雅思小作文流程圖講解+滿文例文ppt課件

.,1,ApproachesandStrategiestoAcademicWritingTask1,UNIT6,-流程圖,IELTSWRITING,.,2,流程圖寫作要點,找到流程圖的過程，起點，終點。找到圖上標出的已知動作，如果出現(xiàn)生詞，盡量猜測。流程圖里面存在生詞是完全正常的。生詞多數都是名詞或者動詞，而且生詞旁邊還配有解釋性的圖畫，所以大致方向是可以猜出來的。最好方法是直接抄到文章里。按照步驟，分段描述，千萬不能省略任何一步。切記！加入流暢合理的表示順序的關聯(lián)詞。句型以主動為主，搭配被動，以及主語從句（例如：Itcanbeseenfromthegraphthat）。時態(tài)要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。,.,3,Writingtask1,Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Theillustrationsbelowshowhowchocolateisproduced.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures.Writeatleast150words.,.,4,.,5,【高分范文及深度點評】,Thediagramshowsthestagesintheprocessofmakingchocolate.【所有的小作文第一句話都要用一般現(xiàn)在時。流程圖必備三個詞：process整個過程；stage階段；step步驟】【流程圖特點之一：介紹過程要使用一般現(xiàn)在時】,.,6,Chocolatecomesfromthecacaotree,whichisgrowninpartsofSouthAmerica,AfricaandIndonesia.Thetreeproduceslargeredpodswhichcontainwhitecocoabeans.【開頭不能一上來就直接介紹cacaotree，而是通過主題詞chocolate引出，否則顯得太唐突】【流程圖特點之二：大量使用定語從句，將有關聯(lián)的兩句話連接。】【流程圖特點之三：大量使用被動語態(tài)】,.,7,Firstly，whenthepodsareripe,theyareharvested,thebeansareremovedandtheyarefermentedforseveraldaysinlargewoodenboxes.Duringthefermentingprocess,thebeansturnbrown.【流程圖特點之四：使用一些表示順序的連接詞】【三個句子的并列：“句子A,句子Band句子C”?！玖鞒虉D特點之五：要適當地添加個別圖中沒有交代但能從圖片中直接讀出來的一些內容，否則可能達不到字數要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千萬不要加上自己的主觀觀點，否則會扣分】,.,8,Next,thebrownbeansarespreadinthesuntodry.Theyarethenputinlargesacksandtransportedbytrainorlorry.Afterthis,thebeansaretakentoachocolatefactorywheretheyareroastedinanovenattemperaturesofbetween250and350degreeCelsius.,.,9,Afterbeingroasted,thebeansarecrushedandtheoutershellisremoved.Thispartisnotneededformakingchocolate.Finally,theinnerpartofthebeanispressedandliquidchocolateisproduced.【流程圖特點之六：一般不需要寫總結】,.,10,Writingtask2,Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.Thediagrambelowshowstheprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustry.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Writeatleast150words.,.,11,Brickmanufacturing,*Clay:typeofstickyearththatisusedformakingbricks,pots,etc.,.,12,【滿分范文】,Theprocessbywhichbricksaremanufacturedforthebuildingindustrycanbeoutlinedinsevenconsecutivesteps.Firsttherawmaterial,clay,whichwasjustbelowthesurfaceofsoilincertainclay-richareashastobedugupbyadigger.Thenthelumpsofclayareplacedonametalgridinordertobreakupthebigchunksofclayintomuchsmallerareas,whichfallthroughthemetalgridontoaroller,whosemotionfurthersegregatesthebitsofclay.Sandandwaterareaddedtomakeahomogenousmixture,whichistheneitherformedinmouldsorcutintobrick-shapedpiecesbymeansofawirecutter.,.,13,Thosefreshbricksarethenkeptinadryingovenforatleast24andamaximumof48hours,severaldozensifnothundredsofbricksatatime.Thedriedbricksarethentransferredtoaso-calledkiln,anothertypeofhightemperatureoven.Firsttheyarekeptatamoderatetemperatureof200-1300.Thisprocessisfollowedbycoolingdownthefinishedbricksfor48to72hoursinacoolingchamber.Oncethebrickshavecooleddownandhavebecomehard,theygetpackagedanddeliveredtotheirfinaldestination,beitabuildingsiteorstorage.(215words),.,14,【考官評語】,Band9Thisresponsefullysatisfiestherequirementsofthetask.Allkeyfeaturesofeachstageoftheprocessareappropriatelyandaccuratelypresented.Anexcellentoverviewisgivenatthebeginningoftheresponseandthisskilfullyincorporatespartoftherubric,changingthegrammaticalfunction,togiveabriefsummaryofthewholeprocess.Themessageisveryeasytoread,withseamlesscohesionthatattractsnoattention.Paragraphing,linkingandreferencingareallskilfullymanaged.Thelanguageusedisveryfluentandsophisticated.Awiderangeofvocabularyandstructuresareusedwithfullflexibilityandaccuracy.Onlyrareminorslipscanbefoundandthesedonotdetractfromthehighrating.,.,15,雅思流程圖的重點詞匯解析：,表述時間：in10daysduringtheperiodof10daysTheprocesslastsforupto10daysafter10days10dayspasseduntilsomethinghappened.,.,16,表示然后：,then,next,inthenextstate,followingthat,afterthat,thenextstepinthestageis.,.,17,表示過程：,process,procedure,formation,Development表示步驟：step,stage,phase,.,18,時間階段：,afteraperiodofmonths/days/minutes,during,.,19,順序連詞：,first,firstofall,inthefirststage,initially,tobeginwithsecond,then,next,als