福建省2024中考英語(yǔ)話題寫作話題十科學(xué)與技術(shù)課件

話題十科學(xué)與技術(shù)考情分析1寫作指導(dǎo)2實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練3考情分析1寫作指導(dǎo)五步寫作法——審列擴(kuò)連查第一步細(xì)審題定要點(diǎn)［2019福建]假定你是李華，收到英國(guó)筆友Harry的郵件，獲悉他在機(jī)器人制作比賽中獲獎(jiǎng)。2審人稱：第二人稱、第一人稱審文體：應(yīng)用文審主題：對(duì)機(jī)器人的看法和機(jī)器人的用途請(qǐng)根據(jù)郵件內(nèi)容給他回復(fù)。詞數(shù)80左右。審時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)參考詞匯：congratulation祝賀注意事項(xiàng)：1.回復(fù)郵件時(shí)可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，郵件格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.意思清楚，表達(dá)通順，行文連貫，書(shū)寫規(guī)范；3.請(qǐng)勿在文中使用真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。DearHarry，

?Yours，LiHua

第二步分段落列要點(diǎn)首段：祝賀對(duì)方(congratulations)。中間段：回答對(duì)方在郵件中提問(wèn)：對(duì)機(jī)器人的看法、是否想有一

個(gè)機(jī)器人和原因(helpful)。結(jié)尾：表達(dá)祝愿。希望對(duì)方取得更大進(jìn)步(makeprogress)。第三步擴(kuò)句子精加工首段：祝賀對(duì)方<錯(cuò)誤句>Congratulation！Iamgladshareyourgoodnews！<一般句>Congratulations！Iamgladtoshareyourgoodnews！<高分句>1.

Congratulations！HowgladIamtoshareyour

goodnews！

?Congratulations！HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews！

要點(diǎn)一

對(duì)機(jī)器人的看法<錯(cuò)誤句>Robotishelpful.They’llplayaimportantroleinourdaily

life.<一般句>Robotsarehelpful.They’llplayanimportantroleinour

dailylife.?中間段：<高分句>2.

Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways.Andinthe

futurethey’llplaymoreimportantrolesinourdaily

life.

?Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways.Andinthelife.

futurethey’llplaymoreimportantrolesinourdaily要點(diǎn)二

是否想有一個(gè)機(jī)器人<錯(cuò)誤句>Iwishhavearobotofmyownoneday.<一般句>Iwishtohavearobotofmyownoneday.<高分句>3.

I’mdyingtohavearobotofmyown.

?I’mdyingtohavearobotofmyown.

要點(diǎn)三想擁有機(jī)器人的原因<錯(cuò)誤句>Theycanhelpusdosomehouseworklikecook，cleanthe

houseandsoon.<一般句>Theycanhelpusdosomehouseworklikecooking，

cleaningthehouseandsoon.<高分句>4.

Robotscanhelpmygrandparentsdosomehouse

worksuchascooking，cleaningthehouseandso

on.

?Robotscanhelpmygrandparentsdosomehouseworksuchascooking，cleaningthehouseandsoon.

結(jié)尾：祝愿取得更大進(jìn)步<錯(cuò)誤句>Ihopeyoumakemanyprogresses.<一般句>Ihopeyou’llmakegreatprogress.<高分句>5.

Hopingyou’llmakegreaterprogress.

?Hopingyou’llmakegreaterprogress.

第四步連句子成短文<優(yōu)秀范文>DearHarry，過(guò)渡句，引出下文Congratulations！

HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews！Ithinkrobotsarehelpfulinmanyways.Andinthefuturethey’llplaymoreimportantrolesinourdailylife.What’smore，I’mdyingtohavearobotofmyown.用And和What’smore分別引出機(jī)器人在人們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械淖饔眉白髡叩膽B(tài)度Icanhaveittakecareofmygrandparentswhenwearenotathome.Yousee，mygrandparentsareoldandcannotmoveeasily.Itcanhelpthemdosomehouseworksuchascooking，cleaningthehouseandsoon.Hopingyou’llmakegreaterprogress.Yours，LiHua第五步查全文得高分首先依次檢查人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、文體、主題是否正確，要點(diǎn)是否齊全；然后檢查句型、單詞拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)是否正確。實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練［2023莆田一檢]上周六你和父母一起參觀了科技館，你們對(duì)“未來(lái)機(jī)器人與人類生活”主題展廳的一款居家機(jī)器人很感興趣，你打算在本周的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)交流課上向你班上的同學(xué)介紹它。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的圖示信息及要求用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文為交流課做準(zhǔn)備。3注意事項(xiàng)：1.短文須包含上邊提示的所有信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)80左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。LastSaturday，Iwenttothescienceandtechnologymuseumwithmyparents.

Aspecialmachinecaughtmyattention.Itwasanewkindofrobot—HomeDoctor.

Aspecialmachinecaughtmyattention.Itwasanewkindofrobot—HomeDoctor.

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HomeDoctorwasinventedtwomonthsago.Anditwasinventedbythreeyoungmen.Itisveryalovely，anditisabout1.2meterstall.Itismadefromrecycledmaterials，likesteelandplastic.

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