專題01 投稿 （解析版）2025年新高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作

2025年新高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作專題01投稿2020-2024年高考真題同類話題滿分范文經(jīng)典背誦2024年浙江卷1月請你寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；2.說明推薦理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答：StandUpandExercise,Everybody!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】StandUpandExercise,Everybody!Everybody!Areyoutiredofsittinginclassallday?Howaboutincorporatingsomephysicalactivityintoyourdailyroutine?Onegreatoptionisthe“StandUpandStretch”exercise.Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.It’saquickandeasywaytogetyourbloodflowingandre-energizeyourbodyandmind.Thisexerciseisrecommendedforseveralreasons.First,ithelpstocombatthenegativeeffectsofprolongedsitting,suchasbackpainandstiffness.Second,itcanimproveyourfocusandconcentration,makingiteasiertostayengagedinclass.Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.So,nexttimeyoufeelabitsluggishduringclass,remembertostandupandstretch!It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累厭倦：betiredof→befedupwith首先：first→aboveall減輕：combat→relieve提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.拓展句：Thisisasimpleroutinethatinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Lastly,itpromotesahealthyandactivelifestyle,whichisessentialforoverallwell-being.(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Thissimpleroutineinvolvesstandingupfromyourdesk,stretchingyourarms,legsandback,andtakingafewdeepbreaths.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語)[高分句型2]It’sasmallchangethatcanmakeabigdifferenceinyourday.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語從句)2023年全國甲卷你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動(dòng)。請你以一位中國歷史人物為題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡介及事跡；2.意義或啟示。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confuciustraveledthroughoutthecountry,impartinghiswisdomtocountlessdisciplesandleavingaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Confucius’slifeoffersvaluablelessons.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.Histeachingsremindusoftheimportanceofintegrity,compassion,andsocialresponsibility.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生為學(xué)校正舉辦的主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動(dòng)寫一篇短文投稿。詳解】1.詞匯積累著名的：well-known→famous人物：figure→person強(qiáng)調(diào)：emphasize→stress基礎(chǔ)：foundation→basis2023年全國乙卷請以向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿的方式，用英語描述學(xué)習(xí)一項(xiàng)新技能的經(jīng)歷，及從中獲得的體驗(yàn)和感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.ThatwasthefirsttimeIwatchedalivemusicalperformance.Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.Inthebeginning,itwasquitedifficulttoreadthenotesonthestave.However,itdidnotdemoralizeme.Ispentmostofmyleisurehourstopracticepiano.Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.EventhoughIwillnotpursueasmylifecareer,Iwillstillcontinuelearningandplayingpianoasmyhobby.Itissimplybecausemusicisthebestmedicationformysoul.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文，請以向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿的方式，用英語描述學(xué)習(xí)一項(xiàng)新技能的經(jīng)歷，及從中獲得的體驗(yàn)和感受。【詳解】1.詞匯積累機(jī)會(huì)：opportunity→chance使沮喪：demoralize→discourage滿意的：satisfied→content空閑的：leisure→spare2.句式拓展合并簡單句原句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply.Iaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.拓展句：Thefantasticplayerstouchedmedeeply,soIaskedmyparentsallowingmetotakeupapianolessonforbeginner.點(diǎn)睛【高分句型1】WhenIwasinmyprimaryschool,Ihadanopportunitytoattendamusicalcontestheldinmyschool.(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句)【高分句型2】Althoughmyfingerswerepainfulafterfewhourspractice,IfeltsatisfiedifIcouldplayamusicpiececompletely.(運(yùn)用了although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句和if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)2022年全國甲卷你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.Oceanplaysakeyroleinourworld.Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.Thus,itisimperativetoprotectocean.Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.Forexample,garbagecan’tbethrownintoocean.What’smore,wecanalsohandoutleafletstocallonmorepeopletoprotecttheocean.Themorepeopleareinvolved,thebettertheoceanenvironmentis.Allinall,itishightimethatwedevotedourselvestoprotectingocean.Toprotectoceanistoprotectourselves.【解析】【導(dǎo)語】本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，就世界海洋日為主題向英文征文比賽投稿，闡述海洋的重要性并提出一些建議。【詳解】1.詞匯積累越來越：moreandmore→increasingly重視：placeimportanceon→attachimportanceto重要的：key→significant此外：what’smore→furthermore2句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：WorldOceanDay,fallingonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.拓展句：WorldOceanDay,whichfallsonJune8th,isaimedatraisingawarenessofoceanconservation.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Notonlydoesoceanofferussufficientfood,butalsoitmaintainsthebalanceofnature.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝結(jié)構(gòu))[高分句型2]Whenitcomestoocean,itspollutionbecomingmoreandmoreserious.(使用了固定句型)[高分句型3]Firstofall,whatwecandoistoplaceimportanceonourdailyactions.(使用了主語從句)2021年新高考I&II卷你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛的欄目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式寫字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】YouthandMeIthasbeen10yearssinceYouthwasfounded.Inmymemory,itisYouththataccompaniesmethroughmywholehighschool.Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.Besides,IevensubmittedmyownfictiontoYouth.RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.IdoexpectYouthcanpublishmoreclassicworksandhaveapromisingfuture.【導(dǎo)語】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生向?qū)W校英文報(bào)Youth表達(dá)自己的經(jīng)歷，并送上自己的祝福?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累建立：found→establish沮喪的：depressed→upset此外：besides→what’smore得到：receive→obtain2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Thesestoriescanrelievemystressandbroadenmyhorizon.拓展句：Notonlycanthesestoriesrelievemystress,butalsotheycanbroadenmyhorizon.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whenfeelingdepressed,Ioftenchoosetoenjoythenovelpartwhichincludesalotofimaginativestories.(運(yùn)用了狀語從句的省略和which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)[高分句型2]RefusedasIwas,Istillreceivedsomegreatencouragement,whichgivesmeconfidencetobeawriter.(運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句和which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)2021年天津第一次假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國內(nèi)你喜歡或去過的地方。內(nèi)容包括：(1)該地方的基本情況(如名稱、地理位置等)；(2)該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等)；(3)你對該地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJin________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ABeautifulPlaceinChinaMarch19,2021ByLiJinSichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.What’smore,walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalslikegiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.Therearealsomanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.However,itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbythebeautifulsceneryinJiazhaigouaswellastheconstructionDujiangyanIrrigationProject.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說明文，要求給英文網(wǎng)站《最美中華》欄目投稿，介紹介紹一個(gè)國內(nèi)你喜歡或去過的地方。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：說明文時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法第一段是文章的總起段，說明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)；第二段介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分說明你對該地方的印象和感受。要求：1.說明四川省有很多著名的景點(diǎn)①四川的地理位置：中國西南部②著名景點(diǎn)：九寨溝、都江堰灌溉工程2.介紹景點(diǎn)九寨溝和都江堰灌溉工程①九寨溝是自然保護(hù)區(qū)②給人印象最深的層層疊疊的瀑布和五顏六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀動(dòng)植物③都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，現(xiàn)在仍然起著灌溉的作用3.你對該地方的印象和感受：九寨溝的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造會(huì)讓你驚嘆第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）belocatedin；world-famous；placesofinterest；anaturereserve；impressive；multi-levelwaterfalls；haveachancetodo…；rareanimals；scenicspot；datefrom；playanimportantpartin；beamazedby第三步：連詞成句(1)SichuanProvinceislocatedinsouthwesternpartofChina.(2)Itenjoysmanyworld-famousplacesofinterest,suchasJiuzhaigouandDujiangyanIrrigationproject.(3)JiuzhaigouNationalParkisanaturereserveinthenorthofSichuanProvince.(4)Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.(5)Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.(6)Therearemanyspeciesofrareplantsprotectedhere.(7)AnotherfamousscenicspotisDujiangyanIrrigationProject.(8)Itdatesfromover2,000yearsago.(9)Itisstillplayinganimportantpartinirrigationtoday.(10)I’msurethevisitorswillbeamazedbyitsconstruction.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表遞進(jìn)關(guān)系：whatismore2.表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系：however3.表示列舉：suchas,like【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Whatisthemostimpressiveisitsmanymulti-levelwaterfallsandcolorfullakes.（what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）[高分句型2]Walkinginthenaturereserve,youhaveachancetoseerareanimalssuchasgiantpandas,goldenmonkeys.（現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）2020年新課標(biāo)II卷你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:1.人物簡介；2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文。時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。要求：1.人物簡介：2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：連詞成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹人物；闡述原因2.表示并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Asfor;and;but;So第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫。復(fù)合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如定語從句：Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch；非謂語動(dòng)詞：Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents；時(shí)間狀語從句：WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely…等。文章思路清晰，層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然。為文章增色添彩。2020年新高考全國II卷假定你是李華,上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)。請你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道,內(nèi)容包括:1.參加人員:2.跑步路線:從校門口到南山腳下:3.活動(dòng)反響。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ACross-CountryRunningRace____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ACross-CountryRunningRaceLastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.Theactivitywashighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydiditprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomadeusmorecohesive.【分析】這是一篇應(yīng)用文。本篇要求考生就上周日學(xué)校舉行的5公里越野賽活動(dòng)寫一篇新聞報(bào)道?！驹斀狻矿w裁:應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài):根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)為主結(jié)構(gòu):總分總要求:1.參加人員2.跑步路線3.活動(dòng)反響第二步:列提綱(重點(diǎn)詞組)attend/witness/drawone’sattention/managetodosth./measure/speakhighlyof/providesth.forsb.第三步:連詞成句1.LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.2.Thestudentsselectedfromeveryclasstookpartinthecompetition.3.Theroutemeasuredfivekilometers,fromourschoolgatetothefootofNanshanMountain.4.Everyrunnertriedtheirbesttofinishthetask,withtheirclassmatesalongthewaygivingthemnecessaryhelpaswellasencouragement.5.Atlast,alltherunnersmanagedtoarrivethefinishline,receivingcheersfromallthedirections.6.Theactivityishighlyspokenof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.第四步:連句成篇(加入銜接詞或從句)表示并列的連詞:and/but/or/so…狀語從句連詞:because/if/though/although…定語從句連詞:which/that/when/where…第五步:修改潤色(加入高級(jí)詞匯或短語)【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了一些高分句型，例如:LastSundaywitnessedanextraordinarycross-countryrunningrace,whichnearlydrewtheattentionofeverystudentandteacherofourschool.中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Theactivityishighlythoughtof,becausenotonlydoesitprovidechanceforustoexercise,butalsomakesusmorecohesive.中使用了部分倒裝。2020年北京卷假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班班長李華。居家學(xué)習(xí)期間，你們班開展了一次以“自律”為主題的調(diào)研活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文稿件，給你們學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，記述你在本次活動(dòng)中發(fā)現(xiàn)問題并解決問題的過程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：自律self-discipline______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Whilestudyingathome,Isurveyedmyclasson“self-discipline”.Thefindingsworriedmealot.Tosolvetheproblem,Iaskedmyparentsforhelp,andtheyofferedsomepracticaladvice.ThenIheldanonlinediscussionwithmyclassmatesonhowtowelldisciplineourselves.Afterthat,weallknewbetterwhattodo.Threemonthslater,Ididasecondsurvey,whichshowedgreatimprovementsinself-discipline.Iphonedmyteacheraboutit,andwebothfeltverypleased.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。這是一篇圖畫作文，要求考生按以下四幅圖的先后順序，就你開展“自律”調(diào)研活動(dòng)中發(fā)現(xiàn)問題并解決問題的過程寫一篇英文稿件，向?qū)W校英文網(wǎng)站投稿。【詳解】第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時(shí)人稱：第一人稱為主結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.表明寫作主題——“自律”2.根據(jù)圖片描寫事件過程：第一幅圖片描寫自己對“自律”調(diào)研結(jié)果很擔(dān)憂；第二幅圖片描寫自己向父母求助解決方法/建議；第三幅圖片描寫自己和同學(xué)們在網(wǎng)上討論如何自律；第四幅圖片描寫三個(gè)月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老師很高興。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）asksb.forhelp；practicaladvice；anonlinediscussion；doasecondsurvey第三步：連詞成句1.Iaskedmyparentsforhelp,andtheyofferedsomepracticaladvice.2.ThenIheldanonlinediscussionwithmyclassmatesonhowtowelldisciplineourselves.3.Ididasecondsurvey,whichshowedgreatimprovementsinself-discipline.(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。）第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,also3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult5表換一種方式表達(dá)：Inotherwords,thatistosay,6.表進(jìn)行舉例說明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing7.表陳述事實(shí)：Infact,franklyspeaking8.表選擇：either…or…，or連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了主從復(fù)合句，如whichshowedgreatimprovementsinself-discipline這句話中用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句；使用了非常好的短語，如asksb.forhelp，anonlinediscussion，doasecondsurvey等，為文章增色不少。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。專題01投稿2020-2024年高考真題同類話題滿分范文經(jīng)典背誦2024年浙江卷1月請你寫一篇短文向校英文報(bào)“SportsandHealth”欄目投稿，向同學(xué)們推薦一項(xiàng)適合課間開展的運(yùn)動(dòng)，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹這項(xiàng)運(yùn)動(dòng)；2.說明推薦理由。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答：StandUpandExercise,Everybody!_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2023年全國甲卷你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英文講中國故事”的征文活動(dòng)。請你以一位中國歷史人物為題寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡介及事跡；2.意義或啟示。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.題目已為你寫好。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2023年全國乙卷請以向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿的方式，用英語描述學(xué)習(xí)一項(xiàng)新技能的經(jīng)歷，及從中獲得的體驗(yàn)和感受。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2022年全國甲卷你校將以六月八日世界海洋日為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.海洋的重要性；2.保護(hù)海洋的倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2021年新高考I&II卷你校英文報(bào)Youth正在慶祝創(chuàng)刊十周年。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.讀報(bào)的經(jīng)歷；2.喜愛的欄目；3.期望和祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式寫字答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。YouthandMe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2021年天津第一次假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的李津。我市為外國友人提供生活信息的某英文網(wǎng)站新增了《最美中華》欄目，請你給該欄目投稿，介紹一個(gè)國內(nèi)你喜歡或去過的地方。內(nèi)容包括：(1)該地方的基本情況(如名稱、地理位置等)；(2)該地方的特色(如文化、景點(diǎn)等)；(3)你對該地方的印象和感受。注意：(1)詞數(shù)