英語四六級(jí)作文word打印版.doc

英語四六級(jí)作文基本要求v 切題：所謂切題就是看你寫的作文是否跑題。 v 條理：所謂條理是指每一段的議論的正反清楚，說明的幾個(gè)方面清楚，描述的時(shí)間正確。語言和字?jǐn)?shù) ：句式多樣,復(fù)雜得體。在寫作中應(yīng)避免使用相同長度的相同句型，而應(yīng)注意句式的變化，如長短句結(jié)合，簡單句、并列句與復(fù)合句共用，還可使用簡化句等；一些較復(fù)雜的結(jié)構(gòu)如獨(dú)立主格，分詞結(jié)構(gòu)等也可使用。 高分作文標(biāo)志四六級(jí)考試閱卷老師在閱卷的過程中最多的是關(guān)注同學(xué)們的用詞和句型的使用。v 1：四級(jí)120-150字;六級(jí)150180字;2、是否長短句交叉;3、用詞是否恰當(dāng)，準(zhǔn)確，形象，盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用，切勿老用重復(fù)詞;四六級(jí)作文的話題及分類v 話題 ：1 ）校內(nèi)話題 2）校外話題，多校內(nèi)話題。v 分類：1）議論文：正反對(duì)比題，現(xiàn)象分析題和 How to題。 2）圖表題：屬于議論文的現(xiàn)象分析題，夾敘夾議。 3）記敘文。書信類議論文的寫法v 第一段：引出話題（不需陳述觀點(diǎn)）。v 第二段、第三段是文章主體，詳細(xì)分析，總結(jié)。v 結(jié)構(gòu)：主題句+擴(kuò)展句（細(xì)節(jié)），總分結(jié)構(gòu)。v 主題句的寫法：簡單明了，以簡單句為多。v Two reasons may account for it./ There are two reasons for it.v 擴(kuò)展句的寫法：根據(jù)主題句的特點(diǎn)而定.當(dāng)主題句中有集合名詞（復(fù)數(shù)）時(shí)：破解法，如有兩個(gè)名詞復(fù)數(shù)選一。v For example: Automobiles play an important role in the daily activities.v automobiles consist of bus, private cars, taxies, cranes and trains and so on.v Activities consist of industry, service, agriculture, building and so on.現(xiàn)象分析題的寫法v 1. 開篇段。v 2. 原因段：a.主觀原因（人為原因，內(nèi)部原因）， b.客觀原因（非人為原因，外部原因）v 3. 措施段：a.理論層面措施：建立相關(guān)法規(guī)，b.操作方面的措施（具體非法規(guī)）。v 另外可寫危害（2危害）：a.對(duì)個(gè)人的危害，b.對(duì)社會(huì)的危害。How to 題寫法v 1. 開篇段。 2. 途徑段 3.我的做法正反對(duì)比題的寫法v 1. 開篇段2. 別人的觀點(diǎn)：a.正面觀點(diǎn) b.反面觀點(diǎn)3. 我的看法（打算）。圖表型作文v 首先要看懂圖或表所表示的意思，然后要根據(jù)題中所給出的中文文字來判斷是寫說明文還是議論文。如果是說明文的話，對(duì)圖表的描寫就要詳細(xì)；如果是議論文的話，圖表的描寫就只是作文的一小部分，一般放在開頭位置，圖表的描寫和數(shù)字的應(yīng)用只是用來引出要議論的問題。 v 表示趨勢(shì)變動(dòng)的英文單詞有fluctuate，increase，decrease，drop，climb，decline，remain；相應(yīng)的副詞有dramatically，steadily，drastically，sharply，gradually等。曲線圖的表示方法為line chart，餅圖的表示方法為pie chart，柱狀圖的表示方法為bar chart，統(tǒng)計(jì)表格的表示方法為the table。v 單一項(xiàng)目變化的開頭v The line/pie/bar chart reflects the fluctuation of 表中所表示的內(nèi)容 over a 20-year period. As is obvious in the chart, 表中所表示的內(nèi)容drop/increase steadily/drastically/sharply from 數(shù)字 to 數(shù)字 between time and time. And it reached its peak/bottom in 2000 as 數(shù)字, which is more/almost twice larger than in 1990.v 多項(xiàng)目同一時(shí)間比較的開頭v The line/pie/bar chart reflects a sharp contrast of population shared by Asia, Europe and North America in 1998. As is obvious in the chart, Asia accounted for majority share of 60%, while the proportion of Europeans was 15%, and that of North America turned out to be the smallest-only 9%.v 多項(xiàng)目不同時(shí)間比較的開頭v The line/pie/bar chart reflects the various growth rate of population between 1980 and 2000 in the following continents, namely, Asia, Europe and North America. As is obvious in the chart, the data displays that Asia maintained its stable population proportion of approximately 60% with Europev experiencing a drastic/sharp/gradual decline from 20% to 15% over the 20 years. As a small portion of the worlds population, North America had a minor fluctuation of about 1% in its population growth in the same period.v 圖表作文一般分為兩個(gè)步驟圖表描述分析型或圖表描述論述型，在圖表描述分析型中的分析部分可以采用v There are three possible reasons for _A_ / What are the possible reasons for _A_? As is known to all, many experts point out that 原因一 contributes directly to _A_. Whats more, more and more people are beginning to realize/believe that 原因二。 Most importantly, 原因三(education is the most important aspect of life. In fact, education is as important as life itself).圖表式作文寫作模板v It is obvious in the graphic/table that the rate/number/amount of Y has undergone dramatic changes. It has gone up/grown/fallen/dropped considerably in recent years （as X varies）。 At the point of X1, Y reaches its peak value of（多少）。 v What is the reason for this change？ Mainly there are （多少）reasons behind the situation reflected in the graphic/table. First of all,（第一個(gè)原因）。 More importantly,（第二個(gè)原因）。 Most important of all,（第三個(gè)原因）。 v From the above discussions, we have enough reason to predict what will happen in the near future. The trend described in the graphic/table will continue for quite a long time （if necessary measures are not taken括號(hào)里的使用于那些不太好的變化趨勢(shì)）。寫好一篇作文的注意事項(xiàng)： v 1.適當(dāng)用被動(dòng)代替主動(dòng)，這樣能更客觀的反映事實(shí),句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時(shí)不用we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個(gè)經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級(jí)作文的最后一段：It is, therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.v 2.善于使用插入語，比如說把副詞、連接詞等，作插入語放在中間，一般放在主語、動(dòng)詞或者助動(dòng)后v 兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。v 如however / therefore /for example/I believe做插入語放在中間，一般放在動(dòng)詞，助動(dòng)詞后，兩邊分別加上逗號(hào)。v 比如說：Other individuals, however, take the attitude thatv 3.一定要學(xué)會(huì)換詞，換形象，具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替carry out, sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子 v Computer and I -by Simmyv I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. exceedingly替換verythrilling替換excitingsth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb替換sb. be interested in sth.google替換searchan army of替換a lot ofv The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure! The dawn of the new century witnessed是一個(gè)精彩句型，用來描述在某個(gè)時(shí)期發(fā)生了什么事情;Increasing popularity替換more and more popularCoincident with非常地道的詞匯，表達(dá)“與一致”的意思，替換WithAdvancement替換developmentPour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換enter into Current ( currently )替換nowAppeal to sb.替換sb. be interested in sth.Growing individuals替換more and more peopleIt is no exaggeration to say經(jīng)典句型，說某事是毫不夸張的v For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment. Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email. For a start替換To begin withWe can, freely, search用了插入語的寫作手法our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被動(dòng)Additionally替換In addition / BesidesDeliver替換sendv There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings, in a way, especially the growing violence, porn pictures, AV-films emerging on the screen, which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that, however, computers can function in the disservice of human beings,這個(gè)句子有三個(gè)精彩之處，首先There is no denying that這個(gè)句型，還有however作為插入語，function in the disservice of替換do harm toEmerging代替appearing ( fading代替disappearing )Net citizen網(wǎng)民，屬于精彩用詞v As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet. No garden has no weeds替換Every coin has two sidesComputers do play，do強(qiáng)調(diào)Positive替換important / good等A slice of替換a part ofUnfavorable替換badImpacts替換effects / influencesWe should, therefore, take advantage of使用插入語 Fruits (而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/ virtues)替換advantage ( defects替換disadvantage )Facet替換aspectv 各位同學(xué)，上面的作文里有這么多精彩的閃光點(diǎn)，作文怎么會(huì)不得高分呢!30個(gè)最經(jīng)典的替換詞 v 1.individuals,characters,folks替換（people ,persons) v 2. positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good v 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換 eg. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. v 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of, many, if not most)替換many. 注：用many, if not most 一定要小心，many后一定要有詞。Eg. Many individuals, if not most, harbor the idea that.同理 用most, if not all ,替換most. v 5. a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some v 6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think(因?yàn)槭菚嬲Z，所以要加that) v 7:affair ,business ,matter 替換thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits ) v 10:for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion v 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有g(shù)rowingly這種形式。所以當(dāng)修飾名詞時(shí)用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly. v 12.little if anything, 或little or nothing替換hardly 13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpfulv 14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer 15.exceedingly,extremely, intensely 替換very v 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替換 unnecessary, avoidable v 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. be interested in v 18.capture ones attention替換attract ones attention. 19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect v 20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear v 21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause. 22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換.reasons for sth v 23.desire 替換want. 24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替換remember v 26. enjoy, possess 替換have(注意process是過程的意思) 27. interaction替換communication v 28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth 29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance v 30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible句子寫作技巧v 一、定語從句v 兩并列關(guān)系的分句，如果前后有共同內(nèi)容（名詞或代詞），那么拒絕使用and，而采用定語從句法萊構(gòu)建分句：即將其中一個(gè)分句寫出一個(gè)主句，另一分句用定語從句。v 一些大學(xué)生愿意去農(nóng)村工作，在哪里他們可以更好地發(fā)揮知識(shí)。v A number of college students will ( are willing to) work in countryside, where they can make better use of their knowledge.v 2. 補(bǔ)句v 1）直接補(bǔ)定語從句v He wants to study in NOS, an English training school, which has developed quickly in past years.v 句型： 主句+同位語短語+定語從句v 一個(gè)結(jié)論： 當(dāng)一句話里有時(shí)間狀語、地點(diǎn)狀語或人名、或同時(shí)存在，一定要在其中一個(gè)后面填補(bǔ)一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)，即同位語短語+定語從句，地點(diǎn)狀語一般放在最后，一般可補(bǔ)定語。v Last week, an accident happened in Time Street, a commercial street, in which there are a lot of shops.v 2)補(bǔ)結(jié)局v He won the full scholarship, making himself famous.v Heavy snow fell on Mountain Tai, making the number of tourists decrease sharply.v 3)把抽象動(dòng)作、籠統(tǒng)動(dòng)作具體化。v The authorities should take measures, establishing laws, arousing peoples awareness.v I will step out of the campus, doing some part- time jobs.四級(jí)作文模板一. 對(duì)比選擇型 Study Abroad orin China? There is no consensus（the same opinion) of opinions among people as to whether students should study abroad ornot. Some people are of the view that the youths should go overseas forfurther study if possible, while others take an opposite stand, firmly believing that it is of no necessity forstudents to study in a foreign country .v Those people who maintain that it is good forstudents to go abroad forfurther study believe that diverse culture background can broaden students horizon. They also claim that overseas study can shape students personality because they are forced to deal with all kinds of difficulties by themselves. v Nevertheless, the other people who contend that domestic education is good enough forstudents argue that our educational quality has been greatly improved during the past decade. They also point out that domestic education is convenient and economical v As far as I am concerned, the former opinion holds more weight. Forone thing, it can strengthen the learners abilities to understand and communicate with people fromother cultures. Foranother, the developed countries still have a lot advanced knowledge which is worth our study. When all the factors are examined, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that studying abroad if possible is advisable. Should We Have More Official Holidays?v It is established from this year on that three other festivals will become public holidays in our country. They are Qing Ming (Tomb-Sweeping Day), Dragon Boat and Mid-Autumn Festivals. This year is the first year for the festivals to be public holidays.v Facing the new holidays, different people have different opinions. Those who are in favor of the practice think these traditional festivals have rich cultural connotations and have played important role in carrying on the traditional customs from generation to generation. They still function as an adhesive for Chinese people of different ethnic groups.v But some sociologists do not agree. They argue that Chinese people already have enough holidays and it is not necessary to turn these traditional festivals into official holidays. Besides, to add more holidays is a significant issue that concerns the whole nation and it will unavoidably affect some industries and finally the economy of the whole country.v So far as I am concerned, I agree with the former group in that an increasing number of people , especially the young people are embracing the western festivals, leaving our own behind. On the other hand, during the past six years the holidays were so concentrated that the quality of peoples travelling were negatively influenced due to the contradictions between consumer demands and service capacity. So I believe adding more public holidays can solve the problems to some extent.v 二、 觀點(diǎn)論證型模板：It is true that (指出普遍存在的觀點(diǎn)). However, (談不同的觀點(diǎn)). I think (提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，即文章的論點(diǎn)). (過渡句，轉(zhuǎn)向觀點(diǎn)的論證，根據(jù)情況選擇具體的詞) can be listed as follows. Firstly, (論證理由一). Secondly, (論證理由二). Forexample, (舉例具體說明理由二). Thirdly, (論證理由三). A case in point is that (舉例具體說明理由三) v It goes without saying that (轉(zhuǎn)折句，提出執(zhí)行該觀點(diǎn)時(shí)應(yīng)注意的事項(xiàng)). There is no doubt that (得出結(jié)論). In conclusion (總結(jié)全文). 真題演練： It Pays to be Honest（2003年1月） v It is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities and so on. I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only beneficial to ourselves but also to others and the whole society. The reasons can be listed as follows. v Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time. Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. Forexample, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and thus dealers can win over more customers. Thirdly, honesty can make our society more stable. A case in point is that Singapore, a society featuring trustworthiness and integrity, has a comparatively low criminal rate. It goes without saying that being honest is of great benefit to both the community and individuals. There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty. In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society. 三. 問題解決型 v 實(shí)例：2001年1月（How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 面試在求職過程中的作用、面試成功的因素：儀表、舉止談吐、能力、專業(yè)知識(shí)、自信、實(shí)事求是），2000年1月（How I Finance My College Education?）1998年1月（My View on Fake Commodities） v 模板：With the evelopment/improvement of (鋪墊), (某一問題). It is necessary that (關(guān)注解決現(xiàn)象引出的問題很必要). On the one hand, (理由一). On the other hand, (理由二). v Therefore, how to (承上啟下句，要解決的問題) is worth paying attention. Firstly, (辦法一). Secondly, (辦法二). Forexample, (舉例解釋解決辦法二). Thirdly, (辦法三). In other words, (闡明解決辦法三). v In fact, the ways to (解決問題的辦法多種多樣) are countless. Its time that (強(qiáng)調(diào)解決問題時(shí)不可待). 真題演練： How to Succeed in a Job Interview?（2001年1月v With the development of job market, job interview plays an important role in job-hunting. It is necessary that we should learn some tricks to perform better in a job interview. On the one hand, a job interview offers interviewees and interviewers respectively a chance to know each other within a very short time. On the other hand, v excellent performance in an interview will enable the interviewees to exert a good impression on the interviewer and finally win the job. v Therefore, how to succeed in job interview is worth paying attention. Firstly, interviewees should dress neatly and properly. Secondly, interviewees should be confident. Forexample, when asked about v professional questions, interviewees should give a clear and definite answer. Thirdly, interviewees should have some knowledge about the company and the position they apply for. In other words, interviewees should prepare themselves something about the interview in advance so as to show that they attach vital importance to the job. v In fact, the ways to succeed in a job interview are countless. Its time that we laid stress on interview because its the first step of our work experience. 熱點(diǎn)追蹤The Damage of Public Facilities v 1、公共設(shè)施破壞嚴(yán)重的問題亟待解決，2、解決辦法有哪些， 3、你的看法。The Damage of Public Facilities v With the improvement of living standard, more and more public facilities, such as public telephone booths and ATMs have been installed in the streets. It is necessary that we have to pay attention to the damage of these public facilities. On the one hand, some people use them without care, which leads to inconvenience to others. On the other hand, the damaged public facilities stain the beauty of the city. v Therefore, how to prevent public facilities frombeing damaged is worth paying attention. Firstly, public facilities should be made of hard materials so as to be more durable. Secondly, some devices should be adopted to protect them frombeing damaged. Forexample, like cars, we can install alarm devices in public facilities. Thirdly, frommy point of view, it is essential that we civilize our citizens to behave morally. In other words, we should tell the citizens that it is shameful to destroy public facilities. In fact, the ways to reduce the damage of public