GRE作文高分范文沖刺方法

1、gre作文高分范文沖刺方法 今天整理了gre作文高分范文沖刺方法,我們一起來看看吧，下面就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。gre作文高分范文沖刺方法想要沖刺gre寫作高分還是需要摸索一些寫作方法和思路，那不如我們從寫作高分的范文里面分析一下，久而久之就找到gre寫作方法了。1.要有可以模仿的*(最好是帶有說理性的*)。2.你要理解這個*，理解它的用詞、句子結(jié)構(gòu)、段落結(jié)構(gòu)。3.這些*都有正確的中文翻譯。同時，*的長度不能超過500字。怎么模仿，首先要分析*，分析每一句和上一句是什么關(guān)系。我給大家舉個例子：美國人寫作文的一個特點是，通常每段的第一句都包含了整段文字的內(nèi)容，也就是我們常說的topic se

2、ntence.。另一個特點是當(dāng)你寫完一個句子后，你要問why。你提出一個問題，然后給出一個圓滿的回答，這就是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。具體化的能力具體化并不代表要寫一個完整的故事。但是任何一篇*都要給人一個具體的意向。通過具體的東西來描述才能給人踏實的感覺。具體化只要舉出幾個地方、幾個名字、幾件小事就可以了。為什么好多同學(xué)作文中分數(shù)很低呢，就是因為他提出了問題卻沒有回答。你通過不斷地模仿寫作，就可以不斷地糾正語法和詞組錯誤。如何把抽象和具體結(jié)合起來是一個重點，如何在一個段落中只表達一個思想，這是另一個重點。美國人的判分特點是，如果你在一段中表達了一個以上的思想，那你的分數(shù)就不會高了。分析完一篇*后，怎么

3、模仿著寫呢?就是看著中文的翻譯，把上面的英文一字不落的寫下來，當(dāng)你實在想不起來的時候，再看原文。等到寫完之后，和原文對照一下，看看是誰寫得漂亮。我剛剛開始模仿寫作的時候發(fā)現(xiàn)，模仿了幾天后，寫作水平的確提高了。因為根據(jù)記憶學(xué)原則，這個單詞你背過、讀過，它都不能寫在你的*中間。如果一個單詞可以經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)在你的腦子和*中間，那這只證明了一件事，就是你寫過這個字。但是你自己寫作你不可能用到這個字，那就只有一個可能，就是你在模仿*時寫過這個字。如果一個結(jié)構(gòu)別人寫不出來，你能寫出來，那你的分數(shù)就會高。通過不斷地模仿你的幾大能力就會得到提高：1.你的語法錯誤會越來越少;2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)能力越來越強;3.用詞能力大

4、大增加。一篇*模仿兩次就足夠了。當(dāng)你模仿了10篇*之后，你把這10篇*再模仿一遍。等你模仿完20篇*，你的寫作能力就會大大提高了。gre issue寫作優(yōu)秀實例：自我定位題目：it is primarily through our identification with social groups that we define ourselves.如果我們要定位自己最重要是要定位自己所處的社會團體。正文：how we human being define ourselves has being one of the most important and basic philosophic qu

5、estions ever since the ancient greek philosophy period, which seems even more confusing and mysterious in this era of rapid social and technological changes leading to increasing complexity in both personal life and social environment.the title statement considers our identification with social grou

6、ps the primary element to our self-identification. however, in my opinion, the dual quality of both individuality and sociality of human being calls for a balance in which there is not only social identification but also individual identification within the process of ones self-identification.social

7、 identification is necessary because everyone lives in a certain social environment, and it is from this social environment that we learn the behavior norms,form the outlook of value, and find the direction of our lives. as karl marx, the great german philosopher illustrated brilliantly (and i parag

8、raph), which he regarded as the main key in his whole philosophic system, human being is a kind of social animal, the essential of a human being is a synthesis of all his or her social relationships. that means, every person acts as different social roles in different time and to different object. a

9、s to a man, for example, he is son, husband and father in his family, he is teacher to his students, and also he is a fan of the new york nicks when he watches the basketball match in the stadium. the process of enjoying right as well as fulfilling incumbency of every role is just the process for on

10、e to form his or her integrated human definition. so, undoubtedly, social identification is unavoidable in human self-identification.simply put, without being set in some certain social environment, one cannot be properly defined. the best example to this is the wolf-girl found in amazon forest, who

11、 was the only survivor of a severe airplane accident and was brought up by a group of wolfs. the wolf-girl had no psychological characteristics of mankind, she is afraid of staying together with others, cannot communicate with others. even in physical points,she was more similar with a wolf rather t

12、han a human, she stepped with her all fours and ate raw meat. obviously, one who is of no sociality like a wolf-girl cannot be defined as a real human being.on the contrary, however, over social identification leads to an assimilation in the whole society, which is in a sense harmful to social devel

13、opment and will probably prevent people from making clear some personalities hiding deeply in ones spiritual world, which is of equal importance in peoples self-identification as sociality. not all teachers are supposed to be kind and affable, some students need a stricter one. not all employees are

14、 supposed to be precise and conservative, some employers prefer a more energetic and adventurous one. the attempt to form people in the same shape was proved a big error and a destructive calamity to the society both in pre-u.s.s.r.under the stalins administration and in china in 1970s. to sum up, a

15、s mentioned in the famous movie legend of the fall, no one can refuse to listen to the voice from his or her own heart, the self-identification without individuality is not an integrated one.without social identification, one can not find the origin from which his sense of value,social norms and lif

16、e plan was drawn, without looking for some inborn characteristics within oneself, one will miss the important part which different him(her)self from others in the society. so while self-definition necessitates sociality, individuality is equally important. only can a perfect combination of these two

17、 aspects lead to a correct definition of human being.gre issue寫作優(yōu)秀實例：技術(shù)影響題目：humanity has make little real progress over the past century or so. technological innovations have taken place, but the overall condition of humanity is no better. war,violence, and poverty are still with us. technology cann

18、ot change the condition of humanity.人類在過去的一百年左右止步不前。技術(shù)在不斷進步而人類的整體條件卻沒有改善。戰(zhàn)爭、暴力和貧困仍然困擾著我們。技術(shù)無法改變?nèi)祟惖奶幘?。正文：in the past decade, the progression of the nature science profoundly influences people life. thus, the issue of that whether technology can change the condition of humanity has been brought to pub

19、lic attention. some people believe that technology could improve the circumstances of human beings as well as the state of humanity.others claim that technological innovations could not shape the peoples conditions for there are still some evil things around us. in my view, with the advanced technol

20、ogy,human beings could not only make their life more convenient but also modify their conditions.humanity, in fact, has make real progress in recent years. there are numerous humanitarian institutions around the world and they surely do the actions. for example,the 921 earthquakes, a horrible disast

21、er, took approximate 2,000 people lives in taiwan. there were many foreign rescue teams such as turkey, japan, america, etc,coming to help taiwan and they also provided a great deal of goods and materials for people who lost their family members or homes. their assistance certainly encouraged taiwan

22、s people to go out of their sadness. for another example, international red cross organization, established in 1863, always unselfishly support people without discrimination as to nationality, race, and religious beliefs. these organizations are unprecedented. therefore, apparently, these are proofs

23、 that humanity is constantly progress.admittedly, wars, violence, and poverty are still taken place all over the world. however,people should not deny the development of humanity, because of these unsolved events. it is similar to that although todays people could not come and go freely in the solar

24、 system, no one could neglect the significant progress of the space technology and astronautics today. thus, people should try to find the solutions to these events rather than shirk and blame their responsibility to the technology. for instance,violence and poverty could be decreased through moral

25、and skill education; peace negotiation might avoid the unnecessary wars or dispel the prejudice between two hostile countries.meanwhile, technological innovations are instrumental to change the conditions of human beings. fist, with advanced technology, people have better living standard today than

26、they did before. therefore, they have more time and ability to help others regard as low-level. second, humanitarian can educate people the concept of charity by todays prospered information technology such as newspaper, broadcast, tv sets,internet, etc. take an example, we can easily find the advertising about relieving the refuges and paupers through donation. besides, advanced mass media not only clearly divulges the situation of the poor countries that might be devastated by wars but also rapidly conveys these information to all places of the world and hence