作文萬能句[How to improve your writing]課件

1、How to improve your writing,思考： 如今由于英語中考滿分是150分了，中考的作文分也已增加到16分，因此這一部分的重要性不言而語。而在我們普通學(xué)校里的平行班中有一部分“第三世界的”學(xué)生，他們是學(xué)困者。他們幾乎沒有詞匯量，也幾乎不懂語法，他們是每個(gè)班中最底部的幾個(gè)學(xué)生。他們對(duì)待作文的態(tài)度要么放棄，“開天窗”，要么胡亂寫一點(diǎn)，寫出來的東西沒有一句話是對(duì)的。因此他們的作文基本上得不到分。針對(duì)這種情況我想如果聽之任之的話，他們就會(huì)考出低分，并且很難上72分。于是我進(jìn)行了思考和應(yīng)對(duì)的措施，并收到了比較好的效果。對(duì)中上等的學(xué)生同樣增加了他們作文的得分率。,通過對(duì)中考英語寫作話題

2、分析，初中階段的寫作體裁主要包括記敘文、議論文和應(yīng)用文。記敘文的訓(xùn)練中應(yīng)包括記人、敘事、狀物。,一描寫一個(gè)人（朋友，父母，老師等） 1. Miss Li is our class teacher/my friend. 李老師是我們的班主任/我的朋友。 2. She is about 30 years old. 她大概30歲了。 3. She was born in Shanghai in 1989.她1989年出身在上海。 4. She is good at English/basketball / swimming。 我擅長于 英語/籃球/游泳 5. My parents work very

3、 hard. 我的父母非常努力工作。 6. They are friendly to me. 他們對(duì)我很友好。 7. We often play together. 我們經(jīng)常一起玩耍。,8. I think she is not only my good teacher, but also my friend. 我認(rèn)為她不僅是我的好老師，也是我的朋友。 9. Although he is not clever, he studies very hard. 盡管他不聰明，他學(xué)習(xí)很努力。 10. He is one of the tallest students in our class. 他是我

4、們班最高的學(xué)生之一。 11We often help each other and learn from each other. 我們常常互相幫助互相學(xué)習(xí)。 12With the help of teachers and my friends, I have made great progress. 在老師和我朋友的幫助下， 我已經(jīng)取得了很大的進(jìn)步。 13In a word , I like her/him very much. 總而言之，我非常喜歡她/他,每一主題后面的句子稍微復(fù)雜一些，這樣可以幫助中等的學(xué)生取得較高的分?jǐn)?shù)，我們稱這些句子是萬能句，而教會(huì)他們的是背出，并且學(xué)會(huì)怎么套。,二描寫

5、個(gè)人的興趣，愛好等。,I like reading different kinds of books. 我喜歡看不同種類的書。 I think books are my good friends. 我認(rèn)為書是我的好朋友。 I often spend my money on books. 我常?；X買書 I like swimming very much. 我非常喜歡游泳。 We can learn a lot from it/them。 我們從中能夠?qū)W到很多。 It makes me healthy/happy. 它使我健康/歡樂 I can get not only much knowled

6、ge but also a lot of fun from it/them.我不僅能從中得到很多知識(shí)而且很多樂趣。,三 描寫我的愿望或者有關(guān)學(xué)英語的重要性。,1.My dream is to be a teacher . 我的夢想是成為一個(gè)老師 2.I am good at English/basketball / swimming。 我擅長于英語/籃球/游泳 3.English will become more and more important。英語將變得越來越重要 4.It is important to learn English well. 學(xué)好英語是重要的。 5.English

7、is so useful that we must learn it well.英語是如此的重要以至我們必須學(xué)好它 6.We should work hard in order to find a good job in the future. 我們應(yīng)該努力學(xué)習(xí)為了在將來找到一份好工作。 7.I often spend much time reading English every day. 我常?；ㄙM(fèi)很多時(shí)間每天讀英語。,對(duì)于部分好同學(xué)同樣可以通過背誦好句子讓他們拿到高分，他們自己寫可能寫不到那么好。,8I am sure I will have a bright future if I t

8、ry my best to study hard. 假如我盡我最大努力認(rèn)真學(xué)習(xí)，我相信我將有燦爛的未來。 9knowledge is power. If a person hasnt much knowledge, it is impossible for him to find a good job. 知識(shí)就是力量。 假如一個(gè)人沒有很多知識(shí)，對(duì)他來說找一份好工作是不可能的。 10.I believe that hard work will bring me success. 我相信艱苦的學(xué)習(xí)（勞動(dòng)）將給我?guī)沓晒Α?四描寫我的家鄉(xiāng)上?；蚪榻B上海。,1.There are a lot of b

9、ig shops and busy streets in Shanghai. 在上海有許多大商店和繁忙的街道。 2.There are many people there. 在那里有很多人。 3. As we all know ，Shanghai is famous for the Bund. 上海以外灘而聞名 4.We are proud of Shanghai/him. 我們以上海/他而感到自豪 5.I think Shanghai will become more and more beautiful in the future. 我認(rèn)為上海將變的越來越美麗。,五描寫物或者景,1. Th

10、ere are two classroom buildings in our school. 在我們學(xué)校有兩幢教學(xué)樓。 2. Its very large and beautiful. 它非常大和美麗。 3. We can see green trees and nice flowers everywhere. 我們能夠到處看到綠樹和鮮花。 4.My school life is full of fun. 我的學(xué)校生活充滿著樂趣。 5. My favorite animals are dogs.我最喜歡的動(dòng)物是狗 6.They can help us in many ways.它們?cè)谠S多方面能

11、幫助我們。,六“過去發(fā)生的事情”一類作文的寫法：或者一次去.的旅行。,1It was fine last Sunday. 上星期天天氣很好。 2 I went to LuXun park with my parents last Sunday. 上星期天我去了魯迅公園。 3.We went there by bus. 我們坐車去哪兒 4.There are many interesting places in Beijing. 在北京有很多有趣的地方 5.We visited the Great Wall. 我們參觀了長城。 6.The Great Wall is very nice. 長城非

12、常好。 7We took a lot of nice pictures. 我們拍了很多好看的照片。 8After that, we bought a lot of interesting books in the shop. 那以后，我們買了很多有趣的書在書店。,9. We held a class meeting/（sports meet） in our classroom last Friday.我們上星期五在我們的教室開了一個(gè)班會(huì)/運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。 10. We sang and danced together. 我們?cè)谝黄鸪韬吞琛?11. I entered for the high ju

13、mp. 我報(bào)名參加了跳高。 12. We played basketball after school yesterday. 我們昨天放學(xué)后打籃球。 13. I planted a lot of trees last Sunday. 上星期天我種植了很多樹. After that, we watered the trees. 那以后我們給樹澆了水. Trees can make air clan. 樹能夠使空氣干凈. 14. I helped my grandma to clean the house. 我?guī)椭业哪棠檀驋叻孔? 15I had to go over my English le

14、ssons at home. 我不得不在家里復(fù)習(xí)我的英語功課。 16. I didnt go to bed until I finished my homework last night. 我一直沒有上床睡覺直到我昨天完成我的家庭作業(yè)。 17In a word, we had a good time. 總而言之，我們玩的很愉快。,七“將來發(fā)生的一件事情” 一類作文的寫法。,1I will go to LuXun park with my parents next Sunday. 下星期天我要去魯迅公園。 2. We will go there by bus. 我們將坐車去哪兒. 3We wil

15、l visit the Great Wall. 我們將參觀長城。 （把上面過去時(shí)態(tài)的句子轉(zhuǎn)換成一般將來時(shí)就可以） 八句與句間好的連詞： First，（首先） After that ,（那以后） However, (然而) , Whats more,（而且） on the other hand. finally, at last, In a word, （總而言之）,九 其他,1. I want to visit my uncle. 我想要看望我的叔叔。 2. Thank you for your letter. 謝謝你的來信 3. It is bad/good /for us. 它對(duì)我們有好處

16、（壞處） 4. It is as important as air. 它和空氣一樣重要。 5. It is widely used in our life. 在我們的生活中它被廣泛使用。 6I can know much more about the world, and I can make more friends as well. 我能夠了解更多世界，和交到更多的朋友。 7With the help of computers, we can keep in touch with the world. 在電腦的幫助下，我們能夠和世界保持聯(lián)系。,8I have a lot of homewo

17、rk to do ,so I have no time to play. 我有許多作業(yè)要做，所以我沒有時(shí)間玩耍。 9. We should eat more vegetables and less meat in order to keep healthy. 我們應(yīng)該吃更多的蔬菜和更少的肉為了保持健康。 10.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try. 世上無難事只要肯攀登。 11. If everyone can give his hand, There will be more flowers and sunlight in the worl

18、d. 假如每個(gè)人能伸出一只手，世界上將會(huì)有更多的鮮花和陽光。,Skills of making a passage better,Learning to write beautiful sentences 正確構(gòu)建簡單句 恰當(dāng)使用復(fù)合句(三個(gè)左右) 恰當(dāng)使用分詞結(jié)構(gòu) 長短句結(jié)合 嘗試特殊句型(感嘆句,倒裝句等) 每一次考試后的作文講評(píng),我都會(huì)利用以上的句子進(jìn)行套寫.每一次月考前都會(huì)全班默寫前面的句子.因此不斷的反復(fù)默寫也使學(xué)困生能默寫下來了.當(dāng)然還要讓他們學(xué)會(huì)回答題目,對(duì)怎么回答進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練.,英語范文,一A Visit to (Yu Garden / Nan pu bridge /birthda

19、y party) （寫過去發(fā)生的事情或活動(dòng)） Last Sunday, my parents and I visited Yu Garden. It was fine. We went there by bus. It took us one hour to get there. We saw many nice things. There were many people there. We took a lot of nice pictures. Yu Garden is famous for its snack so we ate a lot of nice food. (Nanpu b

20、ridge is very famous in Shanghai ). YuGarden was so beautiful that we enjoyed it very much.,二 A plan of winter holidays（寫將來的事情或計(jì)劃）,Winter holidays will come. Many students are looking forward to it. I will visit a lot of nice places with my parents. I will have time to watch cartoons. I will buy man

21、y interesting books in the shop. I will eat a lot of nice food. Of course, I will have to finish my homework. In a word, I will have a good time during the winter holidays.,三 Spring festival （寫節(jié)日的文章）,Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. Before Spring Festival, people usually clea

22、n their houses .And they go to the supermarket to buy something .During Spring Festival , parents usually give lucky money to children. People often get together and have a big dineer. Some people eat dumplings for dinner.,四 Pollution （寫污染一類的文章）,There are three kinds of pollution: air pollution, wat

23、er pollution and noise pollution. They are all harmful to peoples health. Today, pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do our best to fight it. We can plant more trees to make the air clean. Cars should use a new kind of fuel. Factories cant let out dirty water. In a word, we must pro

24、tect our earth and make it more beautiful.,五Sports （寫運(yùn)動(dòng)或奧運(yùn)會(huì)一類的文章）,Everyone enjoys sports. If we want to keep healthy and happy and live longer, we must take an active part in sports. As we all know, Olympic Games will be held in China. Many people are looking forward to it. Beijing will develop fast

25、. All the Chinese are excited. In a word, We should play sports to relax ourselves and we should do our best to welcome the Olympic Games.,六 Computer （ 寫物體的文章）,I have a computer. It is white and lovely. It is widely used in our life. It helps me a lot. Computers can do a lot of work. They can draw p

26、ictures. They can write music. They can store a lot of information. With the help of computers, we can keep in touch with the world. I can know much more about the world, and I can make more friends as well. Of course, we should use computers in a right way. In a word, computers are very useful. I l

27、ike computers.,上學(xué)期區(qū)統(tǒng)考學(xué)困生的文章 8分。,We will hold the Olympic Games in China in 2008. I will student hard. I will read English at home every day. My friends and I we help each other and learn from each. I think books are my good friends. I will often spend My money on books in 2008. My friends and I ofte

28、n play together in 2008. In a word I like in 2008 very much. 在內(nèi)容上沒有詳細(xì)寫出 What will happen to you?但對(duì)一個(gè)什么都不會(huì)的學(xué)生來說能得一半的作文分就是我們的目標(biāo)。她的總分得到了60分，再通過一學(xué)期的努力能上72分是有希望的。,上學(xué)期區(qū)統(tǒng)考學(xué)困生的文章 8分。,In the year 2008 the Olympic Games from in Beijing. I will visit Beijing. I can see green trees and nice flowers everywhere.

29、I can eat a lot of nice food in Beijing. The China in 2008 Shanghai is very beautiful my father and my mother and I visit Beijing We can see Olympic Games in Beijing So we are very happy in China in 2008. 在內(nèi)容上沒有詳細(xì)寫出 What will happen to you?他也基本上整篇文章沒有標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。但對(duì)一個(gè)什么都不會(huì)的學(xué)生來說能得一半的作文分就是我們的目標(biāo)。他的總分得到了63分，再通過一學(xué)