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1、Writing Training,Produced by Li Zhongying,假如你是李華, 你的美國朋友Alice聽說中國的中小學(xué)正在實施素質(zhì)教育, 來信詢問有關(guān)情況。請你根據(jù)下表提供的信息，寫封回信，談一談“素質(zhì)教育”實施后你們學(xué)校生活發(fā)生的變化。,注意： 1、寫信日期為2004年2月20日； 2、詞數(shù)：100左右； 3、注意書信格式。,Dear Alice, You said that you wanted to know something about quality-oriented education. So I will talk about quality-oriente

2、d and exam-oriented education. At last , we only could listen our teachers and make notes. After classes we had a lot homeworks to do. It took us much time on it at night. But now, in class, we can discuss questions with teacher. Students are all like to study. Sometime we also could play a teacher.

3、 We dont have so many homeworks. So we have enough time to do all kinds of activities, for example, singing, playing balls, English coner, and so on. At night , we can see news, do experiments Yours, Li Hua 2004, 2, 20,Incorrect letter form; Spelling mistakes; Grammatical mistakes; The passage is wo

4、rdy; Think in Chinese and write in Chinglish; No effective conjunctions,Common problems:,Dear Alice:,Yours,Feb 20, 2004,Li Hua,Incorrect letter form,Spelling mistakes:,Our school life was quite boiling. We only made notices and lessoned in class. A lot of activists take the place of the homework. Bu

5、t now things are difficult from it. We do experiences and discussion the subjects.,boring,notes,listened,activities,different,experiments,discuss,In class, exam-oriented education made us to listen the teachers and make notes Comparing with that, quality-oriented education allows us learn lively. We

6、 just had too many homeworks to do. Several years ago, we have saw and experienced the exam-oriented education.,Grammatical mistakes,Compared,to learn actively,much homework,The passage is wordy,I received your last letter yesterday. I am pleased to receive it. You said you heard that China is carry

7、ing out the quality-oriented education in primary schools and middle schools and you wanted to know something about it. So I will tell you something about it and the exam-oriented education. ( 50 words),Glad to hear from you. You want to know something about the quality-oriented education in China.

8、Id like to tell you something about the changes in my school.,27 words,Write in Chinglish,In the evening, we see news, do experiments and discussing subjectswhich instead of continue doing homework.,On top of that, we not only happier than ago, we can learn better and more now.,In the evening, inste

9、ad of continuing our exercises far into the night we can watch news on TV, do experiments and discuss our subjects.,In a/one word, we are not only happier than before, but we can learn better and more now.,No effective conjunctions,And we did our homework in our free time. We did homework till midni

10、ght.,We have a lot of activities, dancing, computers, English, and so on.,And we had to do our homework exercises both in our free time and even far into the night.,After class, We have various outside activities, such as singing, dancing, English corner, and taking computer lessons.,Feb 20, 2004 De

11、ar Alice, How nice to hear from you. You want to know what is going on in schools in China? Now, I will tell you about it. In the past, exam-oriented education forced us to listen to our teacher while taking notes in class. After class, we did all kinds of exercises without end. After supper, we had

12、 to continue our exercises far into the night. Now, quality-oriented education has made our school life colorful. We are active in class. In order to train the ability, we often do research on study. Sometimes one of us teaches ourselves. We have various outside activities, such as singing, dancing,

13、 English corner, and taking computer lessons. Basketball and football are our favorite sports. In the evening we can watch news on TV, do experiments by ourselves and have talks and discussions of our subjects. Its certain that our school life is getting more and more colorful and interesting. Best

14、wishes. Yours, Li Hua,Proper letter form. No obvious mistakes. Write in logical order. Use exact adjectives, good verbs and proper phrases. Use some effective conjunctions. Use different sentence structures.,Why do say it is a good article?,Read the following sentences and decide which is better.,1)

15、 Im waiting for you to come. Im looking forward to your arrival.,2) Tom is ill. He cannot study. He still attends school. Tom is ill and cannot study, yet he still attends,3) I read the newspaper in the past. I like to watch TV now. I used to read the newspapers, but now I prefer to watch TV.,4) He

16、came and brought us a lot of new stories. He came with a lot of new stories.,Improve the following sentences:,1)The flat has an area of 25 square metres and there is a bedroom, a bathroom, and a kitchen.,3) Next the text will be gone through by us and then the main idea will be found.,4) He saw the

17、boy in the street. He stopped to speak to him. He gave him a penny.,2) I heard you are learning Chinese. I am very glad to hear that.,Im very glad to hear that you are learning,Lets go through the text and find the main idea.,Seeing the boy in the street, he stopped to speak to him and gave him a pe

18、nny.,Feb 20, 2004 Dear Alice, Thank you for your last letter. You asked me what quality-oriented education brought to us. Now Ill tell you about it. Instead of just listening to the teacher and taking notes, we now experience a more active atmosphere in class. We often do research to develop our abi

19、lity and sometimes we can even act as a teacher to teach others. After class, we used to spend all the time trying to finish the homework. But now, there are all kinds of activities for us, such as singing, dancing, ball games and computer studying. We often go to the English corner to practise our

20、English. In the evening, the homework exercises once forced us to study till midnight. Yet now, we can watch news on TV, do experiments by ourselves and have discussions of our subjects. Self-improvement comes with the new way of study. We really benefit a lot from it. What about your school life? B

21、est wishes, Yours truly, Li Hua,In the evening, the homework exercises once forced us to study till midnight. Yet now, we can watch news on TV, do experiments by ourselves and have discussions of our subjects.Self-improvement comes with the new way of study. We really benefit a lot from it. What abo

22、ut your school life? Best wishes, Yours truly, Li Hua,Structure 1 :Topic-by-Topic Structure,/ disadvantage,/ advantage,Structure 2 : Point-by-Point Structure,/ disadvantage,/ disadvantage,/ disadvantage,/ advantage,/ advantage,/ advantage,Effective conjunctions,compared with be different from; unlik

23、e on the other hand on the contrary; just the opposite while / however / but take for example; for example just like similarly, in the same way,I used to read the newspaper, but now I prefer to watch TV.,He once knew her, but they are no longer friends now.,Tom liked to collect stamps when he was yo

24、ung, although now he enjoys climbing.,Ten years ago there was only one middle school here, yet now there are five.,We played basketball in the past, while we play football now.,Examples:,Mini-exercises for writing 1：,I prefer working indoors .,my neighbor enjoys working outdoors.,While, (just the opposite, on the contrary,),20 years ago, most people traveled by train.,more and more people are traveling by air .,But now，,Mini-exercises for writing 2：,Children like to eat out at weekend. They are usually interested in western food, such as KFC, Big Mac and