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ProofReading短文改錯(cuò) 生活中 人人都會(huì)犯錯(cuò) 有錯(cuò)就知改 寫(xiě)作中 人人也會(huì)犯錯(cuò) 有錯(cuò)也要改 1 Playagame Findthewrongwordsandcorrectthem bestrictatsbberesponsiblewithsb sthbeinbusinesshavesthoncommonhaveaneffectinsblosetheheartmakeagreatprogressthewarwasbrokeouttheaccidentwashappenedinthehurrysharesthforsbapairofshoealotofequipmentsgeneralspeakingassoonaspossibly withforoninon awithShoesequipmentGenerallypossible 2 Whatisproofreading 知短文改錯(cuò)則百戰(zhàn)不殆 1 correctsomegrammarmistakes2 connectionbetweensentences3 themainideaofthewholepassage 3 設(shè)錯(cuò)方式 改錯(cuò)格式 多詞缺詞錯(cuò)詞 假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文 文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤 每句中最多有兩處 錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加 刪除或修改 增加 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào) 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞 刪除 把多余的詞用斜線 劃掉 修改 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞 注意 1 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞 2 只允許修改10處 多者 從第11處起 不計(jì)分 4 改錯(cuò)步驟 1 Gothroughthewholepassagetogetageneralidea 瀏覽全文 掌握大意 2 Readthepassagesentencebysentenceandfindthegrammarmistakes 分句閱讀 逐行找錯(cuò) 3 Readthepassageagain checkyouranswers 檢查核對(duì) 敲定終稿 5 Ioftendreamofateacher Idreamofstandingonthe platformintheclassroomandgivelessonstolovelyboys andgirls Iteachthem playwiththem butwatchthem growingup IamalwaysyoungwhenIwasstaying withthem Iknowthereisnoteasytobeateacher You havetolearninordertoteach Withoutenoughknowledges youcanneverlearnwell Whatismore youhavetobe friendswithyourpupilsandtakegoodcareofhim Onlyinthiswaycanyouareagoodteacherandwin respectfromthem ThoughIamastudentnow Iwillworkasveryhardtomakemydreamcometrue being giving and am it knowledge teach them be Homework Checkyouranswers 6 HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading 7 HowmanykindsofmistakesinthisProofReading ProofReading 動(dòng)詞 名詞 冠詞 代詞 連詞 介詞 形容 副詞 8 近5年全國(guó)新課標(biāo)卷短文改錯(cuò)題考點(diǎn)一覽表 9 小組合作 討論學(xué)案中的突破考點(diǎn)內(nèi)容 Discussingroups 3minutesQuickly 10 小試牛刀 1 2010全國(guó) Ontheboxwasacardsay 25centseach 2 TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete 3 2012全國(guó) 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Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages 2 2014全國(guó) WhenteagotpopularinBritain therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits 3 AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears Ihavemadeagreatprogress 4 IfIchoosetotakeanextbus Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes 5 Allinall Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife luggage cups the an 三 名詞四 冠詞 15 名詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 單復(fù)數(shù) 可數(shù)與不可數(shù) 歸納總結(jié) 冠詞錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 泛指與特指 a an the混用漏用和多用 16 小試牛刀 1 2012全國(guó) MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday 2 2014全國(guó) Thefruitsaresmallinsize butjuicyandtaste 3 2014全國(guó) Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost 五 形容副詞 pleased tasty 4 BeingamemberoftheStudents Unionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities However IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively Therefore 5 Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient patiently wonderful 17 歸納總結(jié) 錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 詞性錯(cuò)用 副詞混用 原級(jí) 比較級(jí)最高級(jí)的混用 18 小試牛刀 1 2010全國(guó) Beforeherleaving Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim 2 Tomakemydreamcometrue IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatI llconcentratemoreonstudies 3 Everyyearmoreandmorepeoplestartastampcollectionofyourown 歸納總結(jié) 錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 六 代詞 her myself 指代錯(cuò)誤 人稱代詞和反身代詞的誤用 主格賓格 關(guān)系代詞和連接代詞 復(fù)合句 名詞性 定語(yǔ)從句 their 19 小試牛刀 1 2011全國(guó) LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket 2 2014全國(guó) Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden 歸納總結(jié) 錯(cuò)誤主要錯(cuò)在 七 介詞 in of 固定搭配 20 聚沙成塔 Summary 動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)和語(yǔ)態(tài)主謂一致勿忘記還要注意非謂語(yǔ)名詞多考單復(fù)數(shù)連詞并列和從屬上下邏輯要清楚形容副詞看詞性代詞前后要一致介詞搭配要記牢還有冠詞a an the改完復(fù)查敲定稿 21 Attention 三不改 四原則 標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不改字母大小不改詞語(yǔ)順序不改 以保持句子原義為原則改動(dòng)以最少為原則實(shí)詞以改變?cè)~形為原則虛詞以添加或刪除為原則 22 Challengeyourself 23 1 MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS whichwasveryinterested 2 IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou 3 Sincethen foralltheseyears wehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease 4 TherewasUncleChen gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse whowasaverymuchfamouswriter 2010 2014全國(guó)卷 a buying has a interesting 24 5 However myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon 6 Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening 7 Howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere flew left what 25 Mydreamschoolstartsat8 30a m andendsat3 30p m Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon Wedidn tneedtodosomanyhomework Therefore wehavemoretimewithafter schoolactivities Forexample wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings Wecanlieonthegrassforarest orsatbythelakelisteningmusic Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends 2014全國(guó)卷短文改錯(cuò) There don t much for hours looks sit to helpful 固定句型 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