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應(yīng)用文寫作講評(píng)假如你是李華,你的外國筆友Patick寫信告訴你,每當(dāng)別人向他求助時(shí),他總是不會(huì)說不,這極大地影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。請(qǐng)你給他回信,幫他解決這一問題,內(nèi)容包括:1.安撫對(duì)方;2.提出建議并說明理由。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。安撫對(duì)方:說明你很善良、友好;
這是很多人都會(huì)遇到的狀況,很普遍正常過渡句:However,kindnessandgenerosityshouldhavealimit.
Theproblemisnotdifficulttotackle.提出建議:何時(shí)說不?怎么說不?且說明這樣建議的理由Para.1backgroundinformation+intentionUsesentencepatternstomakeupthesentences拒絕/說不neversay“no”turnsb.down/declinesb’srequestforassistancedenyone’srequestforhelprefuseone’srequestforaid被......困擾bebothered/influencedby…befacedwith/beconfrontedwith/encounter
leavesb.inamessexertanegative/adverse/severeimpacton...每當(dāng)別人向他求助時(shí),他總是不會(huì)說不,這極大地影響了他的學(xué)習(xí)和生活。Arequirementisaqualityorqualificationthatyoumusthaveinordertobeallowedtodosomethingortobesuitableforsomething.Whatistheminimumentrancerequirementforthiscourse?Yourrequirementsarethethingsthatyouneed.Potatoescanprovideone-thirdofourdailyrequirementofvitaminC.Para.1backgroundinformation+intentionUsesentencepatternstomakeupthesentences句型1adj+tohearthat…,I’mwritingto…Sosorry/upset/sorrowfultohearthat
yourstudyandlifearegreatlyinfluencedwiththepresentsituationwhereyouneverdaretosay“no”
whensomeonefrequentlyturntoyouforhelp,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeconstructive/sensiblesuggestionstohelpyouout.Para.1backgroundinformation+intentionUsesentencepatternstomakeupthesentencesYourlastletterinformedmethat
you’reconfrontedwithabothering/distressingproblemthatyouneverdaretodenyone’srequest
whentheyturntoyouforhelp.
Upsetandconcerned,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyoualleviate/getridof/address/tackleit....However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyouadoptthefollowingsuggestions.句型2無靈主語+名詞性從句+狀語從句,I’mwritingto…Ihopethisletterfindsyou.Recentlyyouhaverelatedtomethatyouareconfrontedwithadistressingproblemthatyouareunabletodeclineothers’requestwhenaskedtoofferahelpinghand.Acquaintedwithit,Itakegreatdelightindroppingyoualinetohelpyouresolveit.(江俊)Para.2comfortandsuggestions幫助別人不是壞事,說明你很善良、大方,大家都信賴你。句型3It’s+adj./n.+todo,which(非限制性定語從句)It’snotabadthingforyoutolendahelpinghandtothoseinneed/adversity,which
showsyourkindness,generosityandreliability.
句型4非謂語動(dòng)詞做主語+which(非限制性定語從句)Helpingtheneedypeopleisindeedpraiseworthy,fromwhichpeoplesenseyou’rekind,generousandreliable.
Nevercoulditbedeniedthatyourkindnessandgenerosityareyourmarvellousmeritsandyoushouletakeprideinbeing
endowedwithsuchfabulousnature.(佳馨)過渡:但是,幫助人是有限度的,所以你要學(xué)會(huì)跟人說“不”。句型5
無靈主語/therebe句式/插入However,kindnessandgenerosityshouldhavealimit.However,thereshouldbealimitofyourkindnessandgenerosity.However,frommyperspective,youshouldsetalimittoyourkindnessandgenerosity.
AsfarasIamconcerned,itisyourkindnessthatpromptsyoutoextendahelpinghandtothoseinneed,whichisworthpraising.However,everythingshouldhavealimit.(煒晉)建議:超出你能力的時(shí)候,你不方便的時(shí)候,你都應(yīng)該勇敢的說不。句型6either…orSay“no”withouthesitationeither
whenyou’reincompetent
or
it’sinconvenientforyou.
句型7It’ssuggestedthat…/WereIyou,…It’ssuggestedthatyou(should)expressyourrefusal/rejection
whenyoufeelit’soutof/beyondyourcapability
or
it’snotatyourconvenience.
WereIyou,Iwoulddenyhis/herrequest
whenIfeelit’soutofmycapability
or
it’snotatmyconvenience.
事情超出你能力范圍時(shí)拒絕Don’tbeshytosaynowhenyouconsidertherequestsaretoodemanding,
whichplace/putyouundergreatpressure/whichexertgreatpressureonyou.與你個(gè)人生活相沖突時(shí)Whentherequestsfromothersruncountertoyourownpersonallife,itissensibleofyoutosay“no”inapolitemanner.(祺昕)be/run/gocountertosth與......相反如何拒絕:禮貌拒絕Youarerecommendedtorefuseothers’requestinapolitewayandprovidesomegenuinereasons,whichisofgreatbenefittoeaseyourmentalpressureandcomfortothersatthesametime/simultaneously.(綺雯)句型8What…isthat…;it句式再者,你需記住的是你沒有義務(wù)去幫忙解決所有問題,每個(gè)人都有自己獨(dú)立解決問題的能力。Whatyoushouldkeepinmindisthatit’snotyourdutyto
solve/address/tacklealltheproblemsandeveryonepossessestheabilitytotacklethetaskindependently.
Para.2comfortandsuggestions總結(jié)陳詞:只有這樣,你才能從困境中走出。句型9Onlyinthisway…倒裝Onlyinthiswaycanyouwithdrawfromtheawfulsituation.
Para.3politeending希望我的建議能對(duì)你有用。Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Bestwishes!Sincerelyhopethatyoufindmysuggestionspractical,whichcouldhelpyougetridofthistroubleassoonaspossible.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.(雅煊)Inanutshell,Ihopemysuggestionscouldbeconstructiveforyou.Dohope
thatyoucanwalkoutofthatshadowandembraceyourlifehappily.(韻怡)
DearPatrick,Sosorry/upsettohearthat
yourstudyandlifearegreatlyinfluencedbythepresentsituationwhere
youneverdaretosay“no”
when
someonefrequentlyturntoyouforhelp,I’mwritingtoofferyousomeconstructivesuggestionstohelpyouout.Helpingtheneedypeopleisindeedpraiseworthy,fromwhichpeoplesenseyourkindness,generosityandreliability.However,
frommyperspective,youshouldsetalimittothem.Whatyoushouldkeepinmindisthatit’snotyourdutytosolvealltheproblemsandeveryonepossessestheabilitytotacklethetaskindependently.Therefore,it’ssuggestedthatyou(should)expressyourrefusalwhenyoufeelit’soutof/beyondyourcapabilityorit’snotatyourconvenience.Onlyinthiswaycanyouwithdrawfromtheawfulsituation.
Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelptoyou.Bestwishes!
Yours,LiHua參考范文一:
DearPatrick,
Knowingthatyouareconfrontedwiththeproblemthatyoudon’tknowhowtosaynotoothers’request,which
negativelyimpactyourstudyandlife,Iamwritingtoofferyousomesuggestionstohelpyoutackleit.Itisobviouslyavirtuetobenice,kindandhelpfultowardothers,butthereisapointwherepeoplecanenduptakingadvantageofyou,andyoushouldbeawareofsettinglimitsandmaintainingyoursenseofwellbeing.Thefollowingsuggestionmaybehelpful.Tellpeo
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