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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的短文。DuringthesummerbeforePattyenteredfifthgrade,shedecidedtotryanewsport.SwimtrainingwasnearlyoverandPattywasthefastestswimmerinheragegroup.Shehadalwaysbeenthebest.Theneighborhoodwasofferingaone-weektennistrainingcourse.PattyandherfriendDarlagotpermissionfromtheirparentstojoin.OnSaturdaymorning,Darla’smomtookthegirlstoastoreandboughtthemeachagood,usedtennisracket.“Ifyougirlssticktotennis,thenwe’lltalkaboutanewracket.Thesewilldofornow.”Thegirlswereexcitedabouttheirnewpurchases.OnMondaymorning,at7:00a.m.,Patty’smomwokeherup.“It’stimefortennis!”Pattycoveredherface.“Mom,it’stooearly!”Shemadegreatefforttogetoutofbedanddowntothebreakfasttable.PattyfinishedbreakfastandrantoDarla’shouse,thentheywalkedtothecourt.Mrs.Cane,thetenniscoach,linedeveryoneupandstartedwiththebasics.Afterthat,Mrs.Canetirelesslytaughtthemtopracticetheirforehandandbackhand.Bytheendoftheweek,Pattyhadmadeimpressiveprogress.Mrs.CanecommentedthatPattyhadlotsofpotential.Darla,ontheotherhand,wasstruggling.Theotherteenagerswerehavingatoughtimeofit,too.Pattywastheonlyonewhoseemedtogetsomewhere.Sincethen,DarlahadalwaysbeenoutintheAugustheat,practicingherservesorhittingtheball.Pattywasn’treallyinterested.Shefeltshewassucha“natural”fortennisthatshereallydidn’tneedtopractice.Bytheendofthesummer,Darlabegantogetthehangofit.Shejoinedaneighborhoodjuniortennisteam.TherewouldbematcheseveryThursday.Pattywantedtojoinaswell,butshedidn’twanttomissherfavoriteTVshow.Shetoldherselfthatshewouldjoinitwhenshegotsomefreetime.IfDarlahadfun,shewouldjointheteaminthespring.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.Paragraph2:Pattycouldn’tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.網(wǎng)球訓(xùn)練故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:著重描寫訓(xùn)練課程中Patty的糟糕表現(xiàn),與Darla的出色形成鮮明對比,突出Patty的受挫感。第二段:圍繞Patty回家后的反思,她決定改變,展現(xiàn)她努力訓(xùn)練的過程和結(jié)果,體現(xiàn)她的成長。情感線Patty一開始自恃天賦,在訓(xùn)練中表現(xiàn)不佳后,從自信滿滿變得極度受挫?;丶衣飞?,她懊悔、自責(zé),下定決心改變。之后,她滿懷熱情與毅力投入訓(xùn)練,內(nèi)心充滿希望,期待能在未來證明自己,實(shí)現(xiàn)從自負(fù)到奮進(jìn)的情感轉(zhuǎn)變。故事線Patty遲到參加新的訓(xùn)練課程,表現(xiàn)糟糕。Darla在訓(xùn)練中表現(xiàn)出色,獲得教練多次贊揚(yáng)。Patty因自己的表現(xiàn)感到沮喪,回家路上深刻反思。Patty決定改變,邀請Darla一起放學(xué)后訓(xùn)練。Patty在訓(xùn)練中克服困難,不斷進(jìn)步。Patty在后續(xù)的網(wǎng)球賽事中取得好成績,證明自己。主旨升華句ThisexperiencetaughtPatty,andallofus,thattrueexcellencecomesnotfromtalentalonebutfromconsistenthardworkandahumbleattitude.(這次經(jīng)歷教會(huì)了Patty,也教會(huì)了我們所有人,真正的卓越并非僅源于天賦,更來自持續(xù)的努力和謙遜的態(tài)度。)Patty'sjourneyfromover-confidencetoself-improvementshowsthatsetbackscanbesteppingstonestosuccessifwehavethecouragetofacethemandthedeterminationtochange.(Patty從過度自信到自我提升的歷程表明,如果我們有勇氣面對挫折并有決心改變,挫折就能成為通往成功的墊腳石。)ThroughPatty'sstory,welearnthatnomatterhowtalentedweare,withoutdedicationandperseverance,ourpotentialwillneverbefullyrealized.(通過Patty的故事,我們了解到無論我們多么有天賦,沒有專注和毅力,我們的潛力永遠(yuǎn)無法完全實(shí)現(xiàn)。)ThetransformationofPattynotonlyreflectsherpersonalgrowthbutalsoservesasaninspirationtoothers,remindingusthatit'snevertoolatetostartworkinghardforourgoals.(Patty的轉(zhuǎn)變不僅反映了她的個(gè)人成長,也激勵(lì)著他人,提醒我們?yōu)槟繕?biāo)努力永遠(yuǎn)都不晚。)Patty'sstoryisapowerfulreminderthatinthepursuitofexcellence,hardworkalwaystrumpstalent,andwithapositivemindset,wecanovercomeanyobstacle.(Patty的故事有力地提醒我們,在追求卓越的道路上,努力總是勝過天賦,擁有積極的心態(tài),我們就能克服任何障礙。)示范一Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.Pattystrolledincasually,thinkingshe'dbreezethroughitasusual.Butassoonasthepracticebegan,shewasinforashock.Herserveswerewild,flyingfaroutofbounds,andherbackhandswereclumsy.Meanwhile,Darla,withherfocusedpractice,movedgracefullyonthecourt,hittingeveryballwithprecision.Mrs.Cane'sconstantpraiseforDarlafeltlikeaslapinthefacetoPatty.Pattycouldn’tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.Shewasfilledwithself-loathingforherlaziness.Thatnight,shemadeadetailedtrainingplan.Thenextday,shedraggedDarlatothecourtrightafterschool.Daybyday,Pattypushedherselfharder,correctinghermistakesbitbybit.Whenthenexttennistournamentcame,Pattysteppedontothecourtwithconfidence.Herhardworkpaidoffassheplayedbrilliantly,winningtheadmirationofeveryone,includingMrs.Cane.示范二Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.Pattyarrivedlate,yawning.Duringthedrills,shestruggledtocoordinatehermovements.Herserveslackedpower,andshemissedeasyreturns.Darla,ontheotherhand,wasapictureofconcentration.Sheexecutedeveryshotflawlessly,followingMrs.Cane'sadviceperfectly.Thecoach'spraiseforDarlamadePatty'sheartsink.Pattycouldn’tstopthinkingofherpoorperformanceonthewayhome.Sherealizedshehadlethertalentgotowaste.Thenextmorning,shewokeupearlyandwenttothecourtalone.Shepracticedforhours,sweatingunderthesun.WhenDarlajoinedherlater,theypracticedtogether,sharingtipsandencouragement.Astheweekspassed,Patty'sskillsimprovedremarkably.Inthenextlocaltennismatch,Pattyfacedtoughopponentsbutremainedcalm.Herperseverancepaidoff,andsheachievedagreatresult,provingthathardworkcanturnthingsaround.參考答案Theweekbeforeschoolstarted,Mrs.Caneheldanothertrainingcourse.DarlaandPattysignedupimmediately.Inaclass,Mrs.Caneaskedtheteenagerstoplayinturn.Darlacamefirst,impressingotherswithherexcellentperformance.Mrs.CanewaspleasedwithDarla’sprogress.“Well,Icantellwho’sbeenpracticing!”shesmiled.SoonitwasPatty’sturn.Everyoneloo
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