高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)練習(xí)：新城市的籃球緣：從陌生到融入的成長(zhǎng)之旅+課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)新城市的籃球緣：從陌生到融入的成長(zhǎng)之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Wemovedhereafewdaysago,andIdon’tknowanyone,notoneperson,atthenewplace.Dadsaysthingswillgetbetter.HesaysI’lltaketocitylivingjustlikeItooktoclimbingtreesandplayingball.Ilookoutthewindowofournewapartment.“Thiswasagoodmoveforus,Sonny,”Dadsays,“You’llsee.”“Imisstheguys,”Isay.“ImissMichigan.Imiss”—Igazeupanddownthestreet—“trees.”“LosAngelesisn’tabadplace,”hesays.Thenhetellsmeaboutaparkhesawdownthestreet.“Ithasacoupleofbasketballcourts.Getoutthereandsweattoday.You’vekeptyourselfinsidetoolong.”Inod.Thatafternoon,Igrabmybasketballandheaddownthestreettofindthecourts.Dadwasrightaboutbeingkeptinsidetoolong.It’sabouttimetoshakethecobwebs(蜘蛛網(wǎng))offmybasketballlegs,seeifIcanstilldribble(運(yùn)球)withbothhands,andremainagoodshooter.Iwalkpastalltheshopswithbarsontheirwindows.Thisishome?4續(xù)寫(xiě)原文WhenIgettothecourts,Iseethreeguysshootingaround.They’replayingsomekindofone-on-one,takingturnswiththethirdguyin.Twoofthemaretallerthanme,butoneisaboutmysize.Icantellthattheshortkidknowshowtoplaybythewayhehandlestheball,dribblingwellwitheitherhand.Buttheotherguysaretootallforhim.One-on-oneisn’thisgame.Heneedssomeonetopassto.Igodowntotheotherbaskettoshootaround.I’mprettycoldatfirst.ButafterIwarmup,theoldfeelingscomeback—theproperkneebend,thefeelofreleasingtheballjustright.5段首句Paragraph1：Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.Paragraph2:WithouthesitationIaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析8“我”一家?guī)滋烨鞍岬搅诵碌胤剑拔摇痹谶@兒一個(gè)人都不認(rèn)識(shí)。爸爸說(shuō)情況會(huì)變好，還說(shuō)“我”會(huì)像喜歡爬樹(shù)和打球一樣適應(yīng)城市生活。“我”卻很懷念密歇根的朋友們，懷念那里的樹(shù)木，對(duì)新環(huán)境感到不適應(yīng)。爸爸提到街上有個(gè)公園，里面有籃球場(chǎng)，建議“我”出去活動(dòng)活動(dòng)。于是，當(dāng)天下午“我”拿著籃球前往籃球場(chǎng)。在路上，“我”看到店鋪窗戶都裝著防護(hù)欄，對(duì)這個(gè)新地方感到疑惑。到了籃球場(chǎng)，“我”看到三個(gè)男孩在打球，其中一個(gè)小個(gè)子男孩運(yùn)球技術(shù)很好，但因?qū)κ痔撸粚?duì)一比賽對(duì)他不利。“我”在另一個(gè)籃筐熱身投籃，找回了一些手感。這時(shí)，有人向“我”打招呼。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph1:Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.我停下手中的動(dòng)作，轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，看到了那個(gè)小個(gè)子男孩。他臉上掛著友善的笑容，手里拿著籃球，向我走來(lái)?！昂伲愦虻貌诲e(cuò)?。　彼f(shuō)道，“我看你投籃很準(zhǔn)。”我有些不好意思地笑了笑，回答道：“謝謝，我也只是好久沒(méi)打，才剛開(kāi)始找感覺(jué)。”他接著說(shuō)：“我叫杰克，你呢？”“我叫桑尼。”我回答道。杰克興奮地說(shuō)：“桑尼，你來(lái)得正好，我們正缺人呢。你愿意和我們一起打球嗎？”我猶豫了一下，想到自己剛來(lái)這里，一個(gè)朋友都沒(méi)有，這或許是個(gè)交朋友的好機(jī)會(huì)。于是，我點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭說(shuō)：“好啊，我很樂(lè)意?！敝?，我們組隊(duì)開(kāi)始打球。杰克和我配合默契，他運(yùn)球突破吸引對(duì)方防守，然后巧妙地把球傳給我，我抓住機(jī)會(huì)投籃得分。我們的配合讓其他兩個(gè)高個(gè)子男孩有些措手不及。在打球的過(guò)程中，我們一邊打球一邊聊天，我得知杰克就住在附近，他也非常熱愛(ài)籃球。打完球后，杰克邀請(qǐng)我去他家喝飲料，我欣然答應(yīng)了。在杰克家，我們聊了很多關(guān)于籃球的話題，分享了各自的籃球夢(mèng)想，我感覺(jué)和他越來(lái)越投緣。10續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析Paragraph2:WithouthesitationIaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.我毫不猶豫地接受了他參加即將到來(lái)的聯(lián)賽杯的邀請(qǐng)。從那以后，我和杰克每天都會(huì)在籃球場(chǎng)碰面，一起訓(xùn)練，為聯(lián)賽杯做準(zhǔn)備。我們一起練習(xí)傳球、投籃、防守等技巧，互相鼓勵(lì)，共同進(jìn)步。在訓(xùn)練的過(guò)程中，我們也結(jié)識(shí)了更多熱愛(ài)籃球的小伙伴，大家組成了一支籃球隊(duì)。隨著聯(lián)賽杯的臨近，我們的訓(xùn)練也越來(lái)越緊張。但大家都沒(méi)有絲毫怨言，都對(duì)比賽充滿了期待。比賽那天，我們?cè)缭绲貋?lái)到了賽場(chǎng)?？粗?chē)鷱?qiáng)大的對(duì)手，我心里有些緊張。杰克似乎看出了我的心思，他拍了拍我的肩膀說(shuō)：“別緊張，我們是一個(gè)團(tuán)隊(duì)，只要發(fā)揮出我們的水平，就一定能取得好成績(jī)?！甭?tīng)了他的話，我深吸一口氣，點(diǎn)了點(diǎn)頭。比賽開(kāi)始了，我們?nèi)σ愿埃恳粋€(gè)球都拼盡全力去爭(zhēng)奪。在比賽中，我們配合默契，打出了很多精彩的配合。最終，經(jīng)過(guò)激烈的角逐，我們的球隊(duì)取得了不錯(cuò)的成績(jī)。比賽結(jié)束后，大家歡呼雀躍，慶祝著勝利。通過(guò)這次比賽，我不僅收獲了榮譽(yù)，還收獲了一群志同道合的朋友。我也漸漸喜歡上了這個(gè)新城市，因?yàn)檫@里有熱愛(ài)籃球的伙伴們，有充滿活力的生活。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.Hehasafriendlysmileonhisfaceandisholdingabasketballinhishand.Hewalkstowardsme."Hey,you'reprettygood!"hesays."Isawyoushoot.You'rereallyaccurate."Ismileshylyandreply,"Thanks.Ihaven'tplayedforalongtime,andI'mjuststartingtogetbackintotherhythm."Hethensays,"MynameisJack.What'syours?""I'mSonny,"Ianswer.Jacksaysexcitedly,"Sonny,youcamejustintime.We'reshortofaplayer.Wouldyouliketoplaywithus?"Ihesitateforamoment.ThinkingthatI'mnewhereanddon'thaveanyfriends,thismightbeagreatopportunitytomakesome.SoInodandsay,"Sure,I'dloveto."Afterthat,weformateamandstartplaying.JackandIcooperateverywell.Hedribblesthroughtoattracttheopponent'sdefenseandthenskillfullypassestheballtome.Iseizetheopportunitytoshootandscore.Ourcooperationmakestheothertwotallboysabitcaughtoffguard.Duringthegame,wetalkwhileplaying.IlearnthatJacklivesnearbyandhealsolovesbasketballverymuch.Afterthegame,Jackinvitesmetohishouseforadrink,andIhappilyaccept.AtJack'shouse,wetalkalotaboutbasketball,sharingourbasketballdreams.Ifeelmoreandmorecompatiblewithhim.13范文呈現(xiàn)WithouthesitationIaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.Fromthenon,JackandImeetatthebasketballcourteverydayandtraintogethertopreparefortheLeagueCup.Wepracticepassing,shooting,defenseandotherskillstogether,encouragingeachotherandmakingprogresstogether.Duringthetraining,wealsogettoknowmorebasketball-lovingfriends,andweformabasketballteam.AstheLeagueCupapproaches,ourtrainingbecomesmoreandmoreintense.Butnoonecomplains,andeveryoneislookingforwardtothegame.Onthedayofthegame,wearriveatthestadiumearly.Lookingatthestrongopponentsaround,Ifeelabitnervous.Jackseemstoseemythoughts.Hepatsmeontheshoulderandsays,"Don'tbenervous.We'reateam.Aslongasweplaytoourlevel,wewilldefinitelyachievegoodresults."Afterhearinghiswords,Itakeadeepbreathandnod.Thegamestarts,andwegoallout,fightingforeveryball.Inthegame,wecooperatetacitlyandmakemanywonderfulcombinations.Finally,afterafiercecompetition,ourteamachievesgoodresults.Afterthegame,everyonecheersandcelebratesthevictory.Throughthisgame,Inotonlygainhonorsbutalsogainagroupoflike-mindedfriends.Igraduallyfallinlovewiththisnewcitybecausetherearebasketball-lovingfriendshereandavibrantlife.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Istopandturnaround,catchingsightoftheshortkid.Withafriendlysmileplasteredacrosshisfaceandabasketballfirmlyinhisgrasp,hemakeshiswaytowardsme."Hey,you'rereallygood!"heexclaims."I'vebeenwatchingyoushoot.You'vegotsomeseriousskills."Iblushslightly,offeringashysmileinreturn."Thanks.Ihaven'tplayedinages,andI'mjuststartingtofindmyrhythmagain,"Ireply.Hethenextendshishand,introducinghimself."I'mJack.What'syourname?""I'mSonny,"Irespond,shakinghishand.Jack'seyeslightupwithexcitement."Sonny,you'rejustthepersonweneed!We'reshortoneplayer.Wannajoinus?"Ipauseforamoment,contemplatingtheoffer.ConsideringI'mnewintownandhaven'tmadeanyfriendsyet,thisseemslikeagoldenopportunity.So,Inodandsay,"Sure,I'dbehappyto."Onceweteamup,JackandIclickinstantly.Hedribblespastdefenderswithease,drawingtheirattentionbeforeexpertlypassingtheballtome.Itaketheshot,sinkingitintothebasket.Ourseamlessteamworkcatchestheothertwotallerboysoffguard.Asweplay,wechatnon-stop.IlearnthatJacklivesnearbyandsharesmypassionforbasketball.Afterthegame,Jackinvitesmetohisplaceforadrink,andIreadilyaccept.Athishouse,wedelvedeepintodiscussionsaboutbasketball,sharingourdreamsandaspirations.Ifeelaninstantconnectionwithhim.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withouthesitation,IaccepthisinvitationtoplayintheupcomingLeagueCup.Fromthatmomenton,JackandIbecomeregularsatthebasketballcourt.Wemeeteveryday,dedicatingourselvestorigoroustrainingforthetournament.Wepracticepassing,shooting,anddefensetechniques,constantlypushingeachothertoimprove.Alongtheway,wemeetmorebasketballenthusiasts,andtogether,weformaformidableteam.AstheLeagueCupdrawsnearer,theintensityofourtrainingrampsup.Butnotasingleoneofuscomplains;instead,ouranticipationforthegamegrowsstronger.Onthedayofthegame,wearriveatthestadiumbrightandearly.Gazingatthetoughopponentssurroundingus,awaveofnervousnesswashesoverme.Jac