書(shū)面表達(dá)專題12.27.ppt

初中英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧指導(dǎo),brainstorm,Teenagerscolorfullife,Westudy.,Welikelisteningtomusic.,Weplaycomputergamesforlong.,Welikereadingbooks.,WeoftenplaySports.,WegotoKFC.,Sometimeswetravel.,Sometimeswestayupstudying.,Teenagershealthylife,Westudyallday.,Welikelisteningtomusic.,Weplaycomputergamesforlong.,Welikereadingbooks.,WeoftenplaySports.,WegotoKFC.,Sometimeswetravel.,Sometimeswestayupstudying.,colorful,healthy,認(rèn)真審題，找出文章要表達(dá)的中心。,寫(xiě)作第一步,審,健康很重要。在學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會(huì)休息的人才會(huì)有健康的身體。人們是如何度過(guò)假期的呢？國(guó)際健康組織對(duì)此作了一次調(diào)查，右圖是他們此次的調(diào)查結(jié)果。根據(jù)你所得的信息，請(qǐng)為國(guó)際健康組織寫(xiě)一篇完整的調(diào)查報(bào)告,并提倡大家進(jìn)行假日休閑。,審,travel,stayathome,visitfriendsorparents,work,用簡(jiǎn)單的句子或短語(yǔ)列出文章要點(diǎn)。,列,寫(xiě)作第二步,根據(jù)以下關(guān)鍵詞及圖表用簡(jiǎn)單的句子列出文章的要點(diǎn),如何度假調(diào)查報(bào)告倡議假日休閑,stayathome,work,visitfriendsorparents,travel,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Enjoyyourvacation.,列,Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.,Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,anicehead,anicetail,anicebody,加,加首尾，使結(jié)構(gòu)完整?？梢圆扇】偡挚偨Y(jié)構(gòu)或者總分結(jié)構(gòu)，開(kāi)頭或結(jié)尾的句子應(yīng)注意簡(jiǎn)潔，漂亮。,寫(xiě)作第三步：,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,連,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞句，使得文章層次清晰，各個(gè)部分銜接自然。,寫(xiě)作第四步：,1.表示并列或遞進(jìn):and,aswellas,bothand,notonlybutalso,neithernor;2.表示選擇:or,eitheror;3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折:but,however,although,though,afterall,4.表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示條件:if,unless6.表示對(duì)比:instead,notbut,ontheonehandontheotherhand;7.表示解釋:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords;8.表示順序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend;9.表示強(qiáng)調(diào):also,besides,whatsmore,actually,infact,10.表示結(jié)論:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,關(guān)聯(lián)詞,Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,連,Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.,美,美,選好詞句，美化文章。在有把握的情況下展示自己的語(yǔ)言功底。,寫(xiě)作第五步：,SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrect,.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.,onceaweek,Saving,be,achieve,SkillTwoExpressindifferentways,Ourparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.Weshouldnteatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhegot.WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.ItsimportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.,書(shū)面表達(dá)寫(xiě)作技巧,審,列,加,連,美,中考作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),第五檔（18-20分）信息完整，表達(dá)流暢，無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤或基本無(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。第四檔（14-17分）信息基本完整，表達(dá)較流暢，有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意思表達(dá)。第三檔（9-13分）能傳達(dá)部分信息，表達(dá)不夠流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤較多，但句子基本可讀。第二檔（5-8分）只能傳達(dá)少量信息，表達(dá)不流暢，語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤多，只有少量句子可讀。第一檔（0-4分）只能傳達(dá)個(gè)別信息，表達(dá)不清楚，只有個(gè)別句子可讀;,書(shū)面表達(dá),以“Ihaveadream”為題寫(xiě)一篇不少于60個(gè)詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)不占格。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型供參考）Mydreamistobe/todo/togoIenjoy/like/preferTomakemydreamcometrue,IIfmydreamcomestrue,IhaveadreamHaveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,itsmydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeridingforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,Ivebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkitsdangerous,Idontthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomakemydreamcometrue,Illpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,Illwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue.Ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.,PassageOne,IhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwanttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmiretheyrefree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whentheyreflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventheyrethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwontbeachievedanymore.Itsjustadream,inmyheart.,PassageTwo,Thankyou!,Allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife,buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday?Wedidasurveyandherearetheresults.fromCaiPiaoli,Itsnothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking!Sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation?Accordingtooursurvey,thereareseveralways.fromZhangSh