七年級英語上冊 Unit 3 How was your school trip？寫作專項講解課件 魯教版五四制.ppt

writing unit3howwasyourschooltrip writingaims 1 beabletodescribeyourtripwiththerighttense 能夠運用正確的時態(tài)描述你的一次旅行 2 toenjoythefunoflife 學(xué)會享受生活的樂趣 mytrip wenttothezoo rodeahorse atedeliciousfood visitedthemuseum sawsomeanimals tooksomephotos talkaboutsomethingaboutyourtriponsummervacation makeaconversationingroups wheredidyougo whatdidyoudo howwasthetrip theweather groupwork june23rdyesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo itwasreally wewenttherebybus atthezoo isawalotof anditooksomephotos myclassmatesandialsowenttothe andboughtsome itwasagreatday 3a june23rdmyschoolwenttothezooyesterday thetripwas atthezoo i butididn tlikethem ialsowentto withmyclassmates butididn tbuyanythingbecause itwasaboringday interesting animals giftshop gifts boring sawmanyanimals thegiftshop theyweresoexpensive yesterdaymyschoolvisitedthezoo itwasreallyinteresting wewenttherebybus atthezoo isawalotofanimalsanditooksomephotos myclassmatesandialsowenttothegiftshopandboughtsomegifts itwasagreatday howdidbobtalkabouthistrip 總 分 總 iwentonaschooltrip ihadatripto talkabout thetriptoshanghai onyoursummervacation allinall itwasanexcitingtrip ilikedthetripverymuch iwastiredbuthappy iwentonaschooltrip ihadatripto weatherwherewhohowfeelings 感受 allinall itwasanexcitingtrip ilikedthetripverymuch iwastiredbuthappy 總 分 總 talkabout thetriptoshanghai onyoursummervacation atriptoshanghai 先小組討論文章脈絡(luò) 然后小組每人2 3句 組成一篇完整的文章 注意 假期期間你到哪里旅行了 請你運用所學(xué)語言談?wù)勀阕约旱穆贸?注意文章的結(jié)構(gòu)與時態(tài)的運用 開放性作文 指令性作文 要注意語言的連貫性及文章的基本結(jié)構(gòu) 還要注意時態(tài)的正確運用哦 提示 評價標(biāo)準(zhǔn) 注意 先對照評價內(nèi)容進行自評 補充 然后組內(nèi)互評 1號4號 2號3號 a檔 六項內(nèi)容齊全 錯誤3處以內(nèi) b檔 含5項內(nèi)容 錯誤在5處以內(nèi) c檔 含4項內(nèi)容 錯誤在7處以內(nèi) 1號 a檔達標(biāo) 3 4號學(xué)生 c檔達標(biāo) 2號 b檔達標(biāo) 達標(biāo)標(biāo)準(zhǔn) whowantstoshowyourself 積極推薦展示組內(nèi)的優(yōu)秀作文吧 曬一曬 canyoutalkaboutyourtrip 你學(xué)會如何描述自己的一次旅行了嗎 cany