoanewsreporter.Whenshewaseightyearsold,hergrandpawasillinhospital.Atthesuggestionofhergrandma,shemadeadrawingthatexpressedherfeelings.“WhenIshowedthepictureofawarmfamilyscenetomygrandpa,hefeltbetter,”Ellatoldthereporter.“Thatgavemecomfortandmademefeelhappiertoo.Irealizedeverykidshouldhaveaccesstoart.”4續(xù)寫原文Ellakeptstudyingandlearningtodraw.Shefinallyenteredanartcollege.Aftergraduation,shespentyearssettinguphercharitableorganization,whichnumerousartdonationsfloodedinto.Shebegantoacceptthemandhandedoutthousandsofartsuppliestochildrenathomeandabroad.Whetheritwasthroughmailingtheartsupplies,personallydeliveringthemorsettingupartcabinets(櫥柜)inlocalcommunities,Ellamadesurechildrenhadaccesstothetoolsofcreativity.Theartcabinetsallowedindividualstotakesuppliesanddonatethemfreely.ThankstoElla’scharity,lotsofchildrencouldbetterexpresstheirfeelingsthroughartisticcreativity.Ellabelievedarttreatmentcouldhelpsufferingchildren.Sheplannedtobroadenhermission.“Iwanttonotonlyshowthemhowtousetheartsuppliesasapowerfultoolbutalsoteachthemtocreateartfortheirrecovery,”shesaid.Sotogetherwithvolunteers,shetaughtthosechildreninneedartforfree,andshedecidedtoletbooksellersknowmoreabouthercharityandpublishbooksofthechildren'sdrawings.5段首句Paragraph1:Withvolunteers’help,Ellahadanexhibitionofthechildren’spaintings.Paragraph2:Now,Ellahasstartedtoorganizeartclassesforchildren.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8文章講述了Ella自幼受父母影響,深知藝術(shù)的治愈力量。10歲生日時(shí),她挑選收到的禮物,將藝術(shù)用品送給無(wú)家可歸的兒童。此前,8歲的她曾通過(guò)一幅畫讓生病的爺爺感到慰藉,這讓她意識(shí)到每個(gè)孩子都應(yīng)接觸藝術(shù)。后來(lái),她進(jìn)入藝術(shù)學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí),畢業(yè)后成立慈善組織,接收大量藝術(shù)捐贈(zèng),并通過(guò)多種方式將藝術(shù)用品送到國(guó)內(nèi)外兒童手中。她認(rèn)為藝術(shù)治療能幫助受苦的兒童,計(jì)劃擴(kuò)大慈善使命,不僅提供工具,還教孩子們通過(guò)藝術(shù)創(chuàng)作促進(jìn)身心康復(fù)。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ);點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Withvolunteers’help,Ellahadanexhibitionofthechildren’spaintings.在志愿者的幫助下,Ella舉辦了一場(chǎng)兒童畫作展覽。展覽現(xiàn)場(chǎng)布置得溫馨而充滿藝術(shù)氛圍,一幅幅色彩斑斕、充滿想象力的畫作掛滿了展廳的墻壁。開展當(dāng)天,眾多觀眾慕名而來(lái),他們?cè)谝环嬜髑榜v足欣賞,不時(shí)發(fā)出陣陣驚嘆。孩子們用稚嫩的筆觸描繪出自己內(nèi)心的世界,有對(duì)未來(lái)的憧憬,有對(duì)家人的愛(ài),還有對(duì)生活的感悟。一位觀眾感動(dòng)地說(shuō):“這些畫作讓我看到了孩子們純真的心靈,他們的創(chuàng)造力真是無(wú)窮無(wú)盡。”媒體也紛紛對(duì)這次展覽進(jìn)行報(bào)道,一時(shí)間,這場(chǎng)展覽成為了社會(huì)關(guān)注的焦點(diǎn)。這不僅讓孩子們的才華得到了認(rèn)可,也讓更多人了解到了Ella的慈善組織,吸引了更多的人加入到支持藝術(shù)慈善的隊(duì)伍中來(lái)。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Now,Ellahasstartedtoorganizeartclassesforchildren.如今,Ella已經(jīng)開始為孩子們組織藝術(shù)課程。在這些課程中,Ella和志愿者們精心設(shè)計(jì)教學(xué)內(nèi)容,從基礎(chǔ)的繪畫技巧到色彩搭配,從手工制作到創(chuàng)意表達(dá),孩子們都能一一學(xué)習(xí)。孩子們?cè)谡n堂上積極參與,盡情發(fā)揮自己的想象力。有的孩子原本性格內(nèi)向,在藝術(shù)課程中卻逐漸變得開朗起來(lái),能夠自信地展示自己的作品。通過(guò)這些課程,孩子們不僅學(xué)到了藝術(shù)知識(shí),還找到了表達(dá)自我的方式,獲得了心靈的慰藉。Ella表示,未來(lái)她還計(jì)劃在更多地區(qū)開展藝術(shù)課程,讓更多的孩子能夠受益于藝術(shù)教育,讓藝術(shù)的力量傳遞到每一個(gè)角落。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Withvolunteers’help,Ellahadanexhibitionofthechildren’spaintings.Theexhibitionvenuewastransformedintoawonderlandofcolorsandcreativity.Everyinchofthewallswasadornedwiththechildren'sartworks,eachauniqueexpressionoftheirinnerworlds.Ontheopeningday,alargenumberofvisitorsflockedtotheexhibition.Theywanderedthroughtheaisles,stoppinginfrontofeachpainting,marvelingattheimaginationandemotiondepicted.Onevisitorexclaimed,“Thesepaintingsgiveusaglimpseintothepureheartsofthechildren.Theircreativityknowsnobounds.”Themediaalsotooknotice,coveringtheeventextensively.Asaresult,theexhibitionbecameafocalpointofpublicattention.Thisnotonlybroughtrecognitiontothechildren'stalentsbutalsoincreasedawarenessofElla'scharity.Morepeoplewereinspiredtocontribute,andtheorganizationreceivedaninfluxofsupport.13范文呈現(xiàn)Now,Ellahasstartedtoorganizeartclassesforchildren.Intheseclasses,Ellaandthevolunteershavecarefullydesignedthecurriculum.Theyteachthechildrenbasicpaintingskills,color-matchingtechniques,handicraftmaking,andcreativeexpression.Thechildrenareactivelyengagedintheclasses,freelyexpressingtheirimagination.Somechildrenwhowerepreviouslyintrovertedhavegraduallybecomemoreoutgoingandconfidentinshowingtheirworks.Throughtheseclasses,thechildrennotonlyacquireartknowledgebutalsofindawaytoexpressthemselvesandgainemotionalcomfort.Ellasaidthatinthefuture,sheplanstoexpandtheartclassestomoreregions,enablingmorechildrentobenefitfromarteducation.Shehopestospreadthepowerofarttoeverycorner.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withvolunteers’unwaveringassistance,Ellaorchestratedanexhibitionspotlightingthechildren’spaintings.Theexhibitionhall,atransformedhavenofartistry,wasbedeckedwithakaleidoscopeofvibrantartworks,eachawindowintothechildren'sboundlessimaginations.Ontheopeningday,throngsofvisitors,drawnbytheallureofthesecreations,pouredintothevenue.Theymeanderedthroughthedisplayareas,transfixedbythestrokesofgeniusandtherawemotionscapturedoncanvas.“Thesepaintings,”exclaimedonevisitor,“offeraprofoundinsightintotheinnocentsoulsofthesechildren.Theircreativityistrulyawe-inspiring.”Themedia,too,seizedupontheevent,showeringitwithextensivecoverage.Consequently,theexhibitioncatapultedintothelimelight,notonlythrustingthechildren'stalentsintothepubliceyebutalsoamplifyingawarenessofElla'scharity.Thisnewfoundexposurespurredawaveofgenerosity,withaninfluxofsupportpouringintotheorganization.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Presently,Ellahasembarkedonthenobleendeavoroforganizingartclassesforchildren.Intheseclasses,Ellaandherteamofdedicatedvolunteershavemeticulouslycraftedacurriculumthatspansthegamutofartisticexpression,fromfundamentalpaintingtechniquestothesubtletiesofcolorharmony,andfromtheartofhandicrafttotherealmofcreativestorytelling.Thechildren,fullyengaged,unleash
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