讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)+《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍故事+講義 高三下學(xué)期一模英語(yǔ)試題

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenmyhusbandaskedmewhatIwantedforthecomingfestival,Ireplied,“TheFamousFiveseries.”Hisfirstresponsewas,“What’sthat?”Ihadtoexplain.Heknewtherewaslossandsadnessassociatedwithmovingsomanytimes,andthatI’dlostsomematerialthingsalongtheway.WhatIhadn’texplainedquiteyetwasmydesiretoconnectwithmypastthroughthebooksI’denjoyedasachild.DuringourelementaryschoolyearsinAustria,IwouldfrequenttheBritishbookshopinVienna.Duringthosevisits,Iacquiredalltwenty-onebooksintheFamousFiveseriesbytheBritishauthorEnidBlyton.Ienjoyedreadingabouttheadventuresofthe“Five”,whichincludedsiblings(兄妹)Julian,Dick,andAnneaswellastheircousinGeorginaandherdogTimmy.Thestoriesfeaturefunnyplotscenteringoncatchingbadpeople—quiteextraordinary,consideringtheheroesweremereteenagers!ThebooksweremypassportstoadventuresI’dneverexperiencedinmyownlife.Unfortunately,myfamilyhadtomovetotheUnitedStatesquiteabruptlyduetoahealthemergency.MyparentshadtomakedifficultdecisionsaboutwhattobringtoAmerica.Sincebookswereheavy,myparentswereunabletobringmostofmybookswiththem,includingtheFamousFiveseries.Iwasheartbroken!Fastforwardtosevenyearsintomymarriage,someseventeenyearsafterI’dleftmytreasuredFamousFiveseriesbehind,IdecidedIwantedtoacquiremybooksforaholiday.I’dbeensearchingtheInternetfortheseriesbutgotdisappointed,becausenoAmericanbookpublishersorwebsiteshadthebooks.Wecouldhaveboughtthemonaforeignwebsite,butwewerenervousaboutusingourcreditcardthatway.Thefestivaleventuallyarrivedandmyhusband,daughter,andIsataroundthetable.Wetraditionallyopenedonepresentandeachofuspickedagift.Mydaughteropenedhersfirst,andthenmyhusband.Ieyedmychosenpresent,acolorfullywrappedbox,andguessedwhatitmightbe.“Anelephant?”mydaughtersmiled.“Oh,let’sendthesuspense!”Isaidandbegantearingthewrapping.注意：1．續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2．請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myhusbandlookedatme,saying,“India.”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍故事續(xù)寫(xiě)續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)（兩段）?第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：?打開(kāi)盒子：細(xì)致描繪打開(kāi)棕色盒子時(shí)的動(dòng)作細(xì)節(jié)，雙手的顫抖體現(xiàn)內(nèi)心的緊張與期待，緩緩揭開(kāi)膠帶時(shí)的小心翼翼，突出這一刻的重要性。描述看到盒子里書(shū)籍時(shí)的第一反應(yīng)，眼神的聚焦，面部表情的變化，如眼睛瞬間睜大、嘴巴微張，表現(xiàn)出驚訝與不敢置信。?確認(rèn)書(shū)籍：詳細(xì)描述對(duì)書(shū)籍的觀察，封面雖有磨損但熟悉的圖案、字體，紙張的質(zhì)感，勾起對(duì)童年閱讀時(shí)光的回憶。此時(shí)的內(nèi)心活動(dòng)，從最初的震驚逐漸轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)楦袆?dòng)，眼眶濕潤(rùn)，聲音顫抖地向丈夫詢(xún)問(wèn)書(shū)籍的由來(lái)。?第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)：?丈夫解釋?zhuān)荷钊肟坍?huà)丈夫講述尋找書(shū)籍過(guò)程的場(chǎng)景，他的表情認(rèn)真而深情，眼神中透露出對(duì)妻子的關(guān)愛(ài)。具體說(shuō)明丈夫?yàn)檎业綍?shū)籍所付出的努力，花費(fèi)數(shù)周時(shí)間，通過(guò)各種渠道尋找，聯(lián)系印度的朋友時(shí)的焦急與期待，朋友幫忙在舊書(shū)店找到書(shū)籍時(shí)的喜悅。?情感升華：描述“我”聽(tīng)完丈夫講述后的反應(yīng)，緊緊擁抱丈夫，身體微微顫抖，表達(dá)內(nèi)心的感激與感動(dòng)。進(jìn)一步闡述這份禮物的意義，不僅僅是找回了童年的書(shū)籍，更是丈夫?qū)ψ约荷钌畹睦斫馀c愛(ài)意的體現(xiàn)，這種情感跨越時(shí)空，連接了過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在，讓“我”感受到家庭的溫暖與支持。?情感線(xiàn)?第一段情感線(xiàn)：打開(kāi)盒子前，內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)好奇與期待，心跳加速，對(duì)禮物充滿(mǎn)遐想?？吹綍?shū)籍的瞬間，驚訝與不敢置信占據(jù)主導(dǎo)，大腦一片空白，不敢相信自己的眼睛。確認(rèn)是《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍后，感動(dòng)的情緒涌上心頭，眼眶濕潤(rùn)，聲音顫抖，對(duì)丈夫充滿(mǎn)感激與疑問(wèn)。?第二段情感線(xiàn)：聽(tīng)到丈夫說(shuō)出“印度”時(shí)，內(nèi)心充滿(mǎn)疑惑，急切地想聽(tīng)丈夫解釋。在丈夫講述尋找書(shū)籍的艱難過(guò)程中，感動(dòng)之情愈發(fā)強(qiáng)烈，被丈夫的用心和努力所打動(dòng)。聽(tīng)完丈夫的講述后，感激之情達(dá)到頂點(diǎn)，通過(guò)緊緊擁抱丈夫來(lái)表達(dá)內(nèi)心的情感，此時(shí)不僅對(duì)書(shū)籍的失而復(fù)得感到開(kāi)心，更對(duì)丈夫的愛(ài)有了更深的體會(huì)，感受到家庭的溫暖與幸福。?故事線(xiàn)?丈夫詢(xún)問(wèn)“我”節(jié)日想要什么禮物，“我”表示想要《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍，向丈夫解釋自己童年對(duì)這套書(shū)的喜愛(ài)以及因搬家失去它們的遺憾，渴望通過(guò)這些書(shū)連接過(guò)去。?回憶小學(xué)時(shí)在奧地利，經(jīng)常去維也納的英國(guó)書(shū)店，收集齊了《著名五人組》系列的二十一本書(shū)，書(shū)中青少年抓壞人的有趣情節(jié)讓“我”著迷，成為“我”生活中冒險(xiǎn)的寄托。?由于健康緊急情況，一家人突然搬去美國(guó)，父母因書(shū)太重沒(méi)能把大部分書(shū)帶走，包括《著名五人組》系列，“我”十分傷心。?結(jié)婚七年后，“我”決定在節(jié)日找回這套書(shū)，在網(wǎng)上搜索卻失望而歸，因擔(dān)心信用卡安全也無(wú)法從外國(guó)網(wǎng)站購(gòu)買(mǎi)。?節(jié)日到來(lái)，一家人圍坐在桌前拆禮物，“我”選中一個(gè)彩色包裝的盒子，打開(kāi)后發(fā)現(xiàn)是夢(mèng)寐以求的《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍，驚訝又感動(dòng)，詢(xún)問(wèn)丈夫如何得到。?丈夫解釋通過(guò)印度的朋友，在當(dāng)?shù)嘏f書(shū)店找到這套書(shū)并寄來(lái)，“我”被丈夫的用心深深打動(dòng)，感受到這份禮物背后的愛(ài)與理解。?主旨升華句?Thisheart-warmingtaleofthelostandfoundFamousFiveseriesvividlydemonstratesthattrueloveliesnotingrandgesturesbutintheunderstandingofone'sdeepestdesires,transcendingtimeanddistancetobringbackcherishedmemories.（這個(gè)關(guān)于失而復(fù)得的《著名五人組》系列的溫馨故事生動(dòng)地表明，真愛(ài)不在于華麗的姿態(tài)，而在于對(duì)他人內(nèi)心深處渴望的理解，它跨越時(shí)間和距離，帶回珍貴的回憶。）?Throughthejourneyofsearchingforthebooks,thehusband'sunwaveringdeterminationshowcasesthepoweroflovetoovercomeobstacles,provingthatwhenwetrulycareforsomeone,wewillgotogreatlengthstofulfilltheirdreams.（通過(guò)尋找書(shū)籍的歷程，丈夫堅(jiān)定不移的決心展示了愛(ài)的力量能夠克服障礙，證明了當(dāng)我們真正關(guān)心某人時(shí)，我們會(huì)竭盡全力去實(shí)現(xiàn)他們的夢(mèng)想。）?ThegiftoftheFamousFiveseriesisnotmerelyacollectionofbooksbutasymboloftheunbreakablebondbetweenhusbandandwife,atestamenttothefactthatlovecanbridgethegapbetweenpastandpresent,bringingwarmthandcomforttoone'slife.（《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍這份禮物不僅僅是一套書(shū)，更是夫妻之間牢不可破的紐帶的象征，證明了愛(ài)可以跨越過(guò)去與現(xiàn)在的鴻溝，給生活帶來(lái)溫暖和慰藉。）?Thisnarrativeaboutthebookshighlightsthesignificanceofchildhoodmemoriesandhowtheycanshapeourlives.TherediscoveryoftheFamousFiveseries,withthehelpofherhusband,showsthatsometimes,themostpreciousthingsinlifearetheonesthatconnectustoourroots.（這個(gè)關(guān)于書(shū)籍的故事突出了童年記憶的重要性以及它們?nèi)绾嗡茉煳覀兊纳?。在丈夫的幫助下重新找回《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍表明，有時(shí)候，生活中最珍貴的東西是那些將我們與根源聯(lián)系起來(lái)的東西。）?ThestoryoftheFamousFiveseriescomingbackintotheprotagonist'slifeisabeautifulreminderthatinthejourneyoflife,loveandunderstandingfromourlovedonescanturnasimplewishintoaprofoundandlastingmemory,makingeverymomentmoremeaningful.（《著名五人組》系列書(shū)籍重新回到主人公生活中的故事美好地提醒我們，在人生的旅途中，來(lái)自親人的愛(ài)與理解可以將一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的愿望變成深刻而持久的記憶，讓每一刻都更有意義。）?寫(xiě)作示范一?第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)?Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.MyhandswereshakinguncontrollablyasIgingerlystartedtopeeloffthetape.Everymovementfeltlikeitwasinslowmotion.AsIopenedthebox,afaint,mustysmellofoldbookswaftedout.There,neatlystacked,werethebooksoftheFamousFiveseries.Thecovers,withtheirfadedcolorsandslightlytornedges,werelikeoldfriendsIhadn'tseeninyears.Ipickedoneup,runningmyfingersoverthetitle.MyeyesfilledwithtearsasIrecognizedthefamiliarillustrationsinside.Ilookedupatmyhusband,myvoicechokedwithemotion."I...Ican'tbelieveit.Howdidyoufindthese?"Iasked,myheartpoundinginmychest.?第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)?Myhusbandlookedatme,saying,"India."Hiseyesweresoftandfulloflove.HetoldmethathehadspentcountlesshoursscouringtheInternet,reachingouttobookcollectorsandenthusiastsallovertheworld.WhenherealizeditwasadifficulttaskinAmerica,herememberedanoldfriendinIndia.Hecontactedhisfriend,explaininghowimportantthesebooksweretome.Hisfriendsearchedthroughnarrow,dustylanesinold-fashionedbookstores.Finally,inacornerofasmallshop,hefoundthecompleteseries.Myhusbandhadthemcarefullyshippedtous."Iwantedtogiveyouapieceofyourchildhoodback,"hesaid.Ithrewmyarmsaroundhim,holdinghimtightly.Thisgiftwasmorethanjustbooks;itwasasymbolofhislove,abridgeconnectingmypastandmypresent,andIfeltadeepsenseofgratitudeandhappiness.?寫(xiě)作示范二?第一段續(xù)寫(xiě)?Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.Withbatedbreath,Ibegantoremovethetape,myfingersfumblingslightlyinmyexcitement.Astheboxlidopened,Isawthespinesofthebooks,andmyheartskippedabeat.There,inalltheirworn-outglory,weretheFamousFiveseries.Igentlypickeduponeofthebooks,feelingtheroughtextureofthecover.Thepageswereyellowed,butthestorieswithinwereasvividinmymemoryasever.Ilookedupatmyhusband,myeyeswidewithshockandjoy."Ohmygoodness!Howonearthdidyoumanagethis?"Iexclaimed,myvoicetremblingwithemotion.Thesightofthesebooksbroughtbackafloodofchildhoodmemories,andIwasovercomewithasenseofnostalgia.?第二段續(xù)寫(xiě)?Myhusbandlookedatme,saying,"India."Hethenrecountedhisarduoussearch.Hehadspentweeksonthephoneandonline,contactingbookstoresindifferentcountries.WhenheheardthatsomerareBritishbookscouldbefoundinIndia,hedidn'thesitate.Hereachedouttoanacquaintancethere.Hisacquaintancevisitednumerousbookstores,spendinghourslookingthroughshelves.Finally,inasmall,hiddenbookstore,hefoundtheseries.Myhusbandarrangedforthemtobeshippedimmediately."Iknewthesebooksmeanttheworldtoyou,"hesaid.Ihuggedhimtightly,tearsstreamingdownmyface.Thisgiftwasnotjustaboutthebooks;itwasatestamenttohisloveandthoughtfulness.ItmademerealizehowluckyIwastohaveahusbandwhounderstoodmesowellandwaswillingtogotosuchlengthstomakemehappy.參考答案Itwasabrownbox,tapedshutwithclearpackingtape.Icarefullycutthetapeandopened