高中英語短文改錯及寫作講評課件新人教版必修1.ppt

,高一寫作指導,無論從詞法還是句法上講，英語中動詞是最關鍵的。而在高考英語書面表達評分中，動詞錯誤往往又是扣分的重點。所以同學們在寫作時要特別注意動詞的正確使用。一般來說，中學生在寫作中出現(xiàn)的動詞錯誤主要有以下幾個方面：,一、時態(tài)誤用,二、語態(tài)錯誤,三、詞形錯誤,四、詞性錯誤,五、詞義錯誤,六、句式錯誤,一、時態(tài)誤用,一般來說，根據(jù)寫作要求能夠非常明確地判斷出 應該主要用什么時態(tài)，像寫日記、看圖書面表達， 講述發(fā)生的一件事，其主要時態(tài)就是一般過去時。 出現(xiàn)時態(tài)錯誤的主要原因是：（1）對各種時態(tài)的 基本概念不清楚（2）時間立足點把握不準（3）母 語干擾 由于漢語動詞沒有時態(tài)變化，許多同學缺乏 時態(tài)概念（4）考場時間不夠,He is working in this company ever since he was graduated from college. The teacher explained that light trvaeled faster than sound.,has been working,travels,二、語態(tài)錯誤,Mary was dressing in white. The story was happened long long ago. We watched the train till it was disappeared.,dressed,英語中seat， dress，devote 等動詞常用被動語態(tài),belong to, break out, disappear, happen, occur, take place, 等詞無被動語態(tài),三、詞形錯誤,動詞有過去式、過去分詞、現(xiàn)在分詞、單數(shù)第三人稱形式。 In short, things have began to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I was studiing in my room when the telephone rang. The driver drived so fast that the car knocked into a truck. The balloon bursted suddenly.,begun,studying,drove,burst,四、詞性錯誤,1.及物動詞與不及物動詞混用 The teacher entered into the classroom. We all agreed Marys idea. The suggestion was come up at the meeting. My hometown has taken place great changes in the past twenty years.,with,came,Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past twenty years.,易用錯的這類不及物動詞有happen, take place, occur, break out, run out, come up, come true, go out, belong to, remain, disappear等 及物動詞有marry, enter, serve, reach等,2. 實意動詞和系動詞的誤用,The music sounds well. This record is sold good.,good,英語中l(wèi)ook, sound, taste, smell, feel等 表示感覺的連系動詞后接形容詞作表語,sells,well,英語中有些說明主語自身特性的動詞常用 主動語態(tài)表被動含義，如sell, wash, write等 This cloth _.(好洗） This pen _.(書寫流利) The door _.(好關),washes easily,writes smoothly,closes well,3. 動詞形容詞介詞的混用,Our PE teacher is ill. Who will instead of him? They all against your plan. I favourite English.,instead of 為介詞，應改為take the place of, 或者說Who will take his class instead?,are,favourite 可用作形容詞或名詞不能做謂語， 應改為My favourite is English. 或English is my favourite (subject).,4. 瞬間動詞和延續(xù)性動詞的混用,英語中瞬間動詞不能語“段”時間連用應將其替換為狀態(tài)動詞或延續(xù)性動詞 He lent me a book and told me that I could borrow it for a week.,keep,注意此類動詞的替換arrive-be;buy-have; die-be dead;join-be in;leave-be away; fall in love-be in love; get married-be married,B. 瞬間動詞與till或until引導的時間狀語從句或構成的短語連用時，應使用否定形式，否則應使用狀態(tài)動詞或延續(xù)性動詞 He went to bed until eleven oclock. He stopped talking until the teacher came. He fell asleep until 9 oclock the next morning.,didnt go,或改為He worked until 11 oclock.,didnt stop,或改為He kept talking until the teacher came.,slept,五、詞義錯誤,We all persuaded Father to give up smoking, but he wouldnt listen. The young man pointed to a policeman over there, explained and said, “He stopped us an hour ago.”,tried to persuade,and explained,六、句式錯誤,My classmates suggest me to study hard. Welcome you to visit our school. There used to have two trees in the yard.,advise,My classmates suggest that I (should) study hard.,studying,You are welcome to (come to) our school for a visit,有些動詞不能接不定式作補語，這類動詞有 agree, demand, hope, insist, suggest, welcome等,be,What is a sentence?,1. The rain stopped him from going to school.,主語+謂語（+賓語+賓補+狀語）=簡單句,2.The rain stopped and then he went to school.,主句+從句=復合句,簡單句+簡單句=并列句,3.The rain stopped when I got home.,I believe that everything is going on well. She was reading a novel when I came in. She is the girl who sings best in my class. What we need is time. The question is where we should go tomorrow.,賓語從句,狀語從句,定語從句,主語從句,表語從句,主句+從句=復合句,1. This earthquake was very large. 2. Many people was lost their houses and parents. 3. luckily, with the help of goverment, we can eat delicious food and live good houses. 4.In a world, we are determined to rebuilt our country.,III. Errors in your writing,terrible,government,in,word,rebuild,5. To my sad, thousands of people lost their families or seriously injured. 6. After