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寫作素能培養(yǎng) 第三部分 第五講運用高級詞匯與句式 打造作文亮點 寫作時 高級詞匯與高級句式 如能運用貼切自然 哪怕整篇文章只用上一兩處 也會為你的作文增添色彩 贏得閱卷老師的青睞 一 使用高級詞匯高級詞匯主要是指 考試大綱 中沒有列入的 但在實際運用中使用較頻繁的詞匯 大綱中較常用詞匯通過構(gòu)詞形成的詞匯也屬于高級詞匯 是否使用高級詞匯 可以基本判斷該考生所掌握的詞匯量 1 挖掘綱外詞匯有些單詞在英語 考試大綱 中確實未曾出現(xiàn) 但在閱讀時經(jīng)常碰到 如 annoyed currently等 Hewas thatshehadforgottenhisbirthday annoyed比angry高級 Chinais intheprimarystageofsocialism currently比now高級 annoyed currently 2 挖掘可替代詞匯使用詞組 習(xí)語來代替簡單枯燥的詞匯 如 用makefulluseof代替use catchsightof代替see lookforwardto代替hope等 Wehadbetter somethinginexpensive makefulluseof比use高級 Finallyhe theyoungman slightovercoatinthedistance catchsightof比see生動 I m yourvisitnextweek lookforwardto比hope高級 makefulluseof caughtsightof lookingforwardto 3 挖掘 味感 詞匯有的單詞很常見 且 洋味 十足 表達地道 非常有 味感 這類詞也被視為高級詞匯 如share view drive等 Weall oneandthesameplanet share比livein更有 味感 Wecan theprobleminmanyways view比lookat更有內(nèi)涵 Thenoisenexttothedoor memad 用drive而不用make share view drove possess endless putupwith turnedadeafearto promote challenging 二 使用高級句式 讓句子靚起來1 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trealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativewaysuntilthen NotuntilthendidIrealizewordscouldbepowerfulinbothpositiveandnegativeways 4 使用省略句 Ifitisso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Ifso Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfultime Althoughtheywerefacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart Althoughfacedwithmanyproblems theydidn tloseheart 5 使用感嘆句 Itisaverysplendidmoment Howsplendidamomentitis Iamveryworriedabouthiscondition HowworriedIamabouthiscondition 6 使用with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim andwecanseesweatonhisface Hismotherispavingthewaysforhimwhilehisfatherisholdinghisjacketbehindhim withsweatonhisface Asthesocietydevelopsrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer Withthesocietydevelopingrapidly it snecessaryforustohaveagoodknowledgeofEnglishandcomputer 7 使用虛擬語氣 Itishightimeforbothchildrenandparentstotakeactiontomakesmallchanges Itishightimethatbothchildrenandparentstookactiontomakesmallchanges Imissedbeinghitbythecarwithyourhelp Withoutyourhelp Iwouldhavebeenhitbythecar Aboveall somethingmustbedonetostoppollution ItwaswhenIenteredseniorhighschoolthatIrealizedtheimportanceofEnglish Notuntilwelosehealthdoweknowitsvalue 4 Ifitisn twellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure 省略句 5 Wehadaverygoodtimewiththepeasantsthatday 感嘆句 6 Becausetherewastoomuchnoise Icouldn tgoonstudying with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu) Ifnotwellorganized themeetingwillbeafailure Whatagoodtimewehadwiththepeasantsthatday Withthenoisegoingon Icouldn tgoonstudying 三 如何寫好therebe句型1 Therebe句型的基本意義 某地有某物Thereisanincreaseofabout10percent comparedwithlastyear 與去年相比較 大約增加了百分之十 名師點撥由于受漢語影響 有些同學(xué)在使用這個句型時常常把be誤用成have的某種形式 下午將有一場演講 Thereisgoingtohavealecturethisafternoon Thereisgoingtobealecturethisafternoon 2 Wheretherebe therebe 哪里有 哪里就有 Asthedetailedanalysesabovehaveshownus wherethereislife thereishope 正如上面詳盡的論述所示 活著就有希望 3 Therebe 名詞 分詞短語Therearethreefactorscontributingtothisattitudeasfollows 有三個因素促成了下面的觀點 名師點撥在這一句型中 有些同學(xué)常常把分詞誤用成動詞原形 有些學(xué)生支持這個主意 Therearesomestudentssupporttheidea Therearesomestudentssupportingtheidea Somestudentssupporttheidea 4 Therebe nodoubt nodenying noneed nosense nouse that 毫無疑問 不可否認 沒有必要 沒有意義 沒有用 Thereisnosenseinwaitingherewithoutknowingwhenhewillcomeback 在這里傻等卻不知道他什么時候回來 一點意義都沒有 5 Therebe的非謂語形式therebeing 動詞 ing形式 theretobe 不定式形式 Therebeingnobus wehadtowalkhome 由于沒有公交車 我們不得不步行回家 Thereisnodenyingthatthequalityofourenvironmenthasgonefrombadto worse WeexpecttheretobeapartytocelebratethecomingNewYear 四 如何使用其他的一些高級表達形式讓文章更精彩1 用such總結(jié)全文Suchisourlivelycity whichyouarewelcometovisitwheneveratyourconvenience 這就是我們這座充滿活力的城市 只要您方便 隨時歡迎來參觀 2 使用cannot toomuch表示強調(diào)Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch 我們再怎么強調(diào)保護眼睛的重要性也不為過 3 使用比喻等修辭方法Asisknowntousall vocabularyisanimportantpartoflanguage justlikebricksinabuilding 大家都知道 詞匯是語言學(xué)習(xí)的重要組成部分 就像一座大樓的基石 4 使用not but 句型Somepeopledon tliketheirjobsnotbecausethey relazybutbecausetheirjobsaresmall 一些人不喜歡他們的工作不是因為他們懶 而是因為他們的工作太渺小了 5 使用否定句Thelawisthelaw Nobodyhasanyexcusetobreakit 法律就是法律 任何人沒有任何借口違反法律 6 使用雙重否定Despitemanyobviousadvantagesofbicycle itisnotwithoutitsproblem 盡管自行車有許多明顯的優(yōu)點 它仍然存在一些問題 Nowordcanexpressmywhole heartedthanksforyourtimelyhelp ItisnotahardshipbutapleasuretolearnEnglishwell Wecan temphasizetheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironmenttoomuch Onlyinthiswaycanwesuccessfullybuildaneconomizedsociety Hardlyhadhereachedthestationwhenthetrainleft NotonlycanIkeepintouchwithmyfriendsandfamilythroughmycell butalsoalmostallinformationcanbegatheredontheInternet 4 Ididn ttakehisadvice soIfailedintheexam 虛擬語氣 5 BecauseIwasillthatday Ididn ttakepartinthesportsmeeting 虛擬語氣 6 Theycarriedoutasurveyamong260students 被動語態(tài) 7 Theydidn trealizetheimportanceofenvironmentprotectinguntilallthefishintheriverdiedout 倒裝句 強調(diào)句 IfIhadtakenhisadvice Iwouldn thavefailedintheexam Iwasillthatday otherwiseIwouldhavetakenpartinthesportsmeeting Asurveywascarriedoutamong260students 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