專題10圖表類應(yīng)用文-2025年高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作高頻熱點(diǎn)通關(guān)（解析版）VIP

2025年高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)話題寫作高頻熱點(diǎn)通關(guān)必備攻略通關(guān)必過(guò)（應(yīng)用文）項(xiàng)目考情分析話題綜述真題再現(xiàn)模擬提升內(nèi)容考點(diǎn)分布總述構(gòu)思詞匯/金句真題詳解基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)提升練考情分析專題內(nèi)容卷型10圖表類以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿2024全國(guó)甲據(jù)圖表寫一篇以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論調(diào)查結(jié)果2022全國(guó)乙以“自律”為主題的調(diào)研活動(dòng)2020年北京據(jù)圖寫一篇關(guān)于“勞動(dòng)最光榮”的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)的周記2019年北京根據(jù)圖寫一篇帶領(lǐng)外國(guó)學(xué)生體驗(yàn)中國(guó)茶文化的周記2018年北京寫一篇以記錄“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的周記2017年北京話題綜述話題綜述圖表類作文一般是對(duì)某個(gè)具體問(wèn)題的調(diào)查統(tǒng)計(jì)，主要是關(guān)于一些調(diào)查研究的統(tǒng)計(jì)數(shù)據(jù)和結(jié)果，以及某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的統(tǒng)計(jì)示意圖。其要求考生將圖表形式（如坐標(biāo)圖、曲線圖、餅圖等）的信息轉(zhuǎn)化成段落形式的文字信息，在描述完內(nèi)容時(shí)需要過(guò)渡到普遍現(xiàn)象。寫圖表作文需要介紹圖表中講了什么，數(shù)據(jù)有什么變動(dòng)，反映了哪些問(wèn)題和趨勢(shì)，并分析問(wèn)題背后的原因，結(jié)合自身談?wù)劷鉀Q措施或給出觀點(diǎn)。話題構(gòu)思/模板圖表作文寫作可以細(xì)分為三個(gè)部分：第一部分：引出話題并介紹圖表內(nèi)容。第二部分：分析造成這一問(wèn)題的原因。第三部分：給出自己觀點(diǎn)，提出相應(yīng)的解決方案。模板構(gòu)建模板1Recently,we/Ihavedoneasurveyabout/asurveyhasbeencarriedouton________(調(diào)查的主要內(nèi)容).Viewsvaryfrompersontoperson.Theresultsareasfollows.Ascanbeseenfromthe(pie/bar)chart/graph/diagram/table,themajority/...%ofthepeople/studentsinterviewed________(調(diào)查的結(jié)果一).Theythink_________.Onlyinthiswaycanthey________(原因一).Veryfewpeople/students,thatisabout...%,think________(調(diào)查的結(jié)果二),because________(原因二①).What’smore,________(原因二②).However,...%ofthe...believe________(調(diào)查的結(jié)果三)._________(原因三).Inmypointofview,_________(你的看法或觀點(diǎn)).模板2Asisshowninthe(pie/bar)chart/graph/diagram/table,most_______(圖表所反映的主題).Surprisingly,mostofthesurveyed_______.Onlyafew________.Andthosewho_______areintheminority.(描述圖表信息).或：Recently,wehavemadeasurveyabout_______(調(diào)查的主要內(nèi)容)among...in...Accordingtothesurvey,...%/Mostofthe...surveyed_______,while_______%_______andtherest_______.(描述圖表信息).wecanconclude(that)mostof..._______(圖表所反映的主要現(xiàn)象).Manyfactorscontributetothissituation.Firstofall,dueto_______(原因一).Secondly,_______(原因二).Thirdly,_______(原因三)/Otherfactors,suchas_______(其他原因).Therefore,inmyopinion,effectivemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblems.Mostimportantly,_______.Besides,_______.What’smore,_______.(提出具體建議).話題詞匯/金句Recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindout...為了找出/發(fā)現(xiàn)……，Inthissurvey,...wereinterviewed.在這項(xiàng)調(diào)查中，……接受了采訪。Mostofthesurveyedanswered...大多數(shù)受訪者回答說(shuō)……Theresultsareasfollows.結(jié)果如下。Asisapparentlyshowninthetableabove,...正如上表所突顯的那樣，……Asisshowninthetable(chart)/Ascanbeindicatedinthetable(chart)/Accordingtothefiguresgiveninthetable(chart),...如表(圖)所示，……Itcanbeseenfromthetablethat.../Fromthetablewecanseethat...從表中可看出…/從表中我們可知……Asisshowninthe(pie/bar)chart/graph/diagram/table...如圖(餅圖/條形圖)圖表/圖形/表格所示……Aswecanseefromthetablethat...正如我們從表中看到的那樣……Ascanbeseenfromthediagram,greatchangeshavetakenplacein...從圖表中可以看出，……發(fā)生了巨大的變化……Itisexpectedtoincrease...times.預(yù)計(jì)將/有望增加……倍。Thereisanincreaseof...%intotalthisyear.今年總共增加了……%。Thetotalnumberwasloweredby...%.總數(shù)減少了……%。Ithasdecreasedalmosttoandhalftimes,comparedwiththatin...與……相比，已下降了近1.5倍。Comparedwith...,itfellfrom...percentto...percent.與……相比，它從百分之……下降到了百分之……Itwasdecreasedtwicethanthatoftheyear...比去年減少了……兩倍。Thefigureof...isabouttwiceasmuchasthatof....……的數(shù)字大約是……的兩倍。Thetrend/increasesloweddownin...……的趨勢(shì)/增長(zhǎng)放緩。Itaccountsfor...%ofthetotalpopulation.它占總?cè)丝诘摹?。Thenumberofstudentshasreached...,indicatingariseof...%,comparedtolastyear.學(xué)生人數(shù)已達(dá)……，與去年相比增長(zhǎng)了……%。Manyfactorscontributetothissituation.造成這種情況的因素很多。Thereasonwhy...isthat...……的原因是……Everycoinhastwosides.每件事都有兩面性。Withtherapidgrowthof...,...havebecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.隨著……的快速增長(zhǎng)，……在我們的日常生活中已經(jīng)變得越來(lái)越重要了。Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtorealizethat...現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越多的人開始意識(shí)到……Thereisnodoubtthatimmediateattentionmustbepaidtotheproblemof...毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，……問(wèn)題必須立即引起注意。Theincrease/decreasein...isduetothefactthat...……增加／減少是由于……樣的事實(shí)引起的。Suchchangesinthetableshouldowetothefollowingreasons.Firstly,...Secondly,...表中的這種變化應(yīng)歸功于以下原因。首先，其次，……Thereasonfor...isthat...……的原因是……Oneofthemostsurprisingfindingsisthat...最令人驚訝的發(fā)現(xiàn)之一是……Itisclearthattheincreaseofpercentagegetsgreaterandgreater.很明顯，增加的比率變得越來(lái)越大。Theycouldn’tbesatisfiedwiththemmore.他們對(duì)這個(gè)結(jié)果非常滿意。Moreemphasisshouldbeputon...更多的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該放在……Inspiteofthedifferentopinions,Istillholdtheviewthat...盡管有不同的意見(jiàn)，我仍然認(rèn)為……Thegreateffectthesechangeshaveon...isobviousthat...這些變化對(duì)……的巨大影響是顯而易見(jiàn)的。Itwillbringaboutanunfavorableinfluenceon...這將對(duì)……產(chǎn)生不利影響。Itmayproduceagreatchangein...它可能會(huì)在……方面產(chǎn)生巨大的變化。Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthat...通過(guò)以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論……Thereisnodoubtthatattentionmustbepaidto...毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，必須注意……Isuggestthegovernmenttakeeffectivemeasuresto...我建議政府采取有效措施……Allthesedataclearlyprovethefactthat...這些數(shù)據(jù)明顯地證明了這一事實(shí)，即……Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasison...是我們高度重視……的時(shí)候了。Itisnecessarythateffectiveactionsshouldbetakentopreventthesituation.必須采取有效措施來(lái)防止這種情況的發(fā)生。真題再現(xiàn)Writing1【2021新課標(biāo)I&II卷】英語(yǔ)課要求做課堂展示,請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所給圖片,以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.題目和首句已為你寫好。DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday'sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasanenormousdevelopment.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DevelopmentofTransportinChinaFromthevehicleofhorsestotoday’sconvenienttransport,Chinesetransporthasseenenormousdevelopment.Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.Secondly,theintroductionofhigh-speedtrainshasdramaticallyshortenedtraveltimes,makingintercitytravelfasterandmorecomfortable.Lastly,theproliferationofnewenergyvehiclesunderscoresChina’sdedicationtoenvironmentalsustainability,reducingrelianceonfossilfuels.ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.Inshort,China’stransportsystemisembracinginnovationandeco-friendliness.【解析】【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生根據(jù)所給圖片，以DevelopmentofTransportinChina為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯激活提供：offer→provide極大地：dramatically→tremendously減少：reduce→decrease總之：inshort→inanutshell2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstly,sharedbicycleshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility,offeringanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttrips.拓展句：Firstly,sharedbicycles,whichofferanaffordableandgreenalternativeforshorttripshaveemergedasasymbolofurbanmobility.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Chinesetransporthasundergoneremarkabletransformations,givingtheChinesepeopleaccesstodifferentwaysoftravelling.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ))【高分句型2】ThesedevelopmentsillustrateChina’sjourneytowardsamodernandefficienttransportationnetworkthatbalancesconveniencewithenvironmentalresponsibility.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)Writing2【2022年全國(guó)乙卷】學(xué)校英文報(bào)正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.學(xué)習(xí)活動(dòng)狀況描述：2.簡(jiǎn)單評(píng)論;3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好?！敬鸢浮縇earningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.However,thosechoosingreadingEnglishbooksandvisitingEnglishlearningwebsitesonlyaccountfor18%and12%.AsfarasI’mconcerned,itisadisturbingtrend.Forstudents,whatbenefitsmosttotheirstudyisreadingEnglishbooks.Becauseoftheirlackofself-discipline,they’remoreeasilyaddictedtochattingonlineorplayinggames.It’surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline,andit’salsourgentforparentsandteacherstostrengthentheguidance.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文。要求考生請(qǐng)使用圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文給學(xué)校英文報(bào)投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累選擇：choose→select提高：improve→strengthen各種各樣的：various→diverse就我而言：asfarasI’mconcerned→frommyperspective2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.拓展句：Nowadays,becausesmartphonesandcomputersarebecomingmoreandmorepopular,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheClassroominvariousways.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】ItcaneasilybeseenthatthepercentageofstudentswhochooselisteningtoEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishmoviesisrespectively65%and50%.(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句以及who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句)【高分句型2】It'surgentforstudentsthemselvestoimprovetheirself-discipline(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，toimprovetheirself-discipline為真正的主語(yǔ))Writing3【2020年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班班長(zhǎng)李華。居家學(xué)習(xí)期間，你們班開展了一次以“自律”為主題的調(diào)研活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文稿件，給你們學(xué)校英文網(wǎng)站投稿，記述你在本次活動(dòng)中發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題并解決問(wèn)題的過(guò)程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：自律self-discipline___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Whilestudyingathome,Isurveyedmyclasson“self-discipline”.Thefindingsworriedmealot.Tosolvetheproblem,Iaskedmyparentsforhelp,andtheyofferedsomepracticaladvice.ThenIheldanonlinediscussionwithmyclassmatesonhowtowelldisciplineourselves.Afterthat,weallknewbetterwhattodo.Threemonthslater,Ididasecondsurvey,whichshowedgreatimprovementsinself-discipline.Iphonedmyteacheraboutit,andwebothfeltverypleased.【解析】【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。這是一篇圖畫作文，要求考生按以下四幅圖的先后順序，就你開展“自律”調(diào)研活動(dòng)中發(fā)現(xiàn)問(wèn)題并解決問(wèn)題的過(guò)程寫一篇英文稿件，向?qū)W校英文網(wǎng)站投稿?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)人稱：第一人稱為主結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.表明寫作主題——“自律”2.根據(jù)圖片描寫事件過(guò)程：第一幅圖片描寫自己對(duì)“自律”調(diào)研結(jié)果很擔(dān)憂；第二幅圖片描寫自己向父母求助解決方法/建議；第三幅圖片描寫自己和同學(xué)們?cè)诰W(wǎng)上討論如何自律；第四幅圖片描寫三個(gè)月后，大家自律能力有了很大提高，我和老師很高興。第二步:列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）asksb.forhelp；practicaladvice；anonlinediscussion；doasecondsurvey第三步：連詞成句1.Iaskedmyparentsforhelp,andtheyofferedsomepracticaladvice.2.ThenIheldanonlinediscussionwithmyclassmatesonhowtowelldisciplineourselves.3.Ididasecondsurvey,whichshowedgreatimprovementsinself-discipline.(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。）第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast,Lastbutnotleast2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,Inaddition,Aswellas,notonly…but(also),including,also3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關(guān)系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：Inotherwords,thatistosay,6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：Forexample;Forinstance;suchas+n/doing7.表陳述事實(shí)：Infact,franklyspeaking8.表選擇：either…or…，or連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。第五步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，要點(diǎn)全面，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了主從復(fù)合句，如whichshowedgreatimprovementsinself-discipline這句話中用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)，如asksb.forhelp，anonlinediscussion，doasecondsurvey等，為文章增色不少。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。Writing4【2019年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。你們班上周組織了一次以“勞動(dòng)最光榮”為主題的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個(gè)過(guò)程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：西瓜watermelon【答案】LastweekItookpartinafarmworkprogrammeinthesuburbs.Attheclassmeeting,ourteachertoldusabouttheprogrammewiththetheme“Workingismostbeautiful”.Andhestressedtheimportanceofworkingwithourownhands.WhenIgothome,Ipackedupmyluggageforthetrip.Onthefarm,wehelpedpickwatermelons.Whileworking,Irealisedhowharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.WhenIcamebackhome,Isharedmyexperienceswithmyparents.Andtheywereveryproudofme.【分析】本文屬于圖畫作文，要求根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容寫一篇英文周記?！驹斀狻考偃缒闶羌t星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你們班上周組織了一次以“勞動(dòng)最光榮”為主題的社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)。要求根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個(gè)過(guò)程。分析四幅圖可知，圖畫作文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)比較清晰，其中包括：老師宣布活動(dòng)內(nèi)容和意義，我為活動(dòng)準(zhǔn)備，在農(nóng)場(chǎng)的勞動(dòng)過(guò)程，介紹活動(dòng)感受。這樣有利于學(xué)生寫作時(shí)發(fā)揮與擴(kuò)展。全文可分成三部分，開頭段概括活動(dòng)，中間段描述圖畫，結(jié)尾段總結(jié)收獲和意義。文章用第一人稱來(lái)寫，使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言表述通順。使用了連接詞、銜接詞，使文章自然、流暢。文章使用了賓語(yǔ)從句howharditwastoworkinthefieldsunderahotsun.，還使用了Attheclassmeeting,WhenIgothome,Onthefarm,Whileworking,WhenIcamebackhome等過(guò)渡詞，使文章上下文銜接流暢。Writing5【2018年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你們上周接待外國(guó)學(xué)生，帶領(lǐng)他們體驗(yàn)中國(guó)茶文化的全過(guò)程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。(請(qǐng)務(wù)必將作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi))___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichturnedoutbetoextremelyrewarding.Onarrivingattheteahouse,theforeignstudentswereimpressedbytheuniqueteapotsandteacups.Igavethemavividandinformativeintroductionofteaculture,includingitsprofoundhistory,itsrichvariety,andtheexquisitecraftsmanshipofmakingteawiththeirinterestgreatlysparked,Ithenbegantoteachthemhowtomaketea.Inordertodeliveraclearpresentation,Islowlyexplainedthetraditionalprocedureofmakingteaindetail.Absorbedineverymoveofmine,theforeignstudentswereonceagainamazedbythisuniquecultureandtheycouldn’thelptakingpicturesfromtimetotime.NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.Washingtheteapots,addingtealeaves,andpouringwaterintothecups,theyfollowedmyinstructionsandwerereallyimmersedincharmingteaculture.Theteahousewitnessedareallyenjoyabletimeforallofus.Attheendoftheactivity,holdingtheteabagsinourhands,wetookapicturetomemorizetheunforgettableday.Itsuddenlyhitmethattraditionalcultureliketeaculturewasofgreatcharmandhugevalue.AndIswelledwithpridetospreadourownculturetopeopleallovertheworld.【詳解】本文為圖片介紹類作文，這類作文是根據(jù)給出的一幅或幾幅圖畫所提供的信息寫短文。此類題的體裁較廣泛，可以是記敘文、說(shuō)明文，也可以是議論文。按照本文的要求可知，是寫一篇記敘文。1.認(rèn)真讀圖，把握中心。根據(jù)提示可知，內(nèi)容是帶領(lǐng)外國(guó)學(xué)生體驗(yàn)中國(guó)茶文化的全過(guò)程，介紹了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的過(guò)程，所以這是這組圖畫所要表達(dá)的中心。2.初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語(yǔ)、句型和時(shí)態(tài)。在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個(gè)基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)和句型，以充分地表達(dá)文章的內(nèi)容。本文是講述上周發(fā)生的事情，故時(shí)態(tài)要以過(guò)去時(shí)為主，人稱是第一人稱，盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語(yǔ)或句型來(lái)表述具體的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。3.連詞成句，然后再連句成文。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或短語(yǔ)正確表達(dá)各圖的意思。然后再將各圖的單個(gè)句子串連起來(lái)。串連時(shí)，要注意使用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞語(yǔ)或過(guò)渡性語(yǔ)句，不至于讓讀者覺(jué)得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。4.反復(fù)審核，修改錯(cuò)誤。一篇文章寫好后，應(yīng)進(jìn)行檢查，看短文中是否有錯(cuò)，如拼寫、用詞、時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)及表達(dá)方面的錯(cuò)誤。5.宜詳則詳，該略則略。對(duì)于一些細(xì)節(jié)方面的內(nèi)容，如果是文章必不可少的，在寫作過(guò)程中是不可將其忽略的。如果是可有可無(wú)的細(xì)節(jié)，則可視具體情況進(jìn)行增刪。據(jù)此，我們?cè)谧x圖時(shí)一定要注意閱讀各圖中的一些細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容，看其是否影響文章的內(nèi)容。亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明：巧妙使用定語(yǔ)從句，提升了文章檔次：Lastweek,wetooktheforeignstudentsinourschooltoexperiencetheauthenticteaculture,whichturnedoutbetoextremelyrewarding.使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，使句子表達(dá)更簡(jiǎn)潔：Onarrivingattheteahouse…Igavethemavividandinformativeintroductionofteaculture,includingitsprofoundhistory,itsrichvariety,Absorbedineverymoveofmine,theforeignstudentswereonceagainamazedbythisuniquecultureholdingtheteabagsinourhands,wetookapicturetomemorizetheunforgettableday.使用倒裝句突出重點(diǎn)。NextcamethemomentwhenIaskedthemtohaveatrythemselves.使用it做形式主語(yǔ)，使表達(dá)更地道。Writing6【2017年北京卷】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母校”為主題的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過(guò)程。注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。提示詞：視頻video【答案】

Graduationfinallycame.MyclassmatesandIdecidedtodosomething.Afteraheateddiscussion,weagreedonmakingavideotorecordourexperiencesatschool.

Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.Theeditingpartafterthatwastough.Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.Somecompromiseswereunavoidable,butthevideoturnedoutperfect.Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.Thestudentsandteacherssharedagreattime.Thatsurelygaveusagreatsenseofachievement.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖畫作文，要求考生根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記錄畢業(yè)前夕你們制作以“感恩母?！睘橹黝}的畢業(yè)紀(jì)念視頻的全過(guò)程?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累最終：finally→eventually困難的：tough→difficult不可避免的：unavoidable→inevitable當(dāng)然；無(wú)疑：surely→certainly2.句式拓展合并簡(jiǎn)單句原句：Wedebatedoverwhattoputintothevideo.拓展句：Wedebatedoverwhatweshouldputintothevideo.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Materialcollectingtookusawholeweek,duringwhichweinterviewedourteachersandtookpicturesofeveryaspectofschoollife.(運(yùn)用了介詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]Severaldayslater,whenthevideowasplayedonthegraduationceremony,itwaswellreceived.

(運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語(yǔ)從句)模擬提升基礎(chǔ)訓(xùn)Writing1你校英文報(bào)正在開展學(xué)生使用拍照搜題類軟件（snap-for-answersapplications）的調(diào)查。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.軟件使用情況描述；2.分析該現(xiàn)象的原因；3.簡(jiǎn)要談?wù)勀愕目捶?。注意?.詞數(shù)80左右；2.短文開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Asisshowninthesurveyconductedbyourschool’sEnglishnewspaper,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asisshowninthesurveyconductedbyourschool’sEnglishnewspaper,theusageofsnap-for-answersapplicationsisontheriseamonghighschoolstudents,with40%offreshmen,60%ofsophomores,and80%ofseniorsusingthem.Thistrendcanbeattributedtotheincreasingacademicpressureandtheconvenienceofferedbytheseapps.Additionally,somestudentsmaylackthenecessarystudysupport,leadingthemtorelyonthesetools.Inmyview,whiletheycanbehelpfulforquickreference,overrelianceonthemmaydiscouragedeeplearningandcriticalthinkingskills.Therefore,weshouldusethesetoolswisely,balancingtheirbenefitswiththeneedforindependentstudy.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類作文。校英文報(bào)正在開展學(xué)生使用拍照搜題類軟件的調(diào)查。要求考生根據(jù)圖表中的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫一篇短文投稿?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累在增加：ontherise→ontheincrease另外：additionally→inaddition/besides依賴：relyon→dependon我認(rèn)為：inone'sview→fromone'spointofview2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Additionally,somestudentsmaylackthenecessarystudysupport,leadingthemtorelyonthesetools.拓展句：Additionally,somestudentsmaylackthenecessarystudysupport,whichleadsthemtorelyonthesetools.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Thistrendcanbeattributedtotheincreasingacademicpressureandtheconvenienceofferedbytheseapps.(運(yùn)用了過(guò)去分詞短語(yǔ)作后置狀語(yǔ))[高分句型2]Therefore,weshouldusethesetoolswisely,balancingtheirbenefitswiththeneedforindependentstudy.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ))Writing2當(dāng)今社會(huì)，短視頻已成為高中生獲取信息的渠道之一，日前，某網(wǎng)站對(duì)某地高中生使用短視頻的現(xiàn)狀作了調(diào)查，結(jié)果如下:獲取短視頻內(nèi)容的類型受訪者平均使用時(shí)間占比（該內(nèi)容瀏覽時(shí)間/總瀏覽時(shí)間）輔助學(xué)習(xí)類48%娛樂(lè)休閑類31%生活技能類12%其他9%請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)單描述該圖表，并結(jié)合自身或他人情況，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā＃ㄎ闹胁坏贸霈F(xiàn)考生姓名，學(xué)校等真實(shí)信息）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asurveyconductedbyawebsiteisaimedatfiguringoutthesituationabouthighschoolstudents’useofshortvideosasachannelforgaininginformation.Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.And9%isspentonrandomcontents.AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.Thus,itisnowonderthatalargeproportionoftheirtimeisspentonshortvideos.Iamsurethatthistrendwillcontinueandlastforever.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本文是一篇圖表類型作文。要求考生表格展示的內(nèi)容去描述某地高中使用短視頻的現(xiàn)狀?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累旨在：beaimedat→beintendedtodo與……相關(guān)：relatedto→withregardto除此以外：inaddition→additionally提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.拓展句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosthatarerelevanttosomeimportantlifeskills.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.（運(yùn)用了as引導(dǎo)的非限制定語(yǔ)從句以及that引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型以及makeit+形容詞+forsb.todosth.的結(jié)構(gòu)）提升練Writing3有效的課后作業(yè)能激發(fā)學(xué)生的學(xué)習(xí)興趣，豐富學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷，提升綜合素養(yǎng)，并在知識(shí)與生活之間架起一座橋梁。假如你是李華，你校為減輕學(xué)生的負(fù)擔(dān)，改進(jìn)作業(yè)布置的方式，針對(duì)“你最喜歡的一種英語(yǔ)課后作業(yè)類型”，對(duì)全校1000名學(xué)生進(jìn)行了問(wèn)卷調(diào)查。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面圖表信息，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明圖表內(nèi)容；2.從圖表中選出一種你最喜歡的作業(yè)類型，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勥@種作業(yè)的好處。要求：(1)詞數(shù)不少于80；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名等；(3)字跡工整，語(yǔ)言流暢，表達(dá)正確，條理清楚；(4)參考詞匯僅供參考。參考詞匯：arouseinterst激發(fā)興趣enrichexperiences豐富經(jīng)歷promotecompetence提升素養(yǎng)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Ourschooldidasurveyamong1000studentsabouttheirfavoritekindsofEnglishhomework.Herearetheresults.42%ofthestudentslikelisteningandspeakinghomeworkbest,and29%enjoyreadingandwriting.Thepercentageofthestudentswholikethehands-onprojectis22%and7%chooseotherkindsofhomework.Asforme,Ilikethehands-onprojectbestbecauseitconnectswhatI’velearntwithreallifeinaninterestingway.Threeweeksago,wewereaskedtomakeanEnglishposteraboutDragonBoatFestival.ThenIcollectedlotsofinformationaboutthefestival.Finally,notonlydidIfinishthetaskperfectly,butalsoIgotadeeperunderstandingofourcolorfulculture.Inmyopinion,it’sthehands-onprojectthatarousesmyinterestinEnglishandenrichesmyexperiencesinlearning.【導(dǎo)語(yǔ)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于圖表類寫作。要求考生根據(jù)對(duì)全校1000名學(xué)生進(jìn)行的主題為“你最喜歡的一種英語(yǔ)課后作業(yè)類型”問(wèn)卷調(diào)查結(jié)果，寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文。簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明調(diào)查結(jié)果并介紹自己喜歡的作業(yè)類型?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累最后：finally→atlast大量的：lotsof→alotof/agreatamountof完成：finish→complete在我看來(lái)：inmyopinion→frommypointofview2.句式拓展同義句原句：42%ofthestudentslikelisteningandspeakinghomeworkbest,and29%enjoyreadingandwriting.拓展句：42%ofthestudentslikelisteningandspeakinghomeworkbest,while29%enjoyreadingandwriting.【點(diǎn)睛】【高分句型1】Thepercentageofthestudentswholikethehands-onprojectis22%and7%chooseotherkindsofhomework.（運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句）【高分句型2】Asforme,Ilike