專四英語作文考點模板.docx

專四作文考點串講 一、大作文1、評分標準成績思想內(nèi)容50%結構10%語言40%優(yōu)秀（15-14）觀點清楚、論證充分、內(nèi)容切題條理清楚、層次分明、符合邏輯基本無語言錯誤、用詞準確、語言得體良好（13-11）觀點清楚、例證稍顯不足、內(nèi)容基本切題條理不清楚但無傷大體、結構較合理句子或用詞有少量錯誤但不造成誤解、語言較得體、有一定說服力中等（10-9）觀點大體清楚、例證不足、偶有不切題的內(nèi)容結構尚可、有些地方思路不清語言錯誤較多但能表達主要內(nèi)容、語言還算得體、說服力較差及格（8-6）觀點大體清楚、缺乏論據(jù)、很多不切題的內(nèi)容結構不夠清楚、很多地方思路混亂語言錯誤較多、勉強表達主要內(nèi)容、語言不很得體、缺乏說服力不及格（5-0）看不出觀點、內(nèi)容不切題條理不清、思路混亂語言支離破碎、不得體、無說服力2、歷年真題解析分類 專四考試中的大作文題材主要有文化教育、經(jīng)濟發(fā)展、環(huán)境保護、生活就業(yè)和社會熱點。時間 題目 類別2011 Should private car owners be taxed for pollution? 立場類2010 Should College Students Hire Cleaners? 立場類2009 Will Tourism Bring Harm to the Environment 立場類2008 The Benefits of Volunteering 給定觀點類2007 Is It Wise to Make Friends Online 立場類 2006 Using Tomorrows Money or Saving It 立場類 2005 My Idea of a University Art Festival 問題解決類2004 Will Phones Kill Letter Writing 立場類2003 The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood 給定觀點類2002 The Best Way to Stay Healthy 問題解決類2001 Travel Broadens the Mind 給定觀點類 2000 The Importance of Extracurricular Activities 給定觀點類1999 A Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television 對比類1998 One Way to Solve the Pollutions in Cities （自擬題目）問題解決類1997 More Pressure from Academic Studies Does (or Does no) to Us 立場類1996 My College Life and My Middle School Life 對比類1995 The Advantage or Disadvantage of Students Finding Part-time Job（自擬題目）立場類1994 TV: a good thing or a bad thing? 立場類1993 My Idea of Becoming a Teacher in the Future立場類1992 My Views on Reading Extensively立場類 1991 What I Usually Do after Class立場類 模板大全（三段式）模板一（立場類） Now there is a growing concernawareness about話題, different people have/hold different views/attitudes. Some claim/take it for granted/believe that 觀點一. However, others argue that 觀點二. From my point of view, /as for myself/for my part,/as far as I am concerned, 自己的論點. First and foremost/first of all/to begin with/ on the one hand, 理由一，展開/例子. In addition/besides/on the other hand, 理由二，展開/例子. Last but not least/finally/at last, 理由三，展開/例子. From the foregoing/on account of this/ a natural conclusion can be drawn/we can safely draw a conclusion that/ on the whole/to sum up/in brief/in a word/in conclusion, 重申觀點. 模板二（立場類） When it comes towhen asked about 話題, some people believe /argue/recognize/ think that 觀點1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 觀點2. As for me, I agree to/see eye to eye on the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 論據(jù)1. More importantly, 論據(jù)2. In summary, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申觀點或表決心.模板三（立場類） People hold different views about 話題. Some people are of the opinion that 觀點1, while others point out that 觀點2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight For one thing, 論據(jù)1.For another, 論據(jù)2. Last but not the least, 論據(jù)3. To conclude, 總結觀點. As a college student, I am supposed to 重申觀點或表決心.模板四（給定觀點類） The past few years have witnessed a phenomenon that 現(xiàn)象背景。Some people hold that 觀點。However, I believe that 展開題目 The benefits/significance/importance of 關鍵點lies in the following aspects. Firstly, 理由一，例子一。Secondly, 理由二，例子二。Finally, 理由三，例子三。 To sum up/in brief/in conclusion, 重申觀點 only 措施 can 結論。模板五（問題解決類） There is no doubt/it is true that 現(xiàn)象。However, as to the ways to 問題提出，different people hold different views. Some suggest that 建議一。Others argue that建議二。As far as I am concerned/in my opinion, I agree with the former/latter, the best way to solve the problem is 個人建議。 The reasons can be listed below/as follows. First of all/on the one hand, 理由一，證明一。Whats more/on the other hand, 理由二，證明二。Thirdlybesides, 理由三，證明三。 In a word/all in all/in a summary, 重申觀點。Therefore, I suggest措施。模板六（對比類） 復述題目，陳述現(xiàn)象。Some people are in favor of 現(xiàn)象while others take an opposite side. As far as I am concerned, 個人觀點。 On the one hand, 闡釋優(yōu)點。Firstly, 原因一。Secondly, 原因二。 On the other hand, 闡釋缺點。例子。 Therefore, 結論。 However, we should be clear that 利大于弊/弊大于利，so I suggest that個人建議。小貼士：專四大作文最關鍵之處在于兩點：一是文章結構緊密，條理清晰，尤其是開頭，中間段落過渡以及結尾要能抓住判卷老師的眼球，這就需要考生熟悉常用開頭，過渡與結尾的經(jīng)典句型和模式；其次是理由或原因的合理羅列，這需要考生掌握一些真題背后的公共原因或理由，真正考試時就可以信手拈來，而不至于緊張過度沒了思路。 理由或原因需要二點的話，就常用on the one hand, on the other hand從個人，社會角度展開論證；而三點的話，一般用first of all, in addition, finallylast but not least從個人，社會和家庭朋友三角度分析原因。由于專四考試的特殊性，命題者一般會從社會進步，經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，環(huán)境保護，人與自然，人際交往和日常生活熱點焦點事件等方向出題考察學生的英語思維與表達?；谶@點，掌握一點量的所謂“公共原因和理由”就顯得十分必要，比如有利于開闊眼界，增進友誼，家庭和睦，社會和諧，對經(jīng)濟的促進作用。3、作文高分策略無論是英語專業(yè)學生還是非英語專業(yè)學生，作文往往是考試中的攔路虎，難以獲得高分。模板也背了，基本語法也掌握了，句型也會使用了，可就是得不了高分數(shù)。 高分作文策略 1.適當用不同句型結構表達語意，比如主動變被動，利于表現(xiàn)事實的真實客觀。結尾時的we should pay great attention to可以換為great attention should be paid to. E.g. Great attention should be paid to the all-round development of each individual student.我們應該更好地關注每個學生的全面發(fā)展。 2.善用插入語，無論是口語還是筆試作文，靈活使用插入語會文章更緊湊，起到某種修辭作用，如強調(diào)、過渡等。一般是把副詞或連詞等放在主語、動詞或助動詞后，兩邊加逗號隔開。如however, whats more, actually, for example, I think, etc. E.g. Other people, however, take it for granted that 3.勤換詞、換表達 文章用詞不能單調(diào)，重復，比如good, bad, thing, we, can, many, it is等。E.g. I havent forgotten the very exciting day when mom bought me a computer as birthday gift, which I am interested in so that I indulged myself in searching a lot of information I want, and enjoy a lot of beautiful music. That night I couldnt sleep, because I can feel the whole world. 替換為I never fail to remember the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in googling an army of useful information I had expected, and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me. 小貼士：經(jīng)典30詞替換1.individuals,characters, folks替換(people ,persons) 2: positive, favorable, rosy (美好的)，promising (有希望的)，perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior替換good 3:dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill (有害的)替換bad 如果bad做表語，可以有be less impressive替換 e.g. An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation, as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.(an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of ,a host of)替換many. 5: a slice of, quiet a few , several替換some 6: take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that)替think 7.affair ,business ,matter 替換thing 8: shared 代 common 9.reap huge fruits 替換get many benefits 10.for my part ,from my own perspective 替換 in my opinion 11:Increasing(ly),growing 替換more and more( 注意沒有growingly這種形式。所以當修飾名詞時用increasing/growing.修飾形容詞，副詞用increasingly.E.g. sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything或little or nothing替換hardly13.beneficial, rewarding替換helpful14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser, 替換customer15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely 替換very16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable . 替換 unnecessary, avoidable 17.sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替換sb take interest in / sb. Be interested in 18.capture ones attention替換attract ones attention.19.facet,demension,sphere代aspect20.be indicative of ,be suggestive of ,be fearful of代 indicate, suggest ,fear21.give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 替換cause.22. There are several reasons behind sth 替換.reasons for sth23.desire 替換want.24.pour attention into 替換pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 替換remember26. enjoy, possess 替換have27. interaction替換communication28.frown on sth替換 be against , disagree with sth29.to name only a few, as an example替換 for example, for instance 30. next to / virtually impossible,替換nearly / almost impossible4、專四作文句型活用1.引話題When it comes to 話題, some people think/hold/believe.Nowadays, there is a growing concern about 話題.Recently, 話題 has been brought into focus.Presently, there is a heated discussion about 話題 both on and off campus.It has been a contentious/controversial issue as to 話題.話題 has aroused great public concern in China.There is no denying the fact that 話題.It is a common scene around us that 話題.2.提論點In my view/opinion, personally, 論點.My view is that 論點.From my point of view, I hold/think 論點.As for myself/for my part, I would like to 論點. As far as I am concerned, I would prefer to 論點.3.舉例子For example/instance A good case in point isA particular example for this isConsider the case ofLet takeas an exampleLet me make an analogy for you.4.找原因There are many reasons forThe answer to this problem involves many factors.The first reason can be obviously seen.Most people would agree thatPart of the explanation is5.結尾In summary, in short, in brief, to sum up, from the foregoing, in conclusion, all in all, on the whole, in a word, on account of this, it can be concluded that, From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion thatTake into account of all these factors; we may reach the conclusion that二、便條1、評分標準評分構成分值要求 扣分標準日期2右上角，大多可以只寫月份和日期。April 22nd, 2007/ 22 April, 2007/ Apr. 22, 2007/ 22/4/2007/ 4/22/2007/ April 22nd/ Apr. 22/凡不符合上述正確格式要求均扣1分。稱呼在日期下一行左側。/Dear Jimmy, /Dear Jimmy: /Jimmy:結尾署名的正確位置是正文結束后空一至兩行的右側。結束語和謙稱不能在同一行。一般只寫留條人的姓名。請假條和借條的格式比較完整、正式，通常在姓名的上一行加上Your friend, Your sincerely,等，以表示恭敬。Truly yours,/ Yours truly,/ Yours sincerely,/ Sincerely yours,/Yours,/Tom/簽名要根據(jù)題目的要求寫，如果題目未提供姓名，則隨便寫上一個英文名，請勿用XXX代替，如果代替，扣0.5簽名要符合要求，如果一點不符合要求，扣0.5，超過兩點不符合要求，扣1分，無署名，扣1分。內(nèi)容3內(nèi)容不夠清楚全面 （一個信息點1分）首句需要用自己的語言表達（1分）是否有嚴重的語法錯誤 （0.5-1.5分）少1點扣1分，最多3項內(nèi)容扣3分語言 4語法、詞法正確嚴重語法、詞法錯誤扣1分，一個句子或同類錯誤扣1分，拼寫等小錯誤2個扣1分，最多扣4分總字數(shù)1字數(shù)在40-80之間。少于40或多于80字扣1分2、基本寫作格式 便條內(nèi)容和類型不盡相同，可以靈活變通。但各類便條必須包括以下幾個基本要素；1）Date：便條日期 （寫信日期，通常寫在信箋的右上角日期通常有下列兩種定法：（a）月、日、年：如August15,200_ （b）日、月、年：如15thaugust,200_ 2）Salutation：稱呼(頂格寫起，自成一行）3）Body：正文4）結束語（在正文之后隔兩三行偏右方開始寫，開頭字母大寫，最后一個詞后面用逗號，Yours sincerely, Yours truly,5) Signature：署名 （在結束語的正下方 ）3、歷年真題分析 從歷年真題的便條題目來看，便條的題材主要是圍繞學生們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪谐０l(fā)生的情況來命題。 常見的體裁有告示、祝賀、道歉、請求、拒絕、安慰、留言、邀請等簡單的應用文。年份主題或題目 題材1991 邀請朋友一起逛街 建議1992 因為未能參加朋友的旅行而道歉 道歉 1993 接受邀請參加朋友生日派對 接受邀請1994 因未能及時交作業(yè)說明原因 留言并道歉1995自行車出售 告示1996祝賀同學演講獲獎 祝賀1997為沒邀請某人而道歉 道歉1998入場券轉(zhuǎn)讓 告示1999安慰病人 安慰2000留言勸說應聘 建議2001失約道歉 道歉2002詢問所轉(zhuǎn)讓的隨身聽的情況 咨詢2003婉拒晚會邀請 拒絕邀請2004對同學考試失利安慰 安慰2005邀請參加音樂會 發(fā)出邀請2006希望參加短途旅行并詢問兩個細節(jié)咨詢2007婉拒加入游泳會的邀請 拒絕邀請2008 向朋友推薦一款報紙 建議2009 向朋友推薦工作 建議2010 幫助朋友組織晚會 建議2011 邀請朋友去你家鄉(xiāng) 邀請4、專四作文便條類型范文1. 邀請便條： 發(fā)出邀請 April 20, 2008 Dear Fiona, I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it. Yours, Amelia發(fā)出邀請（通知） April 20, 2008Dear girls and boys in Class 0403, This Saturday evening, from 7 p.m. to 9 p. m., at Singeing dining hall, there will be a ball held by Class 0301. We warmly invite you to take part in it. There you can enjoy yourselves with dance, music and various games. And well have a chance of communication, which will enhance the friendship between us. Come and enjoy ourselves together. Yours, Mike Monitor of Class 0301接受邀請 April 20, 2008 Dear Amelia, Its so kind of you to invite me to the dinner party, I would like to come. I will go to the place right after I finish my work at about 5 p.m. this evening. (如果是辦在家里：I shall be very happy to call at your house right after I finish my work at 6:30 this evening.) Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Yours, Fiona2. 道歉類別便條在你不小心損壞他人東西時，在你失約時，在你違背自己的諾言時，你需要向別人道歉。道歉類便條的要領是：真誠地表達你的歉意；措辭規(guī)范、表達真切、釋義明了。 1997（為沒邀請某人而道歉）；2001（失約）套句：道歉行為： Im writing to show my apology for/ I would like to express my apologies for not being able to/Im sorry to say that Ive not finished reading it through, and have to keep it until next Sunday. / Excuse me for my delaying in turning in my assignment.道歉理由：I had a minor accident./ I had a minor operation.彌補糾正及其承諾：I am sure I can make up the loss by/ I promise it will never happen again. / It would be very kind(considerate) of you to give me another chance to( to give me another two days進一步致歉： Many apologies. / Do please forgive me.范文： April 20，2008Dear Fiona,I am writing to you to apologize for the abrupt way I departed just after the exams finished. It was terribly rude of me to have left without saying good-bye to you. The fact is that I was so excited when I learned I had passed the exams with high marks that I couldnt wait to get home and tell my parents. I am sure you will understand my feelings. Please accept my sincere apology, and with you a really happy holiday. Yours truthfully, Amelia3祝賀類別便條祝賀類便條的寫作步驟為：表祝賀之情，然后說明所做事情的意義，最后表達白己的祝福。該類便條在語體上的要求為：歡快、分享喜悅、流暢常用句型：It is the most joyful news I have heard for a long time. I wish you all possible joy and happiness in the world.I was pleasantly surprised to read in the newspaper that you We hope you will have nothing but joy and happiness in your life and in your career.Congratulations on your promotiongraduation successprogress achievements. Wish you the best luck and every happiness. Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year！Here is a word of cheer on your birthday from a warm friend. Congratulations and all good wishes to you! 范文： January 19, 1996Dear Gary, I have learned with delight that you won the second prize in the Municipal English Speech Contest. I would like to extend to you my utmost congratulations on your success. I know this is surely owing to your diligence. It is a reward you richly deserve for your long term efforts. My best wishes for your further success. Sincerely yours, Tom4告示類別便條告示類便條具有很強的實用性，它可以用來表達轉(zhuǎn)讓信息，也可以表達求購信息。清楚簡約地表達是該類便條寫作的關鍵。1998年：入場券轉(zhuǎn)讓；1995年：自行車出售常用句型：I write to inform you that we have found your bag. A fax has just come to hand saying that All the students are invited to attend the party to be held at 8 p.m. tomorrow。All the party members of the university are requested to attend the meeting All students who are interested in calligraphy are warmly welcome. Please notify the others concerned范文：Offer to Buy April 20, 2008Dear boys and girls,I badly need a ticket for postgraduate entrance examination instruction by the New Oriental School. If you have one to sale, Id like to pay it for twice the original price, for I have been longing for it and hence have canceled my trip to Hong Kong. Call me at 1234567; my cell phone will be on for 24 hours. Yours, AmeliaOffer to sell April 20, 2008Dear Schoolmates,Im a four-year student from the English Department. In two weeks, I will graduate from this university. Ive decided not to bring my bike with me when I leave. So Id like to part with it, and sell it to someone who might need it. It is half new, dark and light. With curved bars, it is mainly for ladys use. As far as the price is concerned, Id like to sell it for eighty yuan. Those interested in it can come and have a look at it before making a decision.Add: Room 402, Student Dormitory Building No. 5Tel: 16688895. 咨詢類別便條欲向他人咨詢某事而所要咨詢的人不在時使用。寫作要領：注意清楚簡潔地闡釋自己的問題