高中英語教師培訓(xùn)課件：高考英語作文“六步法”教學(xué).ppt

高考英語作文“六步法”教學(xué),Step1 仔細(xì)審題 Step2. 理清要點 Step3. 譯寫單句 Step4. 連句成篇 Step5. 檢查潤色 Step6. 定稿謄寫,高考英語作文“六步法”教學(xué),范例1,題目：Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Greens. The following is their conversation. S: Good morning. G: Good morning. S: I havent seen your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements? G: Oh, I dont know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn the governments attention and the police are searching for him. .,分析：題目不難，但要完成兩件事情：一是要把要點表達(dá)清楚，要傳神、達(dá)意；二是要把直接引語轉(zhuǎn)換成間接引語。,要求： 1、用間接引語描述如上 幽默故事。 2、詞數(shù)為80100。,第一步：仔細(xì)審題,情景提供的方式是對話，題材是故事。內(nèi)容是兩個鄰居之間的一段幽默對話，涉及到的詞匯有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有簡單句、并列句、和復(fù)合句。詞數(shù)為80100。,第二步：理清要點,本文是一篇記序文，發(fā)生的時間是一天下午，地點是Mr.Green家,人物有Mr.Smith和Mr.Green，事件是談?wù)揗r.Green的兒子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的話結(jié)尾。所以，本文要點如下： 1、Mr. Smith和Mr.Green是曾是多年的鄰居。 2、一天上午，Mr.Smith去Mr.Green家拜訪。 3、他們互致問候早上好。 4、Mr. Smith說他已多年不見Mr.Green的兒子Tom了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。 5、Mr.Smith躊躇了一會兒，說不知道兒子是否取得成就，但政府很重視他，警察也在全國各地找他。 .,第三步：譯寫單句,1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. 2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. 3.They said good morning to each other. 4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements. 5.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.,第四步：連句成篇,Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.,第五步：檢查潤色,Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other ( said “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered (. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought (said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.,第六步：定稿謄寫,Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.,第六步：定稿謄寫,Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.,范例2,題目：根據(jù)以下提示，用英語寫一篇介紹香港的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。 香港位于中國的東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口600多萬，被稱為“東方明珠”。1842年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后，當(dāng)時的中國政府被迫將香港割讓給英國。1997年她已回到祖國的懷抱，其前景會更美好。 參考詞匯：明珠 pearl，鴉片 opium。,第一步：仔細(xì)審題 本文屬說明性文章。,第二步：理清要點 1、香港的地理位置、面積和人口。 2、鴉片戰(zhàn)爭后香港的處境。 3、1997年她回到祖國的懷抱。 4、其前景會更美好。,第三步：譯寫單句,1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland. 4. Her future is very beautiful.,第四步：連句成篇,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and (. Her) population is more than 6 million. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.In 1997, she returned to motherland and (. Her) future is very beautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色1,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of( Her area is)1,045k and (. Her) has a population of more than 6 million ( population is more than 6 million). She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful. (. Her) future is very beautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色1之后的文章,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and will be working hard to make her more beautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色2,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and(. She) is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain ( She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government) after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot ( lived a hard life) . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997 ( In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and), the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard ( will be working hard) to make her more beautiful.,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.,第五步：檢查潤色2之后的文章,第六步：定稿謄寫,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.,第六步：定稿謄寫,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more w