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2024-2025學(xué)年高一英語上學(xué)期期末真題分類匯編-教師版一一專題10
讀后續(xù)寫
II
I經(jīng)典基礎(chǔ)題
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(23-24高一上.陜西西安?期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段、使之構(gòu)成一篇完
整的短文。
Miahadalwaysbeenashyandreservedgirl.Throughoutherschoolyears,shestruggledwithpublic
speaking,oftenfeelingherheartraceandherpalmssweatatthemerethoughtofstandinginfrontofacrowd.This
fearheldherbackinmanyways,makingherpassupopportunitiesthatcameherway,fromleadingclassprojects
toparticipatinginschooldebates.Herclassmatessawherasthequietgirlinthebackrow,theonewhoalwayshad
hernoseinabook,butseldomraisedherhandtoanswerquestions.
Duringherfinalyearofhighschool,Mia'sEnglishteacher,Mr.Thompson,announcedtheannualspeech
competition.Thethemewas"OvercomingChallenges,9,anditwasasignificantpartofthegrade.Miafelta
familiarwaveofanxietywashoverher.However,thistime,somethingwithinherstirred.Shewastiredofletting
herfearsdefineherexperiencesandlimithergrowth.Itwasasparkthatinspiredherdeterminationtochangeher
life.
Withanewfounddetermination,Miadecidedtofaceherfearhead-on.Shechoseatopicclosetoherheart:
“ThePowerofSteppingOutofYourComfortZone.^^Sheresearchedextensively,wroteandrewroteherspeech
multipletimes,andpracticedinfrontofhermirror,thenherfamilyandgradually,asmallgroupoffriends.Each
stepwasachallenge,pushingherbeyondthefamiliarboundaries(界限)ofhercomfortzone.
Thedayofthecompetitionarrived,andasMiawaitedforherturn,shecouldfeelthefamiliarsymptomsof
heranxietycreepingin.Butsheremindedherselfofthejourneyshehadgonethrough,theeffortshehadputinand
thesupportshehadreceived.Sherealizedthatregardlessoftheoutcome,shehadalreadyovercomethebiggest
challengebyfacingherfeardirectly.Thisrealizationbroughtasenseofcalmoverherandaquietconfidence.
注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為120左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Miasteppedontothestage.
WhathappenednextwaxunforgettableforMia.
【答案】范文
Miasteppedontothestage.Shetookadeepbreath,lookedupattheaudienceandbeganherspeech.Her
voicewassteadyandconfident,andshedeliveredeachwordwithconviction.Theaudiencelistenedattentively,
occasionallynoddinginagreementorsmilinginencouragement.AsMiareachedtheendofherspeech,shefelta
senseofprideandaccomplishmentwashoverher.Shehaddoneit!Shehadfacedherfearanddeliveredapowerful
messagetoherselfandothers.
WhathappenednextwasunforgettableforMia.Thejudgesdeliberatedforafewmomentsbefore
announcingthewinners.WhentheycalledoutMia'snameasthefirst-placewinner,shecouldhardlybelieveher
ears.Theapplausefromtheaudiencewasdeafening,andherclassmatesrushedtocongratulateher.Mr.Thompson
beamedwithpride,knowingthathehadwitnessedatruetransformationinoneofhisstudents.ForMia,this
momentmarkednotonlyavictoryinaspeechcompetitionbutalsoaturningpointinherlife.Shehadlearnedthat
steppingoutofhercomfortzonecouldleadtoincrediblegrowthandopportunities.
【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開,講述了米婭一直是一個(gè)害羞、矜持的女孩,她在公共演講方面一直很吃
力,這種恐懼在很多方面阻礙了她,讓她錯(cuò)過了很多機(jī)會(huì)。在米婭高中的最后一年,她的英語老師湯普森
先生宣布了一年一度的演講比賽。在老師的鼓勵(lì)下,米婭完成了公眾演講,得到了成長和機(jī)會(huì)。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫:
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“米婭走上舞臺(tái)”可知,第一段可描寫米婭演講的具體過程和完成演講的感受。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“接下來發(fā)生的事情讓米婭難以忘懷”可知,第二段可描寫米婭贏得比賽,得到了同學(xué)的
祝賀,米婭自己也得到了成長和機(jī)會(huì)。
2.續(xù)寫線索:走上舞臺(tái)——開始演講——完成演講——取得勝利——得到認(rèn)可——米婭感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①結(jié)束:reachtheendof/finish
②開始:begin/start
③仔細(xì)考慮:deliberate/thinkover
情緒類
①恐懼:fear/dread
②驚人的:incredible/amazing
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]AsMiareachedtheendofherspeech,shefeltasenseofprideandaccomplishmentwash
overher.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)
[高分句型2]Mr.Thompsonbeamedwithpride,knowingthathehadwitnessedatruetransformationinoneofhis
students.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語以及that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)
(二)
(23-24高一上.山西太原.期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完
整的短文。
GrowingupinColorado,Ipreferbeingoutdoors.Duringmysparetime,Ienjoyswimming,climbing
mountainsandwater-skiing.AlthoughskiingwasthesportIhadneverlearned,Iwantedtohaveatry.SowhenI
recentlygotaninvitationtoaskiingtripinDeerValley,Ijumpedatthechance.Ididn'tthinkitwouldbethathard
tolearn.Afterall,Iwasfairlyfit,andIusedtowaterski-thathadtocountforsomething,right?
Itturnedoutthattherewasnotsomuchhelp.ItoldthecoachIwas"beginnerlevel”,andIwasgroupedwith
somewomenwhohadskiedonlyacoupleoftimesbefore.Atfirst,Ilearnedhowtoputonmyskisuitandcontrol
myspeedanddirection.Withthehelpofthecoach,Istartedtopractice.
Oncewemasteredthebasicskills,mycoachledustothegreenrun-theeasyslope(斜坡)forskibeginners.
WhenIreachedthetop,Istarteddownaneasygreenrunwithothersinourgroup."OK,thisisn'tsobad!Pmdoing
it!”Ithoughtatthestartoftherun.Thencameaharderslope.Iwantedtoquit.However,mypridedidn'tletme
stop.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為100個(gè)左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
1begantoskidownthehill.
Buttheaccidentwouldneverstopme.
【答案】Ibegantoskidownthehill.Firstly,Imovedinchbyinch,andgraduallyIpickedupspeeduntilItookoff
——IwasenjoyingtheflyingfeelingwhenIaccidentallyhitatreeandendedwithanosedivingintothesnow.
“Ouch!”Icriedoutinpain,feelingmylegshurt.Thecoachandtheteammatesrantowardsme.Theycheckedme
upandmovedmeoutoftheruns.
Buttheaccidentwouldneverstopme.Shortly,Istoodup.Igatheredthestrengthtocontinue.Amazingly,Ifound
joyandprideintheprocessoffallingandgettingbackupontheskisoverandoveragain.Skiinghasbecomemy
favorite.Fvecometorealizethattheessenceofskiingliesinthediscoveryofabetterself.Feardoesn,tshapemy
future,butbraverydoes.
【導(dǎo)語】本文以戶外活動(dòng)為線索展開,講述了作者喜愛戶外活動(dòng),初次嘗試學(xué)習(xí)滑雪時(shí)以為自己劃水的經(jīng)
歷會(huì)有所幫助,然而并沒有。再掌握了基本技巧后,作者隨教練去了綠道,雖然坡道很陡,但作者的驕傲
還是沒能讓他放棄。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫:
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“我開始向山下滑雪?!钡谝欢慰擅鑼懽髡哂捎隍湴脸隽耸鹿省?/p>
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“但事故永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)阻止我?!笨芍诙慰擅鑼懽髡卟磺粨?,克服困難,繼續(xù)前進(jìn)。
2.續(xù)寫線索:加快——碰撞——摔倒一繼續(xù)前進(jìn)——勇敢——成功——快樂一感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①力口速:pickupspeed/speedup
②繼續(xù):continue/goon/carryon
情緒類
①快樂:joy/pleasure
②勇敢:bravery/courage
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Firstly,Imovedinchbyinch,andgraduallyIpickedupspeeduntilItookoff一Iwas
enjoyingtheflyingfeelingwhenIaccidentallyhitatreeandendedwithanosedivingintothesnow.(由連接詞
until引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句以及with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu))
[高分句型2]I'vecometorealizethattheessenceofskiingliesinthediscoveryofabetterself.(由連接詞that弓|導(dǎo)
的賓語從句)
(三)
(23-24高一上.廣西南寧?期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完
整的短文。
“Whatwillwebesingingforcompetitionthisyear?”astudentfrommyhighschoolchoiraskedeagerly.Iwas
reallyworriedaboutthismoment.atIwasthinking,1said,"maybewe'llskipthecompetitionandjustworkhardon
theconcertsthisyear.^^
"NO!"thekidsdisagreed.6tWewanttocompete!FortheFirstPlace!It'satradition!,?
Thiswastrue.Medalsonthefrontwallofthemusicroomwerewonbymyformerexcellentstudents.But
theyhadgraduated,leavingmewithonlytwenty-twoyoungstudents,inexperiencedkidswhocouldn'treadmusic,
andcouldsingonlyasimplemelody(樂章).
“MaybewecouldwintheSecondPlacethisyear,“Isuggested.Ikneweventhatwouldbeanear-impossible
task,thinkingourcompetitors:twofamousschoolswithfiftymemberseach."No!”thekidsscreamed.ctTheFirst
Place!^^
Ishookmyhead."FirstPlaceisextremelydifficult.^^
“Wecandoit!”theyshouted.4tWecandoit!”
'Tilthinkaboutit,“Isaid,hopingtheireagernesswoulddieoffinacoupleofweeks.
Butthatdidn'thappen.Instead,theclassbecamemoredetermined.Everydaytheyaskedandbegged.Asa
teacher,Icouldn'ttellthemtheyweren,tgoodenough.Tocooltheireagerness,Ishowedthemadifficultpieceof
musicfromthecompetitionlist,butitsimplyendedwith"It'sokay,Mrs.Pliszka.We'llmakeit.”
Istruggledtomakeadecision.IfIdestroyedtheirhope,wouldIdestroytheirspirit?Irememberedoneofmy
collegeprofessor^saying,nEverychildwilllearniftheteacheriswillingtotryhisorherbestasthestudent.^^I
wasn'tafraidofhardwork,andIenjoyedachallenge.ButIwasn'tamagicworker.Andso,Ithinkseriouslyover
thischallenge.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)為150詞左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:
Finally,onemorningImadethedecision.
Paragraph2:
Whenmygroupsteppedonthestage,Icouldclearlynoticedistrustfromtheaudiencesayingmygroupwasso
small.
【答案】
Finally,onemorningImadethedecision.Istormedintoclassanddeclaredwewouldsingforthecontestand
enteredClassA.Therestofmysentencewaslostinscreamsofdelightandapplause.Astheweeksprogressed,
eachmorningthekidspractisedsinging,workedonreadingmusic,learnedmusicalterms,practicedrhythmand
markedchanges,preparedconcertmusic,andwentoverandoverthethreecontestnumbers.Theirprogresswasso
remarkableevenIbeganbelievingintheirdream.Sevenmonthsintotheschoolyear,whenthecontestdayfinally
arrived,thekidsfeltreadytotakeontheworld!
Whenmygroupsteppedonthestage,Icouldclearlynoticedistrustfromtheaudiencesayingmygroupwasso
small.Imouthed,"Smile!”Theylookedconfident.Itookadeepbreath,andwebegan.Theyperformedmasterfully.
Twoverylonghourslatertheresultswereposted.Istoodfrozen,staringatthelistindisbelief:aFirstPlaceaward
withthehighestmarksofall.Allaroundkidswerescreamingandembracing.Warmtearswetmycheeks.Iwas
surroundedbykidswhohadadream-kidswhorefusedtogiveup-kidswhotaughtmetoneverdoubtthe
possibilityofsuccessforanystudentoranyclasseveragain.
【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開,講述了作者的高中合唱團(tuán)需要參加一年一度的歌唱比賽,由于優(yōu)秀學(xué)生
已經(jīng)畢業(yè),只剩下了22名年新生,作者擔(dān)心這些學(xué)生不能取得好的成績(jī),所以決定不參比賽。但學(xué)生們對(duì)
待音樂的熱情高漲,強(qiáng)烈要求參加比賽,于是作者決心與他們一起迎接挑戰(zhàn)。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫:
由第一段的首句內(nèi)容“終于,有一天早上我做了決定。”可知,第一段可描寫作者最終決定要參加比賽,并與
孩子一起努力練習(xí)的過程。
由第二段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)我的團(tuán)隊(duì)走上舞臺(tái)時(shí),我可以清楚地注意到觀眾的不信任,他們說我的團(tuán)隊(duì)太小了?!?/p>
可知,第二段描述孩子們帶著作者的鼓勵(lì)信心滿滿地的參加比賽,并取得了令人難以置信的優(yōu)異成績(jī)。
2.續(xù)寫線索:擔(dān)心但決心參賽——努力練習(xí)——參加比賽——被質(zhì)疑——演唱——表現(xiàn)出色——分?jǐn)?shù)最高
感悟
3.詞匯激活:
行為類
沖進(jìn):storminto/rushinto
放棄:giveup/quit
拒絕做某事:refusetodosth./declinetodosth.
情緒類
高興:delight/joy
不相信:indisbelief/withsuspicion
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Sevenmonthsintotheschoolyear,whenthecontestdayfinallyanived,thekidsfeltready
totakeontheworld!(由when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句)
【高分句型2】Iwassurroundedbykidswhohadadream-kidswhorefusedtogiveup-kidswhotaughtmeto
neverdoubtthepossibilityofsuccessforanystudentoranyclasseveragain.(由who弓I導(dǎo)限定性定語從句)
(四)
(23-24高一上.遼寧丹東?期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完
整的短文。
Ifyouareconstantlylackofconfidenceandworriedaboutwhatotherpeoplethinkaboutyourshortcomings,
youwillnevergettowhereyouneedtogoinlife.ThiswaswhatIlearnedfrommyownexperience.
MynameisPeter.BeforeIwasborn,thedoctorsexaminedmymomandfoundtherewassomethingwrong
withmyface,andactuallyitwasworse.Withmy“weird"face,IknewIwasnotanordinaryten-year-oldkid.Ihad
neverbeentoarealschoolbefore,notbecauseofthewayIlooked,butallthesurgeriesIhad.Momhomeschooled
me.Ibecamestronger,though.Somaybeitwastimeformetogototherealschool.
Oneday,IhappenedtohearMomandDadtalkingaboutmequietly.tsWecan'tkeepprotectingMom
whisperedtoDad,“Wehavetohelphimlearntodealwithit.Wecan'tjustkeepavoidingsituationsthat...”,but
shedidn'tevenfinishhersentencebecauseshesawme."Gobacktosleep,Peter,Momsaidsoftly.
“Everyonewillstareatmeatschool/Isaid,suddenlycrying.
Momcameover,puttingherhandonmine."Honey,youknowifyoudon'twanttodothis,youdon'thaveto.
Butwespoketotheprincipal(校長),Mr.Greenandtoldhimhowfunnyandsmartyouare.WhenItoldhimabout
allyoursurgeries,andhowbraveyouare,'Wow,Ihavetomeetthiskid.'"Momsmiledatme.
“Heisreallyaniceman.Besides,arealschoolisreallygoodforyou.Peter,youwillmakelotsoffriendsand
learnthingsyouhaveneverlearnedwithDadadded,raisinghishandasiftoswear.
“But…Idon'twanttogo.Iamafraid...9,1saidinalowvoice.
“HowaboutatleastmeetingMr.Greenbeforeyoumakeupyourmind?^^Momasked.
Inodded,unwillingtoacceptthearrangement.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:
Wearrivedattheschoolafewweeksbeforethestartoftheschool.
Paragraph2:
AftertakingatouroftheschoolandhearingMr.Green'swords,Irealizeditwastimetomakeachange.
【答案】Paragraph1:
Wearrivedattheschoolafewweeksbeforethestartoftheschool.IadmittedthatIwassonervousthatthe
butterfliesinmystomachweremorelikepigeonsflyingaroundmyinsidesbeforeIsawMr.Green,whowas
waitingforusattheentrance.Aftershakinghandswithus,heproposedthatwetakeatourintheschoolfirst.Mr.
Greenpatientlyintroducedthesciencelab,theartroom,themodemclassroomandthelunchroom,whichwere
reallyattractive.Afterthat,wewenttohisoffice.Mr.Greenstaredintomyeyesasifseeingmyinnerselflocked
awayinside.Hekneltdowninfrontofme,pattedmeontheshoulderandsaidsoftly,"Peter,Iknowyouareasmart
andbraveboy.Don'tletyourinnerfeardefeatyou.Faceitbravely!”
Paragraph2:
AftertakingatouroftheschoolandhearingMr.Greenswords,Irealizeditwastimetomakeachange.Imade
upmymindtothrowoffmyfearandshortcomingsandlearnmoreinterestingthingsinthenewschool.After
secondsofsilence,Inoddedmyheadconfidently,saying"Mr.Green,Iwantto,no,Iamdeterminedtostudyinthis
school.Iwilltrymybesttoadapttothelifehere."Lookingatmewithabigandbrightsmileonface,Mr.Green
said"Idobelieveinyou!^^HearingwhatIsaid,mymomalsocouldn'tholdbackhertearsofjoy,huggingme
delightedly.ItfinallydawnedonmethatonlywhenIhaveconfidenceinmyselfcanIconquerthefear.Remember
toholdyourheadup.
【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)是讀后續(xù)寫。本文以人物為線索展開?!拔摇苯斜说?,從出生就長著一張“奇怪”的臉,
以前從來沒有上過真正的學(xué)校,不是因?yàn)椤拔摇钡拈L相,而是因?yàn)椤拔摇弊隽四敲炊嗍中g(shù)。媽媽在家教育“我”。
有一天爸爸媽媽告訴“我”,他們想送“我”去正常的學(xué)校上學(xué),“我”不想去。在媽媽的勸說下,“我”同意見見
校長,雖然“我”不愿意接受這樣的安排。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫
①由第一段句首內(nèi)容“我們?cè)陂_學(xué)前幾周到達(dá)學(xué)校?!笨芍?,第一段可以描寫“我”見到校長后,校長和“我”的
交流以及“我”在學(xué)校的活動(dòng)。
②由第二段句首內(nèi)容“在參觀了學(xué)校并聽了格林先生的話后,我意識(shí)到是時(shí)候做出改變了?!笨芍?,參觀了學(xué)
校并聽了格林先生的話后,“我”的心理變化和大家對(duì)“我”的鼓勵(lì)。
2.續(xù)寫線索:到學(xué)校一見到校長一參觀一校長的鼓勵(lì)一想做出改變一答應(yīng)一感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①承認(rèn):admit/acknowledge
②等待:waitfor/await
③建議:propose/suggest
情緒類
①擔(dān)心的:nervous/worried
②恐懼:fear/horror
【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】IadmittedthatIwassonervousthatthebutterfliesinmystomachweremorelikepigeons
flyingaroundmyinsidesbeforeIsawMr.Green,whowaswaitingforusattheentranced運(yùn)用了that弓|導(dǎo)的賓語
從句、so...hat引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句、who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)
【高分句型2】Aftershakinghandswithus,heproposedthatwetakeatourintheschoolfirst.Mr.Greenpatiently
introducedthesciencelab,theartroom,themodernclassroomandthelunchroom,whichwerereallyattractive.
(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞shaking作賓語、that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句、which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)
【高分句型3]HearingwhatIsaid,mymomalsocouldn'tholdbackhertearsofjoy,huggingmedelightedly.(運(yùn)
用了現(xiàn)在分詞Hearing、hugging作狀語)
(五)
(23-24高一上.河南濮陽.期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完
整的短文。
Steve,21,wasleadingasmallteamintoanabandoned(廢棄的)minenearParadisePines,California.Withhim
werehis19-year-oldbrotherAllen,andafishingfriend,32-year-oldBobbyErler.
Afteracoupleofhoursofexploring,Stevesuddenlyfelttheearthgivewayunderhim.Thedrainageshaft(排
水井)!Hisfingersclawedhelplesslyatthewetsoilashefell.Hewasfallingintodarkness,hisbodystruggling
againstthewallsoftheshaft.
20feetaway,Allenheardaloudcry.’Tmclimbingdown,^^hetoldBobby.
Withhistorch(手電筒)underhisarm,Allenslidrapidlydownthepipe.'Tmcoming,Steve!”heyelledseveral
times.Noanswer.
AsAllenslidtowardsthebottomofthemineshaft,hesawStevefloatingfacedowninthewater.Heslipped
hisarmsroundSteveandpattedhimontheback.WatercameoutofSteve?smouthcontinuously.
"I'mgoingtodie,right?^^Stevesaidinaweakvoice.
“Noway,“Allensaid."Bobby'sgoingforhelp.^^
At3:20pm,Bobbysteppedthroughthedoorofthelocalfirestation,amileandahalffromthetopofthe
canyon(峽谷).“Myfriends.Trapped/9hesaid,outofbreath.64LastChanceMine.Youhavetohurry!,?
Onehundredmilesaway,BobTrussell'sphonerangat5pm.LeaderoftheLassenCountySearchandRescue
Team,Trussell,44,hadtheonlyteaminnorthernCaliforniatrainedtoleadminerescues."Tilpulltogethermy
team,^^hesaid,“butif11takesometimetogetthere."Anhourlater,hewasleadingalineofsixtruckstowards
ParadisePines.
Suddenly,Stevefellunconscious(不省人事的).Allenwonderedhowlongtheycouldholdon.
注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.
Stevewasrushedtohospitalatonce.
【答案】
SuddenlyAllensawsomethingshiningabovethem.Itwasthelightfromaheadlamp!Therescueteamhad
arrived.Allenquicklysignaledwithhisowntorch,tryingtopinpointtheirexactlocation.Afewminuteslater,the
teamfoundthem.TrussellandhisteamplacedSteveonabackboardandstretcherandslowlyliftedhimupthe
shaft.Allenfollowedcloselybehind.Itwasadifficultascent,buttheyeventuallymadeittothetop.
Stevewasrushedtothehospitalatonce.Thedoctorsdiscoveredthathehadafracturedarmandpoorphysical
condition.Theyalsofoundthathehadcontractedasevereillnessafterbeingsubmergedinthecoldwaterforso
long.Itwasaclosecall,butStevewasgoingtobeokay.Thoughshakenupbytheexperience,SteveandAllen
weregratefulforthequickresponseoftherescueteam.Inspiredbytheirbravery,Stevedecidedtobecomea
volunteerfortheLassenCountySearchandRescueTeam,andhehasgoneontohelprescueothersinsimilar
situations.Theincidenttaughthimtoneverunderestimatethepowerofnatureandtoalwaysbepreparedforthe
unexpected.
【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開,文章講述了21歲的史蒂夫和他的小隊(duì)下了一個(gè)廢棄礦井,卻在下降時(shí)被
困住了。19歲的兄弟艾倫聽到了史蒂夫的呼救聲,決定下去救他。艾倫成功找到史蒂夫,史蒂夫己經(jīng)昏迷
不醒。朋友鮑比去找救援隊(duì),他們最終尋找到了史蒂夫和艾倫,并成功救出了史蒂夫。史蒂夫被送往醫(yī)院
治療,他的傷勢(shì)嚴(yán)重但最終康復(fù)。這次經(jīng)歷讓史蒂夫決定加入救援隊(duì),幫助救助其他遇險(xiǎn)者,并讓他認(rèn)識(shí)
到不能低估自然的力量,要時(shí)刻準(zhǔn)備好迎接意外。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫:
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“突然,艾倫看到有什么東西在他們頭頂閃閃發(fā)光?!笨芍?,第一段可描寫艾倫用自己的
火把發(fā)出信號(hào),讓救助團(tuán)隊(duì)找到他們,并且對(duì)史蒂夫進(jìn)行營救。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“史蒂夫立即被緊急送往醫(yī)院?!笨芍诙慰擅鑼懯返俜虮凰偷结t(yī)院后得到了緊急的
救治,并對(duì)救援隊(duì)伍表示感謝,同時(shí)史蒂夫決定自己也要成為一名搜救隊(duì)的志愿者繼續(xù)幫助救援處于類似
情況的其他人。
2.續(xù)寫線索:
艾倫發(fā)出信號(hào)向救援隊(duì)求救一史蒂夫得到及時(shí)救助一二人向救助隊(duì)伍表示感謝一史蒂夫決定自己也
要加入救援團(tuán)隊(duì)幫助他人——史蒂夫的最終感悟
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①發(fā)現(xiàn):find/locate/discover
②.放置:put/lay
③.淹沒:submerge/drown/sink
情緒類
①.感謝:begrateful/showhisgratitude
②.鼓舞:inspired/encouraged
[點(diǎn)睛][高分句型1].Allenquicklysignaledwithhisowntorch,tryingtopinpointtheirexactlocation.(由現(xiàn)在
分詞作狀語)
[高分句型2].Thoughshakenupbytheexperience,SteveandAllenweregratefulforthequickresponseofthe
rescueteam.(句中構(gòu)成狀語從句的省略結(jié)構(gòu))
(六)
(23-24高一上.河北邢臺(tái)?期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完
整的短文。
Afterhittingthebuttonofanalarmclockacoupleoftimes,Sarahrushedtogetdressed.Shehadabig
presentationatwork,andsheneededthecaffeinemorethanever.Shegrabbed(抓?。﹉erkeys,rushedoutofthe
door,andmadeherwaytothefamiliarcoffeeshop.
Asshejoinedthelineofcarsinthedrive-through(免下車的餐館),Sarahcouldn'thelpbutfeelthefamiliar
rushofanticipation.Thesmellofroastedcoffeebeansandthethoughtofhavingacupofcoffeewasherlittledaily
enjoyment.
Thelineofcarswentforwardslowly,andsoon,Sarahfoundherselfatthedrive-throughwindow.She
reachedforherpursetopay,butbeforeshecouldhandoverhercreditcard,thecashiersmiledandsaid,“Your
coffeehasbeencoveredbythecaraheadofyou.”"Really?”sheasked,bothsurprisedandgrateful.Thecashier
nodded.<6Yes,thewomaninthecaraheadwantedtopayitforwardtoday.Enjoyyourcoffee!”
Withawarmsmile,Sarahacceptedthefreecoffeeanddroveaway.Theunexpectedactofkindnesswasin
hermindasshedrankthedeliciouscoffee.Itputaspringinherstepandasmileonherface,makingher
presentationalittlelessworrying.
Assheexitedthedrive-through,Sarahglancedinherrearview(后視的)mirroratthenextcarapproaching
thecoffeeshopwindow.Anideabegantoforminhermind.Maybeshecoulddothesame,payitforwardand
brightensomeoneelse'smorning.Shedecidedtostickaround,parkhercarandgobackintothecoffeeshop.She
approachedthecashierandsaid,'Tdliketopayforthecoffeeofthepersoninthecarbehindme."Thecashier
smiledandnodded,processingthepayment.Sarahknewshehadjuststartedachainofkindness,andshefelta
warmsenseofsatisfaction.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Asshewalkedtohercar,Sarahwaslostinthought.
Theactsofkindnesskeptoncoming.
【答案】參考范文:
Asshewalkedtohercar,Sarahwaslostinthought.Howwouldthenextdriverreact?Wouldtheycontinue
thechainofgoodwill?Shewatchedfromhercarasthedriverbehindherpulleduptothewindow.Thecashier
informedhimthathiscoffeehadalreadybeenpaidfor,andthensomethingbeautifulhappened.Thedriver,a
middle-agedman,smiledandsaidjoyfully,ctThafswonderful!PleaseusethemoneyIwasgoingtospendtopay
forthecoffeeofthecarbehindme."Onepaysforthecoffeeofthepersonbehindher,whichsparksachainofgood
deedsfortheentireday.
Theactsofkindnesskeptoncoming.Ayoungwomanpaidforthecoffeeofatiredmomwithababyinthe
backseat.Aconstructionworkerinapickuptruckcoveredthecostforagroupofexcitedteenagersontheirwayto
school.Anelderlycoupleevengotinontheaction,payingforthecoffeeofateacheronherwaytowork.Andin
thecoffeeshop,peoplebegantotalkaboutit.Thelineofcarsinthedrive-throughgrewlongerasmorepeople
wantedtobeapartofthephenomenon.
【導(dǎo)語】本文以時(shí)間為線索展開,講述了Sarah早上匆忙起床,因?yàn)楣ぷ髦杏幸粋€(gè)重要的報(bào)告,她急需咖啡
因來提神。在前往咖啡店的路上,她加入了汽車通道的隊(duì)列,期待著每天小小的享受一一杯咖啡。到達(dá)
免下車窗口時(shí),她意外地發(fā)現(xiàn)前面車?yán)锏呐恳呀?jīng)為她支付了咖啡費(fèi)用。這個(gè)善舉讓Sarah感到驚訝和感激,
她的心情因此變得輕松愉快。受到這個(gè)善舉的啟發(fā),Sarah決定也傳遞這份善意,她回到咖啡店為下一輛車
里的人買了咖啡。
【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫:
①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)Sarah走向她的車時(shí),她陷入了沉思”可知,第一段可描寫Sarah心里好奇下一個(gè)司
機(jī)是否會(huì)傳遞這份善意,以及她在自己的車?yán)镉^察下一個(gè)司機(jī)的反應(yīng)。
②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“善舉不斷發(fā)生”可知,第二段可描寫不同的人傳遞著這份善意,以及更多的人都想加入
傳遞這份善意的隊(duì)伍中來。
2.續(xù)寫線索:Sarah陷入沉思--Sarah的好奇----Sarah觀察下一個(gè)司機(jī)----善舉延續(xù)---不同的人傳遞善
意——更多的人想?yún)⑴c其中
3.詞匯激活
行為類
①反應(yīng):react/respond
②觀察:watch/observe
③弓I發(fā):spark/cause/bringabout
④談?wù)摚簍alkabout/discuss
情緒類
①高興地:joyfully/happily/merrily
②興奮的:excited/thrilled
【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Shewatchedfromhercarasthedriverbehindherpulleduptothewindow,(as弓|導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀
語從句)
[高分句型2]Onepaysforthecoffeeofthepersonbehindher,whichsparksachainofgooddeedsfortheentire
day.(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)
(七)
(23-24高一上.安徽蚌埠?期末)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完
整的短文。
In1945,a12-year-oldboysawabeautifulbrooch(胸針)inashopwindowthatsethisheartracing.Butthe
price-fivedollars-wasfarbeyondReubenEarle5smeans.Fivedollarscouldbuyalmostaweek'sfoodforhis
family.Reubencouldn'taskhisfatherforthemoney.EverythingMarkEarlemadethroughfishingwenttohis
mother,Dora,whostruggledtofeedandclothetheirfivechildren.
However,heopenedtheshop'sweathereddoorandwentinside.Standingproudandstraightinhisoldbut
cleanshirtandtrousers,hetoldtheshopkeeperwhathewanted,adding,€4ButIdon'thavethemoneyrightnow.
Canyoupleaseholditformeforsometime?”
"I'lltry,"theshopkeepersmiled.
Reubenrespectfullytouchedhisworncapandwalkedout.Hewouldraisethefivedollarsandnottellanybody.
Onhearingthesoundofhammering(敲打)fromasidestreet,Reubensuddenlyhadanidea.Peoplebuilttheirown
homesinBayRoberts,usingnails(釘子)boughtinlargebagsfromalocalfactory.Sometimestheusedbagswere
thrownawayattheconstruction,andReubenknewhecouldsellthembacktothefactoryforfivecentsapiece.
Thatdayhefoundtwobags,whichhesoldtothemaninchargeofpackingnails.
Theboy'shandtightlyheldthefive-centpiecesasheranthetwokilometershome.Nearhishousestoodthe
ancientbarn(谷倉).Reubenfoundanoldsodatinanddroppedhiscoinsinside.Thenheclimbedintothebarnand
hidthetininit.
ItwasdinnertimewhenReubengothome.HisfatherwasreadytoservedinnerasReubentookhisplaceat
thetable.Helookedathismotherandsmiled.Slimandbeautiful,shewasthecenterofthehome,thegluethatheld
ittogether.Herchoreswerenever-ending.Butshewashappy.Herfamilyandtheirwell-beingwerehermost
importantthings.
注意:
1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;
2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題的相應(yīng)位置作答。
Paragraph1:
Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.
Paragraph2:
Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen.
【答案】Onepossibleversion:
Soonthesummervacationcame,andnostudentwasmoredelightedthanReuben.Allsummerlong,despite
choresathome,Reubenkepttohissecrettask.Everydayhewouldcollectnailbags.Thensoonthefallarrived,
andthewindsfromthenorthwerecold.Reubenwanderedaroundthestreets,carefullysearchingforhistreasures.
Oftenhewascold,tiredandhungry,butthethoughtofgettingtheobjectintheshopwindowmadehimcontinue.
Finallyholdingthetincan,hecheerfullyheadedfortheshop,wheretheshopkeeperplacedtheparcelinReuben's
hands.
Racinghome,Reubenburstintothehouse,wherehismotherwasbusyinthekitchen."'Here,Mom!Here!^^
Reubensaidloudlyasherantoherside.Heplace
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