2025年高考英語應(yīng)用文課后續(xù)寫講義第03講 讀后續(xù)寫滿分公式：情緒描寫（講義）(解析版)

2025年高考英語應(yīng)用文課后續(xù)寫講義第03講讀后續(xù)寫滿分公式：情緒描寫（講義）(解析版)第03講讀后滿分公式：情緒描寫讀后續(xù)寫·情緒描寫知識點1無靈主語句 1知識點2sbfelt+情緒...助力情緒描寫 4知識點3非謂語動詞情感或用助力情緒描寫 4知識點4形容詞作狀語助力情緒描寫 5知識點5獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)助力情緒描寫 6知識點6with+情緒名詞助力情緒描寫 7知識點1一無靈主語句把沒有生命的東西，賦予生命力。用無生命的事物做主語，用人或行為名詞做主語，這種句子常常自帶擬人化的修辭色彩和生動形象的效果，從而增加了主語的多樣性，使語言更加言簡意賅，精準傳神，這種句子便被稱為無靈主語句。普通句：Hewasanxious.他很著急。無靈主語句：Awaveofanxietyenveloped/tookholdofhim.一陣焦慮籠罩了他。同樣是表達“他很焦慮”，比起普通句式中的常見句子，無靈主語句中這種“焦慮籠罩了他”的擬人化表達，瞬間提升了高級感！無靈主語句高頻名詞：開心、快樂、興奮：happiness/joy/delight;excitement感激：gratitude,appreciation,形容詞：grateful滿意：satisfaction;adj.satisfied困惑：puzzlement;confusion渴望：eagerness欽佩：admiration悲傷：sadness,sorrow,遺憾悔恨：guilt,regret,羞愧：shame害怕：fear,terror,fright,panic驚恐:horror吃驚震驚：surprise；astonishment,shock,緊張焦慮：nervousness,anxiety憤怒：anger,rage,fury尷尬：embarrassed--embarrassment;失望沮喪：disappointment;depression；despair寬慰安慰：relief鼓舞：motivation;inspiration;encouragement無靈主語句高頻動詞：seize（抓住;侵襲）；grasp緊緊抓住；surround（圍繞著）；defeat（擊垮）；sweep（吞噬）；washover；floodover(吞噬)；envelope(包圍；籠罩)overwhelm（使難以承受）：creep（爬，慢慢襲上）swallow吞噬，wellup涌出，surgen./v.涌動，sweepover沖；席卷；句式一：Asense/waveof+情感名詞+動詞+主語Agreatsenseoffear/tensionslowlycreptuponme.MyfaceturnedpaleandIstoodtherewithmyheartbeatingviolently/wildly.一種恐懼感/緊張感慢慢地襲上我的心頭。我的臉色變得蒼白，我站在那里，心跳得劇烈地跳動著。2.Gratitudesurroundedhimlikeabeamofsunlight,throwinghimintoaseaofkindnessandwarmth.他，把他扔進了善意和溫暖的海洋。Awaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher.她內(nèi)心涌起一陣興奮。AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews/openedthegiftbox.喜悅抓住了我。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom,andeveryonefeltwarmandhappyinthedepthsofheart.笑聲在房間里縈繞，每個人的內(nèi)心深處都感到溫暖和快樂。AsIentered,helookedupfromhisdesk,andawarmsmilespreadacrosshisface.我進去的時候，他從桌子上抬起頭來，臉上露出了一個溫暖的微笑?！炯磿r練】1.當她得知測試的結(jié)果時，她感到一陣興奮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Awaveofexcitementseizedherasshewasinformedoftheresultofthetest.2.一種突然的悲傷感淹沒了她，她忍不住哭了起來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Aburst/senseofsadnessoverwhelmedherandshecouldn’thelpcryingbitterly.3.一想到考試失敗，他就萬念俱灰。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Despairoverwhelmedhimatthethoughtofhisfailureintheexam.當我的名字被宣布時，一種興奮之情涌上心頭。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenmynamewasannounced,asenseofexcitementsurgedthroughmyheart.知識點2句式二：sbfeltagreatsenseof情感名詞...wellingupinmyheartAwaveofnervousnessenvelopedJimashedeliveredaspeech.當jim發(fā)表演講時，一陣焦慮籠罩著他。Janefeltamixtureofexcitementandgrievancewellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.當她看到遠處的直升機，混雜者激動和委屈的情緒在Jane內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌。Seeinghisdaughtersafeandsound,hefeltagreatsenseofreliefwellingupinhisheart.看到他的女兒平安無事，他感到一種極大的解脫感涌上心頭?！炯磿r練】看到他的丈夫和一個漂亮的女孩聊天，簡感到一種強烈的嫉妒感在她的心中涌出，涌過她，把茶杯扔向女孩。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Seeinghishusbandchattingwithabeautifulgirl,Janefeltagreatsenseofjealousywellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher，throwingtheteacupatthegirl.那天我感到很平靜，以至于我一個星期都沒有使用它。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ifeltasenseofcalmthatday,whichledtomynotusingitforoneweek.3.Jimmy心里有一種巨大的悲傷涌進來，在門口痛苦地哭了起來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Feelingagreatsenseofsorrowwellingupinherheartandsurgingthrough,Jimmycriedbitterlybythedoor.知識點3句式三：非謂語...,主語+謂語...SeeingthatJimwasunwillingtogetup,hermotherfeltagreatsenseofangerwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,shoutingatJimangrily..看到吉姆不愿意起床，他的母親感到一股強烈的憤怒在內(nèi)心奔涌，生氣地對他喊了起來。Seizedbyasense/waveoffear/tension/shock...,Iwasunabletoutteraword.被恐懼/緊張感所抓住，我一個字也說不出來。Envelopedbyawaveofnervousnessashedeliveredaspeech,Jimsweatedallover.吉姆發(fā)表演講時被一陣緊張所包圍，汗流浹背【即時練】他被小男孩的話深深打動了，于是同意了男孩的要求。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Deeplymovedbythelittleboy’swords,heagreedtotheboy’srequest.2.像冰一樣站著，從未想過我會陷入如此的兩難境地，我感到無比尷尬和恐慌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Standingfrozenasice,neverhadIthoughtaboutbeingtrappedinsuchadilemmathatIwasfloodedwithoverwhelmingawkwardnessandpanic.3.聽到這個消息時，他被一股震驚所抓住，待在原地一動不動。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Seizedbyawaveofshockasheheardthenews,hestoodthererootedtothespot.4.聽到這個好消息，他高興地跳了起來，眼睛像閃閃發(fā)光的星星一樣閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hearingthisgoodnews,hejumpedupinhappiness,withhiseyessparklinglikeshiningstars.5.回想起那一幕，簡非常后悔，忍不住哭了起來，淚水奪眶而出。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recallingthescene,soregretfulwasJanethatshecouldn’tstopcrying,tearssparkingouthereyes.知識點4句式四：形容詞短語作狀語Greatlysurprisedd,Ireaddiaryafterdiary.感到極度驚訝，我一篇接一篇地看著日記。Thrilled,Janequickenedpaceandsprintedtothehelicopter,knowingthatshewouldberescuedeventually.簡欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升機沖去，她知道自己終于獲救了。3.Scared,hestoodstillforamoment,notbelievingwhathadjusthappened.感到非常害怕，他一動不動站在那好一會，不敢相信剛才發(fā)生的一切。4.Oldoryoung,thepeasantsarebusywithautumnharvest.不論老少，農(nóng)民們都在忙著秋收。【即時練】1.又意外又開心，他站起身來去領(lǐng)獎。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Surprisedanddelighted,hestooduptoaccepttheprize.2.絕望地，Jane跪了下來，眼淚順著她的臉頰流了下來。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Desperate,Janekneltdown,withtearsrollingdownhercheeks.3.我們興奮地,迫不及待地想要和外國學生交換禮物，以表達我們彼此真摯的友誼。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Excited,wecouldn’twaittoexchangegiftswiththeforeignstudents，conveyingoursincerefriendshiptoeachother.4.他們強行沖進叔叔的臥室，發(fā)現(xiàn)那個人躺在地板上，已經(jīng)死了。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Theybrokeintotheuncle’sbedroomandfoundthemanlyingonthefloor,dead.5.他安然無恙地從戰(zhàn)爭中歸來。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hereturnedfromwar,safeandsound.6.小偷躲在角落里，擔心被人抓住。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thethiefhidhimselfinthecorner,afraidofbeingcaught.知識點5句式五：身體部位+非謂語的獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.自信而堅定，大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來。Toourgreatjoy,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfaceshiningwithsatisfieddelight.讓我們欣喜若狂的是，大衛(wèi)順利越過終點線，臉上閃耀著滿足的喜悅。Thechildren,theirfacesshiningwithjoy,rantowardsthepark.孩子們滿臉喜悅地跑向公園。Shesatalone,tearsstreamingdownherface.她獨自坐著，淚水順著臉頰留下來。5Theboss,hisvoicerising,demandedanexplanation.老板聲音提高，要求一個解釋。知識點6句式六：主語+謂語...，with+情緒名詞動作而伴隨的情感，常用下列情感類名詞：伴隨著高興、快樂、激動：delight,joy,happiness,thrill,excitement；伴隨著傷心、悲傷：sadness,sorrow,grief；伴隨著生氣、憤怒：anger,rage；伴隨著恐懼、害怕：fear,horror,scare,terror,fright;伴隨著驚訝：surprise,astonishment,shock等。Frozenwithfear,hecouldn’tutteraword.害怕地一動不動，他一個字也說不出來。Hewastongue-tiedwithanger.他因生氣而說不出話來。Peoplearoundsmiledwithsatisfaction.周圍的人滿意地笑了。Withmyeyesfulloftears,Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.我熱淚盈眶，沖出公寓，沿著街道跑?！炯磿r練】跟老師講出真相后，她不安地坐在座位上，手指交叉著，心跳得像打鼓一樣。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Havingtoldtheteacherthetruth,shesatrestlesslyinherseatwithherfingerscrossedandherheartpoundinglikeadrum.2.用灼熱的目光怒視著我，他幾乎控制不住自己的怒火，聲音因憤怒而顫抖。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Glaringatmewithburningeyes,hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage,hisvoicetremblingwithanger.3.覺得冷得無法忍受，精疲力竭，完全不知道該如何應(yīng)對這種可怕的情況。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Feelingunbearablycoldandextremelyexhausted,Janewasquiteatalossastohowtocopewiththeterriblesituation.4.一瞬間，淚水涌上眼眶，我感動的說不出話。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inaflash,withtearswellingupinmyeyes,Iwastouchedbeyondwords.5.聽到這話，Bob感到很尷尬，扭動并使勁揉搓他的手，似乎是想在這刺骨的冬日里取暖。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onhearingthis,Bobbecameembarrassed,twistingandrubbinghishands()overandoveragainseeminglytogetwarminthisfreezingwinter.6.從未想過我會陷入如此的兩難境地，我感到無比尷尬和恐慌。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Standingfrozenasice,neverhadIthoughtaboutbeingtrappedinsuchadilemmathatIwasfloodedwithoverwhelmingawkwardnessandpanic.7.看著他自信的微笑，我的心中也涌起了喜悅。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Atthesightofhisconfidentsmile,asenseofjoysweptover/floodedoverme.8.聽見他說的話，Alice咧開嘴笑，一股幸福的浪潮涌上她的心頭。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Hearingwhathesaid,Alicegrinnedfromeartoear,awaveofhappinessfloodingoverher.9.我們好奇而興奮,迫不及待地想要和外國學生交換禮物，以表達我們彼此真摯的友誼。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Curiousandexcited,wecouldn’twaittoexchangegiftswiththeforeignstudents，conveyingoursincerefriendshiptoeachother.10.非常興奮，我們?nèi)褙炞⒌睾屯瑢W商討著并寫下我們的建議，希望能幫助解決這個問題。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Excitedandwhole–hearted,wewerediscussingwithourclassmatesandwritingdownoursuggestions,hopingtohelpsolvetheproblem.第03講讀后滿分公式：情緒描寫讀后續(xù)寫·情緒描寫知識點1無靈主語句 1知識點2sbfelt+情緒...助力情緒描寫 3知識點3非謂語動詞情感或用助力情緒描寫 4知識點4形容詞作狀語助力情緒描寫 5知識點5獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)助力情緒描寫 6知識點6with+情緒名詞助力情緒描寫 6知識點1一無靈主語句把沒有生命的東西，賦予生命力。用無生命的事物做主語，用人或行為名詞做主語，這種句子常常自帶擬人化的修辭色彩和生動形象的效果，從而增加了主語的多樣性，使語言更加言簡意賅，精準傳神，這種句子便被稱為無靈主語句。普通句：Hewasanxious.他很著急。無靈主語句：Awaveofanxietyenveloped/tookholdofhim.一陣焦慮籠罩了他。同樣是表達“他很焦慮”，比起普通句式中的常見句子，無靈主語句中這種“焦慮籠罩了他”的擬人化表達，瞬間提升了高級感！無靈主語句高頻名詞：開心、快樂、興奮：happiness/joy/delight;excitement感激：gratitude,appreciation,形容詞：grateful滿意：satisfaction;adj.satisfied困惑：puzzlement;confusion渴望：eagerness欽佩：admiration悲傷：sadness,sorrow,遺憾悔恨：guilt,regret,羞愧：shame害怕：fear,terror,fright,panic驚恐:horror吃驚震驚：surprise；astonishment,shock,緊張焦慮：nervousness,anxiety憤怒：anger,rage,fury尷尬：embarrassed--embarrassment;失望沮喪：disappointment;depression；despair寬慰安慰：relief鼓舞：motivation;inspiration;encouragement無靈主語句高頻動詞：seize（抓住;侵襲）；grasp緊緊抓??；surround（圍繞著）；defeat（擊垮）；sweep（吞噬）；washover；floodover(吞噬)；envelope(包圍；籠罩)overwhelm（使難以承受）：creep（爬，慢慢襲上）swallow吞噬，wellup涌出，surgen./v.涌動，sweepover沖；席卷；句式一：Asense/waveof+情感名詞+動詞+主語Agreatsenseoffear/tensionslowlycreptuponme.MyfaceturnedpaleandIstoodtherewithmyheartbeatingviolently/wildly.一種恐懼感/緊張感慢慢地襲上我的心頭。我的臉色變得蒼白，我站在那里，心跳得劇烈地跳動著。2.Gratitudesurroundedhimlikeabeamofsunlight,throwinghimintoaseaofkindnessandwarmth.他，把他扔進了善意和溫暖的海洋。Awaveofhappinessandexcitementseized/tookholdof/sweptoverher.她內(nèi)心涌起一陣興奮。AstrongsenseofdelighttookholdofmethemomentIheardthenews/openedthegiftbox.喜悅抓住了我。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom,andeveryonefeltwarmandhappyinthedepthsofheart.笑聲在房間里縈繞，每個人的內(nèi)心深處都感到溫暖和快樂。AsIentered,helookedupfromhisdesk,andawarmsmilespreadacrosshisface.我進去的時候，他從桌子上抬起頭來，臉上露出了一個溫暖的微笑?！炯磿r練】1.當她得知測試的結(jié)果時，她感到一陣興奮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.一種突然的悲傷感淹沒了她，她忍不住哭了起來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.一想到考試失敗，他就萬念俱灰。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________當我的名字被宣布時，一種興奮之情涌上心頭。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點2句式二：sbfeltagreatsenseof情感名詞...wellingupinmyheartAwaveofnervousnessenvelopedJimashedeliveredaspeech.當jim發(fā)表演講時，一陣焦慮籠罩著他。Janefeltamixtureofexcitementandgrievancewellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.當她看到遠處的直升機，混雜者激動和委屈的情緒在Jane內(nèi)心升騰、奔涌。Seeinghisdaughtersafeandsound,hefeltagreatsenseofreliefwellingupinhisheart.看到他的女兒平安無事，他感到一種極大的解脫感涌上心頭?！炯磿r練】看到他的丈夫和一個漂亮的女孩聊天，簡感到一種強烈的嫉妒感在她的心中涌出，涌過她，把茶杯扔向女孩。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________那天我感到很平靜，以至于我一個星期都沒有使用它。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Jimmy心里有一種巨大的悲傷涌進來，在門口痛苦地哭了起來。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點3句式三：非謂語...,主語+謂語...SeeingthatJimwasunwillingtogetup,hermotherfeltagreatsenseofangerwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher,shoutingatJimangrily..看到吉姆不愿意起床，他的母親感到一股強烈的憤怒在內(nèi)心奔涌，生氣地對他喊了起來。Seizedbyasense/waveoffear/tension/shock...,Iwasunabletoutteraword.被恐懼/緊張感所抓住，我一個字也說不出來。Envelopedbyawaveofnervousnessashedeliveredaspeech,Jimsweatedallover.吉姆發(fā)表演講時被一陣緊張所包圍，汗流浹背【即時練】他被小男孩的話深深打動了，于是同意了男孩的要求。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.像冰一樣站著，從未想過我會陷入如此的兩難境地，我感到無比尷尬和恐慌。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.聽到這個消息時，他被一股震驚所抓住，待在原地一動不動。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.聽到這個好消息，他高興地跳了起來，眼睛像閃閃發(fā)光的星星一樣閃閃發(fā)光。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.回想起那一幕，簡非常后悔，忍不住哭了起來，淚水奪眶而出。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點4句式四：形容詞短語作狀語Greatlysurprisedd,Ireaddiaryafterdiary.感到極度驚訝，我一篇接一篇地看著日記。Thrilled,Janequickenedpaceandsprintedtothehelicopter,knowingthatshewouldberescuedeventually.簡欣喜若狂，加快了步伐，向直升機沖去，她知道自己終于獲救了。3.Scared,hestoodstillforamoment,notbelievingwhathadjusthappened.感到非常害怕，他一動不動站在那好一會，不敢相信剛才發(fā)生的一切。4.Oldoryoung,thepeasantsarebusywithautumnharvest.不論老少，農(nóng)民們都在忙著秋收?！炯磿r練】1.又意外又開心，他站起身來去領(lǐng)獎。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.絕望地，Jane跪了下來，眼淚順著她的臉頰流了下來。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.我們興奮地,迫不及待地想要和外國學生交換禮物，以表達我們彼此真摯的友誼。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.他們強行沖進叔叔的臥室，發(fā)現(xiàn)那個人躺在地板上，已經(jīng)死了。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5.他安然無恙地從戰(zhàn)爭中歸來。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.小偷躲在角落里，擔心被人抓住。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________知識點5句式五：身體部位+非謂語的獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.自信而堅定，大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來。Toourgreatjoy,Davidcrossedthefinishlinesmoothly,hisfaceshiningwithsatisfieddelight.讓我們欣喜若狂的是，大衛(wèi)順利越過終點線，臉上閃耀著滿足的喜悅。Thechildren,theirfacesshiningwithjoy,rantowardsthepark.孩子們滿臉喜悅地跑向公園。Shesatalone,tearsstreamingdownherface.她獨自坐著，淚水順著臉頰留下來。5Theboss,hisvoicerising,demandedanexplanation.老板聲音提高，要求一個解釋。知識點6句式六：主語+謂語...，with+情緒名詞動作而伴隨的情感，常用下列情感類名詞：伴隨著高興、快樂、激動：delight,joy,happiness,thrill,excitement；伴隨著傷心、悲傷：sadness,sorrow,grief；伴隨著生氣、憤怒：anger,rage；伴隨著恐懼、害怕：fear,horror,scare,terror,fright;伴隨著驚訝：surprise,astonishment,shock等。Frozenwithfear,hecouldn’tutteraword.害怕地一動不動，他一個字也說不出來。Hewastongue-tiedwithanger.他因生氣而說不出話來。Peoplearoundsmiledwithsatisfaction.周圍的人滿意地笑了。Withmyeyesfulloftears,Irushedoutoftheflatandranalongthestreet.