讀后續(xù)寫課件

1、Legend of butterfly lovers,梁祝,高考新題型 讀后續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練1,My father is a liar to me,Sometimes love is hidden behind actions, which may be unseen to our eyes without special attention,What have you learned from the video,Selfless love,第二節(jié)：讀后續(xù)寫（滿分25分） 閱讀下面350字短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。 注意： 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為180左右； 應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短

2、文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語； 續(xù)寫完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好,若詞數(shù)少于130，從總分中扣去2分,Brief information,a couple of lovers, God, the woman doctor,_ couple of lovers led an _ (envy) life in a town. _ (fortunate), the man had an accident and was severely _ (injure). The woman _ (attend) him day and night. _ he

3、r lover was still sleeping, _ (hope), she made a deal _God: to be a butterfly for three years in exchange for the mans _ (recover), _ was a hard choice but easy to make to a willing heart,A,enviable,Unfortunately,injured,attended to,But,hopelessly,with,recovery,which,Summary,The plot （情節(jié)） of the sto

4、ry,Development,Ending,Beginning,Climax(高潮,A. The man was badly injured and showed no signs of recovery. B. The woman dealt with God to save her lover but another girl appeared between them. C. The man and the woman had an enviable love,A,C,B,Endings of our students,Endings of our students,Endings of

5、 our students,logic（邏輯,白貓掉到河里，黑貓奮盡全力救 它上岸，上岸后，白貓對(duì)黑貓說了什么,Continue the story,You should find the clues in the story,logic,the title,the given story,the underlined words,the two given sentences,They are the clues to help you create your writing logically,underlined words enjoying the sunrise the sunset

6、 consciousness the church God tears love regret became the butterfly fly sweet heart-stricken,underlined words（選5個(gè)以上） who (人物）：God the butterfly where（地點(diǎn)）：the church what（事件）：enjoying the sunrise the sunset consciousness tears love butterfly sweet heart-stricken,clues（線索） “I can help youfor three ye

7、ars” “Yes, I do! i wont regret doing that!” God also felt sad “Do you regret for what you have done,logic,the title,the given story,the underlined words,the two given sentences,Paragraph1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She coul

8、d do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _,Single is simple,double is trouble, triangle is terrible,利用已給信息將情節(jié)推向高潮,How to deal with the woman doctor,When to get married ,Paragraph2: God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” _ _,利用已給信息得出一個(gè)完美結(jié)局

9、,Creation,The possible versions of the ending,e,b. The man and the doctor married, and the woman remained to be a butterfly,The man and the doctor married, and the woman left,c. The man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man and gave the separated lovers a happy reunion,d. Th

10、e man proposed to the doctor, but God uncovered the truth to the man which involved him in a dilemma. Finally, the man left,negative,negative,positive,negative,the two given sentences,the underlined words,The two lead you,help you,and control you to go in the right direction,Reading for brief inform

11、ation,Reading for summary,Reading for creation,Reading for writing,There was once a placid 平靜的；溫和的；沉著的and beautiful town in which there were a couple of lovers who would often stay together on the top of the mountain enjoying the sunrise and by the sea appreciating the sunset. Everyone who knew them

12、 could not help envying them and praying for their happy love,Competition,Group A(paragraph 1) 1. 目睹；見證 (vt) 2. 他說過的最甜蜜的話（提示詞sweet） 3. 蝴蝶難過得情不自禁地哭了。(tears) 4. 變深；使加深(v) 5. 第三年的最后一天 6. 他們的愛已成為回憶。 Group B(paragraph 2) 被打動(dòng)的；受感動(dòng)的 (adj.) 揭露真相 3.對(duì)于我為他所做的事我從來沒有后悔過。（提示詞regret, 用倒裝句式） 4. 喚醒 (vt.) 5. 遭受許多挫折 6

13、. 男人震驚了， 越發(fā)覺得后悔和內(nèi)疚 （提示詞the feeling of regrets/guilt,1. 目睹；見證 vt. _,2. 他說過的最甜蜜的話 （提示詞sweet） _,3. 蝴蝶難過得情不自禁地哭了。 （提示詞tears） _ _,see/witness,The sweetest words he has ever said,The butterfly couldnt help bursting into tears sadly,The butterfly could no longer hold back the tears,5. 在第三年的最后一天 _,On the la

14、st day of the third year,4. 變深；使加深 vt./vi. _,deepen,6. 他們的愛已成為回憶。 _ _,Their love has become memories,Their love has become a past,Paragraphy1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged to her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off

15、 and on. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,draft,It was heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day. Time went by quickly. On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost over, the man proposed to his girlfriend. He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words

16、he has ever said. Hearing this, the butterfly couldnt breathe. Her darken eyes were full of tears. she flew away silently. At that moment, she realized that he wouldnt know her sacrifices and their love has become a past,2. 揭露真相 _,1. 被打動(dòng)的；受感動(dòng)的 adj. be_ by,touched,uncover the truth,expose /reveal,mov

17、ed/impressed,3. 對(duì)于我為他所做的事我從來沒有后悔過。（提示詞regret, 用倒裝句式） _ _,Never have I regretted for what I have done for him,4. 喚醒 vt. _,awaken/ arouse,5. 遭受許多挫折 _,go through many obstacles,suffer many struggles,6. 男人震驚了， 越發(fā)覺得后悔和內(nèi)疚 （提示詞the feeling of regrets/guilt） _ _,The man got shocked, and the feeling of regret

18、s and guilt grew stronger,setbacks frustrations,Paragraphy2: God also felt sad and sighed to the butterfly, “Do you regret for what you have done?” _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,draft,The butterfly said, “No. Never have I regretted for what I have done for him.” moved by her words, God was lost in thought:

19、she had gone through so many struggles and she shouldnt deserve that. So, the day before the man and the doctors wedding, God uncovered the whole truth to him. Obviously, the man was shocked and the feeling of regrets and guilt grew stronger. The love deep inside was awakened. He rushed to the churc

20、h to beg for the womans forgiveness. And he determined that this time he wont let her go. He will take her to enjoy the sunrise and the sunset for a lifetime,Step3 polish （潤色,Step 2 draft （擬稿,Step 1 compose (構(gòu)思,Reading for writing,Paragraphy1: The butterfly knew that all these should have belonged t

21、o her, but now they belonged to another woman. She could do nothing but rest on the mans shoulder off and on. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _,draft,It was heartbroken to see their love deepen day by day. Time went by quickly. On the last day of the third year when the deal between God and the butterfly was almost

22、 over, the man proposed to his girlfriend. He took out a beautiful ring and swore the sweetest words he has ever said. Hearing this, the butterfly couldnt breathe. Her darken eyes were full of tears. she flew away silently in great grief and despair. At that moment, she realized that he wouldnt know

23、 her sacrifices and their love has become a past,How to polish your words,小”心思豐滿人物內(nèi)心 Inner thoughts to portray the figures,Tip1：“小”心思豐滿人物內(nèi)心,悲傷,快樂,2016年10月高考作文 23分,Tip1：“小”心思豐滿人物內(nèi)心,震驚,2017年6月高考作文 23分,How to describe your inner thoughts,1. Feeling happy/sad/angry/guilty/depressed, 2. Driven by curiosity/a sense of sympathy(同情)或者是 Deeply touched/ moved by 3. .，full of regret/anger/fear/gratitude（感激） 4. 具體的動(dòng)作描寫 stand frozen, jump with joy, tremble with anger, with tears filling ones eyes, with ones eyes wide open 等等,Lets have a try,1. God said to the woman, “Do you regret for what