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TASK 2,purpose： essay/ dissertation 考查提出解決方案的能力；舉例說明觀點的能力；對比證據(jù)和意見的能力等,Rubric: (I6 P31) (fact+) opinion+ question+instruction You should spend about 40 minutes on this task:,Write about the following topic: Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.,To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.,大作文準備 天龍八“步”,熟讀劍5，劍6范文，理解評分標準 題型 ；每種題型對應(yīng)的結(jié)構(gòu) 題材歸類 素材 提綱（落實細節(jié)） 思維 高頻短語 建立精彩句庫（換寫，仿寫，擴寫） 每2天一篇；?？?；,Question types：,I Agree or Disagree? (+A or -A) -I6 P31（見上） opinion+(+A or -A) -I3 P52 fact+opinion+(+A or -A),When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent (/how far) do you agree or disagree (with this opinion)?,II Advantages Vs Disadvantages(+A or -A),I5 P53 In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. advantages and disadvantages,III Discuss Both Views (A or B),I6 P53 Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views；your opinion,IV Comparison and contrast (A or B),Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? I5 P99,V Problem + Reasons + Solutions (PRS),I4 P101 In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest?,評分標準三大要素：內(nèi)容，結(jié)構(gòu)，語言 讀雅思大作文范文學習寫作的內(nèi)容，結(jié)構(gòu)，文章行文和邏輯。,寫作內(nèi)容及結(jié)構(gòu)：,I Agree or Disagree? (+A or -A) Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?,Para1開頭 指出現(xiàn)象/事實; restate the rubric（換詞，換句型，換種說法）；字數(shù)：30-40w；,Para 2 &3正文：四種寫法,一邊倒： -完全同意(在開頭段提出觀點表同意；para2 R1；para3 R2；) -完全不同意（在開頭段提出觀點表不同意；para2 R1；para3 R2；） 不完全同意或不同意,- para2同意的部分；R1，2；para3不同意的部分R1,2 - para2基本贊同；R1，2; para 3 in what cases題中觀點站不住腳 Para4結(jié)尾 總結(jié)以上觀點 字數(shù)：30-40w,II Advantages Vs Disadvantages (+A or -A),In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.,Para1開頭：指出現(xiàn)象/事實restate the rubric（換詞，換句型，換種說法）； Para 2 advantages (2-3個) Para 3 disadvantages (2-3個),Para 4 結(jié)論：“我”的觀點。偏向advantages 或disadvantages；理由（2個）；字數(shù)：50w； 注意：結(jié)論部分，無論是傾向優(yōu)點還是缺點，都不要重復正文部分的語句。對策：（如：偏向優(yōu)點）1.總結(jié)第二段的觀點，由specific到general；2. 重復第二段觀點，但要用重述法。 贊成的一邊適當多寫一些內(nèi)容。,III Discuss Both Views (A or B) I6 P164,Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion I6 P53,開頭Para1 擺現(xiàn)象；restate the rubric；,正文： 有傾向性； Para 2 A ，簡單陳述其理由，然后針對所述理由展開駁論。 Para 3 B (理由2-3個) 注：傾向A寫法正好相反,無傾向性 Para 2 A ，簡單陳述其理由，然后針對所述理由展開駁論。 Para 3 B ，簡單陳述其理由，然后針對所述理由展開駁論。 結(jié)論Para 4 “我”的觀點。標明傾向性A or B，或者保持中立并提出自己獨特的觀點。,IV Comparison and contrast (A or B) Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? I5 P99 范文：I5 P169,IV Comparison and contrast (A or B) Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? I5 P99 范文：I5 P169,Para1開頭 restate the rubric；指出fact(s)說明有哪些可能的選擇； Para 2 為什么A，B是可能的選擇， Para 3 “我”的選擇(one of A，B，or none of these but another one)；R1，2 Para 4 結(jié)論 概括para2和para3的觀點。,V Problem + Reasons + Solutions (PRS) In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest? I4 P101,Para1開頭 指出problem；restate the rubric； Para 2 R1,2. Para 3 S1,2 Para 4結(jié)論 概括para2和para3的觀點。 Note：S和R要一一對應(yīng)。,銜接，邏輯性 1. for an essay as a whole: topic sentence (thesis statement) 2. for each paragraph: topic sentence 3. 段落間,段內(nèi)都要注意銜接。標明并列，遞進，轉(zhuǎn)折等主要關(guān)系。 學習1篇范文，體會內(nèi)容，結(jié)構(gòu)及連接手段,觀點前置-段內(nèi)擴展：,原因Example 1:,There are more job opportunities readily available in the big cities than in the small towns.,The economic conditions in the big cities are generally better than those in the small towns, which, in return, attracts more investment from commercial corporations and companies.,Therefore, compared to most small towns, there are always more modern and international companies which can offer city residents numerous job opportunities.,Example 2:,Big cities can provide city residents with more education opportunities.,Education institutions are always built in the area with a big population with the intention of serving and educating people.,Therefore, compared with small towns, big cities always have more schools, colleges and universities which can offer many educational opportunities for both children and adults.,原因-展開的常用句型,because for the simple reason that The reason is that 無須過渡詞,擬無 Example 1,The most obviously important characteristic of air plane travel is the high speed involved.,It took weeks to cross the Atlantic or Pacific oceans inside a ship. Today with the advent of airplanes in our lives, those same trips can be completed in a matter of hours.,A hundred years ago, when we didnt have the flights in the sky, and when there were only ships, the only transportation facility across the ocean, an international journey was exhausting and time-wasting.,Example 2,Eating at restaurant can save a lot of time.,We can hardly imagine the situation without restaurants in our lives. Living under the high-pressure and fast-paced living style, people have found they need restaurant when they dont have enough time to enjoy their own cooking.,Without restaurants and the services offered by them, people will have to spend long time going to groceries and cooking by themselves.,常用句型,Without If we dont have in our lives, We can not imagine the situation without,One hundred years ago when we didnt have in our lives, Things would be completely different without in our lives.,方面展開 Example 1,Compared with small towns, there are more convenient living conditions in big cities.,In the big cities, there are convenient shopping centers for people to buy daily necessities；public transportation system can transfer city residents from one place to another easily; in entertaining places citizens get fun and enjoy life; and even there are more theaters to show the latest movies,Example 2,Do you agree or disagree? A zoo has no useful purpose. (disagree),By observing and studying the behaviors and habits of animals in the zoo, we can learn the basic rules of surviving and living in the world.,A monkey has to fight to win when he decides to be a leader of the group; birds show their beautiful plume and voice if they want to attract their partners; and all the animals, if they want a life free of worries, responsibilities, and pressure, have to sacrifice their freedom.,常用句型,This reason can be reflected in the following aspects. We can see this in every aspect of First, second, in addition, moreover, also Several facts several aspects,數(shù)據(jù)：Example 1,There are more job opportunities readily available in the big cities than in the small towns.,According to the survey conducted by Tessess Data, a statistic organization, 80% commercial and industrial corporations and companies, including both domestic companies and international companies are located in the big cities, which offer more than 80% working positions for those who are working and living in the cities.,常用句型,According to a recent survey, The latest surveys show that An investigation shows that A survey was carried out on , the results of which were surprising. According to an investigation, A recent survey revealed that ,舉例 Example 1,Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city.,For example, there are far more supermarkets, bus lines, theaters in Paris than in Lestie, a very small town in north France. On average people in Paris can go to theater every week to enjoy the latest movies whereas those in Lestie have to take hours of train to go to the city theaters for a movie. Generally, people in Paris can enjoy much better shopping environment than those in Lestie.,Example 2,Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Disagree,One example in point is Internet, one of the most pervasive modern technology in our lives, which has made our world even more complicated and isolated.,With the advent of Internet in our lives, most young people have already moved their lives to the cyber world. They study , work , chat, even game online. People lost their previous way of gaming, from which they can enjoy the fun of cooperating and communicating.,Also, they are away from the traditional way of living, from which they can enjoy the basic and simple lives of human beings.,常用句型,Instead of improving our way of living, Internet has made the world a more complicated and isolated place to live in.,The example that can support my idea is . The example of can support my idea. is a good example which can support my idea.,To support my idea, there is one good example. A good example in point is A good example is To take as an example. The most obvious example of this reason is For example, For instance, ,對比：,Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work or a small company.,Employees in the big companies can always own more chances to acquire more knowledge and experience. In big companies, professionals and experts employed can offer more expertise and skills, which you can hardly find in a small company which can barely afford to employ an expert, or where there is no need to have experts at all.,In big companies, professionals and experts employed can offer more expertise and skills, which you can hardly find in a small company which can barely afford to employ an expert, or where there is no need to have experts at all.,常用句型,However, but, in contrast on the other hand,開頭段,Introduction-背景引入,In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools.,We live in a world in which technology gives us many opportunities to improve every aspect of our lives, including arts, sciences, politics, and education(時代特征). One of most obvious impact which the technology has on education is that it has changed traditional studying-in-class learning pattern(走向主題).,Now we get chance to study at home by using technology such as computer or television(論述主題). This new learning pattern, which I strongly recommend to every one, will benefit us a lot.,Introduction-對方讓步,Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family.,For many kids, family pets are not just animals kept for amusement or companionship; the family pets are treated as their best friends and companions who not only provide unconditional love, but also teach them about friendship,responsibility, loyalty, and empathy. They love to treat them as their family members and prefer to keep them in their rooms. (對方觀點),However，they fail to realize that pets are still animals, which may, firstly, make serious injury to kids around them; in addition, there are always various bacteria and diseases bearing. Therefore, I dont think its a good idea to treat the pets as family members. (我方觀點),觀點駁斥句型,People seem to fail to take into account the fact that university also bring students valuable knowledge in every field. .,However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution,Introduction-主題重述,In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Agree？,The school debate over college students taking a part-time job can always arouse widespread interests. Those who object to it argue that students should not spend their precious time in this way. People who,advocate it, on the other hand, claim that by taking a major-related part-time job, students can further improve their academic studies. 轉(zhuǎn)述主題+理由 As far as I am concerned, I believe that part time jobs will bring students benefits.我方觀點,理論重述句型,It is commonly accepted/ thought that There is a general debate/ discussion/ tendency (these days) that An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that There is no denying the fact that the problem thathas caused wide public concern,Introduction-概念展開,Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor?,Neighbors are the nearest people to us in the darkest hours of the night. They are the ones who live closest to us, so close that there is perhaps no more than a cemented wall between us. 概念展開,Being a good neighbor is a duty that everyone should fulfill and a person has many responsibilities towards his neighbors; therefore, one should always be a good neighbor so that he is also treated in the same manner when he is needed. 進入主題,事實引入句型,According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. The death rate of new-born babies in that region, the results of which were surprising.,An investigation shows that female workers tend to have a favorable attitude toward retirement. A survey was carried out on the,Introduction-多種引用方式的疊加使用,Agree or disagree ? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family.,TV, one of the most pervasive modern technologies, which has entered peoples lives several decades ago, has great impact on both our life-style and our thought. 概念介紹,According to a recent survey conducted by Statistics Bureau of Guangdong Province , a statistic organization in China, teenagers averagely spend 14 hours watching television each week but only six hours with their family members in China. 數(shù)據(jù)切入,I am in total agreement with the claim that TV has brought an unfavorable influence on the relationship between them and their family members. 觀點+過渡,原因引入句型,My reasons are listed below: There are numerous reasons for , but I would only explore a few of them below: There are several reasons and agreements to support my idea. Here, I intend to explain couple of reasons.,i agree with for the following reasons: my arguments are listed as follows. I will try to prove my point by the following ideas. the most important reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe,introduction-Position:,As far as I am concerned. For my part, I agree with I tend to believe that I always hold a strong positive/ negative attitude toward, which I strongly recommend to everyone Most of people, including me, can not agree with the opinion that I strongly recommend that ,Position-下文壓縮句:,Example 1: Living in the big cities is a better choice The reason why I prefer to live in the big cities is that there are more job opportunities, education opportunities and better living conditions in the big cities than in the small towns.,Example 2:,Eating in the restaurants is a better choice I prefer to eat at restaurants because it saves me a lot of time, offers a variety of food choice and beau